TiBBenders//Episode 2 posted//NEW EPISODE 1/1/10

[Lewis.]

Tibbenders

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After the big success of TiBBenders in February, I have decided to bring back TiBBenders to your computer screens for the next couple of months. With new members joining and some old leaving, the cast will change a lot and all of the old plots will be scrapped. You can see the last series thread Here - http://www.thisisbigbrother.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1720358

The first episode of the new series will be posted on the 31st of December and there will be a new episode every Thursday and Sunday after that for the next 2/3 months

Tibbenders is a forum tv show, which will have tibb members, as characters! All of the episodes will be posted in this thread Every Thursday and Sunday there will be a new episode, which will consist of a few scenes. The soap will be based on eastenders, with Teenage pregnancies, and love affairs, around every corner. The plots will be different, but the setting will be the same as Eastenders, with the vic and chippy. New Characters will be introduced and characters will leave, throughout the series. Tibbenders is written by me, Lewis, and when writing the story, i do not mean to purposly insult any member on the forum

Thankyou and enjoy following Tibbenders

[Harry!]

Yey hope it is as good as it was last time. Hope I am in it this time!

[Lewis.]

Yeah :) It should be. I've learnt a lot of new techniques about writing, in English and Drama, over the past year so it should be better. The characters will be mostly the main members on TiBB that have contributed a lot to the forum over the past few months and years, and also a few new members who have proven to be good members :)

[Lewis.]

Oh and, Thanks to Nicky for the Logo :)

[King Gizzard]

Rickayyy!

[Lewis.]

Aha. ;D

[Chels]

Sounds good! :)

[Stephanie]

lmao sounds good

[Lewis.]

It should be :) Last time I did it in February, it was greatly recieved :)

[Stacey.]

it sounds cool :thumbs:
not really suree what happens atm thouugghhh :/
Still a bitt confusedd :/

[biglover]

cool, I missed the first series though :(

[Lewis.]

Basically it is a story that has TiBB members as Characters, based in Albert square :)
It's written in script form :)

[Patrick]

Oooh :)

Sounds cool, I wasnt here in Febuary so im looking forward to this.

Do we get a parts in it by auditioning?
Or do you just include members in your writing?

I hope im included in a few scenes.. maybe arguments in the vic :)

[Patrick]

Oooh :)

Sounds cool, I wasnt here in Febuary so im looking forward to this.

Do we get a parts in it by auditioning?
Or do you just include members in your writing?

I hope im included in a few scenes.. maybe arguments in the vic :)

[Jordan.]

Sounds cool im going to read through the past one :)

[Jords]

Sounds great Lewis! :)

[Shaun]

every time I read this I see 'benders'.

I'm so Freudian.

[Patrick]

every time I read this I see 'benders'.

I'm so Freudian.

lmao
Same

[bronaaaa]

:lovedup:

[GypsyGoth]

Very cool Lewis :thumbs:

[Lewis.]

I may post a few little pilot episodes before the first episode.. just to us started ;)

[Braden]

seems cool :thumbs:

[Jords]

I may post a few little pilot episodes before the first episode.. just to us started ;)

Yes please :hugesmile:

[Lewis.]

Episode 1-

The Allotments
It is 6pm in Albert Square and Shaun is all alone in the allotments. He sits down on the bench and puts his head in his palm.. before sobbing

Brona and Ross's house
Brona is looking into the mirror applying make-up. She is wearing a very attractive dress and her hair has been straightened down. Ross walks into the room in a dressing gown.
Brona: You better not get up to anything naughty tonight!
Ross: I could say the same to you actually!
Brona Laughs
Brona: Ah, don't worry about me. I'll be with Princess.. She'll make sure I don't get up to anything
Brona Laughs again and Ross puts his arms around her
Ross: I Love you Brona
Brona: I Love you too
Brona Turns around and kisses him
Brona: Right, I better go now.. Princess is expecting me at half 6 in the Vic
Ross: Okay hun. Please don't get too drunk
Brona: Naah, Only a little bit drunk
Ross Laughs
Ross: As If.. I'll see you later hun
Brona: Okay.. Are you sure you will be okay on your own?
Ross: Yeah, don't worry about me! Have a good time!
Brona: Okay.. I Love you
Ross: I Love you too... now go!
Brona Kisses Ross before leaving the house and walking over to the Vic

