The T.C (Episode 8 up)

[Tom4784]

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It's a new story I'm doing, It's gonna take the piss outta teen dramas. the first part will be up soon if anyone's interested. There's gonna be a lot more people in it then shown in the trailer it's just that i got bored of trying to find clips.

[GypsyGoth]

:love:

[Jessica.]

ahahhaha Patrick!

[Stephanie]

pmsl! sounds like it's gonna be good.

[MrGaryy]

outstanding.

[Tom4784]

:love:

:hug:

ahahhaha Patrick!

That fall hurt y'know :sad:

[Jessica.]

That fall hurt y'know :sad:

Aww :(

Very good btw

[Shaun]

hot

[Tom4784]

Thanks for the comments, the first part should be up tommorow I think.

[Z]

PMSL Dean I love it. I'm so hot :love:

[lily.]

Wombai & Stu !!!!! EPIC CASTING!

I love me.. I'm hot! :) One thing though, am I Gary's mother? LoL

[MrGaryy]

Wombai & Stu !!!!! EPIC CASTING!

I love me.. I'm hot! :) One thing though, am I Gary's mother? LoL

yeah, we're fierce together.

[lily.]

We are son.. I taught you well..

-beams with pride-

[Tom4784]

Episode 1
Secrets

Lili: GARY MARISSA CHRISTINA COOPER GET YOUR ASS DOWN HERE!

Gary grimaced, her head was still pounding from the night before and she could not handle her mother when she was destroying the decibel scale. She put on a dressing gown and walked downstairs. She walked into the kitchen to see her mother, Lili with her arms crossed looking stern. She stood next to Marissa's now-open bag and in that instant Gary knew why Lili was so mad. Lili pulled out a vodka bottle from the bag.

Lili: WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?! (tyra/)
Gary: It's Vodka mother.
Lili: I was being rhetorical! Look it up! You know the rules in this house Gary! No spirits before Noon! We're strictly a Champagne family!

With that Lili's stern face softened as she pulled out a bottle of Champagne and poured them both a glass with their breakfast. Lili was not a normal mother and she was glad of it, because of her easy going nature they had a great relationship. Lili was incredibly proud of her daughter, she had spent years teaching Gary the art of ferocity and Gary was a natural at it. They ate their breakfast and Gary went upstairs to get changed for school, Lili watched her walk up the stairs until she was out of earshot and quickly rang a number on her phone.

Lili: She's leaving for school soon, get ready because I really need you.

Gary wandered back into the kitchen a few minutes later to grab her bag and say goodbye to Lili.

Lili: Bye dear and remember if a stranger offers you a ride only go with him if he's cute, rich and hung!

They cackled at Lili's old line as Gary left for school. Lili again watched her walk away before returning to her phone.

Lili: She's gone, get here as quickly as you can because we haven't got much time, you've got Double Maths in an hour.

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Shaun and Jen were waiting on the steps of Tibb County High waiting for their friends. They always sat in this spot as it offered them a prime view of the football team during morning practice. Shaun was staring at Andy, he was the captain of the football team and the object of her affections. Jen however was not, she only had eyes for one boy and he was approaching them.

LemonJam: Hey, I take it nobody's here yet then.

Jen shook her head shyly and smiled as he sat next to her. She was deeply in love with him and had been for years but he never saw it, He saw her as a friend. There was an awkward silence between them as Shaun listened to her ipod.

Shaun: Ke$ha? Nyet! ****!
Jen: What?

Shaun had slipped up, She panicked for a moment.

Shaun: Ooooh Bob Dylan!
Jen: Qt.

They shared the earphones leaving Lemonjam alone. He looked around and spotted Dezzy rushing around, Dezzy was the Editor of the school newspaper.

Lemonjam: Hey what's up?
Dezzy: I'm looking for Patrick, He was doing a piece on....N-Dubz (He grimaced at the mention of them) and the deadline's soon and I can't find him anywhere.
Lemonjam: I think I saw him in the courtyard earlier.
Dezzy: Thanks man.

Dezzy sped off towards the courtyard. He was no fan of Patrick and they rarely saw eye to eye but he needed more reporters and he had no choice but to let him take part when Patrick applied. He was a quiet individual and was eternally creepy, he unnerved Dezzy. He liked his privacy and Dezzy had no problem with that usually but it was a pain in times like this when Dezzy needed to find him. The Courtyard was almost abandoned as usual save for Patrick who strangely had a jar of Butterflies with him. He was mumbling something but Dezzy was too far away to hear anything so he crept closer and realised what Patrick was doing. He was grabbing the butterflies from the jar and ripping their wings off.

Patrick: Catch 'em Kill 'em.......

Dezzy backed away before this scene became a bad Amityville parody.

Patrick:....Dezzy?
Dezzy froze and span around awkwardly.
Dezzy: Hey Patrick!
He said it a little to enthusiastically.
Patrick: How long have you been standing there?
He said it with a dark edge.
Dezzy: Not long at all, if you can get that article to me before the end of the first period that'd be great!
He smiled a fake smile before hurrying off, That was one of the creepiest things he had ever seen and that included Tom Shattock's Facebook page.

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Stu's class was about to begin, he was a Biology teacher that specialised in Botany. The bell rang and LemonJam entered the room pushing the wheelchair-bound Zee. He smiled weakly at them and the rest of the class as they piled in. He looked out into the Corridor and saw Wombai the Politics Teacher, She gave him a look of pure hatred before walking on. He looked down at his lesson plan and felt the immense guilt once again.

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Apart from the courtyard encounter, the day had passed with little else happening but Dezzy was glad to be on the way home. His mind had been replaying that scene with Patrick all day, it had creeped him out immensely but the conversation afterwards scared him. What was wrong with Patrick? He pulled into his drive and parked his car, he grabbed the house keys and proceeded to his front door. As he stepped onto his front door step he felt something crunch beneath him. He looked down to see that someone had left a pile of dead Butterflies on his step.

[Tom4784]

It's a bit messy but the next part will be better since it's gonna be a bit more focused. Hope you enjoyed it anyway.

[MrGaryy]

me and Linda = hot.

[Tom4784]

me and Linda = hot.

Linda's my favourite character to write so far.

[Jen]

I love this. <3

[LemonJam]

ROFL Oh that's fly.

[Tom4784]

I love this. <3

ROFL Oh that's fly.

/happy.

[lily.]

I love this!

And, what's this secret phone call about? Am I having an affair???? How Gabrielle Solis of me..

[Tom4784]

I love this!

And, what's this secret phone call about? Am I having an affair???? How Gabrielle Solis of me..

Yup, I decided to keep it true to life so you're a cradle snatcher. :laugh:

[\PJ/]

Good stuff dezzy :)

[lily.]

Yup, I decided to keep it true to life so you're a cradle snatcher. :laugh:


Cheeky arse! I'll have you know my o/h is actually 3 yrs older than me. :)

[Firewire]

fierce

[CaraRawr]

sf amazing.

[Shaun]

Jen let's share headphones <3

[Jessica.]

Hmm what's with all the msn lately. *pretends to be on msn*

ahh/ That is brilliant!
I wish I was in it though! holly1 tyra/

[Tom4784]

Episode 2
Ana-Shaun-ia

Setanta: Now Class we have a new student starting today, His name's Jack. Be nice.
Jack: Hi!
He waved to an uncaring class. He scanned the room quickly until his eyes rested on Shaun. He stared a moment too long and she raised her gaze and spotted him, He carried on staring intently at her and it was creeping her out. He looked away and sat at a desk at the back of the class, The lesson resumed as normal but Shaun felt Jack stare at her all lesson. When the Bell rang she was relieved to get away from him, hopefully that would be the only lesson they shared.

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Stu had just finished a lesson when Wombai knocked on his classroom door.

Stu: Hey, come in.
He said awkwardly. She stepped in and scanned the room, her lips were pursed with fury. It was taking every bit of her self control to stand in the same room as Stu without screaming at him or worse
Wombai: I've come for the progress reports on the Year 8's.
She said coldly, they avoided each other's gaze as her searched for the reports. A few moments passed before he found what she wanted and with the reports found she swiftly made for the door.

Stu: Listen Wombai.....I-
Wombai: Don't
Stu: But I-
Wombai: Leave it.
Stu: I'm-
Wombai: I SAID SHUT IT! (Sue/)
Stu: I'm Sorry!
Wombai: That doesn't cut it! Nothing you do or say will ever make it okay! I trusted you, I LOVED YOU! But that's all gone now, ever since that day.....Just leave me alone.
She walked out the classroom, leaving Stu in silence.

