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Here are all of the episodes from week 2 on Tibbenders!
_______________________ The Vic Christina: What was that! The rest of the vic gather outside to see what the gunshot was about Ninastar and Foms house Ninastar looks out of the window Supernoodles house Fom is Standing outside shouting. He is trying to knock the door down Fom: Supernoodles! Supernodles! She opens the door and falls into his arms. There is a gun on the doormat but no sign of injury to Supernoodles Supernoodles: I couldn't do.. I couldn't! Fom: Just calm down Babe, we need to get you to hospital Supernoodles: No! You don't understand! I didn't do it! she is hysterically crying and breathing very heavily Fom: C'mon, We need to sort you out Supernoodles: NO! She runs back into her house and slams the door behind her OUtside There is now a huge crowd of people looking up at Supernoodles Flat, all staring at Fom Gregalz: Fom mate, What has happened? Fom: Just leave it to me, she is fine. Now what are you all staring at! C'mon, Get on with your own lives! Ninastar runs out of her house Ninastar: Fom! What has happened darling Fom: I will talk to you later. You will catch your death, go back inside! Ninastar: Tell me.. NOW! Fom: Just go back inside babe! Ninastar: NOW! Fom: Look i Don't have time! Fom kicks the door down and runs in.. Ninastar running straight after him Ninastar: Fom, I told you to.. She walks in to find Supernoodles in a heap on the floor, Crying Ninastar: Supernoodles, What is the matter dar.. Supernoodles: Tell Her Fom! Princess, Shaun and Billy's house Princess is staring at a holiday catalogue Princess: Oh my god, it is gorgeous Shaun: Only the best for my beautiful wife They satart kissing again Billy: Mum, Dad, Why not go to, Bingo or something and do that! Princess: Billy! All the years i have heard you and the ladies up in your Room, you'd be surprised! Billy: Mum! Shaun: Aww, Billy getting all embarrassed? Anyway hunny, I am off out now. Princess: Where to? Shaun: To See a man about a dog. See you later Firewires House Christina and Firewire are sat in his bed, Both panting Firewire: Wow Christina: You look amazed? Firewire: I am! Christina: What is that supposed to mean! Firewire: Nothing! They both start giggling and go under the covers Princess, Shaun and Billy's house Billy: You know what mum, I am going out to, Catch you later Princess: Oh, Well Bye JDIZZELS House Shaun and JDIZZEL are kissing on the Sofa, there is a knock at the door JDIZZEL: Huh! Shaun: Just ignore it JDIZZEL: I didn't lock the door! The Door opens Billy: JDIZZEL, you i... Shaun: Billy! JDIZZEL: Billy! Billy: Dad! Firewires House Christina is getting changed, at the end of the bed. Firewire is still in the bed Firewire: Twice in a day, You're good Christina: Firewire, Don't be like it! They Both Laugh Christina: You know, I have fancied you for years now? I always dreamed we would get married one day and have hundreds of kids Firewire: You know what, I Love you, and always have to be honest.. So lets do it! No mater what anyone else thinks! Christina: What! Have Hundreds of kids! I was exaggerating then you know! Firewire: No, Lets get married Christina Smiles Gleefully and takes a deep breath Fom: What! Ninastar: What? Supernoodles: Tell her or i Will! Fom: Tell her what Ninastar: Tell me What! Supernoodles: Tell her! She needs to know Fom: Tell her What! Supernoodles: YOU KNOW WHAT! Fom: Ninastar, just go home.. Ninastar: Tell me what! Fom: It's nothing Supernoodles: Tell Her! Ninastar: Tell me! Fom: Just go Home! Supernoodles: We've been Seeing eachover! That's what he has to tell you! ___________________________ Supernoodles Flat Ninastar: What! Fom: Look, it was nothing babe.. Supernoodles: Yes it was! Fom: I don't know what she is talking ab.. Ninastar: Seeing eachover. Seeing eachover.. Please god No! Supernoodles: I am so sorry, I rea.. Ninastar: Sorry! SORRY! Who the hell do you thin.. Fom: Go home Ninasta.. Ninastar slaps Fom, Hard around the face Ninastar: No! Now you tell me everything that happened Annie, BigSister and Darenns house Annie: Night guys! I am off out now Darenn: see you later hun BigSister: Bye Annie walks out BigSister: Hmm, I wish i had a nice man in my life Darenn: Same.. Hmm. BigSister: Just a bit of fun would be nice Darenn: Ooh, i agree to that! BigSister: Well what are we waiting for then! Darenn: What do you mean? You know i am.. Bigsister: Yes! And i don't care! She grabs his face and snogs him. He pulls away Darenn: BigSister! I thought i could trust you when i moved in! Darenn walks out of the lounge and into the street Supernoodles Flat Fom: It was nothing hun! Just a kiss! Supernoodles: Just a kiss, Don't be stupid! Ninastar: Tell me the truth, or i will never speak to you again Fom: Fine, we kissed and stuff but nothing happened! Supernoodles: You know that things happened! You were going to run away with me and everything! That is why he was at the airport earlier Ninastar! He wanted to take me away Ninastar: You Lie, Lie and Lie Fom! Is that all you do! What about our baby! Supernoodles: Your baby? What about our baby Fom! Does she know about that! The Square It is now about 10pm. A large car pulls up. The door opens and Redmoon jumps out, holding SiaSiaSia's hand. He is 42 and she is 34. They both look very scruffy. Redmoon opens the back door of the car, 30stone(21), Andy(19), Hugo(14), 30stones girlfriend Amby(20) and their Son Dezzy(6), all jump out making a racket Dezzy: Are we here mummy! Dezzy is running around excitedly Kate: Shut up son, it is late! Dezzy: Daddy are we here! 30stone: Did you just hear your mother! She said Shut it! Sia: Hey, 30stone, Don't be so harsh on the poor lad. Yes love we are here! At our new house! Andy: I aint living here! Sia: Well it is all we can get, with this family's reputation we need to do what the social say, or Hugo and Dezzy are gone! Hugo: I aint scared of no social services Sia: C'mon, Get inside! Supernoodles Flat Ninstar: Your baby! Fom: Ninstar, look, words cannot describe how sor... Ninstar: YOur baby? Supernoodles: Mine and Foms Baby! Ninstar: What! Ninastar jumps on Fom and starts attacking him. Supernoodles grabs the gun, and Shoots _________________________ Supernoodles flat Fom: Ninastar! Supernoodles: Oh my god Ninastar is lying on the floor in a pool of blood Ninastar: Huh, No! Fom: Ninastar! Fom bends down and rests her head on his hand Ninastar: That baby, please, just call an ambulance! Fom: What HAVE YOU DONE! (To Supernoodles) Supernoodles: Oh my god! Supernoodles picks up the gun and puts it to her head, Themichael0 comes running in themichael0: Oh my god, what h.. Supernoodles no! Supernoodles shoots, and drops to the floor dead. Themichael0 screams. Fom drops the phone as Ninastar passes out Annie, BigSister and Darenns house Bigsister is sitting on the sofa, crying, Darenn walks in Darenn: I have been thinking Bigsister: About what She sits up and Darenn sits down Bigsister: About what? Darenn: I don't know? This place, Life, You Bigsister: Me? Darenn: Lets rewind Darenn puts his hands on Bigsisters cheek, and Snogs her ____________________________ Bigsisters house Bigsister and Darenn are lying on the floor under a cover Darenn: My father will be so happy Bigsister: Huh? Darenn: Never mind Annie walks into the house Annie: Mum, i'm home Bigsister: Oh no, what do we do! Darenn: I don't know! Annie walks into the living room Annie: Mum! Bigsister: Hi Hunny Supernoodles flat The police and Ambulance are now at the flat. Supernoodles is being carried out to an ambulance in a body bag, and Ninstar is still unconcious, in the back of another ambulance with Fom Fom: Ninastar, please wake up! Please! He starts crying. Meanwhile themichael0 is sitting on a park bench on his own, crying JDIZZELS house Billy: I cannot believe it Shaun: You cannot tell your mother son Billy: How can i not tell her dad! Shaun: Just please! Do not tell her! Jdizzel: Me and your dad, we are in love! Billy: What about mum? What about her? You have been married for the last 12 years and now you are going to chuck it down the drain for a girl who is more than half your age Shaun: Me and your mum have been on the rocks for years son! Billy: Don't be stupid! You love eachover, everyone knows that! What about Venice? Jdizzel: He's taking me, arent you hunny Billy: What! Shaun: Son, that was just a lie to your mum! Billy: When are you going? Shaun: Well, tomorrow? Billy: What so you were just going to leave me and mum and