The Allotments
[i]Shaun is still sat on the bench crying. Markwaldorf walks into the allotments and looks over at Shaun
MarkW: I can't help my feelings for her
Shaun: Just go away Mark
MarkW: I can't help it Shaun. I can't stand it anymore.. but I can't help it
Shaun: Mark, I said go away
Mark: Shaun. You need to understand.. I just don't love you anymore.. I Love her

Princess and Enids house
Princess: I'm off now mum. What time is Zee coming around?
Enid: erm.. about 7
Princess: Okay. I'll see you later then Mum.
Enid: Okay love. Ring me at midnight..
Princess: Yeah.. If I'm not too drunk
Princess winks at Enid
Enid: Oi you. You're only 18 remember.. both you and Brona are still young.. make sure you are not taken advantage of..
Princess: yeah.. Whatever mum. I'll see you later!
Enid: bye love!
Princess runs out of the house in her high heels on her way to the vic.



The second part of the episode will be posted later on tonight.. nearer midnight :) A usual episode will be about 3 times the length of the above.. but I can't be bothered to write loads tonight as I just want to enjoy myself as the new year starts.. Come back later for more!

[Enid]

Haha my first and only experience of motherhood. :P

[Lewis.]

Haha. Aww. Not planning on having children then Enid?

[Enid]

Hell no! I want to enjoy life. :P

[Jords]

Nice work Lewis :hello:

[Harry!]

Good work Lewis!

[Braden]

Very good start Lewis,
keep up the good work :D

[Ninastar]

Is it too late for me to ask to be in this??

[Ninastar]

Also the story is good so far. Looking forward to more!

[Jessica.]

that was surprisingly entertaining

[Lewis.]

Going to write another little bit now guys :) May do 3 parts tonight :)

Oh and Ninastar you are in the next scene :)

Thanks guys!

[Ninastar]

Aww yay! thank you lewis!! xx

[MeMyselfAndI]

Haha Lolz.

[Lewis.]

The Queen Vic
The Queen Vic is full of customers.. all getting ready for a long evening. Lili is behind the bar, talking to Brona
Lili: I expect tonight will be a long night.
Brona: Yepp. Well, I plan for it to be.
Lili: Isn't Ross with you?
Brona: Naah. He's going to have the night to himself with a few beers.
Lili: Typical bloke
Brona: Yeah. Where's Remy?
Lili: He's upstairs putting Courtney to bed. I expect he will be down a bit later when we get busier.
Brona: Aww. how old is she now?
Lili: Courtney is 9 and Jonathan is 15. It's crazy how time flies being a parent.
Brona: I don't think I could cope with having children yet.. I'm only 18. I want to enjoy life first.
Lili: I wish I did the same. I'm 30 years old and have a 15 year old child.. You can tell I haven't really lived life to the full.
Brona Laughs and Princess walk into the pub
Princess: Hiya love.
Brona: Heya, do you want a drink?
Princess: ohh yeah.. a Vodka and coke please Lili
Lili: Sure thing Princess love, tell you what, have it on the house.. Remy wont ever know!
Lili smirks as she goes off to make Princess's drink.

The Allotments
Shaun: but I thought you were gay..
MarkW: Yeah, well things change. I'm 22.. My mind is al over the place.. But I can't stop thinking about her Shaun.. And I don't think I can cope any longer.. seeing her walking around the square all alone.
Shaun: Have you not got any consideration for my feelings?
MarkW: Shaun.. we had a one night stand.. It's not as if we are married?
Shaun: But I love you
MarkW: Well.. I don't love you Shaun.
Shaun steps up and slaps Mark. He bursts into tears and runs off, leaving Mark standing alone. Mark sighs whilst rubbing his cheek

The Vic
It is now 9pm. Brona and Princess are in the Vic, both very drunk. Andy walks up to Brona
Andy: Hiya babe, do you want a drink?
Brona: Oooh. Ello Love... You're a sexy fellaa
Princess laughs loudly
Princess: Ooh. Bronaaaaaaaaaaa. Cut it out you silly billy. What about Rod!!
Brona: Who the Bloody hell is Rod my dear?
Princess: Rod.. What am I on about......
Princess laughs loudly
Princess: I mean Rosssssssss
Brona laughs.
Brona: He's my boyfriend isn't he?
Andy: You have a boyfriend? What a lucky fellaa!
Andy looks Brona up and down
Brona: I love you.. whatever your name is!!
Andy: Err.. It's Andy sweetheart... What is yours?
Brona: Andy?
she laughs
Brona: ANDY PANDY
Brona and Princess blast out in a fit of laughter
Brona: Come with me Andy Pandyyyyyyy.
Brona grabs Andy's T-Shirt and leads him into the toilets. They get into a cubicle and Brona laughs before snogging Andy.
Andy: Let's go back to mine babe. I've got some booze and a bed
Brona: Lets do it Andy Pandyyy
Andy smiles

Ross's house
Ross is lying on the Sofa in his dressing gown. He pours a glass of red wine and then pours another. A woman walks into the living room in her underwear
Ninastar: Shall we go upstairs?
Ross grins



Part 2 of tonight.. There will be another part a bit later :)

[Enid]

Ninastar, the dirty bitch!

