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04-05-2016, 10:51 AM | #1 | |||
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04-05-2016, 10:55 AM | #2 | |||
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It's called Twin and is about a woman inheriting her grandmothers fortune but it has serious consequences.
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04-05-2016, 10:55 AM | #3 | |||
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Maybe mention the audio when she has haired pulled, I haven't added her scream into yet.
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04-05-2016, 11:54 AM | #4 | |||
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Added some feedback!
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04-05-2016, 01:49 PM | #5 | |||
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Thanks Tom!
Things I'm changing: cutting down the changing scene cutting down the coffee and magazine scene making the texts easier to read by cropping having fake blood on the door as a note instead of a sticky note having a picture of two twins in a frame which the good twin will look whilst the bad twin will destroy |
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04-05-2016, 03:43 PM | #6 | |||
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Good ideas, yeah I did have to pause the video to read the text messages
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04-05-2016, 03:47 PM | #7 | |||
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But I'm quite quick and typing and reading so I should have got a few people to try it to make sure I got the right length. I think you can see that I've improved over the year if you compare it to my messy first project. |
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04-05-2016, 03:47 PM | #8 | |||
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A lot of people really liked the shoe shot.
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