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Old 26-02-2015, 07:07 PM #1
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I'm 14 and here is a description of the saddest place in the world, It's a little inspired by the film The Purge, and the word Anarchy. I hope you like it:

The streets curve like the bullets shot from the devils. Cars deprived until a tiny ash remains filled with glimmers of evil.

Clouds swirl, filled with greyness and sinister echoes of the city, like the secrets of the universe.

The twisted crosses placed on their heads reminds those innocent of the curses of religion and the new found father. Those who stay are sprayed with sadness like the graves in a cemetery, chilled by the horrors of the world.

The sickened minds twist like the eye of the storm, forged in the sky of the planet. The darkness reins over as if the apocalypse is ever - lasting, like the time of the universe.

Buildings windows are cracked like the minds of the people, broken to the extreme that they can never be stable.

Roads are filled with holes, which offer the sense of hope in the deep darkness of the Earth, as looking up seems to be the worst option as the bombs scar the innocent souls on the land. For this is the place that is engraved with sadness like the crucifix of the Earth.
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I'm 14 and here is a description of the saddest place in the world, It's a little inspired by the film The Purge, and the word Anarchy. I hope you like it:

The streets curve like the bullets shot from the devils. Cars deprived until a tiny ash remains filled with glimmers of evil.

Clouds swirl, filled with greyness and sinister echoes of the city, like the secrets of the universe.

The twisted crosses placed on their heads reminds those innocent of the curses of religion and the new found father. Those who stay are sprayed with sadness like the graves in a cemetery, chilled by the horrors of the world.

The sickened minds twist like the eye of the storm, forged in the sky of the planet. The darkness reins over as if the apocalypse is ever - lasting, like the time of the universe.

Buildings windows are cracked like the minds of the people, broken to the extreme that they can never be stable.

Roads are filled with holes, which offer the sense of hope in the deep darkness of the Earth, as looking up seems to be the worst option as the bombs scar the innocent souls on the land. For this is the place that is engraved with sadness like the crucifix of the Earth.
Powrerful, vivid, and disturbing.
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