TIBBOAKS (Episode 6 Posted!!)

['Conor]

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I decided to do a Hollyoaks version of TIBB, it will just have same sets as Hollyoaks would. I tried to include as much members as i good, and its only a laugh so dont take storylines too seriously :) and this is my 1st time doing this so go easy on me :nono:

THE CHARACTERS & SETS:

THE DOG IN THE POND:
Local Pub, with flat located above it.
(Niamh & Ben are married, Doogle & Niall are there children)
Ben(ukturtle) (landowner/bartender)
Niamh (landlady/barmaid)
Doogle (lives there)
Niall (lives there)
Vicky (barmaid)

THE LOFT:
Nightclub located in the village.
Novo (club owner)
Locke (club owner)
Mollie (barmaid)
Jords (barman)

CINERGY:
Spa, located in Village.
Caitlin (Ninastar)
Claudia (GypsyGoth)
Scott

PRICE SLICE:
Local newsagents/groceries
Kerry
Lewis

RELISH:
50's style diner.
Shaun
Boothy

HALLS OF RESIDENCE:
Dorms for students in college.
Joe (InOne)
Karl
Smithy
Reggie (bbfan1991)
Zippy

SCHOOL:
Local school
Staff:
Kate (SweetSophieFan)
Current students:
Doogle
Niall
Harry

Other residents:
Lee (Happyland)

Arriving Characters:
Eoin (Iceman)
Josy
Patrick



if anyone wants to be in it let me no,

and episdoe 1 wil be posted in a bit :)

[Jords]

-wants to be in it-

[Jords]

/vain

['Conor]

ehm anywhere you would like to work? or student?

[Shaun]

new my arse. :nono: -did this before renaming it Flash-

[Jords]

ehm anywhere you would like to work? or student?

Barman in The Loft :amazed:

[Jordan.]

Is Scotts job in Cinergy providing the 'extras'

['Conor]

EPISODE 1

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Note: episode 1 will be shorter than others cause i wanna see how you take it.

(Episode opens up with Vicky rushing in to the Dog)

Ben: Vicky your late again!
Vicky: Sorry, the que at Price Slice was taking forever, Kerry is so slow!
Ben: Yeah well you better not be late again, this place is too busy for slackers like you.
Niamh: Eh Ben, leave her would you, Vicky your amaze.
Ben: I'm sorry love (kisses Niamh) im poppin out for a bit i'll be back later.

(Kerry enters Cinergy)

Claudia: Kerry hello!
Kerry: Hey guys, oh Claudia i heard, you alright chick?
Claudia: Ugh Novo twat, cant stand him being with that SLAG.
Caitlin: Clauds, Mollie is actually nice once you get to no her..
Claudia: I don't give a damn, Novo was mine and that bitch took him away from me!
Scott: Oooft wouldnt mind a bit of Novo myself ;)
(all glare at Scott)
Scott: just saying.

(boothy calls around to Caitlins flat)

Caitlin: BABE (kisses)
Boothy: alright sweetcheeks :D
Caitlin: Been up to much?
Boothy: nah was just talking to Shaun..
Caitlin: oh i forgot.. hows he doing?
Boothy: not good.. Myself & MMI were trying to cheer him up at work today, but he was having none of it.
Caitlin: Kerry said Shaun tried to steal drink again from Price Slice, he lashed out at Smithy yesterday, hes gotten really bad..
Boothy: Hes my best friend, im really trying to get him to stop, but he wont listen.
Caitlin: Hes gonna get himself arrested if he doesnt cop on!!

(at the club)

Novo: Locke how many times do i have to say this? DO NOT GO INTO THE OFFICE WITHOUT MY PERMISSION!!
Locke: and what? cause god knows what could be in there? drugs? fake money?
Novo: Dont Push me! or else man
Locke: Nawwwh dont get angry Novo, it makes you look like your constipated. AND I WANT MY SHARE OF THE CASH
Novo: Alright, Alright.
(enter Mollie)
Mollie: HEY BAAABES
Novo: Hello gorgeous ;)
Mollie: Miss me?
Locke: No.
Mollie: Shut it 4 eyes, ANYWAYS, i was out in the town i bought these new heels for 60 quid BARGAIN, what ye tink?
Novo: ... there lovely!
Mollie: Im off to get my nails done at Cinergy.
Locke: Claudia would be pleased to no that.
Mollie: That trollop, works in a spa yet looks like she was thrown out of a hurricane (shakes head) LATERS
Locke: Novo, i no shes your burd, but she cant no ANYTHING about the money.
Novo: Dont worry im not planning on telling her.

(Shaun enters the dog)

Shaun: Vicky, Vicky, Vicky, ill have a pint love.
Vicky: Shaun no, not in your condition.
Shaun: and whats that supposed to mean??
Niall: Smell of booze..
Niamh: NIALL!!!
Shaun: I am going to burn t his place down if i dont get a drink NOW GIMME 1Vicky.
Ben: Shaun keep your voice down or am i going to-
Shaun: GOING TO WHAT? kick me out eh? id like to see you try
Ben: thats it your going!! (grabs Shauns arm)
Shaun: Get off me you twat (fight occurs between Ben & Shaun
Vicky: STOP IT!!!!
Niamh: Shaun just get out !!!
(Shaun takes a Swing for Ben, is dizzy from the alcohal, misses, accidently hits Niamh knocking her over, a gasp is heard in the pub, Shaun takes one look at Niamh and dashes out of the pub while Ben chases)

ROLL CREDITS

[Fetch The Bolt Cutters]

-likes the use of twat-

['Conor]

Is Scotts job in Cinergy providing the 'extras'

maybe ;)

[Ninastar]

miss me? no.
hahahaha

and omfg shaun lashed out at smithy. hahaha

[Ninastar]

(Shaun enters the dog)

WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU SHAUN?

