Home Menu

Site Navigation


Notices

Creative Writing and Books This area is for members' stories and poetry. Also a forum for book reviews and discussion.

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 01-03-2008, 04:55 PM #1
Scarlett.'s Avatar
Scarlett. Scarlett. is offline
Senior Moment
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,623

Favourites (more):
BB2023: Henry
BB7: Nikki


Scarlett. Scarlett. is offline
Senior Moment
Scarlett.'s Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,623

Favourites (more):
BB2023: Henry
BB7: Nikki


Default The Wind

The Wind: Prolouge
Episode 1
'We all have a story, a purpose, some are more important than others, I always though my purpose was to be a worker, until that day, that day changed the Universe, I am sat here telling you this, because, it may be my last chance to tell my story'

Rain poured down onto a dark street, Carl was walking past the dark houses, then a bright light shone at the end of the street, "what the hell?" Carl wondered, it got closer and closer, until it surrounded him...

'At that moment, I had no idea of what was happening, but I remember feeling warm and cosy as if in a warm bed on a Snowy winters night, then I was thrust out into a strange world'

He then woke up, in a strange room, he could hear bullet shots in the back ground, Carl ran over to the door, Carl looked over at a box, on the side it said 'Cold Cooperation' "never heard of them" Carl sighed, he opened a door, it was some kind of Casino, apart from people running around with guns, Carl ran over to the nearest door and went inside, he was in a toilet, he ran over to a cubical and jumped out of the window behind it.

"Today is the end of the war that has gripped Black Island, today is our day!" a man shouted to thousands of troops just outside of the city, thunder strook as the troops ran toward the city, they ran through the streets, at that second, a giant skyship flew over the city, the troops stopped, "alright, I surrender! the war is over!" a voice came out of the ship, Carl stood looking up at the ship, when he was approached by a man, "you a civilian?" he asked, "yeah, I think, where the hell am I?" Carl asked, "Station City, Black Island, why? where you from?" the man asked, "Manchester, England" Carl smiled, "never heard of it, better take you to the general" the man asked. Later on Carl was taken to an outpost in a nearby forest, "this guy, says he is from a place called 'Manchester, England'" the man explained to the general, "right, hey, whats your name?" The general asked, "Carl Leone" Carl replied, "Im John Bachman, more commonly known as The Wind, so your from Manchester, England?" The Wind asked, "yeah" Carl replied, "never heard of a planet called 'England'" The Wind sighed, "wha? no England is the country, the planet is Earth" Carl corrected, "ah, anyway, come with me to Secret Ways and we'll talk more....
Scarlett. is offline   Reply With QuoteReply With Quote
Old 15-03-2008, 07:18 PM #2
Scarlett.'s Avatar
Scarlett. Scarlett. is offline
Senior Moment
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,623

Favourites (more):
BB2023: Henry
BB7: Nikki


Scarlett. Scarlett. is offline
Senior Moment
Scarlett.'s Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,623

Favourites (more):
BB2023: Henry
BB7: Nikki


Default The Wind: The Silver Fox: Part 1

Episode 2
'A hour later, I first saw The Silver Fox, what a magnificent piece of machinery it was. The Wind had explained the basics to me, the planet is named Avadey, and all that kind of stuff, but I still felt like a foreigner'

Carl walked down the corridors at Secret Ways, following The Wind, they walked into an office, "take a seat Carl" The Wind smiled as he sat down, "right, I want you on the team" The Wind got straight to the point, "The Team?" Carl asked, "yeah, here at Secret Ways, we look after the people, not in the care home way though" The Wind smiled, "well what way?" Carl asked, "We are like law enforcers, but not in a normal 'police' type of way" The Wind explained, "I dont have a choice do I? I mean if I say no, I'll be alone in a Foreign World" Carl sighed, "I'm not forcing it on you" The Wind replied, "I'll join" Carl smiled.

Outside a air ship flew over the city, abord Captain George Falkner was looking out over the city, "right Steph, lets test this baby's power!" he smiled, the ship flew out of sight and up into space, "right, lets get to Docking Bay 3, the party wont wait!" Steph smiled back at the captain, in the space station, people where running around preparing for the ship to land, "Leon, prepare to activate the thruster control" Danny smiled, "I'm doing that right now Dan" Leon smiled, the ship flew into the docking bay, and finally landed, "Yeah! look at that baby! what a masterpiece!" Leon smiled. The ship was Silver, streamlined, the engines sent out a bright blue light, that reflected onto the silver, a large logo sat on top, which had a fox on a purple back ground, and the classification was right underneath 'USWS Silver Fox' the USWS stood for 'United Secret Ways Space/Sky Ship.'