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Shaun was sat on the steps with Gary and Mark, Shaun's mind was pre-occupied with that new kid Jack. It felt like everywhere she looked he was there, What was his problem? He was like 30Stone with an underaged member and it unnerved her. As Gary and Mark argued over which Britney track was the most fierce, Shaun noticed that Jack was staring at her again. She felt nervous briefly before succumbing to fury, who the hell does he think he is? She stood up and strode over to him.

Shaun: OMG what is your problem? Are you like, obsessed with me?
Jack laughed a little before replying.
Jack: A little bit.
Shaun: Just leave me alone!
She turned away to return to her friends but Jack grabbed her arm and pulled her back.
Jack: I'm onto you. I know 'Shaun'....I know.
She stared at him in shock before regaining her ferocity.
Shaun: Bitch Please! Touch me again and I'll take you to the carpet.
She pulled her arm away from him and strutted away. She winked at Andy who smiled back and returned to her friends. Their argument was over and they had decided that all Twilight Twitty's tracks sh*t all over Britney's any day of the week.

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It was Shaun's last lesson of the day, Biology with Mr Stu. She was lucky enough to avoid Jack since their encounter and it seemed that the only class they had together was Setanta's which was a relief to Shaun. Stu was talking about the formation of Penicillin but Shaun wasn't listening which was unfortunate as Stu announced a new class project that would divide them up into pairs. By the time she snapped out of her trance the only partner left was Patrick. Shaun TANISHA'd before beginning work with him. He was a quiet partner who got on with his work without fuss which Shaun didn't mind. She didn't really want to socialise with him, he was a bit of a freak. As they both wrote up their preliminary Hypotheses Shaun noticed that Patrick had a class photo poking out of his notepad. Under the guise of checking her work against a Textbook she leaned in closer to take a sneaky look and she immediately wished she hadn't. It was a picture of his form class and from what she could tell all but Patrick's face had been scribbled out but one face had been cut out all together. She shivered before deciding to carry on with her work. She already had enough troubles without getting involved with Patrick's.

The bell rang signaling the end of the school day which could not come sooner for for Shaun. Today had been stressful and she just wanted to go home and forget about everything for a while. What she didn't expect to find was a man sitting on her car.

Shaun: Erm, excuse me but what the hell? Get off my car!
The man turned around and Shaun's mouth dropped open in shock. It couldn't be.....he was dead and Shaun didn't believe in ghosts.
??????: That's no way to greet an old friend.
Shaun: You.....
??????: Mother Russia never forgets, Natalya

[Tom4784]

Thanks for your comments guys. The next part will be up in a few days.

[Raph]

fantastic! :D

[Tom4784]

Thanks Samy :bigsmile:

[LemonJam]

i love. <3

[Tom4784]

:dance:

Thanks James.

[Billy]

Amaaaazing.

[MrGaryy]

rofl this is getting better!

[Twilight]

I love this <3

[Patrick]

I cant belive I didnt click on this thread before, I thought it was some American Reality Show and wanted to avoid it but OMG.
Its brilliant Dezzy!

I loved my obsession with killing Butterflies in Episode 1 and drawing over faces in Episode 2.


Cant wait for Episode 3!

Well done tbh.

[Tom4784]

Thanks guys, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I've had a burst of creativity so I think I might have the next part done later today.

[Patrick]

Thanks guys, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I've had a burst of creativity so I think I might have the next part done later today.

Good to hear :thumbs:

[Shaun]

b/ew

[Tom4784]

s0b.

[Shaun]

i'm sorry sad/

I just don't like how I'm portrayed in these stories. s0b

It's bad enough being the generic black singing gurl, without turning out to be some Russian woman. Though I'm intrigued. *grabs popcorn*

[Tom4784]

i'm sorry sad/

I just don't like how I'm portrayed in these stories. s0b

It's bad enough being the generic black singing gurl, without turning out to be some Russian woman. Though I'm intrigued. *grabs popcorn*

Rofl I only made you russian because you said you were bored of being the black singing girl. Your story gets quite interesting though.

[Tom4784]

Episode 3
MILF

Shaun was sitting in a Diner with the mystery man, she had been quiet since they arrived. She seemed more pre-occupied with staring at her tea then talking to him. She looked up at him and it finally sunk in, he was alive.....WHY DID NO ONE TELL HER!

Shaun: You've been alive all this time! I wept for you! I left Moscow because of you, why the hell did you never make contact before Darenn!
Darenn: It's complicated, matters with my father have grown worse and everything is beginning to erupt into chaos over there but that's not what I'm here about. They're onto you.
Shaun: Who?
Darenn: The government, they think you know where she is but they aren't sure of your identity yet so you gotta lay low for a while keep off the radar and keep up the pretense.
Shaun nodded subtly, she was dazed by the fact that her past had come to haunt her. Her mind flashed to the incident two years ago which resulted in her leaving her home and coming to the T.C to live with a father she'd never known. She had to hide her Russian heritage under a boisterous American personality, it was hard but she adapted and now the past was gonna blow everything apart.
Darenn: I've got to go Natalya, be careful and remember I'll be looking out for you.
Shaun watched Darenn Pritcharov walk away, once again her best friend was leaving her life.

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Lili had just finished getting ready, she looked at herself in the mirror and smiled she looked amazing and she knew it. It was only Parent's Evening but she believed in looking hot at all times and plus, HE will probably be there. She met Gary in the entrance hall who was looking a little bit too happy at the prospect of going to the Parent's Evening, Gary was planning something but Lili had no clue what.

On the drive to the school Gary recounted her brilliant idea in her head. She wanted an A in Biology but sucked at it but Mr Stu was single and so was Lili... If she got them together it'd be easy A's forever. 'Two birds with one stone' She thought in her head.

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Jen sat at the front desk of the school, she was roped into volunteering and had to sign in Parents and Students. It was utterly boring and the person who was meant to help her was late. 'What did I do to deserve this?' She thought.

Lemonjam: Hi Jen.
Jen snapped back to reality and realised that Lemonjam and his parents wanted to sign in.
Jen: oh hey LJ. Just sign here please.
She smiled and blushed, they signed the book and moved on.
Nathan: Hey, Sorry I'm late.
Her help had arrived, she death stared him for being late but offered him a seat as she returned to her thoughts.

Nathan: You're not very talkative.
Jen: You're not very punctual.
Nathan: Geez I'm sorry about that.
He turned on his iPod.
Nathan: Say, do you like Lionel Ritchie?
She rolled her eyes, it was going to be a long night.

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The chairs in the school hall had been cleared out and replaced with a circle of desks with a teacher at each one. Lili had seen all of Gary's teachers save for Stu and was waiting for him to be free when Zee zipped past in his wheelchair.

Gary: Oww!
Zee ran over her foot causing her to hop around a bit and massage her foot.
Zee: I'm sorry! Are you okay? Is anything broken.
Gary: I'm hopping about on the spot Zee, the only thing that's broken is my dignity (glare/)
He looked at her with an apologetic look in his eyes.
Zee: Hi Ms Cooper
Lili: Hi Zee, How's your mother? I'm surprised I haven't seen her.
Zee: She's good, she's around here somewhere, I should really go find her. Bye!
He sped off in his wheelchair as Lili and Gary spoke to Stu.

Gary thought it was going well, Lili didn't seem repulsed by Stu and they were chatting away quite happily. She looked around to see Shaun waiting by the door on her own, deciding that it was best to give Stu and Lili some time to chat Gary went to speak to her.

Gary: Hey what's up?
Shaun: Ohai gurl! It's all good mhmm.
She said a little too enthusiastically.
Gary: Spill it.
She saw right through Shaun, she always upped the ghetto-ness when something was wrong.
Shaun: I've had a lot on my mind, I just feel a bit worn out.
Gary: Why don't you stay at mine tonight? We'll have some fun, take your mind off things.
Shaun: Umm, yeah okay why not?
At that moment Lili joined them and they left for home.

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Shaun and Gary had been working their way through a collection of chick flicks when they ran out of popcorn, Shaun offered to make a new batch and walked downstairs to the kitchen. As she was setting up the popcorn she heard Lili speaking in the room, giving in to curiosity she decided to listen in a little although she couldn't hear that well from the kitchen.

Lili: Can't wait to see you........I had so much fun.....

Shaun couldn't hear much more but it was obvious Lili was talking to a man, she knew of Gary's plan to get Lili and Stu together and it was obviously working. She moved up the stairs to tell Gary of recent developments. Gary grinned as they carried on watching the film, she loved it when a plan came together and the best part was that she barely had to raise a finger to get them together.

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Jen: I don't believe it.....
Jen had just finished at the school and walked into the car park to find her bike broken (she's all eco-friendly and sh*t like that). It was the perfect end to a terrible evening and now she had to walk home.As she headed for the school gates a car beeped it's horn at her and stopped.