[GypsyGoth]

(Shaun enters the dog)

WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU SHAUN?

:laugh3:

['Conor]

Barman in The Loft :amazed:

sure -adds-

[Shaun]

(Shaun enters the dog)

WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU SHAUN?

I'm a naughty girl with a.... BAD HABIT. BAD HABIT FOR DOGS. :bawling:

(if you don't get this):

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and btw: http://www.thisisbigbrother.com/forums/showthread.php?t=82354 :idc:

[Jords]

(Shaun enters the dog)

WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU SHAUN?

:laugh2:

[King Gizzard]

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['Conor]

Nate do you want a roll?

[King Gizzard]

I'm on a diet

['Conor]

I'm on a diet

role*

:laugh2:

[Locke.]

Not long left til I take the loft from Novo and kill Mollie

[joeysteele]

I like your idea 'Conor, good one,

[T*]

I want to be in a part please :)

[Visage]

Ha ha that was great :laugh:

[Benjamin]

Shaun! You bastard! You hit my wife before I got a chance to!. :bored:

[DrunkerThanMoses]

Did I die or something? I dont see my name here?

Fine

-kills conor-

Enjoy making your soap now bitch

[Niamh.]

hahahaha, you can call me Mrs. Turtle from now on then

[bbfan1991]

I wanted to be in The Loft/Chez Chez to be like Brendan Brady:bawling:.

Which female is going to be Clare Devine?:devil:

[MeMyselfAndI]

:laugh3:

['Conor]

I wanted to be in The Loft/Chez Chez to be like Brendan Brady:bawling:.

Which female is going to be Clare Devine?:devil:

i havent thought about any villains yet :joker:

but Locke & Novo are kinda like Brendan & Warren while Mollie is like Mitzeee :joker:

['Conor]

Did I die or something? I dont see my name here?

Fine

-kills conor-

Enjoy making your soap now bitch

if you want to be in it ill think of a character for you :joker:

[Ramsay]

hahaha nice :joker:

['Conor]

hahaha nice :joker:

i no you weren't in the 1st episode, but i cant fit everyone in 1, you will be in it

[Ramsay]

i no you weren't in the 1st episode, but i cant fit everyone in 1, you will be in it

no its cool im just happy im in it haha :)

[Lee.]

:hmph:

['Conor]

:hmph:

omg Lee ill put you in it, i need more girls

[Lee.]

Haha... thanks Conor :D

['Conor]

any place you would like to work?

[Locke.]

the brothel

['Conor]

the brothel

LOL, nah Lee is going to be Vickys unemployed sister

[InOne]

:joker: Nice one

['Conor]

EPISODE 2

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(opens up in the morning in The Dog)

Vicky: Niamh are you sure your alright?
Niamh: YES! i'm fine he didn't even hit me that hard
Ben: If i see that drunken mess in the village, hes a dead man.
Niamh: Promise you won't do something you will regret?
Niall: If Dad doesn't do something i will!
Doogle: And what are you gonna do exactly?
Niamh: And i certainally dont want you 2 getting involved, now off to school.
Ben: One things for sure he's barred from here.

(Smithy enters Price Slice)


Lewis: Good Morning Smithy :)
Smithy: Hey Lew, just the paper thanks, did you hear what went down in the dog last night?
Lewis: No? spill
Smithy: Shaun (aka the drunken mess) lashed out at Ben and hit Niamh by mistake
Lewis: omg! that chap needs help, 1st you now Niamh..
Smithy: Yeah i no and to think i used to be good mates with him -sighs-
(enter Mollie)
Mollie: Hello boys ;)
Both:.. Mollie.
Mollie: Any goss for me?
Smithy: Nope not a single thing
Mollie: Hmm.. boring village, no goss, well unless i create it ahaw :)
Smithy: Yep, anyway Lew im out and ill talk 2 u later!

(round at Caitlins flat)

Claudia: She isn't even that pretty. Behind the shovels of makeup.
Caitlin: Clauds, can we stop the bitchfest about Mollie for at least 10 mins?
Claudia: Fine -_-
Boothy: Shouldn't you 2 be at work?
Caitlin: Its slow this morning, so Scott is holding fort
Boothy: Wait what Scott! The place will be on fire in no time
Claudia: Scott is a very responsible human being.
(everyone bursts out laughing)
Caitlin: Anyway babes me and Clauds goin pop round to Relish to get something to eat, and then were going on to work so ill see you later?
Boothy: Alright luv have fun.

(halls of residence)

Joe: Karl will you hurry the hell up in the bathroom! I'm going to be late for class, don't bother trying to make yourself look nice, ive seen you enough times to know your hopeless.
Karl: Oi oi, calm down
Joe: Sorry i just didn't get much sleep last night!
Karl: Wheeey Joe & Reggie getting it on ;)
Joe: Shut up:
(enter Zippy)
Zippy: Where is Reggie btw?
Karl: The little pettle was having back pains so he went to get a massage in Cinergy
Zippy: Nawwh bless :)

(at Cinergy)

Scott: Hello, my name is Scott, welcome to Cinergy, how may thou help you.
Reggie:... Scott why are you reading from a script?
Scott: Ugh im sorry, dumb & dumber left me to hold fort so im trying to be professional, what can i do for you?
Reggie: Caitlin & Claudia arnt here? I was hoping for a massage..
Scott: MASSAGE :O omg ! step this way Mr. Regerson..
Reggier.. erm.. okay?
(Reggie walks into the massage room while Scott does a little happy dance behind him)

