I wrote this song what do you think

[foxysarah92]

Verse 1
I have been looking right in front of my eyes
And the words I am seeing are playing a disguise
And I can’t know I can’t stop thinking
About this guy
Who I met shouldn’t have
And the words I say
Are telling goodbye
And they tell me to walk on
Like everything is fine
But I really don’t know what I should do
I am just a girl with a crush on you

Chorus
I am knocking right into my face baby
I am screaming and shouting cause its driving me crazy
And now that I shouldn’t have falled for a guy like you
And I know I shouldn’t have to
I don’t want to say that hurts inside
But every time I think I have to cry
I can’t stop thinking about the things that you do
I shouldn’t have fallen for you

Verse 2
Yes I might sound crazy but I am out of disguise
I shouldn’t need to act like everything’s fine
Because you screw my head up
One go at a time
And I really hope you drive on by
When you see there do you feel what I feel
Or am I am just girl without any heels
Do I need to know what life’s all about
To get into your heart
I’m just hanging out

Chorus
I am knocking right into my face baby
I am screaming and shouting cause its driving me crazy
And now that I shouldn’t have falled for a guy like you
And I know I shouldn’t have to
I don’t want to say that hurts inside
But every time I think I have to cry
I can’t stop thinking about the things that you do
I shouldn’t have fallen for you

Last Verse
But I am not gonna say no
I don’t want be home
On Friday and Saturday night
I just wanna hold you tight
But I know if it’s alright

Chorus
I am knocking right into my face baby
I am screaming and shouting cause its driving me crazy
And now that I shouldn’t have falled for a guy like you
And I know I shouldn’t have to
I don’t want to say that hurts inside
But every time I think I have to cry
I can’t stop thinking about the things that you do
I shouldn’t have fallen for you

Chorus
I am knocking right into my face baby
I am screaming and shouting cause its driving me crazy
And now that I shouldn’t have falled for a guy like you
And I know I shouldn’t have to
I don’t want to say that hurts inside
But every time I think I have to cry
I can’t stop thinking about the things that you do
I shouldn’t have fallen for you

(Song - Pretend to be nice TUNE)

[Novo]

0/10

Far to cheesy, you need to take up some lyric lessons from Mr Novo

[foxysarah92]

Thanks alot

[Lee.]

Thanks alot

:laugh3:
I think it's really good.. Better than some I've heard. My friend once wrote a whole song about being on the Titanic.. it sucked

[Novo]

Tear the lyrics up and throw them in the bin and start from scratch, come back with something better tomorrow

[Lee.]

Tear the lyrics up and throw them in the bin and start from scratch, come back with something better tomorrow

Lol.. that's harsh!! :nono:

[Harry!]

Dont listen to Andy it is a good song.

[foxysarah92]

Thanks wrote it from my heart and i am really proud of it x

[Novo]

Dont listen to Andy it is a good song.

All i ever do on this bloody forum is give the best advice and this is how you repay me :nono:

[Harry!]

All i ever do on this bloody forum is give the best advice and this is how you repay me :nono:

Because you ''advice'' isnt always good that's why.

[Stacey.]

I wonder who this is about. LOL.

[Lee.]

Foxy, can you put it to music?

[Novo]

Because you ''advice'' isnt always good that's why.

My advice is always honest and very right.. you would do well to follow in my footsteps

[Novo]

Foxy, can you put it to music?

Oh for god sakes... anything but that

[foxysarah92]

I wonder who this is about. LOL.

Haha ;) i have good news but yah i have got music to it the tune for the song is below x

[Harry!]

My advice is always honest and very right.. you would do well to follow in my footsteps

This song is good though a few tweeks here and there and it will be a perfect song. So that is a example of giving good advice not your ''advice''.

[Lee.]

Oh for god sakes... anything but that

It could be a catchy number!

[Novo]

This song is good though a few tweeks here and there and it will be a perfect song. So that is a example of giving good advice not your ''advice''.

you haven't heard the song yet, you have just read the lyrics and they are cheesy and terrible and it would make a very average song..

that is the an example of great advice

[foxysarah92]

=[ thanks that is from my heart

[Novo]

You need a heart transplant

[foxysarah92]

You know what grow up

[Novo]

:nono:

Next time i won't give my advice

[foxysarah92]

Are you a girl or a boy

[Novo]

A girl

[Harry!]

Are you a girl or a boy

He is a boy.

[foxysarah92]

enough said x

[Stacey.]

lol!

[Novo]

enough said?

[foxysarah92]

Men dont understand us woman

[Novo]

Oh dear...

your one of them

[foxysarah92]

I am girl shhh