Nathan: Hey Jen! Do you want a ride home?
Jen: No thanks.
Nathan: Are you sure? It doesn't feel right to let you walk home alone?
Jen: I'm fine thanks.
He drove right next to her and opened his door.
Nathan: You literally live in the next street to mine, get in.
He said with that grin on his face, Jen sighed and relented and got into the car. She didn't act like it but she was glad of the lift.

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Lili could not wait for Gary to leave the house for School and the second she saw her daughter drive away she was on the phone.

Lili: She's gone, it's safe.
A few minutes later there was a knock at the door. She opened it quickly and dragged him in.

Zee: You'd think you were ashamed of me or something.
He said smiling, turning to face Lili.
Lili: Not at all.
She leaped into his lap and kissed him.
Lili: Take me to my chambers loverboy. We haven't got long.
Zee: So charming....
Zee wheeled them over to the spare bedroom as quickly as possible.
Lili: Oooooh, someone's pleased to see me....

[Tom4784]

Next part will be done by Monday/Tuesday I think.

[MrGaryy]

haha, very good.

[Shaun]

rofl, I have this image of Artie wheeling some milf to a bedroom and having to stop to use a wheelchair-elevator.

[Tom4784]

rofl, I have this image of Artie wheeling some milf to a bedroom and having to stop to use a wheelchair-elevator.

ah, If only I thought of that :sad:

:laugh:

[LemonJam]

lmao <3

[lily.]

Oh my.. how scandalous of me!

Gary will be most upset when she finds out it's not her teacher I'm fraternising with. s0b

I'm loving the Russian storyline.. nice touch with the Pritcharov :thumbs:

[Tom4784]

Oh my.. how scandalous of me!

Gary will be most upset when she finds out it's not her teacher I'm fraternising with. s0b

I'm loving the Russian storyline.. nice touch with the Pritcharov :thumbs:

It gets more scandalous-er :shocked:

Thanks, the Russian storyline's gonna be a bit of a slowburner I think. It's one of my favourites though.

I'm glad you're all enjoying it :hug:

[lily.]

I'm just glad you didn't have my character messing about with someone underage. LoL

There's scandal and there's just downright wrong! haha.. even in fiction.

You had me worried on MSN when you hinted at my storyline lol

[Tom4784]

I'm just glad you didn't have my character messing about with someone underage. LoL

There's scandal and there's just downright wrong! haha.. even in fiction.

You had me worried on MSN when you hinted at my storyline lol

Rofl you had nothing to worry about....Ms Solis :joker:

[lily.]

haha, if only I had her face, her figure, or her fortune.. ;)

[Shaun]

or her talent or her relevance or her grace or her personality...

[/claws]

[lily.]

I'm glad iDump took a huge dump on ur iTunes!

[/vengeance]

[Tom4784]

Ladies! Keep the drama in the story s0b.

[lily.]

I apologise..

[Jessica.]

When is Zee gonna sing Dancing With Myself? It's a must tbh!

[CaraRawr]

love.

[Twilight]

ROFL love it<3

[InOne]

Nice one Dezzy, a good read!!!

[Tom4784]

Thanks guys, I should hopefully be able to do about 2-3 episodes this week.

[Rob]

good read

[Tom4784]

Episode 4
Deeper and Darker

Zee was whistling to himself as rode down the corridor, he had the bleak prospect of Double Maths ahead of him but he'd just arrived from his 'free period' so his spirits were high. As he turned the corner he saw Stu heading out of his classroom.

Stu: Oh Zee, I need to talk to you.
Zee: Oh? What about?
Stu: You're not in trouble or anything but it's about your free periods, I've noticed you've been going off campus a lot which isn't a problem but you used to always stay in school and with exams coming up it might be a good idea to use your time wisely.
Zee: Yeah of course Mr Stu, you've got nothing to worry about.
Stu: Okay, you best get going your next lesson's gonna start soon.
Stu watched as Zee maneuvered down the corridor. He wasn't convinced that everything was okay but he didn't want to push anything because there would be consequences if he was wrong.

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Dezzy had just had a meeting with the rest of the 'T.C Blaze' (the newspaper, duh') group and had handed out their assignments for the week. As he started on an article he realised that he wasn't alone in the room and a sense of dread enveloped him when he realised who the straggler was. Patrick sat at a desk in the corner of the room, he was drawing something but glanced over at Dezzy every few seconds. Dezzy decided to try to ignore him, he only had 15 minutes before his English Class. He typed away and became engrossed in his work but he jumped when he realised that Patrick stood before his desk.

Dezzy: Uh, Hey Patrick.
He didn't answer
Dezzy: Is something wrong?
He remained silent for a short while.
Patrick: Did you like the present?
Dezzy hadn't forgotten about the Butterflies but he had been avoiding Patrick as much as possible, there was something wrong with Patrick and Dezzy wanted no part of it.
Dezzy: Um, what present?
Patrick: Don't play dumb, I know you saw me with my butterflies and I know you got the present I left on your doorstep.
Dezzy: Oh the Butterflies? They were uh...Lovely....thanks.
Patrick: Don't mock me, I know you Dezzy. YOU'RE LAUGHING AT ME!
He slammed his fists on the desk.
Patrick: All you do is humiliate me Dezzy! You think you're so clever then everyone else don't you? WELL YOUR NOT! You'll realise that soon DEZZY! You're gonna get what's coming!
On that ominous note he rushed out the door and left Dezzy alone, He realised that he was involved in whatever Patrick was up to now whether he liked it or not. He let himself calm down before tidying up, as he walked around the front of his desk he saw a photo on the floor and picked it up. It was of his and Patrick's Form group, the faces had all been scribbled out and one face had been cut out entirely. Dezzy's heart began to race again, it was his face that had been cut out. Now he was scared.

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LemonJam had just received a letter he had been waiting for weeks to get. He nervously opened it and read it, his eyes raced across the page and a smile crept upon his face. It was good news, great in fact. All his work had paid off and he was finally on his way...But then the joy ebbed away as he saw Jen pass the empty classroom. He knew how Jen felt about him and it ripped him apart as he felt the same way but they could not be together and this letter had just confirmed it. He was on his way to achieving his dreams but was it worth it without her?

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Stu: Wombai, I need to talk to you.
It was the end of the day and Wombai was just about to leave the staffroom. She grimaced as she always did when Stu talked to her.
Wombai: If it's about School send me an email...I got to pick up my son....
She delivered the last line with as much malice as possible and Stu flinched as though he had been hit in the face.
Stu: I think it's important-
Wombai: I don't care Stu, you lost the right to talk to me long ago.
Stu: All I can do is apologize for that day Wombai.
Wombai: And that's not enough, I wasn't the only victim in that crash Stu!
Wombai held her arm subconsciously, nobody could tell due to her always wearing long sleeves but her arms were covered in scars. A moment of silence passed between the two before Wombai walked away. Stu watched her through the window as she headed towards her car, Zee was waiting for her. She grabbed him in a small one armed hug before helping him into the vehicle. As Stu watched the scene he became overcome with guilt.

It was all his fault.

[Tom4784]

Not the best episode but if all goes to plan then the next two parts should be pretty good. The next part should be up Wednesday.

[Patrick]

LOL :joker:

That was a good read :)
Looking forward to the rest.

[Tom4784]

Thanks Patrick, glad you're enjoying it.

[Z]

I'm such a stud for someone who's wheelchair bound! Ahaha nice one Dean, can't wait to read more!!

[Tom4784]

:bigsmile: Thanks Greg

[LemonJam]

wurr am I going? ah/

[Tom4784]

wurr am I going? ah/

Back to Poland, your visa ran out :bawling:

[lily.]

umg... Wombai is Greg's mum.. she's guna ***** me up ...

-runs-


I love the Patrick storyline.. Psycho-Pat is an interesting one.. :)

[Jessica.]

haha I hope Patrick gets to beat someone up! (Other than pushing you down the stairs of course)

[Shaun]

uh. .OMG

[Tom4784]

Ah I'll get started on the next two tommorow, If it goes as well as it's going in my head they'll be great.

[Tom4784]

Episode 5
The Butterfly Effect
PART 1

It started off as just another day. The Students went to school, The parents did what they did and everybody kept their secrets.....But some secrets have a tendency to reveal themselves... Nobody knew that on that day many lives would change forever.....

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Patrick was at his locker, it was extremely tidy and well organized with all his books in alphabetical order and colour coded neatly. Patrick despised messes and would often go out of his way to keep his locker in pristine condition, one time after spotting a drop of spilt ink in one of the corners he spent an hour scrubbing every inch of it with bleach until his fingers were raw and bloody. Overall though the locker was very much ordinary except for one small detail. At the back of the locker there was a small etching of a rough butterfly with a broken wing. Patrick stared at the etching, entranced by it before he placed a leather bound object into the locker. It was going to happen today....