(later that night at The Loft)

Karl: Its good to get away from that place for a bit init
Joe: I no, im ready to stab Zippy one of these days, theres only so many times i can hear Madonnas Immaculate Collection
Jords: Alright lads, what can i get you?
Karl: Ugh Jordy, we were hoping the lovely Mollie was working ;)
Jords: Shut it, i do all the work around here, shes just the airhead banging the owner
Karl: Novo is bad news, its good to keep on the good side of him, Locke isn't as bad but still.
(Novo enters)
Novo: Joe can i talk to you for a sec?
Joe: Sure
(Novo & Joe enter his office)
Novo: OKay heres your share of the money, thats for getting me the drugs
Joe: Novo i dont think i can do this for much longer..
(Novo presses Joe against the wall)
Novo: You will get me drugs whenever i ask you 2!!
(Novo & Joe leave office into the main club)
Novo: Good to know your mother was feeling better Joey!
Joe: Yeah..
Karl: Wait what? you mom was sick?
Joe: Yeah just a, just a cold, yeah can we can head home now?
Karl: .. Yeah sure man of course?
Karl & Joe leave the club and Joe looks back to see Novo staring at him from a distance)

(at Cinergy)
Claudia: Well Reggie, how was your massage?
Scott: Did you like it? you have a very nice body..
Reggie: ha.. ehm yeah the massage was lovely Scott
Scott: Wonderfull :D
(exit Scott)
Caitlin: Well?
Reggie: I feel violated
(Caitlin & Claudia laugh)
Claudia: Awh Reggie (hugs)

(In the dog)

Kerry: Just a brandy Vicky thanks
Vicky: Right away love
Kerry: So any sign of Shaun?
Vicky: Nah hes just vanished, hopefully he has left town for a while to sober it up.
Kerry: He used to be such a nice lad, and i no what he did was wrong but i hope he is ok, and sure Vicky didn't you use to date Shaun?
Vicky: Yeah like a million years ago !
Kerry: Well hopefully he turns up soon..
Vicky: Im sure Ben will be pleased


ROLL CREDITS

[T*]

Please may I be in it?
:)

['Conor]

yeah i will put you in it :) but you wont be in the next episode or 2

[Smithy]

Shaun you're such a ****ing mess :idc:

it's good conor :D

[Maia]

These are brilliant :laugh2:

Claudia :suspect:

[Doogle]

LOL.

This is really good. Thanks for including me btw :amazed:

[GypsyGoth]

These are brilliant :laugh2:

Claudia :suspect:

:suspect:

:laugh:


Well written Conor :love:

['Conor]

hehe thanks :)

[Lewis.]

Nice one mate! :thumbs:

['Conor]

you should all post potential storylines i could do,

after maybe 7 or 8 episodes

someone is gonna be murdered

and its going to be whodunnit

[Harry!]

Very good Conor :)

['Conor]

Harry dw gurl, your goin have speaking lines soon

[InOne]

Wait, are you making me like Doug :suspect:

['Conor]

Wait, are you making me like Doug :suspect:

maybe.. but your cool :D

[Niall]

Conor I'm loving these. :lovedup:

[Vicky.]

*Is jealous of niamh*

[Fetch The Bolt Cutters]

niall wants to have an incestuous relationship with ben, his own father :yuk:

[Niall]

niall wants to have an incestuous relationship with ben, his own father :yuk:

I said that in jest on TC and for the record you said you would shag Ben if he was your Dad, too. :hmph:

[Jords]

I loved it Conor :D

['Conor]

I loved it Conor :D

you had lines :hugesmile:

[Kerry]

Brilliant Conor :D

['Conor]

EPISODE 3

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(halls of residence)

Zippy: I need a job..
Smithy: More importantly you need a life.
Zippy: Pfft says you, WAAAH MY FRIEND SHAUN ATTACKED ME now i'm going to moan about it to helpless shopkeepers
Smithy: Hey... Lewis didn't mind..
Joe: Will you 2 just shut up!!! IM NOT IN THE MOOD
Zippy: Woooaaah, calm down there Sally
(exit Joe)
Smithy: Whats his problem?
Karl: Hmm somethings up guys, something fishy went down in The Loft last night with Joe & Novo.
Smithy: Ooh Spill!
Karl: Nah i'll talk to Joe first about it.
Zippy: Pfft, was hoping for goss hmph!
Smithy: GET A LIFE.

(Kerrys Flat)

Kerry: Lee hurry up in the shower!! I'm going to be late for my shift at Price Slice.
(Lee rushes out of bathroom in towel)
Lee: Don't worry im out!
Kerry: Ugh im seriously considering getting rid of you!
Lee: And what would you do without your favourite sister?
Kerry: Live life in peace.
Kerry: More like my lazy unemployed sister!
Lee: Pfft, im too good for jobs.
Kerry: You got fired from McDonalds.
Lee: OI! not funny
Kerry: Yeah well i cant be the only one making the money around here, you need to find yourself a job!
Lee: Ugh fine, i'll go round to Cinergy, see if theres hopping about.

(tibboaks village)

(Boothy & Caitlin are walking into the village after being in town)

Caitlin: Thank you for taking me out for breakfast babe :)
Boothy: Something to celebrate our 6 month anniversary!
Caitlin: Are you all right babe, you seem a bit off?
Boothy: I'm just worried about Shaun.. he didn't come home last night.
Caitlin: Do you think something bad might have happened to him?
Boothy: I bloody well hope not, he was pretty much fighting with everyone and stormed out of town, hopefully hes gone to stay at his mums.
Caitlin: Yeah.. lets hope so.
(Mollie walks over)
Mollie: Hello love burds :)
Caitlin: Hey Mol, been up 2 much?
Mollie: Not really, just going to get a massage, it really is a pain being this beautiful (laughs loudly) Anyways, i shall talk 2 u later?
Boothy: Bye..

