Lauren in love with Nic - breaking news

[waterhog]

Lauren in love with Nic 30.06.12

we all have regrets that provoke,
but i am seeing Lauren different now with her bloke.
he is controlling and manipulative with so much power,
not bringing the good out, closing her flower.
there is a clear hidden tension,
both need to split and be put on a permanent detention.
justifying Nic was no please,
because we all no, once inside he is a cancer disease.
it is a love hate affair,
and all emotions are running into disrepair.
Lauren you will regret this fling,
Nic is using you, only harm he will bring.
control yourself,Lauren this is not organic or green,
you have done yourself no favours falling in love with NICotine.

the question is - will Lauren ever fall out of love with Nic or are they together for ever ? or am i not making no sense as normal ?

[Yayita]

No sense as usual, LOL

[Kazanne]

Totally bemused by that one,lol

[Kizzy]

Nic(otine) kezanne?...:) great poem joe, it was a great chance for her to try quitting. She has a terrible cough :(

[cassieparis]

Yeah she made Ashleigh seem reasonable over her love for that pernicious Nic! :yuk:
Her victim stance just went a little over passive aggressive :crazy:

[sarakss]

No sense as usual, LOL

It's about Lauren's love for smoking - Nic as in nicotine. LOL

[Kazanne]

Nic(otine) kezanne?...:) great poem joe, it was a great chance for her to try quitting. She has a terrible cough :(

:joker:nice one,now it makes sense

[Johnnyuk123]

Laurens become really mean
since losing her friend nicotine
she's an angry old hag
someone give her a fag
and i don't mean that scotty the queen!

[The_Big_Send_Off]

these are boring now do it else were please! go find a poem forum.... better that go lick a window...

[Scotty07]

I'd rather her stay away from the filth, but **** happens.:idc:

[Yayita]

It's about Lauren's love for smoking - Nic as in nicotine. LOL

Yeah, I get it but i mean some of the words used to maintain the rhyme are far fetched.. He does have talent however. I wouldnt be able to rhyme 2 words :P

[Jayson]

Marvellous poem, Joe. Gripping throughout :thumbs:

[Yayita]

Laurens become really mean
since losing her friend nicotine
she's an angry old hag
someone give her a fag
and i don't mean that scotty the queen!

LOL, hilarious

[Angus]

these are boring now do it else were please! go find a poem forum.... better that go lick a window...

If you don't like posts expressed in rhyme,
I'm wondering why you're wasting your time
in making a point to sneer and curse
at folk who like to write in verse.

This forum is varied and diverse,
some threads are infinitely worse,
the decision is yours to stay or leave,
free will is the answer, I believe

[ElProximo]

Lauren in love with Nic 30.06.12
we all have regrets that provoke,
but i am seeing Lauren different now with her bloke.
he is controlling and ....

Why does that make me want to punch you square in the face, immediately. Almost as if by pure instinct.
Please do not do that anymore. Wow, that is just unbearable.

[Yayita]

If you don't like posts expressed in rhyme,
I'm wondering why you're wasting your time
in making a point to sneer and curse
at folk who like to write in verse.

This forum is varied and diverse,
some threads are infinitely worse,
the decision is yours to stay or leave,
free will is the answer, I believe

God one! Man everyone on here is a poet

[WozMan]

If you don't like posts expressed in rhyme,
I'm wondering why you're wasting your time
in making a point to sneer and curse
at folk who like to write in verse.

This forum is varied and diverse,
some threads are infinitely worse,
the decision is yours to stay or leave,
free will is the answer, I believe

Touché Angus!!

[waterhog]

Laurens become really mean
since losing her friend nicotine
she's an angry old hag
someone give her a fag
and i don't mean that scotty the queen!



johny that was wicked.

[waterhog]

If you don't like posts expressed in rhyme,
I'm wondering why you're wasting your time
in making a point to sneer and curse
at folk who like to write in verse.

This forum is varied and diverse,
some threads are infinitely worse,
the decision is yours to stay or leave,
free will is the answer, I believe


now that is a talent that dose me shame,
because by angus i am not out of the game.
superb explanation,
i so wish i had that skill for my communication.
have you got any tips or any advice,
angus name it, i will pay top price.


thanks mate - when i see your name do you no who i think of ? agnus from mrs brown - so i smile when i see you on TIBB message board.