The Asylum - Part 2 THE GAMBLE

[Iceman]

Inside the walls of TiBB there are some shocking things going on, backstabbing, bitching, stuff you would expect. What you don't expect is to hear that it is no longer a forum but now a holding place to keep members alive. They've tried their best to leave but all have failed. They tried to commit suicide but to no avail. Only by working together and keeping out of the MODS way can they find the path out and leave with their life from the cursed ASYLUM

Members
Orla - Take That fanatic
YouYourself&You - leona Lewis fanatic - DEAD
Lockley - LOST fanatic - DEAD
Larry - Madonna fanatic - DEAD
Shaunessy - Bob Dylan fanatic
Emiline - T-Shirt fanatic
Lilian - Fanatic in general
Jessintha - Argument fanatic - DEAD
Chooie - Coronation Street fanatic - DEAD
Rosstopher - Big Sword, no touchey
Jayshunned - Locked in a closet for 6 months - DEAD
Paddy - Eastenders fanatic - DEAD
Karlito - BOIS
Novice - Football fanatic
Stewie - Weed fanatic
Beatty - Woman, wants to mate - DEAD

Mods
Vixen - Inbetweener
Jamsey - Closed
400pounds - Vein
Marcus - The King - Encountered
Zed - Too nice - Encountered

I got my Champion pass :D

[Iceman]

Member 1


Orla - She's a very kind and sweet girl who has a bit of an obsession with Take That and Grey's Anatomy. The MODS trust her completely as she doesn't like to break rules. She will go out of her way to defend Take That. Now that word has spread that "the boys" are preparing for a new album SHE WANTS OUT!

[Lewis.]

Oooh.. Sounds very interesting! Shall look forward to reading this :)

[Smithy]

Orla reminds me of someone, but I can't put my finger on it :p

[GypsyGoth]

:bigsmile:

[Ramsay]

coooooooool

[Mrluvaluva]

Has Laura changed her username?

[Iceman]

Member 2

Youyourself&you - A very mysterious member. Has an obsession with Leona Lewis which seems to pop up in almost every argument. Has been trapped in TiBB for far too long. Now that Leona is embarking on a Tour SHE WANTS OUT!

[Harry!]

Looks like this will be good!

[Lewis.]

:tongue:

[Lucy.]

Pmsl :D

[Iceman]

Please note this is light hearted and if anyone seems like members from the board thats just er......coincidence?

[GypsyGoth]

:laugh2:

[Lewis.]

:tongue: Iceman..

[Vicky.]

Please note this is light hearted and if anyone seems like members from the board thats just er......coincidence?
Obviously :p

[Iceman]

Obviously :p

needed some clarification so i dont get sued, you know how it is.....

[Iceman]

4 more members tonight then more tomorrow.

[Lucy.]

:) Can't wait to see the others!

[Smithy]

rofl at member two

[Iceman]

Member 3

Lockley - The first of the male members. Lockley has been through a dramatic year with coming and going. He's obsessed with LOST and 24. Whispers crept through the boards that LOST finished. His only goal in life now is to leave and find out what happened to the Survivors. After so much time here HE WANTS OUT!

[Lewis.]

Ahahaha :tongue:

[Iceman]

Member 4

Larry - He has been here for quite some time. Some say he was Posting Mad at first but medication given by the MODS seems to have worked. He has an obsession with Madonna and has been known to slay enemies in battle whilst defending her. Rumour circulated that Madonna want to adopt again and Larry see's this as his perfect opportunity to become part of the Family and slowl get his hands on the grand prize.....her millions. Madonna want a new kid, HE WANTS OUT!

[GypsyGoth]

:laugh:

[Lucy.]

Lmao :D

[Smithy]

:joker:

[Vicky.]

:laugh2:

[Iceman]

Decided to change it a bit.....thats all the members for tonight......

but something else on its way

[Iceman]

Mod 1

Vixen - Hasn't been here as long as some of the others. Her goal is to keep the Members in check. She knows that the Members respect her and that the MODS trust her completely. Vixen is living on the edge, which way she will choose remains to be seen. One things for sure, she's tactile and aggressive, she knows what she wants and thats to be on top she doesnt care who stands in her way, MODS OR MEMBERS

[Vicky.]

Oh dear :joker: :p

[Lucy.]

Go Vixen ;)

[Smithy]

Whose that based on?

edit: oh Vicky :p

[Mrluvaluva]

Whose that based on?

edit: oh Vicky :p

:shrug: Beats me. :joker:

Edit: oh you edited it. Lol. I thought you were joking too.

[Iceman]

Mod 2

Jamsey - The number 2. One of the most feared MODS. Not much is known other than his quick ninja skills in closing down members in certain topics. Some have reported he just says "closed" others have said last thing they remember was a simple"." One thing is for sure Jamsey is a MOD through and through and may be the members biggest foe. THIS IS CLOSED

[Mrluvaluva]

.

[Vicky.]

Haha. I think I'm going to like this :D

I rarely follow anything in creative writing, will be a nice change :p

[Smithy]

:shrug: Beats me. :joker:

Edit: oh you edited it. Lol. I thought you were joking too.

No, i didn't see the similarities between vixen and vicky, tbh it's only the V so i was intitled to be confused :hugesmile:

[Iceman]

Haha. I think I'm going to like this :D

I rarely follow anything in creative writing, will be a nice change :p

well this will be my first attempt at creative writing so i hope its all okay....dont have too high expectations though....

all i'll say is i know now what the ending is and the main parts.....

[Iceman]

Mod 3 on the way

[Mrluvaluva]

I am looking forward to reading this. Sounds interesting.

[Iceman]

Mod 3

400Pounds - Has been apart of the MODS for a year now. His muscular physique earn him allies with the female Members. He is rarely seen these days, most likely due to the fact that there are a lot of mirrors on the board and he spends hours everyday checking himself in them. Will the Members utilise this or is he playing them at THEIR OWN GAME?

[Vicky.]

:laugh:

[Iceman]

2 more members then im done for the night...(partly because batteries in wireless keyboard arent working and im having to type everything twice)

[Mrluvaluva]

Mod 3

400Pounds - Has been apart of the MODS for a year now. His muscular physique earn him allies with the female Members. He is rarely seen these days, most likely due to the fact that there are a lot of mirrors on the board and he spends hours everyday checking himself in them. Will the Members utilise this or is he playing them at THEIR OWN GAME?