(Mollie enters Cinergy)

Mollie: Scott love how you been!
Scott: Me, well i woke up this morning, with a blamin headache, next ting you no the dog is licking my ear, AND THEN!!
Mollie: Scott.. the answer i was looking for was fine.
Scott: Oh..
Mollie: Massage please :)
Scott: Sure just hol- (Scott grins) you no what, i dont do massages actually, just hold on a sec.
(scott goes into the back of the spa to find Claudia)
Scott: Claudia, me stomachs been at me all day i have to go home
Claudia: Awh of course luv, i hope you feel better
Scott: k thanks bye, your massage client is waiting :D
(scott rushes out of Cinery grinning)
Claudia: Okay, who do we have he-
Mollie: Claudia.
Claudia: Mollie, what a pleasant suprise -_-

(Jords is shopping in Price Slice)

Kerry: Jords how nice to see you :)
Jords: Kerry :) h ow are you
Kerry: Not good, been under so much pressure money wise, im trying to get my illegitamite sister to get a job, theres no jobs going at The Loft is there?
Jords: Nah sorry love
(Lee rushes in all happy)
Lee: OMG KERRY!! I have some great news!!
Kerry: Your leaving!
Lee: No. I GOT A JOB!
Kerry: OMG REALLY!! AS WHAT!
Lee: a waitress in Relish!!
Jords: Well done Lee im proud of you girl :)
Kerry: Are you sure your going to be able for it?
Lee: Sister please, how hard can it be to take someones order?
Kerry: Its not just th-
Lee: ANYWAYS im gonna go luv ya:)
(exit Lee)
Jords: Thats great isn't it?
Kerry: Hmm.. give it a week and she will be unemployed again :)

(halls of residence)

Joe (on phone): Alright mum, enjoy your skiing in Austria see you soon :)
Karl: ooh was that your mum?
Joe: Yeah shes having a great time on holidays?
Karl: Hmm really i thought Novo said she was really sick? after all that was what you 2 were talking about in the office wasnt it?
Joe: Yeah, yeah she was sick, she- shes better now
Karl: Hmm how convienient.
Karl: Joe mate, if anything ANYTHING in the world was bothering you, you would tell me right?
Joe: Yeah of course mate..
Karl: Alright..

(Cinergy)
(Claudia is giving Mollie a back massage)

Mollie: Well this is awkward..
Claudia: Shut up and be quiet.
Mollie: Awh my backs in bits, Novo is wild in bed, sure you wouldnt no what im talking about, wait actually LOL you would!
Claudia: Right thats it, he was mine first before you! little slag! had to take him away from me!!
Mollie: Awh babe, thats what you think? that i took Novo away from you? honey please, as if he was going to stay with you for much longer, i mean look at you.
Claudia: And what thats supposed to mean.
Mollie: Lets just say, a few less trips to the sweet section in Price Slice might do you some good.
(Claudia slaps Mollie across the face)
Mollie: Bitch! your going to pray you didnt do that
(Mollie grabs Claudia by the hair and punches her in the stomach, Claudia then trips Mollie up and kicks her in the back, meanwhile Reggie is walking home after college and hears screams coming from Cinergy)
(running in)
Reggie: OI OI!! STOP IT THE PAIR OF YA!!!
(Reggie pulls the 2 girls apart)
Claudia: That slag started it!!
Reggie: I don't care who started it, its not right!
(Scott comes rushing in to Cinergy)
Scott: DAMN I MISSED THE FIGHT
(everyone glares at Scott)
Scott: I mean oh stomach cramps ow ow..

(Boothy & Caitlin are walking back from the cinema to Caitlins flat at night)

Boothy: I had an amazing night tonight babe :)
Caitlin: Awh me too hun, was real go- (suddenly Caitlin screams)
Boothy: WHAT! WHAT IS IT!
Caitlin: Theres a body, a body in the ditch over there!
Boothy: What :O (Boothy goes to check)
Caitlin: Booth be carefull!!
(Boothy takes one look at the body in the ditch and steps back.. looking horrified)
Caitlin: wHAT, what is it!!
Boothy: Its... its shaun!

ROLL CREDITS

[Ninastar]

oh noes! -sobs over shaun-

['Conor]

oh noes! -sobs over shaun-

never said he was dead..

[joeysteele]

Really good 'Conor.

[GypsyGoth]

:worship:

[Smithy]

Claudia: Shut up and be quiet. :laugh2: claudia :nono:

and ia, zippy you need a life :idc:

It's good conor :D

[Niall]

:love:

[Vicky.]

Pfft. Not even featured in that one :hmph:

['Conor]

Pfft. Not even featured in that one :hmph:

:shocked:

i cant feature everyone in 1 episode

:bawling:

[Harry!]

Where's mah lines Conor?

Other then that I like it alot!

['Conor]

Where's mah lines Conor?

Other then that I like it alot!

i think i'll introduce the school characters tomorrow :)

[Benjamin]

Have I killed Shaun? :suspect:

[Niamh.]

Have I killed Shaun? :suspect:

my hero :lovedup:

['Conor]

i never said Shaun was dead :)

[Kate!]

Can I be a teacher at Hollyoaks High.LOL.

[Kate!]

And I could be secretly connected to someone in the village already, that's why I took the job??