"Our first assignment is to make sure the 'Silver Fox' makes it to Hwaki, a planet in the next Solar System, also they contacted us saying they recived a transmission from 'Earth' but it was all scrambled, it was probably a radiowave, but they might be able to trace it back to your planet" The Wind explained, "Good, No offence but, I wanna go home" Carl smiled, "yeah, same here, wanna watch a documentary on Foggy Island" The Wind laughed, "have no idea what that is, dont explain, I'll learn" Carl smiled, "thank god, sick of explaining stuff, anyway, where heading to floor 18, they got a small ship waiting for us" The Wind smiled
Scarlett. is offline   Reply With QuoteReply With Quote
Old 02-05-2008, 11:42 AM #3
Scarlett.'s Avatar
Scarlett. Scarlett. is offline
Senior Moment
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,623

Favourites (more):
BB2023: Henry
BB7: Nikki


Scarlett. Scarlett. is offline
Senior Moment
Scarlett.'s Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,623

Favourites (more):
BB2023: Henry
BB7: Nikki


Default The Wind: The Silver Fox: Part 2

Episode 3
'I like most other people had never seen space, so when I first saw it, I couldnt belive my eyes, the ship I was on was impressive enough'

The ship arrived at the space station, Carl and The Wind where walking towards Docking bay 3, when they where joined by Leon and Dan, "Hey whos this guy Windy?" Dan asked, "New guy, from Earth" The Wind explained, "Earth? where the hell is that?" Leon asked, "thats what we hope to find out" The Wind smiled, they walked into the docking bay and onto the ship, "Greetings team" George welcomed, "yo dude" Dan smiled as he walked past, "Hey George, I hope we are'nt taking the scenic route" The Wind smiled, "yes we are, but dont worry, I'll test the ship out on the way" George smiled, the rest of the team walked on.

'At the time, I felt like I would never fit in, I felt like curling up in a ball and crying, I only wanted one thing back then, to get home, I wanted to know people, I wanted to go somewhere which I knew'

The ship flew out of the docking bay and away from Avadey and the space station, the ship did a twirl as it flew past Avadeys moon, "yehaw!" George smiled, "your one crazy guy" Steph smiled, "yeah, you should have seen him when he was the captain of the Red Widow" Dan smiled, just at that moment the ship was hit, "Oh crap! where being attacked! send out a distress call quick!" George shouted, "get those god damn sheilds up too!" he shouted, "Sir, some inavders have transported into Docking bay 2" the security officer shouted, "Thats our cue!" The Wind called to the team, the team ran out of the ships bridge. War ships soon arrived at the scene, the attacking ship flew away, The team arrived in the Docking bay, "the Red Fox is missing" The Wind explained through his communicator.

The ship arrived on Hwaki, it was badly damaged, The Wind was sat at the Secret Ways branch in Twuali, he was speaking with a Secret Ways space exploration Admiral, Carl looked out of the window, the view was like looking at a futuristic Venice, this world was a lot more developed than Avadey, this planet, belonged to actual 'Aliens' although the term Aliens was wrong, since this was their planet, "Carl, Admiral Mason says that they might have found Earth, I got us a ride on the UHS Kwali" The Wind smiled.
Scarlett. is offline   Reply With QuoteReply With Quote
Old 09-05-2008, 07:29 PM #4
Scarlett.'s Avatar
Scarlett. Scarlett. is offline
Senior Moment
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,623

Favourites (more):
BB2023: Henry
BB7: Nikki


Scarlett. Scarlett. is offline
Senior Moment
Scarlett.'s Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,623

Favourites (more):
BB2023: Henry
BB7: Nikki


Default The Wind: Falling

Episode 4


'That night, I began to realise that Earth was no longer my home, When I got back, what would I say? I'd have to keep everything I saw a secret, I still wanted to go home though'

Carl was sat in Farpoint bar, a bar that floated out over the sea, he stood up and picked up his drink and walked over to the side of the bar and looked up into the dark sky, Steph from the Silver Fox walked over to him, "Bet you cant wait to get back home" she smiled, "I want to, but then again... Im not too sure" Carl sighed, "what? how come? this Planet is violent, theres attacks against us everyday" Steph sighed, "yeah? you havent been to Earth its not much better there, at least here, its... magical and different" Carl explained, "magical? isnt Earth like this?" Steph asked, "no its normal, too normal, and its one Planet, alone" Carl looked up, then at that moment an Airship pulled up next the bar, "jump on!" The Wind shouted over the speakers, Steph and Carl jumped on, an the airship flew off, and flew so close to the sea that waves flew up beside it, "hold on!" The Wind shouted, Steph and Carl grabbed hold of the ship as it flew up.