I wonder who that could be? Lol

[Smithy]

Mark :shrug:

[Iceman]

Mark :shrug:

*coughs* Ben *coughs*

[Iceman]

Member 5

Shaunessy - Described as the "go to guy". Shaunessy helps other members out in times of despair, don't be fooled though, everyhing comes at a cost with him. He's obsessed with Bob Dylan and has in the past launched into scathing attacks on his fellow Members for not knowing who Dylan is. Shaunessy doesnt mind the board but is sick of the younger membes he's stuck with HE WANTS OUT!

[Iceman]

Member 6

Emiline - One of the youngest Members on the board. Emiline was quite naive and immature when she first got there. Now she has matured she has mended rifts. She has an eery obsession with a certain T-Shirt and will scold anyone who brings this up at the regular Member Meeting Session. Will her past rivalries get in the way, SHE WANTS OUT

[Lucy.]

:joker:

[Twilight]

Lol

[Iceman]

Right as should be known this is all in jest....


Also what do you guys think? should i keep it going?

[Vicky.]

Right as should be known this is all in jest....


Also what do you guys think? should i keep it going?

Yes!

[Lucy.]

Deffo! More members :)

[GypsyGoth]

It's great Eoin, more please :D

[Mrluvaluva]

Yes please. I am interested now I know the characters. Ficticious ones of course.

[Iceman]

4 people will do for me, will finish up with all the Members and MODS tomorrow......also something else is planned.......

altogether there will be 14 Members

and 6 MODS

[Mrluvaluva]

Will look forward to tomorrow nights installment.

[Princess]

LMAO this is brilliant! Orla's my favourite :p

[Vicky.]

LMAO this is brilliant! Orla's my favourite :p

:nono: Biased :p

[Iceman]

Mod 4

Marcus - The King of the MODS. Marcus has a nasty streak in him and would gamble all to make sure the Members dont leave. He's cut-throat and doesn't like confrontation. He wants the Members to abide by the rules and has no problem taking away their privaleges. Paranoia has set in and Marcus doesn't knw which of his MODS he can trust, will this BE HIS DOWNFALL!

[CaraRawr]

ooh i like this.

[Iceman]

Hopefully you'll enjoy it.


Will be doing these randomly today and should be finished by about 5 or 6.

[Lewis.]

This really is amazing! Keep up the good work Iceman :)

[Iceman]

Member 7

Lilian - The Dominant Female. She commands power and respect with a wink of an eye. Lilian has no real obsession, she has little ones that seem to overlap. The girls look up to her and the guys want to be with her. Is her inconsistency of an obsession going to be her downfall SHE WANTS OUT!

[Raph]

hahah this is great Eoin! Great read. Who's the Marcus one though?

[Iceman]

lilian?

[CaraRawr]

can't wait for some more members to be revealed.

[Iceman]

also more members will be added in the course of this......i just wanted a certain amount to get it started.....

[Raph]

alright, sounds great!

[Lucy.]

So good ;D

[pinkmichk]

will be following this already looks fab :)

[Iceman]

Member 8

Jessintha - Has been on the boards for a while now, likes to rub people up the wrong way. Jessintha has been described as a two faced, lying little bitch and thats what she said about herself. Has an obsession with arguments which will almost certainly be her downfall SHE WANTS OUT

[Raph]

lol

[Harry!]

Great characters Ice!

[Iceman]

Great characters Ice!

It's like im basing them on people i know.....

[Iceman]

Member 9

Chooie - Has a lot of respect from other Members. Chooie is obsessed with Coronation Street and follows it religiously. Once a fight broke out and he broke someones arms when he heard them whistling the Eastenders them tune. Will his love of Corrie get in the way of escape HE WANTS OUT

[Ross]

Where am I? sad/

[Iceman]

you just didnt make the cut..................






















im not finished yet, altogether 14 members and 6 MODS will start us off........there will be maybe 6-8 more members joining.... be patient young padawan

[Iceman]

Member 10

Rosstopher - A man of many words who will rip Members and MODS apart in a heartbeat. Rosstopher has many obsessions but they are all in equal proportion. Keep an eye on him though as he will use and abuse. Many have fallen to his huge sword and many more will HE WANTS OUT!

[Ross]

;O

[Iceman]

will start this tonight and it will be interactive in a way.

[Iceman]

final 4 members and 2 MODS will be posted later, im off to enjoy the sun for a bit :)

[Raph]

hahah nice! Enjoy the sun Eoin.

[Raph]

I think i'll do the same as Ross.. haha.

Where Am I? ... /sob

hahah :)

[CaraRawr]

where am i. loljk i'm irrelevant. <3

[Iceman]

I think i'll do the same as Ross.. haha.

Where Am I? ... /sob

hahah :)

haha that only works once......Rosstopher beat you all to it.

[Ross]

;)

[Jords]

Haha, good job Eoin!

[Iceman]

waiting on mates so will just keep going....

[Harry!]

will start this tonight and it will be interactive in a way.

Sounds interesting! :)

[Iceman]

Mod 5

Zed - A fiery young MOD. Zed was sworn in last year and ever since rumblings have gone around about how he's changed, some saying "he's a completely diffferent person now, I mean have you see his hair?" He's very witty and a people pleaser, will the Members utilize THIS AGAINST HIM!

[Raph]

haha that only works once......Rosstopher beat you all to it.

hahah damnn. :hugesmile:

[CaraRawr]

LOL, zed.

[Iceman]

Member 11

Jayshunned - He is a man of mystery. Legend has it that he escaped the boards for 6 months, whilst others say he actually got locked in an old broom closet. Jayshunned has an obsession with football but has his eye on the main prize Escape HE WANTS OUT!

[Raph]

hahah awesome!

[Iceman]

Member 12

Paddy - A misunderstood Member. Paddy Once had his arm broken by another Member for apparently "whistling some old crap". He has many foes but also quite a few allies too. Paddy's obsession with Eastenders became serious when he shaved off all his hair after Danielle died. He opened up about it in one of the Member Meet Sessions. He's in denial and a broken man HE WANTS OUT!

[Iceman]

Member 13

Karlito - A generally well behaved Member who keeps himself to himself. Karlito has an obsession with BOIS, not boys now, just the word BOIS. Many Members are uncertain how to take him because of this and it's just the way he likes it. He is a quiet but strong contender to make it out and leave, plus he wants some weed....HE WANTS OUT!

[Raph]

hahah go Karl! :thumbs:


My favorite has got to be YouYourselfandYou though - classic :)

[Iceman]

Okay ive decided not to do anymore for now....


they are the final ones.