['Conor]

Yeah sure, i forgot to put in teachers LMAO

[Lee.]

I got a job! :amazed:

['Conor]

i think ill do the next episode tomoz :D

[Jords]

I got a job! :amazed:

So proud of you gurl! x

[Lee.]

So proud of you gurl! x

Aw thanks Jords... me too! :D

[Patrick]

Quite shocked at how many useless members are involved and I'm not.

['Conor]

omfg paddy i forgot about you, im going to introduce a new family shortly, so you will be a part of that

[joeysteele]

i think ill do the next episode tomoz :D

Looking forward to it 'Conor,really enjoying them.

[Kate!]

Conor, this is one of my favourite threads atm, I always look for it :) It's really good.

[Fetch The Bolt Cutters]

Quite shocked at how many useless members are involved and I'm not.

:joker:

['Conor]

EPISODE 4

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(episode continues on from Boothy finding Shauns body)


Boothy: Oh my god!! What do i do!!
Caitlin: Is he dead?
Boothy: I dont know? !!
Caitlin: Quick call the police and an ambulance!

(at Cinergy)

Reggie: Apologise to each other! Now.
(Claudia and Mollie both glare at each other)
Mollie: Well you first?
Claudia: Uh uh! you first!
Mollie: Hell no i-
Reggie: JUST SAY IT
Mollie: Ugh okay.. im sorry!
Claudia: Me 2 i guess
Reggie: Phew, not that thats sett-
(the noise of a police squad car and an ambulance is heard arriving outside, Reggie, Claudia & Mollie go outside)

Claudia: Caitlin whats going on!
Caitlin: We found Shauns body in a ditch, we dont know if hes alive or not!
Reggie: oh no! i hope hes alright
(Shauns body is taken on a stretcher into the ambulance)
Caitlin: Boothy go with him!
Boothy: You think i should?
Caitin: Yes your his best friend, ill be fine! Go!
(Boothy gets into the ambulance and drives off)
Mollie:... Wow.. EastEnders or what :O


(next morning)

(in the flat above the pub, Niamh is dancing around her living area listening to Madonna)
Niamh: Like a Virgin!! Touched for the very first tiiime!
(she turns around to see Niall & Doogle staring at her)
Niall: Mum.. just no?
Niamh: Ahem ye, shouldnt you 2 be at school?
Doogle: Day off :) thought we would go out for a bit!
Niamh: Oh well then enjoy yourselves.
(Exit Niall & Doogle, enter Ben)
Niamh: Hello my beautiful husband (kisses)
Ben: Did you hear about Shaun?
Niamh: No i didnt? what happened
Ben: Boothy found him in a ditch last night passed out.
Niamh: Oh sweet lord is he alright?
Ben: Hes still unconcious Boothy is gone in with him
Niamh: I know what he did was wrong, but i wouldnt wish this on anyone.


(Smithy & Zippy are talking to Kerry in Price Slice)

Zippy: Maybe he was murdered.
Smithy: ZIPPY :O
Zippy: Stranger things have happened! Id say Ben did it
Kerry: Now now, dont go jumping to conclusions accusing people like that!
(enter Kate)
Kerry: Hello and what can i do for you.
Kate: Hi i'm Kate, im new to the area and just thought id drop by
Zippy: Nice 2 meet you :)
Kate: Yeah i just got a job as a teaching assistant in Hollyoaks School :)
Smithy: When do you start?
Kate: Tomorrow, i'm a bit nervous
Kerry: I'm sure you will be fine :)

(at Caitlins flat)

Caitlin: I really hope hes okay
Claudia: Yeah me 2!
Scott: Same here, he was so hot :O
Claudia: Any word from Boothy?
Caitlin: Yeah but theres no change..


(at The Loft)

Novo: Jordy can you work tonight?
Jords: I told you already that i have plans tonight?
Novo: Well cancel them, your working.
Jords: WHAT! why can't Mollie work?
Novo: Do you want to get fired?
Jords: .. No
Novo: Then do as your told! One sec i need to make a phonecall
(Novo goes into this office and rings Joe, but Joe never answers)

(at the halls)

Karl: That phone keeps ringing! are you ever going to answer it!
Joe: Its fine just leave it!
Karl: Seriously mate are you alright? you have been acting really weird lately
Joe: I'm fine just leave me alone
(Joe runs into the bathroom takes out a loud of cocaine emptys it into the toilet and flushes it)

(at hospital)

Doctor: It seems your friend has had an overdose from extensive alcohal intake, we had to pump his stomach, but im sure he will be fine
Boothy: When do you think he will wake up?
Doctor: Anytime now (exit doctor)
Boothy: Its all my fault, im such a bad friend, i should have helped you when i new you werent well, its all my fault!
(Shaun slowly opens his eyes)
Shaun: Boi.. i really messed up this time didnt i!
(Boothy smiles and gives Shaun a hug)

ROLL CREDITS

[Smithy]

who is kate :suspect:

['Conor]

who is kate :suspect:

sweetsophiefan

[Benjamin]

Shauns alive. :bored:

(not for long...)

['Conor]

Shauns alive. :bored:

(not for long...)

:laugh:

[T*]

Where am I Conor :suspect:

[Locke.]

Killed off screen hopefully

[Smithy]

:joker:

['Conor]

hehe

[CharlieO]

I like this.

['Conor]

really? thank you :)

[Doogle]

:love::love::love:

[Niall]

:lovedup:

['Conor]

y'all liking it..?

[Doogle]

I NEED MORE -dies-

['Conor]

Doogle i dont really know what to do with you and Niall in school nd stuff, wanna give me some storyline ideas?