run off with Barbie!? Jdizzel: How dare you! Shaun: Do not talk to her like that! Billy: This is unbelievable dad! Billy runs out of the front door Shaun: Billy! Billy! Firewires house Christina and Firewire are sitting on the sofa together Christina: We can have a huge white wedding and everything! I have to tell dad! Firewire: Your dad, i thought you hated him Christina: Well, i like to forgive and forget The hospital Princess: I came as soon as i heard! Fom: Oh, god! you gave me a fright! Princess: Sorry, how is she doing? Fom: I don't know, they wont tell me anything or let me in! Suddenly, a loud beeping noise comes from the emergency room Ninstar is in and a crowd of doctors and nurse run in Fom: Oh my god! No! Firewires house Christina is on the phone to her father, Mark, who is still in hospital after breaking his leg Christina: Yeah, we are getting married!... What do you mean, don't be stupid!.. Yeah... Yeah.. But we are in love dad!.. You know what, i don't care! Christina puts the phone down Christina: Oh god Firewire: Dad being a pain? Christina: First he rings up because i am calling him at 9 at night. Now he doesn't want me as a stepdaughter anymore, and is going to call me his "Widow daughter" Firewire: Come here He gives her a big hug Firewire: It will be alright The Kestle house Everybody has now moved into the house and unpacked. The whole family are in the living room Sia: Right, we all know the rules okay! 30stone: Mum, i am 21, i don't need rules! Sia: Keep out of trouble and make Hugo: Me proud. We know, heard it all before! Sia: ESPECIALLY you Hugo! You have school on Monday! We have to get your uniform done tomorrow and on Sunday i am taking you out for a treat! Hugo: Treat, what's that! Andy: Can't i have a treat? 30stone: And me! Dezzy: And me Amby: Dezzy, don't be so rude son 30stone: Amby, Shut up.. he can do what he wants Amby: And that is how he will end up like you! Amby stands up, takes dezzy's hand and walks him up to bed 30stone: Good! You can't beat me! Redmoon: Oh shut it son, you are so full of yourself Amby: (From upstairs) Where are Dezzy's Pyjamas? Sia: In the airing cupboard love Amby: Thanks Redmoon: Shouldn't you be up putting him to bed too son 30stone: No, don't be silly. That is what a woman is for Sia: Oi you! Shut it! The hospital Fom walks out of the Dr's pffice to Princess, he is crying Fom: It's gone. The baby's gone ________________________ Week one round up |
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Bitch is BACK!
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I havent been watching this week but that was brilliant!
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Bitch is BACK!
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Excellent idea lewis... Also... make sure IT doesnt happen again!
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Bitch is BACK!
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Yeah defo best thing since TiBB Town! which was BRILLIANT!
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[quote]Originally posted by Annie
Yeah defo best thing since TiBB Town! which was BRILLIANT! ![]() Sia: If you read this... Bring it back ![]() ![]() |
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Bitch is BACK!
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retro physical
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LOL @ "MUM!" - "Hello hunny!" hahaha.
& "My father would be so proud" xD! love it. |
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ELECTRA HEART
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I want to be in it biatch!!
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I'm loving this, its so good. I still wanna be in it Lewis. Especially if its that good.
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Aww thanks guys! I am trying to fill spaces but i do not want to add too many characters at once.. You can be a character.. but you will not have a big storyline yet? Just a small part for now
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Im a proper dickhead lol.. alwell, i thought id love family and hate everyone else lol! Very good lewis! |
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Locke.
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