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Old 28-09-2017, 09:34 AM #1
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Starring

Joseph Mazzello as Tim Murphy

Keira Knightley as Lex Murphy

BD Wong as Dr Henry Wu

Jeff Goldblum as Ian Malcolm

James Franco as Andrew Ludlow, son of former ingen ceo Peter Ludlow, and current InGen marketing executive

Emmy Rossum as Lolita Evans, Michelle's sister

Ian Ziering as Robert Jones

Dan Hedaya as game warden Joe Perez

Brooke Hogan as Michelle Evans, Lolita's sister

Rita Ora as Nina Thorpe, a investor

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Island Coast, Joe Perez and his boss Andrew Ludlow are inspecting the coast for any escaped dinosaur, but what they find worries them

Joe: so i don't see footprints

Andrew: doesn't have to mean a thing

Joe: oh my god

Andrew: what, what's the matter

''one of the power lines is failing to give enough power''


Cruise Ship heading towards Isla Sorna, with some special guests on board

Michelle: take a picture sis

Lolita: ''takes picture'' feels so lovely going to this dinosaur Island with you

Michelle: we're so not scared of a few little dino's

Tim: hello and my name is Tim Murphy, i went to the Island Isla Nublar 24 years ago along with my sister

Lex: yes and be careful at any time, these dinosaurs are smarter than us

Michelle: thanks for the advice

Lolita: whatever

at Jurassic Park 5.0 HQ

Andrew: tell this Nina bitch when she arrives, oh never mind

Nina: hello mr ludlow

Andrew: call me andrew, and welcome to jurassic park 5.0

Nina: so am i supposed to be excited

Andrew: yes, we are now happy to announce our latest dinosaur

Nina: and that is

Andrew: the Gigantosaurus Rex

Nina: a T Rex but then bigger

Andrew: and more teeth

Nina: sounds exciting, but we are a billion dollar company so we want this to be successful and not that our money is wasted

Andrew: of course we are here to make money

elevator doors opening

Ian: Andrew you sound like your dad so much, and that's not a good thing

Andrew: blah blah blah, Nina i want you to meet Ian Malcolm, he's our pessimist

Nina: alright happy to see it from 2 perspectives i think

Joe's lodge

Joe: Alphonse, you cannot just play with power lines, if these dangerous creatures break out

Alphonse: sorry i was trying a little upgrade to our fencing systems

Joe: upgrades cost the first park almost our business, thanks to Nedry

cruise ship arriving

Robert: i am robert jones, ur tour for this wonderful day

Michelle&Lolita: wow wow, what a beautiful Island

Tim: can i go towards the HQ immediately i have business there

Robert: yes Tim follow me


end of part 1
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"Andrew: tell this Nina bitch when she arrives"

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This casual sexism wont play well with the 18-24 key demographic
there is more vulgar talk right now with the youth than this i think
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Andrew preparing himself for the grand opening of the new dinosaur park

Andrew: 24 years ago, we at InGen wanted to create something never seen before, it didn't go as planned, my father wanted Jurassic Park: San Diego, where he lost his life in the san Diego incident, but our dreams have come true, with financial help from our partners and representative here Nina Thorpe, we can introduce dinosaurs to the world

Nina: yes we at Global Tech support InGen's dream of building our future and bringing back dinosaurs into the world

Tim: my grandfather was a visionary, John Hammond is the true genius behind this scheme of creating dinosaurs

a unknown man approaches the stage

Charlie: i'm also a grandson to John Hammond, he told me some of his dinosaur ideas, hybrids let's call them

Nina: hybrids interesting

Charlie: i can make your company from a billion dollar to a trillion dollar company

Nina: ooh we have a deal


security squad at the G-Rex paddock

Joe: *calling with Andrew* i did tell ya, the power lines were going out

Andrew: restore the power and investigate what caused the power to go out

Joe: on it boss

Security Member1: hey Joe, i've found something

*G-Rex eating Security Members 2, 3, 4*

Joe: crap, retreat everyone pull back

Petrov-security member1: let's go to HQ

Joe: all units we have a asset out of containment, this is not a drill, i repeat this is not a drill