[Lee.]

When's the next episode Conor?

['Conor]

hmm tonight maybe?

[Lee.]

Yay!

[joeysteele]

y'all liking it..?

Absolutely, it's really good.

[Doogle]

Doogle i dont really know what to do with you and Niall in school nd stuff, wanna give me some storyline ideas?

:laugh2: That made me laugh but idk why

Give us some realistic storylines about bullying, smoking, pressure. But actually add some twist to make it interesting? That's all I can give you sorry :p

['Conor]

so ill introduce Harry who bullies you

[Benjamin]

One of them should be a glue sniffer or get addicted to drugs from the local drug baron/dealer Stu. :evilgrin:

['Conor]

One of them should be a glue sniffer or get addicted to drugs from the local drug baron/dealer Stu. :evilgrin:

i like it :shocked:

-writes in notebook-

[Chuck]

One of them should be a glue sniffer or get addicted to drugs from the local drug baron/dealer Stu. :evilgrin:

That sounds like my kind of character :evilgrin:

['Conor]

sorry i didnt post an episode last night like i said i would, i was too busy you know having a life

[Lee.]

Apology accepted... we'll allow you a life (this time) :)

['Conor]

i'll do one today i pwwwwomise :)

[Doogle]

so ill introduce Harry who bullies you
Makes sense. But you should give him some interesting backstory which explains why he's like he is. Bonus points if it includes Madonna.

[Niall]

I wanna be the druggie.

[Doogle]

Surprising :bored:

[Benjamin]

I wanna be the druggie.

Dirty little glue sniffer. :bored:

[Doogle]

I hope my character just leaves you on the street :bored:

jk I want to help you. :amazed:

['Conor]

should doogle & niall be twins or one older?

[Doogle]

Niall should be older because he's older

[Niall]

Surprising :bored:

:hmph:

Dirty little glue sniffer. :bored:

Oh go smoke a joint. :hmph:

[Niall]

Niall should be older because he's older

.

[Doogle]

But I'm obviously the superior sibling.

[Niall]

K and pigs fly too don't they?

[Doogle]

It's a soap, probably.

Anyway you turned to drugs so shows how good a brother you are. :hmph:

['Conor]

omgz i said id do one yesterday, im soz :bawling:

i promise Episode 5 will be up at some time today!

[joeysteele]

We are eagerly awaiting the next episode 'Conor. Well done so far though.

['Conor]

nawwh Joey you always make me blush :D

['Conor]

EPISODE 5:

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(in the village, Caitlin runs up to Claudia)

Caitlin: Hey Clauds, i have great news!
Claudia: MOLLIES DEAD!!!!
Caitlin: No.. Shauns awake!
Claudia: Awh thats great news! When will he be let out?
Caitlin: Hmm Boothy didn't say
Claudia: Hopefully now Shaun will get some professional help.

(Kerrys flat)

Kerrry: Um Lee arn't you supposed to be at work?
Lee: Kerry dont be silly its only 6am !
Kerry: No.. its 9am your clock is upside down..
(Lee jumps out of her bed)
Lee: I'm late!! Oh no, my first day and all, i cant be late!!
Kerry: Then you better get your skates on!
(Lee dresses quickly and rushes out the door and passes Vicky)
Vicky: Why is she in such a hurry?
Kerry: Its her 1st day in Relish
Vicky: Well, that should be interesting!
Kerry: Any news from Shaun?
Vicky: Yeah hes awake so i've heard
Kerry: Awh thats great.


(halls of residence)

Zippy: Is Chlamydia a species of Chicken?
Smithy: No..
(Enter Karl)
Karl: Hey guys!
Smithy: Karl, rescue me.
Karl: hehe wheres Joe?
Zippy: He went out? he said he was going to meet you?
Karl: Did he now?

(Novo is waiting in a alley at the back of The Loft, Joe enters)

Novo: Have you got my money?
Joe: Here (Joe hands Novo a bag of cash)
Novo: Nawwh good boy (pats Joe on the cheek)
Joe: Thats it im done Novo, im not selling drugs for you anymore
Novo: It will only be for a little while longer, i promise, HE only wants a bit more.
Joe: Whos he?
Novo: My supplier you twat!
Joe: Whos your supplier!
(Novo hits Joe)
Novo: Now Joey boy you no i get angry when you ask too much questions!
(Joe then walks off, Novo stands there smiling, while Locke stares at him from a distance)

(Novo enters The Loft with the bag of money to put it in the safe, Locke appears)

Locke: Whats that?
Novo: Oh nothing..
(Locke grabs bag off Novo)
Locke: Ah money is it? and where did you get this from?
Novo: Give it back Locke
Locke: Is this drug money!!
Novo: So what if it is?
Locke: NOVO! You ******, do you know what could happen 2 you and my club knowing there is drug money in it
Novo: And since when is it your club? I own 50%!
Locke: If that money isn't gone by the end of the week there will be trouble

(the school yard)
(Niall is walking to class, when Harry, a bully, bashes into Niall on purpose)

Niall: Hey watch it!
Harry: Ooh what are you going to do about it!
Niall: I'll tell!!
Harry: Oh no im so scared
A(enter new teacher Kate)
Kate: Well you should be Harold.
(Harry runs away)
Kate: Are you ok ?
Niall: Yeah he just annoys me!
Kate: You know, if you have any problems come talk 2 me
Niall: Thanks Miss

(Lee enters Price Slice)

Kerry: Lee how was your 1st day!!
Lee: Great.. (Lee looks around shop)
Kerry: Hmm your not supposed to be back for another 2 hours?
Lee: Oh yeah i got confused i'm supposed to be out now..
Kerry: Lee.. is there something your not telling me?
Lee: I got fired okay!!
Kerry: Oh my sweet christ! Are you actually you serious, you stupid stupid girl what on earth did you do!
Lee: I dont wan to talk about it.