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As soon as Gary left the house Lili barricaded herself in the bathroom. She was pacing it frantically, how could she have been so stupid? She thought to herself as she checked her watch, She looked at herself in the mirror. She was a grown woman having an affair with a teenager and not only that but the teenager was the son of her oldest friend. She should have stopped it long ago but the thrill of it all was too much to give up, Zee made her feel like a teenager again and she had become addicted to that feeling. For the first time she realised she was heading down a dangerous and destructive path and she couldn't stop even if she wanted to as in that moment she realised something else, something that would make her run down that path no matter what.

Lili snapped out of her thoughts and remembered what she was pacing for, she looked down at the object in her hand and gasped. Her heart missed a beat and her stomach sank, she felt the object clatter against the floor. She looked away and closed her eyes, What was she going to do now? She looked down again hoping to find a different answer but she only found the same one she had before.

'Pregnant'

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Shaun: How rude!
Patrick smashed past Shaun in the school corridors, causing her to fall over.
Shaun: A little help please?
She called after him but he only replied with a look of pure disdain before turning the corner.
Shaun: *****ing Schizoid!
She said loudly. She dusted herself off and grabbed her bag.
Jack: Are you okay?
She jumped before replying with a generic answer. It was the first time Jack had spoken to her. As she got to her feet and walked away he called after her.
Jack: We've got Setanta next, why don't I walk you to class?
'What was his game?' Shaun thought to herself, he near enough stalked her last week and now he wants to be friends? Shaun made a mental note to never get a pet rabbit while he was around.
Jack: I think we got off to a bad start, I'm sorry about last week can we start again?
He asked nicely, Shaun didn't buy it for a minute but she nodded to keep him sweet.
Jack: Ah good, I think we're gonna be great friends Natalya.

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It was time for Lunch and Jen, Mark and Gary occupied their usual place on the steps.

Gary: I don't think that Salad agreed with me.
Jen looked at Gary and concurred, She looked ill all day and worse now.
Jen: Maybe you should see if you can go home.
Gary: Yeah I think I will, come on Mark you mess. You can walk with me.
As the two girls left her alone she began to read her book, she was kind of happy to be by herself. She loved her friends but also liked her own company.
Jen: Oh Bill, why can't you be real....
Nathan: Who's Bill?
Jen jumped a little before going red with embarrassment.
Jen: Oh er.... no one in particular.
Nathan: Oh...
They stood in an awkward silence for a moment.
Jen: Erm, is there something you want?
Nathan: Oh yeah, Can I sit down? I wanna talk to you.
Jen: It's a free country.
Nathan parked himself next to her.
Nathan: I was wondering if you were doing anything tonight and if you wanted to go out if you're not?
He said quietly, Jen didn't know what to say. She didn't dislike Nathan but she didn't think he liked her either considering the awkwardness of how they met. Jen was about to decline when she saw Lemonjam a distance away, he seemed to be watching them with an intense look upon his face. It was strange he never paid much attention to her before, could it be that he's jealous? Jen had an idea, it wasn't a nice idea but it would get her what she wanted most.
Jen: I'd LOVE to, What time are you gonna pick me up?

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Jack was not a normal teenager, He was Jack Tower, a child prodigy and the youngest CIA agent there had ever been. He'd been tasked with getting close to Natalya Fahekovika in order to uncover information about her older sister Lauren. There was an incident in Moscow that resulted in a number of deaths and Natalya leaving the country, The details of what happened were sketchy but it was believed that Lauren was integral to causing it. Normally Jack would just haul Natalya in for questioning but this case had to be handled differently. If he tried to strong-arm her into talking it would just cause her to clam up and run. He needed her trust.

Shaun: Who are you? What do you want from me and who did you know my name?
Jack: I'm Jack and I'm a CIA agent, I'm here for information and I know your name because of intel from HQ. Any more questions?
Shaun was startled by his honesty, she knew what he wanted but she decided to play dumb.
Shaun: What kind of information?
Jack: About the incident in Moscow of course and about Lauren.
Shaun tensed at the mention of her sister. She hadn't seen her older sister in years.
Shaun: I don't know anything about what happened, all I know is that I was shipped away as quickly as possible.
She had lied and she could tell that Jack didn't buy it, he however let it go.
Jack: Would Mr Sticks know anything?
Shaun: Ha! My father knows less then I do, I never knew him before I arrived here and he isn't Lauren's father.
Jack: I see, well here's my card, if you remember or recall anything please tell me as I'm sure you know Moscow is still sore over this. We might be the only people who can help you and your sister.
He left her to think about what he said, It was probably a mistake to reveal his hand like that but he had told her everything for a reason. He had got nothing left to hide and now Shaun could begin to hopefully trust him.

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It was evening and Lili had just let Zee in (The house, you perverts). She decided to tell him as soon as possible about the baby.

Zee: You never call me over this late, Couldn't wait for tomorrow?
He said with a cheeky grin on his face.
Lili; I needed to talk to you, come through to the living room.
As they walked through the door a wail of sirens pierced the street outside as a parade of flashing lights, police cars and what seemed to be an ambulance passed by.
Zee: I wonder where they're heading.
Lili: I don't know, listen there's something I need to tell you.
She held his hand.
Lili: I'm pregnant.

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Gary had been sleeping since she got back from school, When she awoke it was dark outside and she couldn't believe she had slept for so long. The sleep had done her a world and she felt a lot better then she had during the day. As she woke up she heard her mother downstairs talking to somebody.

Lili: I need to see you, it's really important.
Gary guessed that she was on the phone and smiled as she realised it was probably Stu. Lili didn't usually invite men over when Gary was around so she guessed that Lili thought she was out. Instead of messing up her plans Gary decided to listen to her iPod and try to get some more sleep.

Sirens had woken Gary from her sleep, she looked at the clock and realised she had only been asleep for a short while. She heard some muffled voices downstairs. One was her mother but she didn't recognize the other which confused Gary greatly, Did that mean Lili was seeing someone else? Her confusion turned into curiosity and she decided to get a peak at this mysterious suitor. She put on her bathrobe and silently sneaked down the stairs, the voices were becoming a lot clearer and she realised she recognized the man's voice although she couldn't quite place it. She had reached the bottom of the stairs and could see into the Living Room. She saw Lili....and Zee? 'What the hell is he doing here' She thought.

Lili: I don't know, listen there's something I need to tell you.
Gary watched as Lili grabbed Zee's hand.
Lili: I'm pregnant.

Gary's mouth dropped open as everything clicked into place.

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A FEW HOURS EARLIER

School had just finished, the students were all leaving but Patrick was sitting in a hidden corner of one of the courtyards. Patrick had been on edge all day, His mind preoccupied with thoughts of what was going to happen. For days Patrick had thought of nothing else but now the day had come he became nervous. He flipped flopped on the idea of going ahead with it all day, however as he looked at the object his determination returned. He smiled as he realised that after days of thinking of nothing else, he was going to do it. He pulled at one end of the the object to reveal a knife. It was glistening with cleanliness and he could see his reflection in it, he had spent hours cleaning it for this day. He had never felt such clarity before, the smile on his face grew wider as he thought about what he was going to do. He hummed a familiar tune before singing to himself.

'1, 2 I'm coming for you
3, 4 Don't try locking the door
5, 6 Don't play any tricks
7, 8 Gonna eviscerate...
9,10 Dezzy won't breathe again'

[Tom4784]

I was gonna do both parts today but that one took AGES so I'll do the next part tommorow or Friday.

[Z]

:O Aaah that was intense! PATRICK DON'T DO IT -screams- oooh Gary knows... shocking!!

[Rob]

very good as usual

[Tom4784]

Thanks guys, it was a fun episode to write although I'm looking foward to doing the next few.

[MrGaryy]

ooh my fave so far <3

[Patrick]

LOL at the last part :p

That was a great episode Dezzy.

[Tom4784]

Thanks Guys! It means a lot.

[Jessica.]

Very good! I'm loving the Patrick/Dezzy and the Shaun/Russia storylines.

[Twilight]

Ohh i'm loving this<3

[CaraRawr]

omg this keeps getting better!

[Tom4784]

Thanks Guys :bigsmile:

[Tom4784]

Episode 6
The Butterfly Effect
PART 2

Gary: WHAT THE **** IS THIS!?
She screamed at Zee and Lili. They jumped out their seats and looked at her with surprised expressions.

