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Old 01-04-2015, 07:51 PM #1
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Default My First Attempt At A Title Sequence

Hi everyone,

I've never posted before but I recently had a go at making my first Big Brother title sequence, so here it is:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eNS3ApBrjH0

I didn't create the eye myself, but used one which I found online that was made by Daniel Eatock and not used for a series. As I said, this is my fist ever attempt at a title sequence so any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thankyou and I hope you enjoy it!
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It could do with a bit of work (I'd personally get rid of the two people standing near the end and perhaps have things go a bit more sped up), but good for a first attempt
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A) Fantastic username. Welcome to the forum .
B) Great titles for a first try!
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It could do with a bit of work (I'd personally get rid of the two people standing near the end and perhaps have things go a bit more sped up), but good for a first attempt
Thankyou! I definitely agree about the pace, and it's something I'll work more on as I add other elements into the sequence (I'm thinking of replacing things like the barbed wire and people at the end with some shots of the house as they are a bit dull).
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Hi everyone, it's great to be talking to you all and thanks for taking the time to reply!
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Thankyou! I definitely agree about the pace, and it's something I'll work more on as I add other elements into the sequence (I'm thinking of replacing things like the barbed wire and people at the end with some shots of the house as they are a bit dull).
I like the barbed wire, it gives to a old BB 2000 effect.
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I actually think it's amazing!

I love it, love the splash at the "16 housemates" part! It's very creative!

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Terrific first attempt! Welcome to the forum
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Hey, welcome

I like these! I like the ink blot theme you've gone with (I also remember the eye that we almost had for BB12 ) - my personal suggestion would be to build up a bit more on that theme - the scrolling book is very creative, but silhouettes of people is something a lot of people throw into fan made titles so maybe have some effect of ink being thrown at a page? I dunno what you can create with the software that you've got..and yeah as other people have said, make them a bit more frantic and fast paced.

Other than that, great first attempt
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This is actually really good for a first attempt
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Very good.

As others have said it could be doing with being sped-up, and getting rid of the people; I don't mind people in the opening titles, but they shouldnt be so "clear" if you know what I mean. Also not a fan of the "16 housemates" and other such text written in the opening titles; the titles should be self-explanatory, plus it removes the possibility of twists later on.

On to the good things; the ink blots falling is nice, as the swilling ink in the background of shots. This, sped up, could look very cool indeed. Also, I like how it's very crisp and clean, black and white.

In summary, the same kind of idea, only sped up and with no "obvious" text would make it excellent.

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