(The Dog, Niall returns home from school)

Niamh: Hiya love how was your day :)
Niall:.. Fine (Niall goes up to the flat)
Ben: Is he alright?
Niamh: erm yup i think so
Ben: Anyways Shauns awake..
Niamh: Oh thats good i guess..
Ben: hmm..

(the hopsital)

Doctor: Well Shaun it looks like you can go home, but take it easy!
Shaun: Thank you doctor
Boothy: Thats great news!
Shaun: But.. im not coming home.
Boothy: WHAT! you have to come home!
Shaun: I will eventually.. but ive decided to go stay somewhere where i can get professional help!
Boothy: I'm going to miss you, but i think thats a great idea!

ROLL CREDITS

[Benjamin]

Who is the supplier? I bet it's the same person who is making my wife a prostitute. :suspect:

['Conor]

Who is the supplier? I bet it's the same person who is making my wife a prostitute. :suspect:

time will tell ;)

[joeysteele]

Really good 'Conor, don't blush either, you are entertaining us and it's good too, you deserve the support and praise.
It's clear people on here are really looking forward to the episodes.

['Conor]

i have big storylines planned :D

['Conor]

:colour:

[Harry!]

I'm a bully:hmph:.

These are still great though, well done Conor!

[Jarrod]

-Waits for Big Entrance ;)- Aha Joke xD Anyway Great Again :)

['Conor]

i might do Ep 6 tonight..

[Doogle]

Caitlin: Hey Clauds, i have great news!
Claudia: MOLLIES DEAD!!!!

:laugh3: :love:

[joeysteele]

Watching Hollyoaks tonight,I found myself thinking of this thread,episode 6 must be about due 'Conor,(we are really enjoying this series of yours),hope it comes soon.

[Firewire]

add me in xoxo

['Conor]

omgz ill totally do ep 6 soon, i keep forgetting :bawling:

[joeysteele]

omgz ill totally do ep 6 soon, i keep forgetting :bawling:

You are a proficient writer,good writers take time to make sure the episodes are right and entertaining.

['Conor]

EPISODE 6

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(Caitlins flat)

Caitlin: So wheres Shaun now?
Boothy: Hes gone to get some professional help, so he will be gone for a while
Caitlin: Well at least its a start, ok well i'm off to work cya later hun (kisses)

(in Price Slice)

Zippy: Come on Lewis your my friend!
Lewis: I'm sorry but there are no more jobs available here!
Zippy: Ugh what am i gonna do!
Lewis: Cinergy?
Zippy: None
Lewis: Loft?
Zippy: None
Lewis: Relish?
Zippy: Eww..
Lewis: The Dog?
Zippys: Omg! i'll be right back!
(exit Zippy enter Mollie)
Mollie: Hello Liam!!!
Lewis: Its Lewis..
Mollie: Yeah, have you seen Novo today? he seems to have done a runner from me
Lewis: I wonder why..
Mollie: Sorry what was that?
Lewis: Nothing, no i haven't seen Novo today.
Mollie: Useless.

(Novo is meeting his supplier, his drug dealer in a lane)

Drug Dealer: Have you got my money?
Novo: I'm sorry i don't have it yet, the guy who sells the drugs is ehm sick but he will sell them as soon as he can!
(Drug Dealer grabs novo by his neck)
Drug Dealer: If you don't bring me my money, your a dead man.
Novo: Yes i no, i no i promise i'll get it.

(in school Niall goes into the boys bathroom and sees Harry smoking)

Harry: Well well well, look who it is
Niall: You do no your going to get in loads of trouble for smoking in here!
Harry: Nobodys gonna no? Will they!
Niall: ..
Harry: WILL THEY!
Niall: No, no they wont!
Harry:.. Here have a puff
Niall: No thank you
Harry: Go on!
Niall: No i don't want to!
Harry: Awh lil chicken
Niall: I'm not a chicken!
Harry: Then smoke it!
(Niall quickly takes a smoke and instantly starts coughing!)
Harry: Bahahaha what a loser!

(Reggie enters Cinergy)

Reggie: Hello all!
Claudia: Hey Reggie
Scott: Omg Reggie! you you look h-hhealthy!
Reggie: Why thank you..
Scott: Anything we well me can do for you?
Reggie: I wouldn't mind a massage off the beautiful Claudia ;)
Claudia: Omg me beautiful!!!
Scott: Yes, HER beautiful? wut.
Claudia: Step right this way ! :)
(Reggie & Claudia go into a massage room)
Scott: Pfft beautiful, as if.

(Niall returns home from school and enters the Pub)

Vicky: Hello Niall good day?
(Niall walks past and ignores Vicky)
Vicky: hmph
Doogle: Whats that smell? it smells like smoke?
Niall: Its nothing!
Doogle: Alright Jeez..
(Niall goes up stairs and Zippy enters the pub)
Vicky: Zippsters how are ya :D
Zippy: Hi gurl, is there any jobs running do you no?
Vicky: hmm sorry dude i dont no im not the one to ask, you will have to ask Ben cause Niamhs out.
Zippy: Ben?
Vicky: Yep.
Zippy: But ben scuurs me :(
Vicky: Oh man up!
(Zippy walks over to Ben cleaning a table)
Zippy: Hi Ben!
Ben: Zippy..
(Ben continues to clean the tables)
Zippy: Your looking rather smashing today (giggles)
Ben: Excuse me?
Zippy: *Coughs* ehm yeah is there any jobs going by any chance?
Ben: For you, no.
Zippy: Awh Benji please i really need the money!
Ben: Ugh fine.. you start tomorrow!
Zippy: OMG YAY!!! (Zippy goes to give Ben a hug)
Ben: Don't.

