Big Brother - Behind the Scenes Fiction PART 2 - STORY WRITING HELP

[Jarrod]

I'm trying to write a story about Backstage at Big Brother before an eviction. But I'm stuck on where to start. Can someone help...?

It's because i'm practising for my English coursework soon and want some story help.

[GypsyGoth]

Maybe you could go into the mind of one of the camera people. And start it when the producer or whoever tells her/him to get Louise in shot.

[Jarrod]

Maybe you could go into the mind of one of the camera people. And start it when the producer or whoever tells her/him to get Louise in shot.

That's a good idea. I'm going to write it like now.. Maybe i should post it when i'm finished?

[GypsyGoth]

I'd love to read it :love:

[Jarrod]

I'd love to read it :love:

I'll post it tomorrow when it's finished. :)

[Jarrod]

Here's like the start...

The Crowds started to gather outside of the studio waiting in line to enter the Compound to get their first look at the Evicted Housemate who will be leaving. Banners were lined up and placed on the floor while fans take a seat and wait.
David, the executive Producer of the Show was nervously waiting backstage for the Host to arrive. He walked into the Gallery which was full of people wearing headsets, with clipboards in hands waiting for the all clear from people working outside of the House. 46 Monitors filled the back wall of the gallery as cameras watched the remaining Housemates every move. Sarah, the director of the show walked into the Gallery and announced that there is just over an hour until the Show started to go live to the nation. Everyone seemed to busy themselves even more.

[Sticks]

You could have some big wig telling a new producer, that it would be in his best interest if a certain house mate is evicted, as a lot of money is riding on a shock result..

The producer is torn between doing the right thing or obeying the big wig who can make it so he never works again

[Ammi]

Here's like the start...

The Crowds started to gather outside of the studio waiting in line to enter the Compound to get their first look at the Evicted Housemate who will be leaving. Banners were lined up and placed on the floor while fans take a seat and wait.
David, the executive Producer of the Show was nervously waiting backstage for the Host to arrive. He walked into the Gallery which was full of people wearing headsets, with clipboards in hands waiting for the all clear from people working outside of the House. 46 Monitors filled the back wall of the gallery as cameras watched the remaining Housemates every move. Sarah, the director of the show walked into the Gallery and announced that there is just over an hour until the Show started to go live to the nation. Everyone seemed to busy themselves even more.


It's a good start...keep building the atmosphere...I'm looking forward to the next part...well done

[Jarrod]

It's a good start...keep building the atmosphere...I'm looking forward to the next part...well done

Thanks. I'll have the next part on soon

[Kate!]

Good ideas there and nice work Jarrod :)

[Jarrod]

Good ideas there and nice work Jarrod :)

Thanks :) I'll have part two up after the Eviction tonight.

[Jarrod]

Second Part...

Brian, the main presenter of the show arrived in the nick of time and was escorted to his dressing room as the Fans started to pour into the compound and make their way to the exterior of the Big Brother House. David walked to Brian’s dressing room and knocking on the door. Brian was sitting talking to his hair stylist who looked flustered and too busy to talk.
“Brian, there are 1000 odd people in the crowd tonight, and your evicting two people from the House. We go live at 9pm…” David started as Brian eagerly waited to start practicing in the little time they have left.
“Here’s the script for tonight’s show which I can assure you has been double checked this week to make sure there’s no errors like last week”. Brian picked up his earpiece from his small desk in the dressing room and hooked the big box-like battery pack to his back pocket. He hung the ear piece over his ear so he could only just hear the chaos in the Live Studios. He finished off his small sandwich which wasn’t worth eating and started to make his way outside of the dressing room. David escorted Brian back down from his dressing room and straight through the George Lucas Stage security.

[Ammi]

......what sort of sandwich was it?.....LOL...it's looking great...I remembered it and looked for the thread...that has to be a good sign.....:hugesmile:

[Jarrod]

......what sort of sandwich was it?.....LOL...it's looking great...I remembered it and looked for the thread...that has to be a good sign.....:hugesmile:

Cheese.. :) Aha Glad you like it :) I'll have the final part on soon.

[Jarrod]

I've just remembered this! D: I've got more to post! Haha. Will do soon..