Lili: Oh my god, I-I can explain!
Gary: What? There was a strong gust of wind and you fell on him? HE'S TWO MONTHS YOUNGER THEN ME! God! I feel sick....Oh my god....
Gary remembered what she heard.
Gary: You're...You're pregnant.....
She felt dizzy.
Zee: Gary, I'm....
Gary: DON'T TALK TO ME! You were my friend and this was going on behind my back....I hate you.
It was overwhelming, The Dizziness increased.
Lili: Gary Don't -
Gary: This is so ****ed up. You're pregnant, What's gonna happen now?
Lili: I don't know, We need to talk this through.
Gary: No...there's nothing to talk about. This ends here, Get out Zee or I'll throw you out.
Zee: Wait-
Gary: GET OUT! GET OUT!
She grabbed Zee's chair and pulled him to the door.
Lili: Stop! Please!
Gary: No, I'm ending this, we're getting rid of the baby and you're NEVER seeing him again.
Lili: BUT I LOVE HIM!!!
she screamed in an over dramatic fashion. Gary and Zee were stopped in their tracks, shocked at Lili's admission.

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Nathan arrived at Jen's house perfectly on time, He was going to take Jen to a local restaurant. It wasn't flashy but it wasn't a dive but it had good food and a nice atmosphere, perfect for a first date. When Jen opened the door Nathan's mouth dropped open.

If truth be told Jen was a bit of a tomboy, she didn't really care for fashion and generally just wore what she was comfortable in. Tonight however was different, She carefully picked out her outfit and spent ages on her hair and make-up and it was worth it to see Nathan's shocked expression. Recovering from the shock Nathan smiled at her with that goofy grin.

Nathan: You look beautiful
He said shyly.
Jen: Thanks, shall we get going?

Nothing much was said in the car so Nathan decided to plug the silence with music and Lionel Ritchie was soon blasting out. Jen grimaced and Nathan noticed.

Nathan: Oh Yeah, you're not a fan of Lionel aren't you? Oh well, it's a good thing I brought backup!
He changed the CDs and the songs of Bob Dylan played out in the car. Jen could tell Nathan wasn't really a fan but she thought it was sweet how he played it anyway.

Jen: You know what, Lionel's okay.
She changed it back to Lionel Ritchie and played the first track, 'All Night Long' began and they laughed awkwardly. 'Maybe this wouldn't be as bad as I thought' Jen pondered, she felt a bit guilty for writing him off before and even more so for why she went out with him in the first place.

When they arrived at the restaurant it was surprisingly busy, Nathan blanched a little before regaining his confidence. He didn't book any reservations as he was sure they wouldn't be that busy, he hoped there were some tables left otherwise he'd look like an idiot.... As they walked into the Restaurant they saw that from what they could see it was packed. Nathan walked up to the person on the front desk. The man saw them coming, he subtly rolled his eyes before adopting a friendlier attitude.

Remy: Bonjour! I am Remy and I shall be your 'ost for ze night! What can I do for you Monsieur?
Nathan: Can I have a table for two please?
Remy: Ah, I regret to inform you but ze last table for two was taken a few minutes ago. We 'ave a table for four available but zat will cost double I'm afraid due to it being in ze V.I.P area.
Nathan: Oh.....
He only had enough for a normal table, 'Why the hell didn't I make a reservation?!' he thought to himself. Jen quietly sighed, it looked like she overestimated him after all.
Lemonjam: We could double up if you like?
Lemonjam had just arrived with his date GypsyGoth, he had also 'forgotten' to reserve a table. He smiled at Jen, 'You're not the only one who can play the Jealousy game' He thought.
Remy: Ah! Tres Bien! Come right this way Monsieurs et Mademoiselles!
He lead them to the back of the restaurant which was roped off and considerably nicer then the rest. Before they could order the ambulance and police cars drove past the restaurant with the sirens blaring, All four of them wondered what happened briefly before carrying on with ordering.
Remy: Sacre Bleu! I haven't seen that many flashing lights since since I gave up ze Ketamine!

Jen ignored him, she just realised how awkward this night had just become.....

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Gary: This can't be happening.
She had calmed down but she was still furious with Zee and Lili, after Lili's admission Gary had run to her room and locked herself in. She couldn't handle it all, it was too much.
Lili: Gary? We need to talk, please come out.
She said softly. Gary wiped her eyes and breathed in and out slowly. She couldn't stay in her room forever. She opened the door to see Lili looking incredibly concerned, she felt her anger return but she kept her cool. They returned to the living room, Gary was surprised to see Zee still here.
Gary: What the hell is he still doing here!
Zee: I'm a part of this, So I'm gonna stay until we sort this out.
Gary: There's nothing to sort out, you two are gonna stop seeing each other. That's it.
Zee: Oh yeah and what about the baby?
Gary: Do I need to spell it out?
Gary said quietly. Lili shook her head involuntarily at this to which Gary noticed.
Gary: What's the plan then Mom? Are you gonna stay together and raise that baby with Daddy Dead Legs over there?
Lili: GARY!
Zee looked away, he was used to jibes about his condition but it hurt hearing it from somebody he considered a friend.
Gary: I'm being realistic! It's not going to work.
Zee: I'll make it work.
Gary laughed cruelly at Zee
Gary: Okay then.
She got up and walked over to the phone.
Gary: If you want to be a big ol' happy family then we have to tell Wombai now don't we?
Zee: No, please don't!
Gary: If you go ahead with this I will tell everyone, your lives will be a living hell.
Lili: Why are you doing this to me?
Gary: WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME?!
Lili: Please Gary, think about what you're saying....
Gary wasn't listening, she had enough of all this. She grabbed her keys and stormed out the house. Lili and Zee called after her but she didn't give them a second thought. She heard the sirens in the distance but her mind was too preoccupied to care.

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HALF AN HOUR EARLIER

Shaun had just finished her Pilate's class when she was nearly ran over on her way back home by a speeding driver in a van. She shouted a bunch of obscenities at the driver before realizing it was Patrick. She pondered for a moment what he was up to as she knew he lived in a different area in the town. She guessed from the direction he was heading that he was going to Dezzy's probably to drop off a late article or something she assumed. She continued on walking but she felt a strange feeling that she was missing something. She checked her person but she hadn't dropped or forgotten anything at the class but the feeling in her gut persisted. She looked back at where Patrick nearly ran over but nothing was there. 'Wait...Patrick?' she thought, she was sure she had forgotten something important, could it have been related to him?.

The answer licked in her head without warning and she cast her mind back to that lesson weeks ago when she was partnered with Patrick, that creepy photo....She had seen it before, it was a Tutor Group photo....She had seen it before because her friend Dezzy was in that group......she felt a cold shock when she realised that it was his face missing from the photograph. Shaun turned around and headed for Dezzy's. It might be nothing and she might look like a fool for being wrong but she didn't want to regret not doing anything if she was right.

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Dezzy had just finished watching a program on TV when he looked over at the unfinished article on his laptop, He'd been trying to finish it since he got back but he just couldn't find the right words so instead he decided to watch TV. He trudged his bed and attempted to type but he just couldn't concentrate. He decided to fix himself a snack, he left his bedroom walked onto the landing of the second floor of his house. It was dark, Dezzy had been in his room since he got back and his parents were on a business trip so no one had turned on the lights. Dezzy didn't like his house at night, especially in the dark as the light from the street lamps outside would cast weird shapes and shadows within the house. He had lost count of how many times he jumped because he thought he saw something that turned out to be nothing but a shadow caused by the odd lamp.

As he descended down the stairs he heard heavy breathing and felt guilty, he had forgotten about his pet dog Max, the poor thing must be gasping for something to eat and a run around in the garden. As he headed for the kitchen he passed the open living room door and jumped as he thought he saw something moving in the corner of his eye from within the room. 'Not again Dezzy, stop trying to scare yourself there's nothing there' he shut the door without taking any time to look inside. When he got to the kitchen he opened a door that lead off from the kitchen, his dog max came barreling out happily. Dezzy made a fuss of him for a while before making himself a quick sandwich. After he finished, he served up Max's dinner and returned to his bedroom. He passed the living room and closed the door out of habit, upon doing this he had a strange feeling of Deja Vu but he ignored it.

He had just finished the article and went to play on his Xbox when he heard a crash from downstairs. He groaned.

Dezzy: What has he broken now?
He walked through the still dark house, his dog had wreaked havoc with his waterbowl it seemed as the floor of the corridor leading to the kitchen was soaking. He turned on the kitchen light and saw that the floor was covered in the remains of a broken pot. He sighed before grabbing a bin bag, as he knelt down to pick up the pieces when the kitchen light went out.

Dezzy: Not now...
He stood up and went to grab a spare lightbulb when he felt something heavy hit him in the face. He was knocked back but managed to grab whatever had been thrown at him. It was a bit heavy and furry and soaking wet.... Wait...

The light switched back on and Dezzy screamed and jumped back as he realised that he was holding the bloody corpse of his dog.