[Raph]

Not sure you're forgotten the unlucky 13th? :tongue:

hahah nah great line-up Eoin, will be following this :)

[Iceman]

Members
Orla - Take That fanatic
YouYourself&You - leona Lewis fanatic
Lockley - LOST fanatic
Larry - Madonna fanatic
Shaunessy - Bob Dylan fanatic
Emiline - T-Shirt fanatic
Lilian - Fanatic in general
Jessintha - Argument fanatic
Chooie - Coronation Street fanatic
Rosstopher - Big Sword, not touchey
Jayshunned - Locked in a closet for 6 months
Paddy - Eastenders fanatic
Karlito - BOIS

Mods
Vixen - Inbetweener
Jamsey - Closed
400pounds - Vein
Marcus - The King
Zed - Too nice


They are the final Members and MODS to be announced before this starts. More will be added as needed.

[Iceman]

Members
Orla - Take That fanatic
YouYourself&You - leona Lewis fanatic
Lockley - LOST fanatic
Larry - Madonna fanatic
Shaunessy - Bob Dylan fanatic
Emiline - T-Shirt fanatic
Lilian - Fanatic in general
Jessintha - Argument fanatic
Chooie - Coronation Street fanatic
Rosstopher - Big Sword, not touchey
Jayshunned - Locked in a closet for 6 months
Paddy - Eastenders fanatic
Karlito - BOIS

Mods
Vixen - Inbetweener
Jamsey - Closed
400pounds - Vein
Marcus - The King
Zed - Too nice


They are the final Members and MODS to be announced before this starts. More will be added as needed.

Bumpage

[Iceman]

Okay can people please give me the name of which room we will start off in

The Choices:

Room A - A mysterious person lives here in this repetitive room thats always right.

Room B - A room that will make the sanest person go crazy.

Room C - The Gamble

[Iceman]

I will be back around 5 so ill take the tally then, thanks

[Raph]

Room C.

[Jayson]

Room C

That Jayshunned bloke sounds like the most incredible human being alive, must be a stallion in the sack.

[Raph]

hahah Jayson.. he does sound pretty wicked ;)

[Jords]

Room A, I want to meet this person. :laugh:

[Lucy.]

B

[Twilight]

Room A :D

[ChristmasNeeve]

Room A

[LemonJam]

Room A

[Ross]

Room A

[Ross]

I think you'll find Rosstopher is the one with the big almighty sword. ;)

[Princess]

Room B

[Vicky.]

Room B

[Shaun]

Hahahaha I love this!

I'll vote Room A

[Mrluvaluva]

Room A. Too inquisitive.

[Lewis.]

Room B. Awesome stuff Iceman :)

[Iceman]

Oh im happy i got so many votes! glad people are intrested in it. keep em coming.

[Iceman]

Weapon Of Choice:

Everyone needs a weapon of choice if they are to defeat the MODS.

Orla - A Take That logo which cleverly turns into two daggers.
YouYourself&You - A recording of Leona Lewis which breaks glass.
Lockley - A synopsis of the show which puts non LOSTIES to sleep.
Larry - Pictures of Madonna looking freakishly strong, can cause temporary blindness.
Shaunessy - A utility belt full of acid.
Emiline - A T-Shirt which can be used as a choker.
Lilian - A poisoned lipstick, causes temporary blindness.
Jessintha - The Power to talk the ears of anyone.
Chooie - A Hot Pot.
Rosstopher - A Big Sword
Jayshunned - A broom with little spikes on the end.
Paddy - A duff duff recording which shocks all around for 1 minute.
Karlito - A concealed water gun for shíts and giggles.

[Ross]

pmsl!

[Iceman]

Last 45 mins of Voting....anymore?

[Jayson]

I will clean out room B with my broom.

Ohhhhhh heeellllll yeeeaaahhhh.

[Iceman]

Right decided to close the Votes now....no more will be accepted.

[Ross]

JASON. Touch my sword.

[Iceman]

The Votes:

Room A = 7
Room B = 4
Room C = 2

coming up our first part of the story

[Ross]

ah/

[Iceman]

The Intro:


All seemed well on the boards today, there had been no bans and very little lockdowns on threads. This was very unusual for the board but it was planned like this. Shaunessy called on his boardmate Karlito to spread the word. The time was now, their plan would finally begin after months of planning. Karlito could easily walk around the boards without looking suspicious, infact the MODS didn't even notice him walk past the Tower.

Karlito gazed through the first room we came to, Orla's. He peered in and all he could see was pictures of Take That. All was not as it seemed though, as he looked closer he could see that Mark Owen's face was blacked out on all of them. "how could you, you bastard" he could hear Orla mumble. He pretended not to see or hear any of this and called for Orla to get ready. She quickly wiped tears from her face and put something in her pocket.

As Karlito gathered all the Members to Shaunessy's room. Shaunessy had a cheeky grin on his face "Orgy time" he thought to himself. He soon remembered why they were doing this and the thought quickly disperesed. "We all know why we're here and what we need to do to get out". "Orla did you throw the MODS off our scent?" "Fat chance of that happening with Emiline in that T-Shirt" Jayshunned shouted. Emiline spun her head around and gave a look to Jayshunned that made him feel cold inside. "Sorry Emiline" he whimpered. "Yes i told them we were having a Glee get together" Orla said proudly. Glancing around the room she realised the others weren't impressed. "That will have to do Orla, next time say we're watching BGT, I think Jamesy watches Glee, WE DON'T NEED MODS HERE K?" scorned Shaunessy.

[Iceman]

Room A posted later tonight.

[Ross]

LOL. Stupid Orla.

[Mrluvaluva]

"how could you, you bastard"

Lol

[Iceman]

Okay so not gonna get Room A finished before the things i have to do so will have to be put up after BGT, if i finish before then it'll be up.

[Shaun]

pmsl orla :love:

[Vicky.]

:laugh2: Yes, I can tell I'm going to enjoy this :D

[Iceman]

The Asylum: Room A


As the Members walked down the long board remembering not to be too loud they came to the end of the Corridor. Ahead of them were 3 Rooms; A, B and C. They began to argue about which room they should go through with Chooie saying they should think this through logically and the rest agreeing. "Ooops" said Rosstopher in an evil toned voice. He had opened the door to the Mysterious Room A. The members heard a MOD and quickly ushered inside.......it was pitch black but they could hear a noise humming from the far end of the room. Emiline slowly moved to the back of the group clearly not wanting to be the first to find out what it was.