[Lewis.]

It's terrible isn't it. :P

[Jords]

Oh my gawd 2 affairs already! :shocked: I love it!
I hope I get a part in a future scene :hugesmile:

[Harry!]

Its very good Lewis I liked this one more then the first one, Good stuff!

[Stephanie]

pmsl!

[Raph]

aww it's fab!
would be really cool if i could be in it (:
anyways, well done Lewis <3

[Lewis.]

Thanks Sammy :)

[Ninastar]

Omg! I disgust myself!

[Jords]

Omg! I disgust myself!

:yuk:

[Shaun]

i hate you mark sad/

[LemonJam]

LemonJam likes this.

[Ninastar]

I'm the luckiest girl on tibb. Poor poor brona. DONT DO IT BRONA!

[Stacey.]

ah, its well good lewis :)
i like the part im involved in :p

[Lewis.]

Another episode probably tonight :) Thanks for the comments guys!

[Lewis.]

Ross and Brona's house
Ross and Ninastar are lying in bed kissing. It is nearly midnight and there is a big crowd of people in the square waiting for the countdown
Ross: I suppose you better go now?
Ninastar: Why?
Ross: Well.. Brona could be home anytime soon..
ninastar: I thought she was partying all night?
Ross: Well yeah.. but.. She could be back anytime after midnight.. and we don't want to get caught.
Ninastar: Hmmm
Ross: Cmon, we can do this again soon.. I just really don't want to get caught.
Ninastar: fair enough..
Ninastar gets out of the bed and puts her clothes on

The Vic
Shaun is sitting alone in the Vic[/b]
Lili: Arent you coming outside Shaun, the countdown will start in a minute chick.
Shaun: Naah. New years day is like every other day for me
Lili: Ahh, cmon hun, come outside for the countdown
Shaun: Honestly.. I'm fine here alone.
Lili: Fine.. your loss..
[i]Lili walks outside. Shaun takes a sip of his drink.. sobbing

Lemonjam and Nicky's house
Lemonjam is with his children, Stephanie and Harry. They are watching the TV.. waiting for the countdown. Nicky walks into the room with 4 glasses and a bottle of champagne.
Nicky: Get your drinks ready guys!
Steph: oooh, Alcohol!
Nicky: Don't get too excited.. you are only having a little bit!
Steph: But mum, I'm 15.. an adult!
Nicky: Hardly!
Steph grumbles as she picks up her champagne
Lemonjam: Here's to an amazing new year guys... I love you all and I hope next year is a bit better than this one.
Steph: yeah, well you've only got yourself to blame for that one.
Nicky: Stephanie! Don't be like it!
Steph: Well.. he has.. If he hadn't had cheated on you mum, this year would have been amazing!
Nicky: STEPH!
Steph: Well, I'm only telling the truth.. right Dad?
Lemonjam: Steph.. What I did was a mistake.. And we've all promised we wouldn't talk about it again.. we'd just forget it.
Steph: So Dad.. which young girl have you got your eyes set on this year then?
Nicky: STEPHANIE! Go to your Room NOW! You do not speak to your father like that! Go on... GO!
Stephanie storms out of the room and up the stairs.. grinning

Ross and Brona's house
Ross and Ninastar are in the hallway. Ross kisses Ninastar
Ross: I'll call you another time..
Ninastar: Yepp.. We can do it again
Ninastar winks and opens the door. Princess is dragging a very drunk Brona up the pathway to the house
Princess: DON'T Worry about her-rrrrr-r. She is not dead Rod. I SWEAR!
Princess laughs and lays Brona on the floor. Brona gets up and looks at Ninastar
Brona: HELLOOOOO My LOVER-RRR
Ninastar: Well Ross. Thanks for the advice on my Tv... I better be off now
Ninastar runs off down the pathway
Brona: FINEEEEE. Don't speee-aak then!
Ross: Come here you!
Ross grabs Brona and drags her inside. Princess follows them in

The Square
Lili is standing on the stage and is looking up to the countdown
Lili: READY EVERYONE!
The crowd all get ready for the countdown
Everyone: 10.. 9.. 8.. 7.. 6.. 5.. 4.. 3.. 2.. 1..
Everyone cheers as the new year comes in
Lili: HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE!
Sam: WEEEEY
Zee: YEEEEEY
Jords: Yey! 2010.. HERE WE COME!