(Halls of residence)

(doorbell rings its Novo)
Smithy: Novo.. what a pleasant suprise
Novo: Hey is Joe here? its really important!
Smithy: JOOOOOOE!! door
(exit Smithy, enter Joe)
Joe: Oh, its you
Novo: Joe i really need your help!
Joe: Novo i told you im not selling drugs for you anymore!
Novo: please man or we will both be in trouble!
Joe: NO! do it yourself (Joe closes door in Novos face and Novo punches the door in anger)

(Cinergy)

Reggie: Wow Clauds, what a great massage!
Claudia: Why thank you :D
Reggie: Your great with your hands!
Scott: Pfft im better.
(Reggie and Claudia both glare at Scott)
Claudia: Your very welcome Reggie, ill see you soon
Reggie: Yes you will, very soon indeed, how about you see me tomorrow in Relish lets say half 7?
Claudia: omg ! of course yeah!
(Reggie winks at Claudia and exits)
Claudia: (jumping up and down) OMG SCOTT!! did you hear that!!! Reggie just ask-
Scott: Yes i heard!!
Claudia..

(night time, Novo is walking through the village when his phone rings)

Novo: Hello?
Drug Dealer: Do you have my money.
Novo: No..
Drug Dealer: You no what im not gonna kill you.
Novo: Really!!
Drug Dealer: I'm going to make you suffer.
Novo: Whats that supposed to mean?
Drug Dealer: You will find out soon enough.

(Mollie is alone in her and Novos flat, she is flicking through the the tv channels when she hears a noise)
Mollie: Novo? is that you
(no reply, Mollie stands up and looks around, then suddenly the lights go out)
Mollie: Novo stop it this isn't funny!!
(no reply)
Mollie: You no im afraid of the dark!!
(suddenly a hooded figure approaches Mollie from behind and grabs her neck and starts to strangle her, Mollie struggles and tries to scream and fight back but its no use, he squeezes harder and Mollie suddenly stops, he drops her motionless body on the floor and dashes out the backdoor)

ROLL CREDITS

[Kate!]

Another great episode Conor :) Love your cliffhanger. Mollie :(

['Conor]

why thank you :)

[joeysteele]

Really good.

[Smithy]

-would totally do that-


-doesn't think mollie is dead either :suspect:-

['Conor]

-would totally do that-


-doesn't think mollie is dead either :suspect:-

;)

[joeysteele]

I actually talk about tibboaks to some student friends,a few of them think it's something I must listen to on the radio and they keep trying to find it.

I will have to put them right eventually or maybe after episode 10,if they haven't given up by then.

['Conor]

omg really :shocked:

[Doogle]

LOL I told my friend about this.

He said "people have too much free time" and I was like ":nono: read it!" and he said it was good, from what he understood (I don't know how he understood any of it really. I reckon he lurks the site :suspect: )

[joeysteele]

omg really :shocked:

Yes, I go an about these characters and what's happening and some are really interested.
:joker::joker:

['Conor]

omg, i feel like, proud

[joeysteele]

omg, i feel like, proud

You should feel proud, it's all your own work, you planned and present it well, imagine if it was series on TV, it would be as good as some of the things in current soaps.

A fair few people on here that know about it, never criticise it, they are just always ready and waiting for the next episode. Well done,really.

[Harry!]

Very good Conor :)

[Maia]

This is brilliant, I had a feeling I'd get killed though :laugh2:

['Conor]

This is brilliant, I had a feeling I'd get killed though :laugh2:

no one said you were dead :suspect:

[Harry!]

In real life I would NEVER smoke lol

['Conor]

i no Harry it has nothing to do with the members

[CharlieO]

In real life I would NEVER smoke lol

You also said you would NEVER join fb. I see a trend here Harry.

[Harry!]

i no Harry it has nothing to do with the members

I was just jestering :laugh:.

You also said you would NEVER join fb. I see a trend here Harry.

Come on smoking is far worse then a website.

[Doogle]

My character is far too quiet to be like me in reality. Maybe Conor is purposefully making us opposite to our characters

[bbfan1991]

Conor this is great:D, you should consider doing a TIBBOAKS Later but have a bit of time to think of ideas first.

['Conor]

omg i shud shouldnt i !

[bbfan1991]

omg i shud shouldnt i !

Yes creatively you can think of lots of ideas, you can choose any issue e.g. the usual big death in HO Later by killing off one of us (:shocked:) or character based plots.

['Conor]

i'd feel bad killing off someone

[bbfan1991]

i'd feel bad killing off someone

True but it would be part of the plot and what way to go out, with a bang;).

['Conor]

got a really big and shocking storyline planned ;)

[joeysteele]

got a really big and shocking storyline planned ;)

That's just got us even more on the edge of our seats.hope the next episode is soon.

You are doing great 'Conor, it's really good.

[joeysteele]

Just a gentle reminder 'Conor, any idea when episode 7 is due to be aired?

['Conor]

erm i dno :bawling:

i keep forgetting

[joeysteele]

erm i dno :bawling:

i keep forgetting

No worries, looking forward to the next one though.

[Kate!]

i'd feel bad killing off someone

You can kill me off if you like Conor, intrigue and murder at Holloyoaks High.

Eagerly awaiting the next episode, I so love this series :D