Karlito, sick of waiting walked up to the humming noise, he caught glimpse of a lightswitch infront of him and pressed it. "Oh my God, what the **** is that" exclaimed Shaunessy. "It's me" retorted Youyourself&you. She clearly hadn't put any make up on. Karlito picked up what appeared to be a vibrating didlo. "guess we know what that humming noise was" he laughed. "Oh hai, I've been looking for this everywhere" said a voice from the background. All eyes shot round to a clearly embarassed Rosstopher. "Bahahaha" screeched Shaunessy. "c'mon guys we have to get on with this, we don't know which MOD was outside" said Paddy.

LIFE IN THE FAST LANE, LIFE IN THE FAST LANE bellowed through a speaker.

"It can't be him, it just can't" said a clearly shaken Larry. "It is, I knew we hadn't seen the last of him after the Election, It's Aristobot and he's gonna try to break our group up, we need to stick together" said Lockley

Arisobot was not seen in person, there was a plexi glass box which looked shockingly like an old fashioned 80's hard drive.

I SUCCEEDED IN OUSTING THAT SCOT, NOW IT'S YOUR TURN.

"I can keep him occupied by arguing but not for long" said Jessintha. "Karlito give me your gun" Shaunessy said. He quickly grabbed Karlitos gun, took the water tank off and put an acid bile in it's place. "Where do we aim?" asked Jayshunned. "At the keypad obviously you dipshít" said the charming voice of Lilian. Shaunessy pointed the gun just as Aristobot finished up with with Jessintha.

KEEP ON KEEPING ON. NOW TO GET RID OF YOU FROM MY SANCTUARY.

Shaun pulled the trigger and the acid erupted all over the keypad, it slowly began melting. Aristobot was having none of it. SIGN OF THE TIMES, REBELLION AND ANGER. YOU CANNOT ESCAPE, I WILL NOT ALLOW. "We can and we are" shouted Lilian. the group scrambled to the door which was now halfway open, all except for Rosstopher and Lilian who had both seen a message come through on a screen. It was from Marcus and it was slowly coming through like on thos out of date computers. It read "Aristobot, thank you for your information, we are going into full mode LOCKDOWN, they will not escape, they can't escape because" at this stage the first door opened and the 2 Members ran towards where everyone else had gone.

Rosstopher and Lilian quickly exited through the door but to their shock the others had vanished. "This is just like LOST" said Lilian. "Oh you can **** if your gonna start talking about that crap, I hear enough from lockley" As they panned down what seemed like a long corridor they realised they were actually in the MOD RUN. This is how the MODS keep an eye on all the Members they have imprisoned here. "which way now?" said Rosstopher..........



Down to the left of the Corridor is where the Music Boards are.
Down to the right of the Corridor is where the Sports Boards are.

Which way next is up to you guys......VOTE PLEASE, LEFT or RIGHT.

[Shaun]

hahahahahaa.

RIGHT.

[Harry!]

Very good lol.

Right

[Ross]

Omg poor me and Lilian.
Shaunessy you kick ass gurl!

Oh, I'll go Right.

[Twilight]

Left

[Lewis.]

Left.

[Ross]

No gurls this is ma life you're dealing with. :(

[Shaun]

I so need an acid gun.

[Jayson]

Right

[LemonJam]

Left! Music forums with characters based on Shaun and MM&I is gonna be amazing <3

[Iceman]

Okay then will leave this open until after BGT then i'll be doing the rest of this bit..... (which is all still part 1)

[Shaun]

Left then! ah\

[Raph]

Right. ahah the Emiline t-shirt bit made me laugh. Good stuff Eoin!

[Iceman]

Closing this in 5 mins anymore?

[Iceman]

We are going.......Right

[Iceman]

The Asylum: Room A, Turn Right


Rosstopher and Lilian quickly exited through the door but to their shock the others had vanished. "This is just like LOST" said Lilian. "Oh you can **** if your gonna start talking about that crap, I hear enough from lockley" As they panned down what seemed like a long corridor they realised they were actually in the MOD RUN. This is how the MODS keep an eye on all the Members they have imprisoned here. "which way now?" said Rosstopher..........

"Right of course, thats what my waters are telling me and trust me you don't want to be going against my waters" said Lilian. As the two turned right they finally saw how the MODS could see them, "Oh a two way mirror" said Rosstopher. "It all makes sense now" quipped Lilian. Walking down the corridor Ross looked into one of the rooms, "hey i know him, that's Novice"

Member 14
Novice - A young man who once ruled the boards with an iron fist. He too claims he has left the boards but with no concrete evidence can he be trusted? Novice is obsessed with Football and Rangers in particular. Will the glory of the goal outshine the glory of escape HE WANTS OUT!

Weapon Of Choice
A swift kick to the groin, lowers sperm count and stuns for 5 minutes.

Rosstopher tapped on the glass, "well hello there", Novice wondered where the noise was coming from and called out "Boone". "Right that's it one more LOST reference and im done, seriously" an angered Rosstopher exclaimed. "Oh Rosstopher and Lilian, get me out of here, there's this guy called Reginald and he's been freaking me out lately" he said in an ushered voice.

Lilian flipped a switch and the double mirror began to lower. "Nice balls" Lilian and Rosstopher thought to themselves looking at a shelf with 5 footballs on it. The three heard a cry from around the corner and went to investigate it. Novice now taking the lead. The other two didn't mind becuase they'd rather him go first than them.

As they turned the corner they found a battered Lockley. "Lockley what happened brother?" "There was Black Smoke just like the one from LOS" with that Rosstopher took out his sword and slahed Lockley's neck. "I ****ing warned you all about this LOST shít" he said whilst checking his hair in the mirror. Novice retorted "that may be well and true but he didn't know that and only he knew what happened, well done Jackass" "Bitches listen, I wanna get the hell out of here, you two can play fight later, i'm leaving."

The trio continued on down the corridor, not before Novice grabbed piece of wire from Lockley's backpack, he quickly put it in his pocket before the others noticed. Rosstopher seemed pleased as he had one final look at Lockleys dead body.....

[Harry!]

Very good lol. Poor David / Lockley

[Iceman]

the asylum: Room a, turn right


rosstopher and lilian quickly exited through the door but to their shock the others had vanished. "this is just like lost" said lilian. "oh you can **** if your gonna start talking about that crap, i hear enough from lockley" as they panned down what seemed like a long corridor they realised they were actually in the mod run. This is how the mods keep an eye on all the members they have imprisoned here. "which way now?" said rosstopher..........