Andrew taking Nina to a secret location

Andrew: here it is Nina, a baby G-Rex

Nina: it's the adult's offspring and you captured it

Andrew: yes we can't introduce the public to a dangerous adult g-rex first we need to show them the smaller infant dinosaurs

Nina: ah safety first i like it

Ian: Andrew, ur making the same mistakes as your dad

Nina: guards escort Ian out of here, we need to stay optimistic and not pessimistic

Ian: ur making a mistake

Michelle: Ian, i believe you i heard about your experiences on the other Island and san Diego

G-Rex approaching westgate tower, outer perimeter of the Island

Petrov: no no no, get my machine gun

Joe: got it

*Petrov fires machine gun, missing the creature but destroying some fences instead*

Joe: ffs aim a little better will ya

Petrov: out of ammo

Joe: no *G-Rex appears and eats Petrov*


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G-Rex is getting close to the location containing the infant G-Rex

Nina: don't make sounds *trying to make the infant g-rex quiet*

Andrew: i am leaving through the backdoor, back to HQ

Nina: ur leaving me

Andrew: it's your company i care about, not you

Nina: i must save my company, so this infant g rex is gonna save me

Andrew: BYE

*G-Rex storms in and finds it's infant*

Nina: don't move, don't run, don't hide

G-Rex isn't seeing the frightened Nina

Nina: *her cellphone rings* no no no

G-Rex roars

Nina: wait wait wait, get this cellphone off

*Nina trips and she is devoured by the G-Rex*


back at HQ, Charlie, Tim, Andrew and Ian, Michelle and Lolita are there

Lolita: i'm outta here

Michelle: sis wait

*Raptors appear and Lolita is devoured by one of them*

Andrew: easy, easy *and in a instant Andrew locks himself away from the dino's leaving the others to fight for their lives*

Ian: you coward

Tim: *a raptor notices Tim* what are you looking at, *kicks at the raptor*

Charlie: it's Joe i see him over there

Ian: really

Joe: hey guys i'm coming to save you all *G-Rex and a Raptor tear poor Joe to pieces*

Charlie: oh no, Andrew let's talk

Andrew: all i wanted was to get super rich with these dinosaurs

Charlie: that was your dad's ambition as well

Ian: now you're Peter Ludlow


everyone gets evacuated, except Michelle, Tim and Ian who want to return the G-Rex and it's infant back to the wild forestal area of the Island

Ian: we can lure the g-rex back using it's infant, it worked in san Diego, and it will work here i think

Michelle: here we go

Andrew: Charlie you hear me shoot the g-rex, that infant is my little goldmine, without it i'm ruined you hear me the infant must be kept alive *hearing the infants cries with Michelle and Ian*

Andrew: Michelle this is none of your business and Ian i've expected this from you

*Ian and Michelle are running away towards the evacuation ships without the infant*

Andrew: where is my infant, i want my precious animal

*g-rex cries*

Andrew: ah there you are, my company has been saved thanks to you

Andrew: come on already will ya

G-Rex storms towards the gate, and roars towards Andrew

Andrew: huh i thought you were being shot by my guards

G-Rex cripples Andrew by breaking his leg

Andrew: wait, all i wanted was my infant

*Infant G-Rex is allowed to finish Andrew*
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"Ian: we can lure the g-rex back using it's infant, it worked in san Diego, and it will work here i think"

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G-Rex is getting close to the location containing the infant G-Rex

Nina: don't make sounds *trying to make the infant g-rex quiet*

Andrew: i am leaving through the backdoor, back to HQ

Nina: ur leaving me

Andrew: it's your company i care about, not you

Nina: i must save my company, so this infant g rex is gonna save me

Andrew: BYE

*G-Rex storms in and finds it's infant*

Nina: don't move, don't run, don't hide

G-Rex isn't seeing the frightened Nina

Nina: *her cellphone rings* no no no

G-Rex roars

Nina: wait wait wait, get this cellphone off

*Nina trips and she is devoured by the G-Rex*
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