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Default Tibb Voting Poll: Creative Writing Competition

Well we managed a grand total of three entries for the Tibb Writing Compettion, but hey it's quality not quantity that counts and we have a nice mix; one poem, one article and one short interactive story.

All entries are posted below, please vote for up to two out of the three. Poll will be open for 24 hours.

Good luck Josiah, GypsyGoth and Vanessa, thank you for your efforts.

Josiahs' Entry

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A poem by Josiah (aka ColdWinter63)

Flowers are
pretty, they make my
spring brighter.
They make
the day after
feel like lilies are
starting to bloom;
just in time
for Easter!



GypsyGoths' Entry

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An alphabet adventure. You have to navigate your way through the story from A to Z. After each part you will face options, and whichever you choose, go to that letter, unspoiler the section and continue the story.

You play Michael21 and his goal is to log onto TIBB, good luck

A
You find yourself in the hallway of your luvly home. Your options are:

B Go use your laptop in the bedroom.
C Go do something else in your bedroom
D Go shout at the builders across the street for the hell of it.


B
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You switch on your laptop, you go to

E Look at sexy ladies.
F Go to TIBB.
G Try and see if megaupload is back


C
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You make your bed. What would you like to do next?

B Go use your laptop in the bedroom.
D Go shout at the builders across the street for the hell of it.


D
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The angry builders attak you. You end up in the hospital. You has lose


E
Spoiler:


SafeSearch is on strict, u not know how to change it

Now what would you like to do?
F Go to tibb.
G Try and see if megaupload is back


F
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You go to log onto tibb but remember you are really hungry. What would you like to eat

H make toast
I go to neighbours house to beg food again
J ring for pizza
K don’t mind your belly rumbling with hunger and log onto tibb


G
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One you click on the website you realise to your terror it was a mistake. There is a loud bang on your front door. And once you answer, you are grabbed by the police and handcuffed. I n the trial that follows you get 50 years for piracy.


H
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Once you get to the toaster it looks more complicated to operate than you imagined, hunger has clouded ur thunkingg, you start to bash it with frustration. You shout at it, then deside to start a fire and use the flames to toast the bread. Once the dining table is alight, you guess this might not have been such a good idea.

Go to L


I
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Your neybor attak you. You has dead


J
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Pizzaman come and gives you food

Goto M


K
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Your streanth evaporates with each keystroke, you slump in your chair with weakness and then fall to the floor, it is in that spot when you are found years later, by a buglar. The buglar steals all your valuables and doesn’t bother telling anyone of his gruesome discovery


L
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Your house is on fire, you has dead


M
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Now with your belly full.
You sit down to use the computer, but you hear a scratching sound at the window
N Investigat
O Ingnorit it and continyoue.


N
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You see an amazing cat on the window sill
O Ignor the cat
P Let the cat in


O
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You ignor cat and get ready to go on tibb. But nock come to door. What you do now?
Q Ignor door
R Anser door.
S See if you can fly out window.


P
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The cat attack you. You has dead


Q
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You try ignor it but nock is louder, you panik, you mite go deaf if you not answer. what you do now?

R Anser door.
S See if you can fly out window


R
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It is man from freeview, he say to come with him for lifetime freeview
What you do
T Go with him
U Say no thankee mister. And go computer.


S
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You can knot, you had broke window and you has dead.


T
Spoiler:

Man was Simon Kowl, he trick you, you now on BGT being shoot out of cannon, what you doo?

V Get shoot out of cannon
W Escapee by climing really high and clim out roof window, and then run home to use computer
X Escapee by pretned you new host of Britian’s Got More Talent, and run home to use computer.


U
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After your adventur day, you press computer buttons go go on tibb
Goto Z


V
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Even 4 u this bad idea. You hit wall and has dead


W
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Once on the ruff you clim down fireexcpaee. You then run home.
Goto U


X
Spoiler:

They believe you, but you can’t excepe cause they watch you on tele. YOu now has job in tv, you work on BGMT for 8 episodes befor you quit job and get home to find ur house robbed and all stuff stole. You crey by edge of pavement, you no see parking car, it run over you, you has dead :balwing:


Y
Spoiler:

Y you click this, this was not an option? Are you cheating?


Z
Spoiler:

You has won, you has best


Vanessas' Entry

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Hollyoaks "Stendan" Article. An Overview and Character History.

By Vanessa.



I think the Hollyoaks Domestic Violence plot is the best storyline the show has ever done. It was groundbreaking and got me watching the show again.
Emmett Scanlan and Kieron Richardson, who play lovers Brendan and Ste, have a lot of chemistry.

I remember when nightclub manager Brendan Brady first appeared back in 2010. I hated him.
He seemed to have no redeeming qualities whatsoever.
But then he started to talk about his kids and showed his softer side. He was prepared to do anything for them. Him and Ste were both fathers and bonded over their experiences.

Ste started to admire the man. He was so cool and they had so much in common.
The boys grew close as they worked together.
Brendan planned to seduce Ste with the help of some good old Irish Whiskey, but the boy kissed him first and he couldn't handle it. He was horrified and threw him out. Poor Ste ran home all confused. He just couldn't understand why he kissed a guy!

The next day Ste apologized to his boss and they agreed to stay friends. But later that day Brendan followed Ste down the cellar and kissed him. This was the start of a very passionate love affair.

It had to be a secret, because Double B was in the closet and not ready to come out. He hated himself for being gay. He was so disgusted with himself that the next day he hit Ste when he tried to kiss him. They broke up several times because of the man violence, but always got back together.

Ste even had a new boyfriend for a while, but he cheated on him with his bad boy ex!
Last July Brendan finally told Ste he loved him. He promised him things would be different. But then his ex wife came and told him he'd lose the kids if he continued to see Ste. Brendan, scared he'd never see them again, dumped Ste and started dating women.

But things didn't work out and he couldn't get the boy out of his head. The club boss was arrested for murder, but later freed. Ste thought he was guilty and never went to visit him. Brendan felt betrayed by the person he loved the most, so he fired the boy out of anger. The poor lad was furious, but he soon started to look for work.

He decided to buy Cincerity with his good friend Doug Carter, who said some relatives left him some money.
But his mate was lying. He actually borrowed the money from Brendan Brady and kept it secret from Ste.

The boys opened their deli and have been very successful so far. But Doug was starting to have feelings for his friend Ste. They finally kissed, but the boy wasn't ready for a relationship yet. He felt confused and stopped working at the deli. Ste was left to work at the shop all by himself.

Worried Brendan went to see his ex to the deli several times. He told him he was proud of him and he'd always be there for him. How will the story end? Hopefully with a nice big Stendan wedding! I've got my hat ready!



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Forgot to say, competitors may vote if they wish, not a public poll anyway, so
Thanks! It's been hard, but also a lot of fun! I've never written an article ever! It's the first time!
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The entries are all completely different, it's almost impossible to compare them.
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The entries are all completely different, it's almost impossible to compare them.
I love the poem and Claudia entry! Both very good!
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The entries are all completely different, it's almost impossible to compare them.
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It was hard to vote! I like the other two entries too!
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Claudia's entry is fantastic! Had me laughing for ages!
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It is really good. As I say I liked all 3 though. Well done to all 3 of you.
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GypsyGoth, you are the winner of the Tibb Creative Writing Competition. Congrats on a well thought out and hilarious entry

Well done Vanessa and Josiah also.

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And cheers everyone who voted for me
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