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dirtyvileHARRYuk
08-07-2010, 09:30 AM
is it to close to call who's going

they are 50 -50 in my book,
heaven gave and big brother took.
they can both let out and have a rant,
but i don't think john james will ever make us pant.
nathan has already had a big bust up and is unpredictable,
scabby felt the nathan "roth" and proved unreliable.
yes the joe will suffer if goes the boy from down under,
but the joe is thinking it wont be a blunder.
nathan will now take the upper hand and be mistaken,
up his confidence will for sure leave the house shaken.
lets build him up and see if he can handle,
because i have a feeling he will light his own BB r-i-p candle.
more rows are for sure set to follow,
the house is getting going and is no longer hollow.
so who goes friday, yes its a 50 50 chance,
but in one week from now,we wont even give them a glance.



(the joe is really unsure who is going but i hope john goes < anyone think thats the wrong choice?)

vesavius
08-07-2010, 10:13 AM
I genuinely havent ever read a single one of your poems past the second line... Do they take you long to write?