Lemonjam and Nicky's house
Steph is upstairs on her laptop talking to Andyman on msn
Steph: I have to get away
Andyman: I'll take you away.. somewhere they will never find you
Steph: I just want to be with you Andyman.. I can't cope with my stupid parents anymore
Andyman: When do you want to go?
Steph: I don't know. As soon as possible.
Andyman: I'm on my way.
Andyman signs off. Steph closes her laptop and roots under her bed. She pulls out a bag... full of clothes. She picks up a pen and paper and writes..
"It's your own fault.. Have a nice life
Steph x"



Another episode on Sunday night guys :)

[Stephanie]

pmslrofl

:L

[CaraRawr]

lmao, this is great :]

[Stacey.]

lewis,its amazing :D

[Ninastar]

Lol! Aww this is so good! x

[Jessica.]

Brilliant! :laugh2:

[Lewis.]

I'm glad you all like it :)

[Ninastar]

I actually am dieing to see sundays!

[Harry!]

Another very good episode Lewis!

[Lewis.]

I'm looking forward to writing it Ninastar ;D I may post one half tomorrow night instead and the other on Sunday night. I don't want to post it as one big chunk because I always find smaller little chunks are easier to read and don't take up much time :)

[Jords]

Hahaha, this is great! Lots of romances!

[Patrick]

*Reads through to see if im in it* Meh.

lol that was a good read, loving this so far.

[Lewis.]

Shall post another episode tonight.. Sorry guys, thought I posted it on Sunday :)

[Chels]

yay :)
only now read these the other day aha. they're really good lewis!

[Lewis.]

Thanks.. you are in this one Chels :) I shall post it as soon as I can find my laptop charger :L

[Chels]

oh woop thanks lewis! :]]

[Lewis.]

Andy's Flat
Andy is lying in his bed. There are a pair of knickers on the floor beside him and an open condom pack. He stretches his arms and looks around

Ross and Brona's house
Brona is lying in bed. She opens her eyes
Brona: Oh no.. My Head.
She rubs her eyes and sits up

Chels and Jords house
Chels and Jords are in the kitchen making breakfast for their two children - Jessica and 30stone - Both 15 years old
30stone: Cmon mum, hurry up.. I'm hungry!
Chels: Oi you.. you'll get it when it's ready!
Chels cracks an egg in the pan
30stone: Eugh.. forget it.. I'll get something from the minutemart.
30stone gets up and walks out of the kitchen
Jords: The minute mart is closed so you wo...
30stone walks out
Chels: Ah well, he'll find out when he gets there.
Jessica: God mum, why is 30stone such a grump all of the time!
Chels: Hormones love..


Gary's house
Shaun is very drunk. He is standing outside Gary's house throwing rocks at the window
Shaun: OPEN UP GARY BABEEEEEEEEE
Gary opens the door
Gary: SHAUN! What do you want!
Shaun: YOU HONEEY
Gary: Come inside.. NOW
Shaun stumbles across the road to Gary's house and goes inside

Shall post the rest later :) xx

[Chels]

LOL! :]
me and jords married pmsl :L

[Princess]

Just reading this,you did me drunk very accurately :laugh:

[Jords]

LOL! :]
me and jords married pmsl :L

Hi honey :laugh:

Love it Lewis!

[Jessica.]

LOL! :]
me and jords married pmsl :L

You are my mother :laugh2:

[Jessica.]

God mum, why is 30stone such a grump all of the time!

:laugh2: :joker: :hugesmile: :blush: :bigsmile:

[Chels]

Hi honey :laugh:

Love it Lewis!

hai bbz ;)

[Stephanie]

lmfao

[Harry!]

Great episode Lewis!

[Lewis.]

Thanks :) Sorry it's only short.. I'm just going to post short episodes now and again.. It's easier to read than a really long episode every week..

[Niamh.]

Gripping Stuff Lewis!!

[Lewis.]

Aha.. taa :D