Patrick: I'm not a fan of dogs.
Dezzy looked at the hallway to see Patrick standing there, he looked deranged. There were bloody footprints on the kitchen floor leading to where Dezzy stood, he realised the grim truth that it wasn't water he was treading in when he walked down the hallway. Before he could say anything Patrick charged at him with a bloody knife raised. Patrick slashed at him and Dezzy felt the blade cut into his cheek. He cried out in anger and ran to the opposite side of the kitchen counter. Patrick swayed at the other end laughing, Dezzy had trapped himself.
Patrick: Whatcha gonna do now Dezzy?
He taunted.

Once again he didn't give Dezzy a chance to answer as he leaped over the counter and aimed a stab towards Dezzy's throat. Dezzy managed to leap out the way as Patrick connected with a cupboard.
Patrick: Oof!
Dezzy got back on his feet and ran for to the hallway , he looked back to see that Patrick had a bloody nose, Patrick screamed out in fury and gave chase. Dezzy ran straight for the door but he realised it was locked and that his keys were in his bedroom.
Dezzy GODAMNIT!
He ran up a few stairs when he felt Patrick's hand grab his ankle. He fell and hit his head on a step. He tried to grab hold of the railings to regain balance but Patrick had an iron grip on his foot. He turned around to see Patrick grinning at him madly, his knife positioned at Dezzy's Achilles Tendon.
Dezzy: No!
With his free foot he aimed a kick at Patrick's stomach which caused him to double over. He got back to his feet and ran up the stairs but within milliseconds he heard Patrick right behind him. He ducked as he saw Patrick going in for a stab in a nearby mirror and then pushed him against the railings when he missed.

Patrick was getting more furious and unhinged by the second, every failed attempt just gave him more drive to tear Dezzy apart. When Dezzy reached the top of the stairs he grabbed an ornament from the side and threw it at Patrick, Patrick saw it coming though and grabbed it out the air and laughed. He threw it back but Dezzy ran to the side and it hit the mirror. Dezzy didn't see the destruction as he bolted into his bedroom and shut the door. Patrick began banging at it and screaming like an enraged animal. Dezzy went straight for his phone but saw that it was dead, he screamed in frustration as he realised he forgot to charge it. He tried the landline but it was dead like the mobile and then he used his laptop but there was no Internet connection. Dezzy was starting to become hysterical as he realised that Patrick had planned this well. He held his head as he tried to think of a plan when he looked at the window, 'Yes!' he thought ecstatically in his head. He had a Trampoline in the garden that he used to play with when he was a kid. He could jump down from his window and escape through the garden gate. He opened the window and felt the colour drain from his face as he saw that the trampoline had been shredded, Patrick was not going to make it that easy however he spotted the trellis in between his room and his parents'. He grabbed his front door key and carefully climbed out the window and across the trellis to the other room. As he carefully and quietly jumped into the room he heard Patrick continuing to bang against the door of his room.
Patrick: Oh Dezzy don't make this harder on yourself, every minute you make me wait will be another minute of me cutting you to pieces later. Just come out now and I'll only slice you up a little bit. DEZZZZZZZZY!'
Dezzy looked through the keyhole as he saw Patrick repeatedly band his head against his door.
Patrick: Don't hide away like a victim! Your the villain here! You've had this coming for so long. Every put down, every time you mocked me..... YOU MADE ME FEEL LIKE **** and now I'm gonna make you feel like mince meat....

Dezzy had had enough, he looked into his dad's closet and find his cricket bat. This was going to stop right now. Without warning Dezzy burst out from his parents room and hit a surprised Patrick in the head with the bat.. He hit the wall and slid down.
Dezzy: I have treated you like crap and YOU WONDER WHY! LOOK AT THIS!
He pointed to his cheek.
Dezzy: You're a ****ing Looney Toon!
Patrick tried to get up but Dezzy hit him again to the ribs and Patrick fell to the floor. Breathing a sigh of relief Dezzy ran to the stairs but felt his heart stop as Patrick's hand pushed him. Dezzy banged into the wall, he lost his balance and tumbled down the stairs.

Dezzy: Urgh....
His vision went blurry and he felt an incredible pain across his leg. He tried to move but he felt a foot upon his chest.
Patrick: Tut Tut Tut, Look what you done. Is your foot meant to bend that way? Let's see what I can do about it...
Dezzy vision began to sharpen when he felt the worst pain he had ever felt. He looked up between his own screams to see Patrick stamping on his now-broken ankle. He thought he was going to pass out when he felt a pain twice as worse. It seemed like Patrick had gotten hold of his knife and was going to town on Dezzy's leg.

Dezzy stumbled away and Patrick laughed that dark laugh. He raised his knife to strike the final blow but Dezzy swept his legs from underneath him. Patrick hit his head on the floor and Dezzy amazingly managed to get back onto his feet. He was running on pure adrenaline and anger. He picked up Patrick's knife and threw it away. He then grabbed Patrick and span him round before throwing him into a cabinet. It fell on top of him and knocked him out cold. It really was over this time.

Dezzy stumbled to the front door when a feeling of utter dread filled every fibre of his being....He realised he had thrown Patrick into his father's gun cabinet. He looked down to see Patrick's hand reaching for a pistol. Dezzy stumbled to the back door and tried to unlock it.

Patrick: Dezzy! Dezzy!
He sang out. He had managed to get the cabinet of himself and grab a pistol but luckily for Dezzy the impact from the cabinet dazed him like Dezzy had been earlier and he couldn't see him clearly. Knowing that he had a gun Dezzy hid in an alcove of the Kitchen in order to ambush Patrick when he came looking. As Patrick dizzily walked into the kitchen Dezzy leapt at him and grabbed his hand that had the gun. They struggled, although Dazed Patrick was stronger then him and was throwing Dezzy about trying to make him let go but Dezzy was managing to hold on.

Dezzy head-butted Patrick and managed to yank the gun away from him but he was a little too exuberant and the gun slipped from his hand and hit the back door. Both Patrick and Dezzy looked at each other briefly before they leapt towards the weapon....

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Shaun had arrived at Dezzy's house and heard the commotion inside. She grabbed Jack's card and began to type it into her phone as she ran up to the house but as she reached the door a terrible sound echoed through the house and into the street.

BANG

Shaun froze in shock, she could hear Jack's voice on the other end but she couldn't answer. The house was silent now, the fight had ended. 'What the hell happened' Shaun thought before thinking another thought.

'Who got shot?'

[Tom4784]

This one was insanely creepy to write since I'm alone looking after the dogs tonight *watches out for psychotic Irish teens in the cupboards*.

I hope you enjoy it and the next part will be up next monday I think.

[LemonJam]

ah\

Loveit.

[Twilight]

That was amazing, actually can't wait for the next episode:D

[Patrick]

BEST Episode Ever.

Oh my god, I think our characters are legends.
This is brilliant, your really creative.

I cannot wait until the next episode :p

I reckon I got shot though and i'll die, Dezzy you could use this as a chance to put a poll up saying 'Who got shot' and people can predict who it was.

Like a 'Whodunnit' thing, you know?

Would be intresting.
Anyway, great episode.

[Patrick]

This one was insanely creepy to write since I'm alone looking after the dogs tonight *watches out for psychotic Irish teens in the cupboards*.

I hope you enjoy it and the next part will be up next monday I think.

:joker:

[lily.]

Remy: Sacre Bleu! I haven't seen that many flashing lights since since I gave up ze Ketamine!

Gary: What's the plan then Mom? Are you gonna stay together and raise that baby with Daddy Dead Legs over there?

He realised he had thrown Patrick into his father's gun cabinet.



Those lines made me LOL..


Great writing Dezzy.. Gary says I'm sucha slutty mom... sob/

[Tom4784]

Thanks Guys! :thumbs:

Interesting idea Patrick, I might consider it.

Rofl Linda, yes you are /sad. I was so tempted to make Remy a full time character after a wrote the restuarant bit, he was fun to write. Maybe in a potential Season 2....If I can think of storylines ridiculous enough to top this one. :laugh:

[Tom4784]

Episode 7
Doin' Dallas


Shaun waited outside with baited breath as she saw the police and the paramedics go into Dezzy's house. It had only been a minutes since the gunshot rang out but Jack managed to pull strings in order to get help quickly. There was shouting in the house but Shaun couldn't tell who the voices belonged to. 'Let Dezzy be safe, let him be safe' she kept saying in her head, she felt responsible for this she had seen that picture before and if she could have made the connection sooner then she could have prevented this. She snapped out of her thoughts when she saw the police drag someone from the house.

It was Patrick and he wasn't injured badly....that meant.....

Shaun: Oh god no....
Dezzy was brought out on a stretcher a few seconds later, Shaun ran up to the paramedics but she was held back by Jack.
Jack: Listen he's alive but only just, nobody's allowed to go in the Ambulance with him so I'll take you to the hospital. Try and contact his parents, I hear they're on a business trip but they need to be notified....I just hope they get back in time...
Shaun's heart dropped at that last sentence but she proceeded to phone Dezzy's Parents and then their friends.