"right of course, thats what my waters are telling me and trust me you don't want to be going against my waters" said lilian. As the two turned right they finally saw how the mods could see them, "oh a two way mirror" said rosstopher. "it all makes sense now" quipped lilian. Walking down the corridor ross looked into one of the rooms, "hey i know him, that's novice"

member 14
novice - a young man who once ruled the boards with an iron fist. He too claims he has left the boards but with no concrete evidence can he be trusted? Novice is obsessed with football and rangers in particular. Will the glory of the goal outshine the glory of escape he wants out!

weapon of choice
a swift kick to the groin, lowers sperm count and stuns for 5 minutes.

Rosstopher tapped on the glass, "well hello there", novice wondered where the noise was coming from and called out "boone". "right that's it one more lost reference and im done, seriously" an angered rosstopher exclaimed. "oh rosstopher and lilian, get me out of here, there's this guy called reginald and he's been freaking me out lately" he said in an ushered voice.

Lilian flipped a switch and the double mirror began to lower. "nice balls" lilian and rosstopher thought to themselves looking at a shelf with 5 footballs on it. The three heard a cry from around the corner and went to investigate it. Novice now taking the lead. The other two didn't mind becuase they'd rather him go first than them.

As they turned the corner they found a battered lockley. "lockley what happened brother?" "there was black smoke just like the one from los" with that rosstopher took out his sword and slahed lockley's neck. "i ****ing warned you all about this lost shít" he said whilst checking his hair in the mirror. Novice retorted "that may be well and true but he didn't know that and only he knew what happened, well done jackass" "bitches listen, i wanna get the hell out of here, you two can play fight later, i'm leaving."

the trio continued on down the corridor, not before novice grabbed piece of wire from lockley's backpack, he quickly put it in his pocket before the others noticed. Rosstopher seemed pleased as he had one final look at lockleys dead body.....


bumpage

[Princess]

Ooooooooooh just read all 3 parts,loving this!! You've got Orla down to a tee :laugh:

[Iceman]

Ooooooooooh just read all 3 parts,loving this!! You've got Orla down to a tee :laugh:

I know I just got all this in my head and it has to come out LOL



will do more after BGT

[Raph]

will read this when I get back from school tomorrow :)

[Shaun]

Aaaaaw, poor Lockley. :(

[Ross]

Don't mess with Rosstopher, bitch!

I love this. :D

[Ramsay]

Just read this all now
LOL this is great
thanks for including me eoin:)

[Novo]

Lockley is a elite warrior he can not be killed he must be coming back later on

[Jayson]

Lockley :bawling:

[Iceman]

If you live by the sword.....

[Novo]

You never die by the sword...

[Iceman]

The Asylum; Room A, Turn Left

As they exited Room A the group realised that Rosstopher and Lilian were still behind them they decided to go on without them in the hope they would catch them up. Lockley said he would go right, while the others all went left.

The group of Members ran down the boards and suddenly realised they were in the Music centre. They peered into the rooms which were all empty, all but one. Shaunessy flicked a switch and the double mirror began to lower. Smoke bellowed out whilst Depeche Mode played in the background he instantly knew who was in here. "Guys it's okay it's just Stewie's room"

Member 15
Stewie - A chilled back Member who doesn't really mind being stuck on the boards, he has been putting people in his place with wit and concrete facts. He has no obsession but rather an addiction. Word got to him that Cannabis would be legalised in the next Month and finally HE WANTS OUT but he may be a little too stoned to know this just yet......

Weapon Of Choice:
A hit of a bong that puts the most headstrong into a procrastonating stupper.

"Dudes welcome to the place where all your drems go down the drain" he laughed. "ugh c'mon I can't stand the smell" said Orla. "then don't smell it" laughed Stewie to himself. Karlito at this stage was sweating bad, he could smell the weed from the back of the group and slowly started to make his way in. "I really shouldn't" he thought, "but hell i'm happy having a good smoke before I go"

Karlito entered and wen't straight to a bong that was on the side of a table, Stewie hadn't realised this. Karlito took a huge hit from the bong and another. Stewie realising went over and began to pace up and down the room. "What's the matter Stewie?" asked Youyourself&I. "It's not weed in that it's god damn rat poison, i've been gassing the bloody things" he replied. "look you guys should keep going, put the mirror up when you leave and i'll hide him in the corner over there where the clothes on the ground are" he told them. Stu then went over to Karlito and said "Dude it's fine they're gone". "Thank **** for that, I couldn't take another day of Shaunessy bossing me around" replied a full of energy Karlito. "any weed" he asked" "Of course I do" laughed Stewie. "we got an hour left at least before they get suspicious"

With what just happened that the others went back outside and heard a cry down the Boards. "Lockley" screamed Paddy, who had been keeping quiet as he was intimidated by Stewie. The Members ran down the corridor to find a pile of blood and etchings on the wall that read "4, 8, 15, 16, 23, and 42". "Lockley was here for sure, we need to keep going if we have any chance of finding him" said Orla........With that the group moved on, unknown to them they were about to encounter their first MOD....

Please now vote on which MOD they should encounter first. A list is on first page.

[Ross]

Zed

[Twilight]

Zed

this

[Stu]

Oh my, that was beautiful Eoin :joker:. I have to go back and read it from the start now :).

[Stu]

I say Jamesey.

[Ramsay]

400pounds!

[Iceman]

Okay will leave this open for the night and coutn the votes tomorrow.

The Asylum Part 2 begins then.

[Shaun]

Vixen.

Loving this Eoin :thumbs:

[Ramsay]

aw man i love it
me and stu the shneaky stoners:laugh:

[Stu]

Oh we're shnakey out boss.

[Iceman]

A complete run through without member profiles.


The Intro:


All seemed well on the boards today, there had been no bans and very little lockdowns on threads. This was very unusual for the board but it was planned like this. Shaunessy called on his boardmate Karlito to spread the word. The time was now, their plan would finally begin after months of planning. Karlito could easily walk around the boards without looking suspicious, infact the MODS didn't even notice him walk past the Tower.

Karlito gazed through the first room we came to, Orla's. He peered in and all he could see was pictures of Take That. All was not as it seemed though, as he looked closer he could see that Mark Owen's face was blacked out on all of them. "how could you, you bastard" he could hear Orla mumble. He pretended not to see or hear any of this and called for Orla to get ready. She quickly wiped tears from her face and put something in her pocket.