Towards a City Island, "Secret Ways to the rescue!" The Wind laughed, then a Dragon flew up from the sea, "oh crap, wasnt anticipating that" The Wind laughed. The Ship came to a halt, Carl pulled out a gun, "its useless" Steph winked, as she shot water from the palm of her hand, the dragon roared loudly, then a laser shot out of the side of the ship at the dragon, which quickly flew away. The ship flew over the city buildings, and stopped off next to one, "End of the line!" The Wind laughed, Steph and Carl jumped onto the building, then The Wind flew away, "right, apparently all we need to do is secure the docks so the citizens can be evacuated" Steph explained, "where are the docks?" Carl asked, "down at the bottom of this street" Steph replied.

Meanwhile in a building in Station City, A shadowy figure was sat, looking at the fishtanks in front of his chair, which became TVs, Then a picture appeared on the screen, "We finally found it, the lost colony of Eartiala" a voice echoed through the large hall, "Well, send the warships, lets get this planet for ourselves" The person in the chair laughed. Carl and Steph where getting ready to 'fall' down the building, "just jump, and you'll be there in no time, its just like Falling" Steph smiled as she got ready to jump, then she suddenely pushed Carl, and went down after him, Carl reached the ground and disconnected himself, soon followed by Steph, "right, get your gun ready, 3..2.."
Scarlett. is offline   Reply With QuoteReply With Quote
Old 16-05-2008, 09:18 PM #5
Scarlett.'s Avatar
Scarlett. Scarlett. is offline
Senior Moment
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,623

Favourites (more):
BB2023: Henry
BB7: Nikki


Scarlett. Scarlett. is offline
Senior Moment
Scarlett.'s Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,623

Favourites (more):
BB2023: Henry
BB7: Nikki


Default The Wind: Earth

Episode 5

"..1" Steph whispered, the ran out into the street and began shooting the guards at the dock, Steph threw a fireball at a nearby gaurd booth, "Secured and ready" Steph told The Wind through the communicator, "hold the celebrations, we have a Code Red emergency, get to the dock" The Wind shouted through, "sounds bad" Steph wondered, as they walked toward the dock, then The Silver Fox flew low on the city streets and opened the bottom hatch, Carl jumped on board and helped Steph climb up.

'I knew that Earth was involved somehow, but the extent it was involved...'

The Silver Fox was flying far from Avadey, and fast, a few hundred warships where waiting for them, "whats going on?" Carl asked, "they found it" The Wind sighed, "Dan betrayed us, the Faction found Earth damn it!" The Wind shouted as he kicked the Captains chair, "Why do they want it?" Carl asked, "I havent been straight with you, or you either Steph, Earth, is a colony of people from our planet, who decided to leave Avadey, after a war had destroyed their home planet, the Faction, they want everything for themselves, the artifacts, the technology, Avadey, Earth our homes too" The Wind admitted, "I always thought the war was over the Power supplies" Steph sighed. The Silver Fox flew into a Warships docking bay.

Several Faction warships arrived in Earths solar system, Dan looked out through a window at Earth, "Soon, this planet will be ours" Dan smiled, "and the artifact" Kane smiled, "The Artifact?" Dan asked, "yeah buried deep in a Jungle in that large continent" Kane replied, the ship suddenly shook, Kane fell over, "what the hell is going on?" Dan shouted, "Secret Ways are here" Kane rolled his eyes, Carl transported onto the ship to place a bomb, he snook into the engine room and placed a pack of C4 and transported out...
Scarlett. is offline   Reply With QuoteReply With Quote
Old 23-05-2008, 06:05 PM #6
Scarlett.'s Avatar
Scarlett. Scarlett. is offline
Senior Moment
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,623

Favourites (more):
BB2023: Henry
BB7: Nikki


Scarlett. Scarlett. is offline
Senior Moment
Scarlett.'s Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,623

Favourites (more):
BB2023: Henry
BB7: Nikki


Default The Wind: Time to spare?

