[Mystic Mock]

Originally Posted by Vicky.

Right, I have now read all three books and this doesnt happen?

No consent is broken, plus the rare times she safewords, he stops immediately?

In a way I am disappointed, as I figured after readng this post that there was more to it all than a normal 'lovestory' thing, but there isnt

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especially disappointed with the happily married with kids part

Why do I sense a bit of disappointment about him sticking (excuse the pun) to the safe word?

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The happily married with kids thing does sound **** though I'll give you that.

[Vicky.]

Originally Posted by Mystic Mock

Why do I sense a bit of disappointment about him sticking (excuse the pun) to the safe word?

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The happily married with kids thing does sound **** though I'll give you that.

I think I have a very dark mind tbh...actually wanting smithys version to happen But I really think it would have added more to the story than what did happen

[Mystic Mock]

Originally Posted by Vicky.

I think I have a very dark mind tbh...actually wanting smithys version to happen But I really think it would have added more to the story than what did happen

It probably would've been more interesting in Smithy's version even if it's sicker than even my tastes.

[Marsh.]

Originally Posted by Vicky.

I think I have a very dark mind tbh...actually wanting smithys version to happen But I really think it would have added more to the story than what did happen

I see what you mean. Would've added a bit of depth other than being written softcore porn with no story beyond the basic cliches.

It's a cheap piece of trashy Twilight fan fiction.

[Mystic Mock]

Poor Twilight, and I don't say that lightly.

[Mokka]

Originally Posted by Marsh.

I see what you mean. Would've added a bit of depth other than being written softcore porn with no story beyond the basic cliches.

It's a cheap piece of trashy Twilight fan fiction.

You are probably right about the Twilight reference, it certainly is the worst piece of literature I have read in more than a decade... but I never read Twilight so...?

And the entire story arc isn't deep, and it actually translated better to film in my opinion since the literary savvy was lacking, and the screenplay seemed more suitable tp the story over all. It is very very softcore in the porn dept, and the fact that they don't show close ups of genitalia is what keeps it from being out and out porn.

I think my over all sentiment is, don't tell me what I can and can't read or see. I never set out to read the books, I never purchased them or waited for them through the public access library, but I read them in defiance of the controversy surrounding the books. Who out there has the right to tell me it's "wrong" or "not allowed".

I chose to read it despite the bad reviews, and found differing concepts and idea's than what is the standard or norm. At the end of the day... that is delivering a lot compared to some of the other trashy literature out there.

[Marsh.]

Originally Posted by Mokkajava

You are probably right about the Twilight reference, it certainly is the worst piece of literature I have read in more than a decade... but I never read Twilight so...?

I haven't either. But that's what the books started out as. The "author" was a Twilight fan who wrote sexual fan fiction about the main characters. She then changed the names, took out the Twilight references to create these books.

[Udanax]

It was originally an erotic Vegas/Bri fanfic