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Mark: Stay here as long as you like.
Mark had just set up the spare room for Gary, she didn't know the reason why Gary had argued with her mother but she wasn't going to turn away a friend in need.
Gary: Thanks
Gary felt tired and numb, she replayed the night's events in her head and she just couldn't believe it. Lili and Zee? This kind of thing happened in TV shows but not in real life. She then remembered the fact that Lili was pregnant and grimaced. What a mess.

After driving around for a while she decided that she was going to stick to what she said to Lili and Zee, if they wanted to carry on then Gary would tell Wombai and everyone else. It was cruel but Gary didn't care, they were living in a pipe dream if they thought they could raise that baby together. After that she ended up on Mark's doorstep.
Mark: Listen, I'm gonna go in the bath but if you need anything don't hesitate to ask Mom and Dad okay?
Gary nodded and mark gave out a comforting smile before leaving. As she left Gary heard something drop onto the floor. She looked down to see Mark's Anti-Depressants, she was about to call out for Mark when she decided not to. She approached the the bottle of pills and pocketed them. She didn't know why she did it but she felt lighter for doing it, she felt more energized then she had since she found out about....them.

A few minutes passed when she heard Mark's phone ring, she walked into her bedroom and picked it up.
Shaun: Mark?
Gary: No it's Gary, Mark's in the bath.
Shaun: Listen something bad's happened.
Shaun told Gary what had happened, she grabbed her coat and keys and called to Mark.
Gary: Mark we need to get to the hospital now!

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Nathan:...and then he said 'That's not the Elephant Man that's my wife!'
GypsyGoth roared with laughter at Nathan's joke while Lemonjam and Jen politely laughed, Nathan didn't pick up on that however. The evening was going well albeit awkward. GypsyGoth and Nathan made the most of the impromptu double date but Jen and Jam had remained quiet. They were both playing a game now, before today neither knew that the other cared about them but neither wanted to admit it.

Although Lemonjam had originally decided not to take things further with Jen, he questioned his decision when he saw her with Nathan. He was surprised at how jealous he felt, he decided then to return the favor, it would be cruel for him to pursue her but if she made the first move then that would be fine.

LJ knew it was a warped way of thinking but he had strong feelings for Jen and he couldn't go without seeing what might have been. Like Jen with Nathan he felt bad for using Gypsygoth but then again it seemed that they were having a good time regardless. Lemonjam's phone rang loudly.
Lemonjam: Sorry about this.
He said as he answered the phone.
Lemonjam: Hey Shaun what's going on?
LemonJam: Oh my god, I'll be right there.
He shut his phone and stood up.
Lemonjam: I'm sorry Gypsygoth but I've got to go. Nathan do you think you can take her home for me?
Nathan: Sure, don't worry about it.
Jen: What's Happened?
Lemonjam: Dezzy's been shot, They're taking him to hospital right now.
Jen couldn't believe it.
Jen: I'm coming with you, I'm sorry Nathan-
Nathan: I understand completely, go! I'll take care of things here.
Jen: Thanks.
He really was a great guy, it was just a shame Jen's heart belonged to another.

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Everyone arrived at the hospital at near enough the same time although Gary and Mark were last to arrive. As they met at the entrance Gary was dismayed to see Zee there. He looked as though he wanted to say something but she just gave him the biggest death stare she could muster. She couldn't and wouldn't deal with him, not now.
Jack: Go on ahead, I'll see what's going on with Patrick, you won't be able to see Dezzy for a while but you'll be able to find out what's going on.

They walked up to the front desk and asked about Dezzy but he had only just been admitted so they didn't have any information to give. Shaun saw a doctor come out of a nearby ward and decided to give it a shot to see if he knew anything.

Doctor: The name ring's a definite bell.
He said upon Shaun's inquiry.
Doctor: Oh.... I remember now.
He looked at them all with heavy eyes
Doctor: There's no easy way of saying this but your friend was declared dead on arrival.

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A day had passed since they found out about Dezzy, Jen still couldn't believe it. Dezzy was quiet and kind she couldn't see why any of this had happened. Although she thought about Dezzy her mind wandered to Lemonjam often. This whole experience had made her realise that she shouldn't waste time. She knew who she felt about him and she basically knew how he felt about her. Why play games?

As soon as she found him in the school courtyards she dragged him to a spare classroom. He looked confused and slightly worried.
Jen: Listen, yesterday made me think about about a lot of things. I....I'm not sure how to say this but I really li-
Lemonjam: Hang on.
He knew what she was going to say and like her he had done a lot of thinking. He spent last night thinking about Jen and the letter he had received, it would have been wrong and cruel to start something with Jen now. He had waited too long and now it was too late.

LemonJam: I know what you're gonna say and I feel the same way but this can't happen. I'm not good enough for you Jen, stick with Nathan. He's a good guy, he'll treat you right.
Jen: But I want you.
Lemonjam: It just can't happen, I'm sorry.

He ran for the door and left Jen alone. She was confused, if he felt the same way then why was he pulling away? There was something going on and she decided to find out what.

She wasn't going to let Lemonjam go that easily.

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Night had fallen on the T.C but Shaun didn't notice. She had been in bed all day thinking about things, she still felt guilt over Dezzy but the incident also made her think about Jack and what had happened with Russia. She decided that she couldn't bury her past for much longer and looked around her room for his card. She found it in her handbag and dialed his number.

Jack: Hello? This is Agent Jack Tower-
Shaun: Listen it's me Shaun.
Jack: Oh, how are you holding up? Yesterday must have been quite tough.
Shaun: I'm.....I'm unsure really. I think I'm feeling a bit numb.
Jack: That's to be expected, Yesterday was an ordeal.
Shaun: Anyway, I've been thinking about things and I going to tell you everything....About what happened in Russia.
Jack: Are you sure?
Shaun: Yes, it's the least I could do. You did everything you could to save Dezzy, if it wasn't for you he'd have died at the house.
Jack: I was just doing my duty, listen I'm going to go away for a few days to oversee the proceeding's around....Patrick. I'll talk to you when I get back.
Shaun: okay, you make sure that bastard fries. Dezzy would still be here if it wasn't for him.
Jack: what?.......Dezzy's..........you........know? Hello?
Jack began to break up.
Shaun: Hello?
The line went dead, Jack must have lost signal. Shaun was incredibly tired, she put down her phone and went to sleep.

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When Shaun it was late morning, she checked her phone and got up. She decided that she was going to try to make it to school today, there wasn't any point in moping around the house. As she went grab some clothes she heard someone turn on the showers. She checked the time again, it couldn't be Sticks as he works 9-5 and it sounded like it came from the guest bathroom. She walked out in the hallway and knocked on the bathroom door but no one answered, she realised that they forgot to lock the door and against her better judgment she walked inside. Her mouth dropped open in shock when she say who it was.

She almost fainted, was her eyes playing tricks on her? This couldn't be real couldn't it?

Dezzy: Oh hey, Good morning! Erm...Do you think you could pass me a towel?

[Tom4784]

The Next part will be up Wednesday/Thursday I think. I wasn't much of a fan of this episode but the next one's gonna be a good one to write I think.

[lily.]

Dezzy comes back from the dead.. nice touch.. ;)

[LemonJam]

HE'S ALIVE ah/

[Z]

Only just read the two newest chapters just now; the one with Patrick/Dezzy was flipping epic!!! And I like the twist at the end of the last chapter, can't wait for the next update! I'm so sorry Gary but you have a MILF s0b

[Jessica.]

yay

[Patrick]

Oh thank god im okay s0b

LOL

Great episode Dezzy, cant wait until the next.

[Tom4784]

Episode 7.5
Dezzy's flying without Ewings

Shaun couldn't speak, She had been told Dezzy had died but there he stood before her.

Dezzy: I've never stunned anyone into silence before, Given my current state of nakedness I don't know whether that's good or bad.
He joked.
Dezzy: Any word on that towel?
She passed him a towel.
Shaun: You're alive?
Dezzy: I'm pretty sure I am unless this is a very underwhelming heaven.
She just blinked and carried on staring.
Dezzy: I've got a bone to pick with you and everyone else, I was in hospital for two days and the only visitor I had was Jack.
Shaun: Jack?
She remembered the last few words of her conversation with him before the signal was lost, he was trying to tell her something about Dezzy and he seemed quite confused when she mentioned he was dead.
Shaun: We were told you died!
Dezzy: Well that's technically true, but for a few seconds. Not long enough to announce it though, I'm guessing whoever told you made a mistake.
Shaun: Oh.
A sense of relief flooded through her, He wasn't dead.
Shaun: I'm overjoyed to see you're okay but shouldn't you be in the hospital? It's only been two days.
Dezzy: Well they patched me up and told me to rest and I decided I could do that in the comfort of my own home but the police are still crawling all over it so you're dad is letting me stay for a few days.
Once her initial shock had subsided she took in Dezzy's injuries. He had a stitched up cut across his cheek and his leg was a similar story except for his foot. Dezzy took off the protective covering to reveal his cast. Finally she saw bandage wrapped around Dezzy's chest that covered the bullet wound. He really had been through the mill.