Episode 6

The ship detonated, creating a shockwave, the Silver Fox shook violently, "Leon, report" George shouted back to Leon, "We are stable sir" Leon reported in, Carl walked up to the screen, "somethings different" he sighed, "what do you mean?" The Wind asked, "can this screen zoom in?" Carl asked, "sure can" George smiled proudly, "well then zoom in to Earth" Carl replied.

'When we zoomed in, a large war was taking place in Europe, but something looked out of place...'

"World War II" Carl realised, "eh?" Steph asked, "World War II, took place in the 1940s, its now 2008" Carl explained, "are you trying to say we are in the past?" Leon asked, "aye, looks like it" Carl sighed, "George take the ship outta here, dont interfere with the past" The Wind ordered, George looked at Earth, "Leon, take us out of here" George ordered, "yes sir" Leon replied, The Silver Fox flew off out of the solar system. Steph and Carl where sat in the ships bar, "so what will you do if we can get back to 2008?" Steph asked, "I'm not sure yet" Carl sighed, "well, on Earth, you wont have me" Steph laughed, "Oh, what a shame" Carl joked, The Wind walked in, "alright guys! how are you both doing?" he asked, "Alright, I guess" Carl smiled.

"How the hell are we gonna go back to the future?" George asked Secret Ways, Carl laughed, "This isnt a funny situation Carl" The Wind nudged, "No, theres a film named 'Back to the future'" Carl laughed, "crazy bloke" Leon laughed, "anyway, what we need to know is what caused our little time journey" George continued, "obviously The Cold Cooperation had something on their ship" Steph added, "I think we should go back and sca.." Carl began, the ship shook violently.

'We had ended up in a alternate universe, and we needed to find a way back'
Scarlett. is offline   Reply With QuoteReply With Quote
Old 28-06-2008, 11:30 PM #7
Scarlett.'s Avatar
Scarlett. Scarlett. is offline
Senior Moment
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,623

Favourites (more):
BB2023: Henry
BB7: Nikki


Scarlett. Scarlett. is offline
Senior Moment
Scarlett.'s Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,623

Favourites (more):
BB2023: Henry
BB7: Nikki


Default The Wind: Mirror you, Mirror me

Part 1
Episode 7






The Silver Fox landed on Mars, "damn it" George sighed, "Sir, I think the Cold ship seems have created a rift between dimensions and time, if we dont fix it soon..well you dont need explaining in detail, just think of a car crash" a technician explained, "just what we need" George sighed, The Wind looked around the bridge "god! we are done for!" he sighed. The ship had been on Mars for a day now, and the rift was getting larger, then the ship was raided by Secret Ways, but a Mirror version of it, everyone was taken back to Avadey, a planet so filled with smoke that Cities where built above the clouds.

'We where taken to a High Court to be judged, god knows what for'

"Secret Ways team 1, you are suspected of conspiracy to overthrow the Empire, how do you plead?" A judge asked, "You dont understand, theres a rift in space near Mars, we need to seal it before the Universe implodes" The Wind shouted. "A rift eh?" the Judge asked "Yeah" Steph shouted, "Leon, go check out this rift" The Judge asked a Mirror Leon. The judge turned back to the team, "you are pardoned, apart from Carl" The judge announced, the team walked out, leaving Carl stood across the chasm between the dock and the Judges balcony. "Carl, theres someone who wants to see you" The Judge announced as the Mirror Steph walked in, the judge walked out.

Steph walked up to him, "you died" she said bluntly "and left me to deal with the children" Carl looked at Steph, "but I cant stay angry at you" she smiled, "Listen, I'm not your Carl" Carl sighed "so?" Steph asked, "you are not my Steph either" Carl told Steph, Steph put her hand on his face, "I am" she smiled
"if you want me to be..."
Scarlett. is offline   Reply With QuoteReply With Quote
Reply

Bookmark/share this topic

Tags
wind


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT. The time now is 05:13 PM.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.11
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, vBulletin Solutions Inc.
 

About Us ThisisBigBrother.com

"Big Brother and UK Television Forum. Est. 2001"

 

© 2023
no new posts