[Tom]

Poll code (without space):

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That also takes a word off because I changed the vote thing

[Matt]

Okay, I've changed my method of word count judgement to Microsoft Word since that seems to be the tool both teams have used.

Therefore, you're under limit at 1,497 words.

[Nicky.]

I made this --

[Tom]

Spelling mistake: finalised part 2 ending 2



Madonna laughed, but Fom agreed and they shook on a deal. Fom was now a real recording artist, even if not a very good one. Andy was just about to strike a blow to the impersonators head, when using his magical powers, Dezzy struck Andy dead on the spot.
"Thats what he gets for trying to kill Dezzy", laughed Dezzy.
Fom and Madonna were shocked. "Oh my god you're not Britney?!" they both said simultaneously. "Dezzy!!", they gasped.
"Can I still change my userna ..."
Fom interrupted Madonna. "Do I still have my record deal?" he said.
"Yes, of course you do, but under those conditions that you release certain songs".
"Can I change my userna ..."
Fom interrupted Madonna again. "Thats amazing, thanks so much!!!!"
"Can I change my userna ..."
Dezzy interrupted Madonna. "My pleasure, or at least it will be when I hear your rendition of 'I'm Not A Girl'".
"Can I change my username now?" asked Madonna
"Yes, you can" replied Dezzy, "but only if its to match your parrot and you change it to HarryRocksUrSocks".
"Thats fine, I just want a new name, I don't like Madonna anymore".
And Madonna's username was changed. HarryRocksUrSocks and his parrot, TomRocksUrSocks, along with Twighlight and Fom returned back to TiBBland and lived happily ever after ... until HarryRocksUrSocks wanted a username change. In other news, Fom's album charted at #163 and he was quickly dropped by his record label. He had a sex change and is now on Loose Women.

The End

Who's posting it?

[Nicky.]

Oo - sorry I didn't notice it, I proof read it earlier!

I will post it, unless Matt is? If that's ok :3

[Nicky.]

Just testing it xD

YOU get to decide how the story ends. CLICK TO VOTE NOW BY 8.45pm!!

[Tom]

Originally posted by Nickyy
I made this --

Thats great

We better win after all this last minute planning

[Matt]

DEADLINE

The deadline has now passed. No more changes can be made to your work.

Please be prepared to post the first part of your story at approximately 6.20pm.

[Nicky.]

We better!

I will post that last in the thread Like last post of the 1st section, yea?

[Nicky.]

Ok

[Nicky.]

THE POST -

He just couldn't believe it. He was going to have to change his name again.
"But mum, I don't want to change it anymore. I'm quite fine as Madonna" the boy whimpered.
"You're always embarrassing me. Postandpollmad? You made us the laughing stock at the TiBB convention" his mother yelled.
Tears rolled down his face. "Then what will I be mother?" he asked, but she just ignored him. He glanced around the room until it hit him.
Madonna had a parrot called Tom, whom he loved very much.
“Britney Britney” croaked the parrot. Madonna stood confused. He caught the TV in the back of his eye, which had 4music on. They were display Britney’s greatest hits.
He giggled to himself. "Mother, I am going to be Britney Spears!" BANG. IT was too late His mother had grabbed his arm, thrown him out the door, and slammed it behind him.
Madonna was the forum clown. He was a lonely boy who only ever wanted to be loved by his fellow TiBBers. He sat down on his porch feeling sorry for himself.
“At least I’ve got you Twilight!” he smiled, trying to remain positive. He stroked his fluffy shi-tzu. “Am I really a laughing stock?” He stood up abruptly and started walking down the road. I’ve been the joke of the forum far too long. I’m going to be Britney and I don’t care who knows it!
“You better ask her herself” croaked Tom the parrot, but he already knew what he had to do.
He had been walking for almost eight hours now. Dehydrated, miserable and struggling, he popped into a local shop for a bottle of water. However his thoughts were distracted when he saw a scruffy haired man with a melodious voice.
“I don’t suppose you have any record deals do you?” the man said to the cashier.
“No, but we do have offers on all frozen goods in store today.” she replied. The man sighed, picking up his carrier bag.
“Hi I’m Madonna. What’s up?” he said.
“Hi Madonna. I’m Fom. I’ve been across this whole town and no one has a record deal.”
“I’m going to see Britney Spears. Do you want to come with me”
Fom stared blankly. “I’m not really a Britney fan.”
“But there will be people there from her record label. Maybe you could sing to them! Once they’ve heard you they won’t be able to resist!
Fom cheekily smiled to himself. “Do you really think?”
Madonna nodded. He had made his first friend.

