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Hey guys! Sorry that there were only 2 episodes this week but i have been busy revising for internal exam that is worth 40 percent of GCSE.. Much more important that Tibbenders! But here are the two episodes from week 3! Week 4 episodes will start tonight!
___________________________ Episode 11 The Square It is morning in the square and it is silent. A car pulls up outside of the vic and David jumps out of the car. He is wearing a suit and has a rolex watch. He is a tall man in his early 40's with a medium build The Kestle house The whole Family is Gathered in the kitchen Hugo: What is going on? Andy: Mum has an announcement Sia: Yes indeed, i do! Amby: Well come on then, i need to get Dezzy to his new nursery! Sia: Calm down, Calm down! 30stone: Who cares about nursery! Let him be free, that is the way to life! Redmoon: Would you be quite! Your mother is trying to talk! Dezzy: I'm Hungry mummy! Amby: shh son, i will get you something in a minute Dezzy: But i am HUNGRY! He stamps his feet 30stone: Oi son! Shut your moaning little face and listen to nanny! You don;t want a smacked bottom again do you! Sia: Thankyou! Right, as you know, we are having a fresh start! No more trouble, no more booze, no more Drugs and no more David threatening us! Redmoon: Thank god for that Sia: Ehem, i am trying to talk! 30stone: Yeah Dad! Hugo: Shut up 30stone! 30stone: You shut up! Amby: You two, Both shut up! Sia: Yes, Thankyou! AS i was saying! I want you all to have a brilliant day and not let anything get in the way of you! Make me proud! Hugo: We wil mum, now can i go! I just want to get today over with! Andy: Aww, schoolchild! I am going to go out today! Not doing ANY schoolwork, because i have no school! Sia: Not until we find a decent college or job for you Andy! And you 30stone, you are going to have to look for a job today! 30stone: What about Amby? Amby: Hey, don't drag me into this. I am busy looking after our son! Dezzy: HUNGRY! FEED ME! The hospital Ninastar is still in intensive care, being kept alive by a breathing machine. Fom is sat in the chair next to her Fom: Oh god, i wish you would just come back babe. I wish i could re-wind time, make everything go back! This is all my fault! TheMichael0: Yes it is! fom: Oh my god! You surprised me! Themichael0 runs up and grabs Fom by the neck Themichael0: YOU KILLED HER! IT WAS YOU! YOU KILLED Supernoodles AND NOW I AM GOING TO KILL YOU! FOm: Help! A Doctor runs into the room to find Themichael0 choking Fom. He grabs themichael0 and pulls him away Doctor: SECURITY! themichael0: I am gonna kill you! You are not getting away with this! Princess, Billy and Shauns house Billy is sitting on the sofa on his own, Shaun walks in Shaun: Son, thanks for not telling Billy: You either break it with Jdizzel tonight, or mum is going to know! Princess walks in in a dressing gown Princess: Break what with Jdizzel and tell me what! Annie, Bigsister and Darenns house Bigsister and Annie are in the kitchen, not speaking Bigsister: Why wont you speak to me! Annie: Mum, He is Gay! Bigsister: Oh well, a bit on the side, that is what he is! Annie: It is wrong! You cannot go out with a gay man mum! Bigsister: Oh get over it! Anyway, i need to get an outfit for supernoodles funeral Annie: Her Funeral! What happened to her? Bigsister: You haven't heard? Princess, Billy and Shauns house Princess: Go on, tell me what! Shaun: Well, we were.. Billy: They have made a bet with eachover over you Shaun: Yeah, Princess: And what bet was this? Billy: They were betting over how long it would take you to pack for Venice! Princess: Oh, thank God! I thought you were seeing her behind my back or something! Oh well, Anyone want tea? Billy: Er yeah please Shaun: No thanks honey, i have to be somewhere Princess: Okay Princess walks out into the kitchen Billy: You have until tonight at 7 to break it with Jdizzel, or i am spilling! __________________________ Episode 12 The Kestle house Kate, 30stone and Andy are in the Kitchen. Amby walks into the house Amby: Back! She walks into the kitchen with Dezzy Kate: How Was nursery my love Dezzy: It was BRILLIANT! Daddy Guess what i did! 30stone: Do i look like i care what a 5 year old did at nursery? Amby: Oi! Kate: Don't be so ignorant! Andy: What did you do Dezzy? Dezzy: I built a sandcastle! Andy: Huh! WOW! Brilliant! Well done mate! Dezzy: I built a sandcastle daddy! 30stone: Really? How nice, but i have more intresting things to be getting on with! Amby: Like what then? 30stone: Well, This newspaper! He Shakes a Newspaper in her face Amby: Are you telling me a newspaper is more important than your son! 30stone: No, but it is more important than the garbage he comes out with! Amby: Unbelievable! i wish David had killed you when he had the Chance! Kate: HUh! HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT! Amby: You know what 30stone! It is over! I cannot be with you any more! 30stone: Fine go! Amby grabs Dezzy's hand and Walks out of the front door 30stone: Oi! The Queen Vic The Vic is not very busy and Christina and Nickyy are talking Nickyy: So how's your father? christina: Oh, He is getting on with his life, Coming home today Nickyy: Oh the joy! Christina: Exactly Nickyy: And how is Firewire? Christina: Oh, he is great. Very Fine Nickyy: Haha, Man, You are so lucky! He IS fine Firewire walks in Nickyy: Ooh! Speak of the Devil! Christina: Hello Sexy Firewire: Hello Ladies, guess who is back! Christina: Dad! Christina runs around the bar and outside of the vic. Mark is sitting in a wheelchair with his leg in plaster, being pushed by Gregalz Christina: Dad! She flings her arms around him Mark: Get OFF! Cmon! Get out of my way and get out of my house! I don't need you any more! Christina: What! Mark: You can get your stuff later! Now Leave these premises! Gregalz! In!!! Christina: What! Firewire: This is her house too! Mark: No! This was her mums pub and she left it to me! Her mum is Dead so Christina can now leave! Christina bursts into tears and runs off Billy, Princess and shauns house Shaun is sat in the kitchen alone, he is looking at the clock, it is now 6pm. He gets up and walks out of the Front door The park Christina is sitting on the swing crying, Firewire walks up to her Christina: He told my mum he would take care of me! Firewire: Babe, He is just being stupid, he will forget this soon! Christina starts to cry again David's Car David is sat in his car outside of The Kestle house. He opens his Suit and pulls a gun from the inside. He points the gun at the Kestle house David: Bang Bang, Your Dead ________________ *Tibbenders will be back on Rota from today with episodes on... Monday Tuesday Thursday Friday |
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Good episodes Lewis. Other than being of rota this week its just getting stronger. Im a TiBBenders addict now, literally.
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