As Karlito gathered all the Members to Shaunessy's room. Shaunessy had a cheeky grin on his face "Orgy time" he thought to himself. He soon remembered why they were doing this and the thought quickly disperesed. "We all know why we're here and what we need to do to get out". "Orla did you throw the MODS off our scent?" "Fat chance of that happening with Emiline in that T-Shirt" Jayshunned shouted. Emiline spun her head around and gave a look to Jayshunned that made him feel cold inside. "Sorry Emiline" he whimpered. "Yes i told them we were having a Glee get together" Orla said proudly. Glancing around the room she realised the others weren't impressed. "That will have to do Orla, next time say we're watching BGT, I think Jamesy watches Glee, WE DON'T NEED MODS HERE K?" scorned Shaunessy.

The Asylum: Room A


As the Members walked down the long board remembering not to be too loud they came to the end of the Corridor. Ahead of them were 3 Rooms; A, B and C. They began to argue about which room they should go through with Chooie saying they should think this through logically and the rest agreeing. "Ooops" said Rosstopher in an evil toned voice. He had opened the door to the Mysterious Room A. The members heard a MOD and quickly ushered inside.......it was pitch black but they could hear a noise humming from the far end of the room. Emiline slowly moved to the back of the group clearly not wanting to be the first to find out what it was.

Karlito, sick of waiting walked up to the humming noise, he caught glimpse of a lightswitch infront of him and pressed it. "Oh my God, what the **** is that" exclaimed Shaunessy. "It's me" retorted Youyourself&you. She clearly hadn't put any make up on. Karlito picked up what appeared to be a vibrating didlo. "guess we know what that humming noise was" he laughed. "Oh hai, I've been looking for this everywhere" said a voice from the background. All eyes shot round to a clearly embarassed Rosstopher. "Bahahaha" screeched Shaunessy. "c'mon guys we have to get on with this, we don't know which MOD was outside" said Paddy.

LIFE IN THE FAST LANE, LIFE IN THE FAST LANE bellowed through a speaker.

"It can't be him, it just can't" said a clearly shaken Larry. "It is, I knew we hadn't seen the last of him after the Election, It's Aristobot and he's gonna try to break our group up, we need to stick together" said Lockley

Arisobot was not seen in person, there was a plexi glass box which looked shockingly like an old fashioned 80's hard drive.

I SUCCEEDED IN OUSTING THAT SCOT, NOW IT'S YOUR TURN.

"I can keep him occupied by arguing but not for long" said Jessintha. "Karlito give me your gun" Shaunessy said. He quickly grabbed Karlitos gun, took the water tank off and put an acid bile in it's place. "Where do we aim?" asked Jayshunned. "At the keypad obviously you dipshít" said the charming voice of Lilian. Shaunessy pointed the gun just as Aristobot finished up with with Jessintha.

KEEP ON KEEPING ON. NOW TO GET RID OF YOU FROM MY SANCTUARY.

Shaun pulled the trigger and the acid erupted all over the keypad, it slowly began melting. Aristobot was having none of it. SIGN OF THE TIMES, REBELLION AND ANGER. YOU CANNOT ESCAPE, I WILL NOT ALLOW. "We can and we are" shouted Lilian. the group scrambled to the door which was now halfway open, all except for Rosstopher and Lilian who had both seen a message come through on a screen. It was from Marcus and it was slowly coming through like on thos out of date computers. It read "Aristobot, thank you for your information, we are going into full mode LOCKDOWN, they will not escape, they can't escape because" at this stage the first door opened and the 2 Members ran towards where everyone else had gone.

Rosstopher and Lilian quickly exited through the door but to their shock the others had vanished. "This is just like LOST" said Lilian. "Oh you can **** if your gonna start talking about that crap, I hear enough from lockley" As they panned down what seemed like a long corridor they realised they were actually in the MOD RUN. This is how the MODS keep an eye on all the Members they have imprisoned here. "which way now?" said Rosstopher..........

The Asylum: Room A, Turn Right


Rosstopher and Lilian quickly exited through the door but to their shock the others had vanished. "This is just like LOST" said Lilian. "Oh you can **** if your gonna start talking about that crap, I hear enough from lockley" As they panned down what seemed like a long corridor they realised they were actually in the MOD RUN. This is how the MODS keep an eye on all the Members they have imprisoned here. "which way now?" said Rosstopher..........

"Right of course, thats what my waters are telling me and trust me you don't want to be going against my waters" said Lilian. As the two turned right they finally saw how the MODS could see them, "Oh a two way mirror" said Rosstopher. "It all makes sense now" quipped Lilian. Walking down the corridor Ross looked into one of the rooms, "hey i know him, that's Novice"

Rosstopher tapped on the glass, "well hello there", Novice wondered where the noise was coming from and called out "Boone". "Right that's it one more LOST reference and im done, seriously" an angered Rosstopher exclaimed. "Oh Rosstopher and Lilian, get me out of here, there's this guy called Reginald and he's been freaking me out lately" he said in an ushered voice.

Lilian flipped a switch and the double mirror began to lower. "Nice balls" Lilian and Rosstopher thought to themselves looking at a shelf with 5 footballs on it. The three heard a cry from around the corner and went to investigate it. Novice now taking the lead. The other two didn't mind becuase they'd rather him go first than them.

As they turned the corner they found a battered Lockley. "Lockley what happened brother?" "There was Black Smoke just like the one from LOS" with that Rosstopher took out his sword and slahed Lockley's neck. "I ****ing warned you all about this LOST shít" he said whilst checking his hair in the mirror. Novice retorted "that may be well and true but he didn't know that and only he knew what happened, well done Jackass" "Bitches listen, I wanna get the hell out of here, you two can play fight later, i'm leaving."

The trio continued on down the corridor, not before Novice grabbed piece of wire from Lockley's backpack, he quickly put it in his pocket before the others noticed. Rosstopher seemed pleased as he had one final look at Lockleys dead body.....

The Asylum; Room A, Turn Left

As they exited Room A the group realised that Rosstopher and Lilian were still behind them they decided to go on without them in the hope they would catch them up. Lockley said he would go right, while the others all went left.

