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Old 24-06-2018, 08:46 PM #1
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‘United State of My Heart’

My heart
My heart
Look at the state of my heart
United state of my heart

My god
Life’s hard
The road is long and it’s tough
Sometimes love is not enough

My heart
My heart
Look at the state of that place
United States is a disgrace

My heart
My heart
Look at the state of my heart
United state of my heart


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catchy, and i hear Jess Glynne, Clean Bandit vibes all over in this song
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it makes no sense and it seems to have been constructed on one play on words?
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it makes no sense and it seems to have been constructed on one play on words?
It’s not the full song and you can’t hear the melody so BEAT IT
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It’s not the full song and you can’t hear the melody so BEAT IT
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I might upload a wee voice note giving insight into how I start with a song lol
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been done by MJ


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that weren't lyrics
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we NEED the full song now
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we NEED the full song now
Okay Nicky, I haven't written the full song, you know sometimes a melody and lyric just comes to you and you might not complete a full song for a while or even ever.
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