The 2 friends carried on along the road, on their quest to find queen Britney. Would she allow Madonna the name change? Would she get Fom his dream record contract? They needed to get there as quickly as they could.
A few hours later, the night was starting to draw in, and the stars began to shine brightly, one by one. The pair started to sing ‘Womanizer’, one of Britney’s amazing hits, to kill time, and give each other a bit of hope. In the distance, they saw a little figure, laughing hysterically at pointing towards them.
Confused, Fom and Madonna went over to the young lad, who now had tears running down his face.
“You... like... Britney Spears?” The quite butch and ‘manly’ man exclaimed, trying to keep a straight face and not blurt anymore laughter out. Fom and Madonna looked at each other in bewilderment. What a weird person, they both thought.
“Umm... yea... we’re off to find her, I need a username change on a forum, so I need to get her permission.”
“And I’m going to get a record contract when we finally find her!” Fom added with excitement. Andy bursts out laughing once more.
“Can I come along then please? I haven’t had a good laugh in ages! Oh, by the way, I am Andy.” Fom and Madonna, still confused, nod at one another and the three carry on up the long road.
As they walk, Andy comes up with a plan. He will finally kill off the beloved Britney... and will no longer have to put up with the terrible music and petty arguments that seem to be emerging daily.
A few hours on, they are all tired, hungry and thirsty, and considering giving up hope to find Queen Britney. But at this moment, their luck changes. In the distance, they see an enormous sign, which reads ‘Britney Land’. They all squeal, unable to control their excitement, they start running, getting faster and faster, and run into the ‘The world of Britney’.
As they enter the magical world, they see something in the distance, sparkling and glistening in the sun’s rays.
“No, it can’t be, can it?” Madonna stares at the magnificent figure.
“Oh my God, is it really her?” Asked Fom, taking his old coat off and brushing himself down, in an attempt to look handsome.
“HAHAHA, look at the state of it” Giggled Andy, not taking any notice that half the kingdom could hear him. They all went silent, stood still and stared at the sight in front of them.

YOU get to decide how the story ends. CLICK TO VOTE NOW BY 8.45pm!!

[Nicky.]

Title to be -

If U Seek Britney [Interactive Story - Decide Britney's fate!]

Yup?

[Matt]

You can post the first part of your story any time now in the Creative Writing forum.

[Tom]

Originally posted by Nickyy
Title to be -

If U Seek Britney [Interactive Story - Decide Britney's fate!]

Yup?

Yep

[Nicky.]

Post something if you want

[Tom]

We have to win this

The other teams isn't that good, it doesn't rally want to make me read on and its quite disjointed, no real story to it its just events

[Tom]

Results so far- 93.3% (14 people) don't want Britney to die

[Nicky.]

Whooo!

That ending is better!!

and I agree with you on the others one :\

It's alright though

[Sam]

We deserve this win for once Our story is more interesting and funner!

[Tom]

91.7% still for no (22 votes)

2 votes for yes

[Nicky.]

Whoo

I'm glad they've voted no

[Tom]

Theres probably a bit of multi voting going on ... because the figure just keeps going up but still if it says no then that suits us

Its either some psycho Britney fan or its someone who wants to ruin our story

[Nicky.]

LOL true!

Ah well! I realllyy want no to win xD

[Sam]

A lot of votes which is good, I hope the popularity is taken into consideration with the judges.

[Tom]

79.2% (38 no, 10 yes)