Hey, welcome
I like these! I like the ink blot theme you've gone with (I also remember the eye that we almost had for BB12
) - my personal suggestion would be to build up a bit more on that theme - the scrolling book is very creative, but silhouettes of people is something a lot of people throw into fan made titles so maybe have some effect of ink being thrown at a page? I dunno what you can create with the software that you've got..and yeah as other people have said, make them a bit more frantic and fast paced.
Other than that, great first attempt