The group of Members ran down the boards and suddenly realised they were in the Music centre. They peered into the rooms which were all empty, all but one. Shaunessy flicked a switch and the double mirror began to lower. Smoke bellowed out whilst Depeche Mode played in the background he instantly knew who was in here. "Guys it's okay it's just Stewie's room"

"Dudes welcome to the place where all your drems go down the drain" he laughed. "ugh c'mon I can't stand the smell" said Orla. "then don't smell it" laughed Stewie to himself. Karlito at this stage was sweating bad, he could smell the weed from the back of the group and slowly started to make his way in. "I really shouldn't" he thought, "but hell i'm happy having a good smoke before I go"

Karlito entered and wen't straight to a bong that was on the side of a table, Stewie hadn't realised this. Karlito took a huge hit from the bong and another. Stewie realising went over and began to pace up and down the room. "What's the matter Stewie?" asked Youyourself&I. "It's not weed in that it's god damn rat poison, i've been gassing the bloody things" he replied. "look you guys should keep going, put the mirror up when you leave and i'll hide him in the corner over there where the clothes on the ground are" he told them. Stu then went over to Karlito and said "Dude it's fine they're gone". "Thank **** for that, I couldn't take another day of Shaunessy bossing me around" replied a full of energy Karlito. "any weed" he asked" "Of course I do" laughed Stewie. "we got an hour left at least before they get suspicious"

With what just happened that the others went back outside and heard a cry down the Boards. "Lockley" screamed Paddy, who had been keeping quiet as he was intimidated by Stewie. The Members ran down the corridor to find a pile of blood and etchings on the wall that read "4, 8, 15, 16, 23, and 42". "Lockley was here for sure, we need to keep going if we have any chance of finding him" said Orla........With that the group moved on, unknown to them they were about to encounter their first MOD....

Please now vote on which MOD they should encounter first. A list is on first page.

[30stone]

This is a very good read eoin :)

[Iceman]

like to throw a MOD name in Ben for the next part?

[Jayson]

Jamesy

[Iceman]

Last bump i promise, vote please

[Mrluvaluva]

Gotta be Zed next.

[Iceman]

The Mod Picked was Zed.......more soon

[Iceman]

The Asylum: Part 2 The Deaths


As the main group cautiously walked down the boards Chooie noticed an open vent on the ground. "guys one of us could fit in there" he said. "not me" quipped Emiline. "Sure you'd be used to being on your hands and feet anyway" Paddy snapped. Jayshunned volunteered and quickly scurried into the vent. "I can see a light down there, you guys keep going and i'll catch up with you all in a bit, just place the vent cover back on so it looks normal" With that the others left Jayshunned to crawl down the vent, seemingly not worried that another Member had left the group. They continued down the corridor which was getting darker and darker.

Watching from a distance MOD Zed smirked. He quietly walked up and screwed the vent back on tightly. "I knew they'd fall for that" he thought. Jayshunned was tarpped in the vent now but didn't know. Zed slowly followed the other Members, thinking what he'd do next.

Jayshunned finally came to where the vent dropped down, he took out his brrom and used it as a pole to slide down to the room below. He looked at the room and quickly began to regret coming in. It was Beatty's Room.

Member 16
Beatty - Obsessed with men a real BEAST, which usually overpowers her judgement. Has been likened to the Woman from Species. All she wants to do is Mate and escape. Her spawn could signal the end of the Boards which she knows SHE NEEDS OUT!

Jayshunned quickly climbed up the pole and pulled his brush up with him. He went back down the vent and tried to get out. The vent wouldn't budge. Jayshunned began to worry, he could hear Beatty playing Jedward "She bangs". Suddeny a voice said "I'm ready Jay" The Vent collapsed down and Jayshunned rolled out of it onto a bed. A fight began with the two trading punches. Beatty kneed him in the face which knocked him off his feet. He noticed a metal bar had been bent and was sticking out from on top of the vent. "this won't hurt me at all, shame about you" she exclaimed. With the thought of what was to come and the potential offspring, Jayshunned with blood trickling down his face jumped ontop of Beatty and threw both of them at the metal bar sticking out. It pireced striaght through both of their bodies killing them both instantly. Jayshunned had escaped a fate worse than the boards, Fatherhood.

[Jayson]

RIP Jayshunned

wVyggTKDcOE

[Iceman]

He died for the greater good......he is a true warrior.

[Z]

Oh my, I'm sorry about that Jays..hunned! Ahahaha Eoin this is classic!

[Shaun]

:shocked:

[Iceman]

The Asylum: Part 2 THE GAMBLE

As the members awoke they realised that they had come across the worst of them all. It was Marcus. They panned around the room and all realised they were strapped to Metal Tables (Again Rosstopher sensed another missed opportunity). They tried to free themselves but to no avail. "You all thought i'd let you escape this place without putting up any sort of fight?" laughed Marcus. "You can keep trying to escape but it won't work and for 4 of you your bid for freedom ends here". "I have rigged you up to a random shot firing device similar to a gun chamber". "It's time to play the game" he remarked "RUSSIAN ROULETTE"

They couldn't believe what was about to happen and most closed their eyes. "Guys im sorry this was all my fault, if I had of said to go the other way we'd be fine, I'm so sorry" said Shaunessy. The Chambers began to make a large clicking noise and they knew their time was up, just not who's time yet. Orla cried ferociously as the clicking got faster and louder......tick tick tick was all that could be heard now and it drowned out the screams of the Members. A Loud Bang sounded out. The first Member had met their maker....Youyourself&you had been shot straight through the head. Killed instantly. The click's remained fast and loud. the second shot billowed through the boards awakening Karlito and Stewie form a cannabis induced slumber. The second victim was Jessintha who had been shot through the side of the head, blood pured from her ears and began trickling out her eyes. 2 more shots were fired and Chooie let out a scream, he had been shot in the kneecaps and the pain was immense, Chooie kept screaming in agony while the others anticipated the final shot. Except ths time instead of 1 or 2 shots it was too many for them to count, they looked over and couldnt believe it, Larry had been shot multiple times in the face, so much so that he was beyond recognisable now. Chooie was loosing blood rapidly and told the others "not to give up and not to trust anyone. His hed dropped and with that the clicking stopped. Shaunessy had kept is eyes closed throughout the ordeal and was shaking manicly.

He opened his eyes and saw the blood everywhere, he was shocked to see 4 fallen comrades. Marcus said that Stewie and Karlito were on their way here, he said they would be next. Shaunessy pleaded not to kill them. "What have you got that I need?" asked Marcus. "Rosstopher" answered Shaunessy. Marcus grinned and exited the room through a lift. Orla could make out 3 buttons on the panel inside "Boards", "Basement" and "Tower". "ah ah ah you need an access code to get it to work" quipped Marcus. Orla pretended she didn't know what he was on about.