They continued the talk after he got dressed.
Shaun: have you talked to the police yet?
Dezzy: Yeah, last night. Couldn't help much though, A lot of things have become quite foggy since I woke up in Hospital. I can't even recall his face.
He went quiet for a moment.
Dezzy: I guess some things are better off forgotten.
Shaun was at a loss to what to say. She decided instead to offer him a cup of tea. As she walked out the room he called out to her.
Dezzy: Thanks for Everything Shaun, you're a good friend. You're secret is safe with me.

[Tom4784]

This was originally gonna be the start of the next episode but I got bored of writing about me and there was two important parts in the scene so I decided to do a small one to get my part out of the way so I can focus on the other characters with the next episode.

Oh and before you say anything his bandages were umm....waterproof...

[Z]

Wooooo can't wait for chapter 8; yayay at Dezzy being alive :D

[Tom4784]

Seems I've fallen behind on this, We're on the home straight now though only a few more parts left so I think I'm gonna take a break with it and continue with it on Sunday. If all goes well I might be able to finish it off next week.

[Z]

Woop woop!

[Tom4784]

Episode 8
Hidden Dangers

Shaun was getting ready for school, it had been a few days since Dezzy arrived at her house and revealed that he knew her secret which he accidentally overheard from Jack during one of his visits. She was relieved that he wasn't going to tell anyone but also annoyed at Jack for being careless. She grabbed her bag and said bye to Dezzy before heading out. As she walked to her car she felt as though someone was watching her. She looked around but the street was empty, she still felt a little paranoid but carried on with what she was doing.

As she left, a person walked out from behind the bushes near her house.

??????: Soon Natalya, Soon.

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Gary was in the school bathrooms, she made sure it was empty before reaching into her bag and pulling out the pills she had stolen from Mark. She grabbed a few from the bottle and stared at them in her hand before swallowing them all down. She sighed a sigh of relief, she'll be able to get through today now. She jumped as she heard the door open and stuffed away the pills into her bag.

Mark: Hi! I didn't see you this morning.
Gary: Yeah I left early.
Mark touched up her makeup in the mirror and Gary followed suit.
Mark: Are you entering that Talent Competition? It's this Friday,
Gary: I haven't thought about it, probably not though.
Mark: You should, it'll be fun and it'll take your mind off things.
Gary: Maybe. You're probably right..
They finished up and walked out into the corridor, The were happily talking until Gary bumped into Zee.

Gary: Get the hell out of my way Christopher Reeve! Glare/.
Zee looked dejected before going the opposite way, when they were out of sight he got out his phone.

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Lili was making herself a margarita, these past few days had been tough on her, when her phone rang She ignored it for a while until she saw who it was.

Zee: This can't go on.
Lili: Hello to you too.
Things had been weird between them since that night.
Zee: I'm serious, I'm worried for Gary. I've never seen her like this before.
Lili: She won't return my calls I go to Mark's house but she refuses to see me. I don't know what to do.
Zee: I'll keep an eye on her, She's got nothing but insults for me but she can't escape me at school.
Lili: Thanks Zee.
Zee: Yeah, well I gotta go to class. I uh...love you.

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Shaun and Jen were in the Library studying but Jen couldn't concentrate.
Shaun: What's up gurl?
Jen: It's nothing,
Shaun: It's something, every time I try to read Hamlet you click your tongue, it's like being friends with a ****ing typewriter. Is it Nathan?
Jen: No...It's Lemonjam.
Shaun: Oh, you finally did something then and it didn't go well?
Jen: I think he likes me but he's pulling away and I don't know why.
Shaun: He's been acting quite odd since he got the letter.
Jen: What letter.
Shaun: He got a letter a few weeks back, not sure what it was about though he wouldn't say.
Jen: You don't think...he's ill?....
Shaun: Oh no nothing like that it wasn't a medical letter. You're better off asking him about it he'll probably tell you if you asked him.
Jen thought about it for a while before going back to her studies.

Shaun looked at her phone, she had told Jack about the incident this morning, she felt silly for calling him over a hunch but her hunches have a tendency to be right. She was certain there was someone watching her, she went through the possibilities. It couldn't be Patrick since he was taken away and it couldn't be Darenn or Jack as they would let her know. Jack hadn't got back to her yet so she considered the possibility of there being some sort of security detail in place for Dezzy or herself. She couldn't draw any conclusions for the moment so she carried on reading Hamlet.

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Wombai: You're not going anywhere, exams are coming up you need to study.
It was Zee's free period and he had planned to go see Lili as they really needed to figure things out but as soon as he reached the gates Wombai had seen him.

Zee: Mom I'll literally be 10 minutes, I'm just gonna grab a textbook from home.
Wombai: Can't you borrow a copy from the library? Which subject is it? I can get one for you if you like.
Zee said the first thing that came to his head.
Zee: It's biology.
Wombai grimaced and became tense, Zee had noticed this before whenever anything linked to Stu was mentioned but he didn't know why.
Wombai: Okay you can go but BE QUICK.
She walked away and Zee quickly sped out the gates. Stu had seen this scene unfold from his classroom window, he had been wondering for a while why Zee was constantly leaving the school and decided to take this opportunity to find out. He was overstepping the boundaries Wombai had been put in place but something was going on here and he wasn't going to let anything happen to Zee.

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Jack: And you don't know who it was?
Shaun had recounted what had happened this morning to Jack when he called back,
Shaun: No, I've gone over all the possibilities but I couldn't think of a reasonable explanation.
Jack: Are you sure it wasn't anyone to do with what happened in Russia?
Shaun: No, I haven't seen my sister in years and Darenn wouldn't tell anyone where I was, They are the only two people who know I'm here.
She paused a moment.
Shaun: Could it be someone related to Patrick? Like a friend or family member trying to intimidate us?
Jack: Probably not, his only family are his parents and they're here with him and he wasn't the type to have friends. This business with Patrick is over now, he can't hurt anyone anymore.

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He was sitting in an office waiting to be seen, he had spent the past few days only staring at four walls so it felt strange for him to be in a different place. There was an Ipod that had been left on the desk be whoever owned this office and it had been left on. He heard parts of the songs blaring out from the earphones but he was too far away to tell what song it was.
I'll live for you.......

???????: Ah you're early! Good at time keeping I see although you might not have had much choice in the matter really.
A doctor had entered the room, he seemed quite cheerful and upbeat but the patient felt wary of him.
???????: So Patrick You tried to kill a classmate?
He looked through a file he was holding.
???????: Dezzy huh? I don't blame you I'd do the same if I had the chance.
He said quietly, his demeanor had changed and Patrick was creeped out by the man's sudden change.
???????:...Not that it's the right thing to do of course.
He became cheerful again, it was like he had two personalities that he could flick between like a switch.
???????:....He has too many friends for that, I saw them at the hospital when I told them he died. It was cruel I know but it was fun.
I'll die for you
???????: You'll have to kill them first.
He switched back to that darker side. Patrick was silent, he didn't know what to say.
???????: You're innocent Patrick, Dezzy and his friends are the villains here. I can plainly see these allegations are lies, I'll see to it that you are released, you didn't mean to hurt him you were only defending yourself after years of his bullying.....They all need to pay.
Do what you want me to
Patrick: I'm not sure I want to....
???????: Nonsense! You need to do this! Do this for me and you'll be free forever.
...........I can't let you go
Patrick: You mean, I'll stay here otherwise?
The doctor nodded, he switched back to nice mode.
???????: Oh how rude of me I never introduced myself, I'm Doctor ILoveDC I'm going to be your psychiatrist for the foreseeable future....
It's not over, not over, not over, not over yet

[Tom4784]

Only a few more parts left now, It's just a matter of putting all the stories into place for the finale. Next part will be up in a few days.

[LemonJam]

win <3

[Patrick]

LMAO

'Im Doctor ILoveDC'

:joker:

Brilliant ending.

[Shaun]

ahh/

[lily.]

Good work Dean. :thumbs:

[Tom4784]

Thanks Guys!

[Z]

Doctor ILoveDC!! Amazing haha!

Please Gary, stop ignoring me, I love your mother! :laugh2:

[Tom4784]

I've been meaning to pick this up for a few days but I just haven't got the energy so I'm gonna put it on a 'mid season break' for a while and then polish it off in a week or two.