The deal had been done and now was the time to think fast. Should they tell the others they had encountered Marcus and the deal they had reached? "We have to tell them" said Emiline. Orla nodded in agreement. Just at that moment Stewie and Karlito entered the room, quickly seeing all the dead bodies Karlito threw up and Stewie gagged in horror. "We need to go now, Karlito help them out NOW" demanded Stewie. As they eventually helped the 3 out they could hear a noise coming from the halls, they all stopped what they were doing and listened intently.
"Cause all I ever wanted was to see you smile". "It's 400Pounds" mouthed Karlito. They saw that the room across from them had mirrors all over it. They knew he was going there but how could they leave without him hearing?

[Jayson]

C

[Shaun]

lmfao @ Rosstopher missing an opportunity.

ROOM C!

[Vicky.]

Zed had gotten the full brunt of Paddy's weapn and couldn't move, his jaw had dropped wide open (somewhere in the building Rosstopher sensed a missed opportunity).

PMSL :laugh2:

And C...

[Stu]

C for sure.

[Iceman]

right im going to buy a cake will do next part then hope you're all still enjoying it.

[Ross]

Zed had gotten the full brunt of Paddy's weapn and couldn't move, his jaw had dropped wide open (somewhere in the building Rosstopher sensed a missed opportunity).

Hahahaha!

Room C.

[Iceman]

right im busy at moment butwill put the rest of Part 2 up later on.

[Iceman]

im really tired tonight so wont be doing this. Here's a titbit though to keep you all going.

(can i just say tit again LOL)

Its the first line from each paragraph.


As the members awoke they realised that they had come across the worst of them all.


They couldn't believe what was about to happen and most closed their eyes.


He opened his eyes and saw the blood everywhere, he was shocked to see 4 fallen comrades.


The deal had been done and now was the time to think fast.



Thats your lot for today.

[Iceman]

also if youd like to say who you want to see more of or any members included now is the time to do it. it's gonna pick up pace and most likely be done by Saturday.

Only gonna have 3 new members so suggestions welcome.

[Z]

Aw man, awesome update haha! Oh Rosstopher...

I kick ass, ha! I vote Room C as well!

[Iceman]

doing next part now......

4 deaths :shocked:

[Iceman]

The Asylum; Part 2 THE GAMBLE


As the members awoke they realised that they had come across the worst of them all. It was Marcus. They panned around the room and all realised they were strapped to Metal Tables (Again Rosstopher sensed another missed opportunity). They tried to free themselves but to no avail. "You all thought i'd let you escape this place without putting up any sort of fight?" laughed Marcus. "You can keep trying to escape but it won't work and for 4 of you your bid for freedom ends here". "I have rigged you up to a random shot firing device similar to a gun chamber". "It's time to play the game" he remarked "RUSSIAN ROULETTE"

They couldn't believe what was about to happen and most closed their eyes. "Guys im sorry this was all my fault, if I had of said to go the other way we'd be fine, I'm so sorry" said Shaunessy. The Chambers began to make a large clicking noise and they knew their time was up, just not who's time yet. Orla cried ferociously as the clicking got faster and louder......tick tick tick was all that could be heard now and it drowned out the screams of the Members. A Loud Bang sounded out. The first Member had met their maker....Youyourself&you had been shot straight through the head. Killed instantly. The click's remained fast and loud. the second shot billowed through the boards awakening Karlito and Stewie form a cannabis induced slumber. The second victim was Jessintha who had been shot through the side of the head, blood pured from her ears and began trickling out her eyes. 2 more shots were fired and Chooie let out a scream, he had been shot in the kneecaps and the pain was immense, Chooie kept screaming in agony while the others anticipated the final shot. Except ths time instead of 1 or 2 shots it was too many for them to count, they looked over and couldnt believe it, Larry had been shot multiple times in the face, so much so that he was beyond recognisable now. Chooie was loosing blood rapidly and told the others "not to give up and not to trust anyone. His hed dropped and with that the clicking stopped. Shaunessy had kept is eyes closed throughout the ordeal and was shaking manicly.

He opened his eyes and saw the blood everywhere, he was shocked to see 4 fallen comrades. Marcus said that Stewie and Karlito were on their way here, he said they would be next. Shaunessy pleaded not to kill them. "What have you got that I need?" asked Marcus. "Rosstopher" answered Shaunessy. Marcus grinned and exited the room through a lift. Orla could make out 3 buttons on the panel inside "Boards", "Basement" and "Tower". "ah ah ah you need an access code to get it to work" quipped Marcus. Orla pretended she didn't know what he was on about.

The deal had been done and now was the time to think fast. Should they tell the others they had encountered Marcus and the deal they had reached? "We have to tell them" said Emiline. Orla nodded in agreement. Just at that moment Stewie and Karlito entered the room, quickly seeing all the dead bodies Karlito threw up and Stewie gagged in horror. "We need to go now, Karlito help them out NOW" demanded Stewie. As they eventually helped the 3 out they could hear a noise coming from the halls, they all stopped what they were doing and listened intently.
"Cause all I ever wanted was to see you smile". "It's 400Pounds" mouthed Karlito. They saw that the room across from them had mirrors all over it. They knew he was going there but how could they leave without him hearing?

[Stu]

400pound is coming to rid the world of us filthy smokers :(.

Great stuff.

[Iceman]

Yeah if he can stop looking in the mirrors......decided to add only 1 new character and finish it tomorrow night hopefully or maybe tonight, depends how bored I am later.....

[Shaun]

hahaha aww. Wait did Chooie die? edit: yes.

[Iceman]

hahaha aww. Wait did Chooie die? edit: yes.

yeah to keep this going fast i needed a cast cull.

[Iceman]

ill finish this tomorrow, ive been drunk all weekend and well couldnt walk properly let alone type

[Iceman]

forgot about this....will bring in 1 final character tomo then finish it tomo aswell.....

[Iceman]

The Asylum: Part 3


As the group wondered what to do Orla suggested they reason with 400Pounds after all he was one of them before. "he'll let us go", whispered Orla. At that moment he entered the room. He was wearing bandages all over his face from what only be described as hilarious sunburn. The group noticing a dumbell he put down a hand grabbed it quickly. A sickening thud bellowed out as his skull was cracked open. Emiline dropped the dumbell. "never liked that príck" she quipped. The others were in shock. 400pounds was dead blood pouring from his brain which was clearly visible. Orla backed away from Emiline fearing that she would try and hurt her. Stewie ordered the others into the room of mirrors to get away from all the dead bodies. The group followed him and as they did 400pounds let out one final sentence "I so vein". Karlito slammed the door shut just in case, after all the horror movies he'd seen he knew anything was possible.







(I may have forgotten I was doing this, will just keep posting as I go)

[Ramsay]

wooo:dance: