general poetry thread

[waterhog]

poetry and chat thread 30.04.13

welcome to paradise,
this is my poetry land,
terms and conditions are the price,
yes its blunt and bland.
i want to make clear,
this is not corrupt or seedy,
if you are in need of a love gear,
it can not have nothing to do with being deceitful or greedy.
common interests is the link,
it is a rule,
i don't want those on drugs or drink,
sorry if this is cruel.
to build a community,
where "poems" are the interaction,
friendship does not have to have immunity,
who's banking on a love attraction.
get creative please,
join and add your peace,
this is going to be serious with plenty of cheese,
and everyone on this forum can police.

( in simple english for those that don't get my poems - if you want to add a comment on this thread - it has to rhyme. lets see where it leads - this is a experiment poem and idea from me and i am open minded. please play nice to all and respect all comments. thank you.)

[GypsyGoth]

I think this thread is a wonderful idea

and to make that rhyme I will add the republic of korea.

[King Gizzard]

cats
cats in hats
cats with twats
cats standing on mats
cats

[Marc]

Nathan you're bloody hilarious

[Jesus.]

In principle this thread could be a good idea.
But hogs rhymes are so cheap, they come flat-packed by IKEA.

[InOne]

There's already a Poetry thread

[Jesus.]

Joe steps in to smack down the thread
He's just bitter, coz he thinks of Kizzy and head
That ship has sailed, a love unrequited
He wants to be hittin Kizzy all day and all of the night
That's enough to make her resort to violence
But while her laptop is down I'm like Depeche Mode - I will enjoy the silence.

[Livia]

My heart aches, and a drowsy numbness pains
My sense, as though of hemlock I had drunk.

Signed: A Waterhog Poetry Victim.

[Ammi]

Joe steps in to smack down the thread
He's just bitter, coz he thinks of Kizzy and head
That ship has sailed, a love unrequited
He wants to be hittin Kizzy all day and all of the night
That's enough to make her resort to violence
But while her laptop is down I'm like Depeche Mode - I will enjoy the silence.

If you get down off that cross again, we’ll have to get a strap...
You may be the messiah JHC, but your poetry is..........

[Niamh.]

If you get down off that cross again, we’ll have to get a strap...
You may be the messiah JHC, but your poetry is..........

:laugh3:

[Jesus.]

If you get down off that cross again, we’ll have to get a strap...
You may be the messiah JHC, but your poetry is..........

Amazing doesn't rhyme with strap, Ammi :nono:

[Roy Mars III]

This was a poem I wrote for Munchkins before she left the site:

A tiny bird flies
soaring as our love aloft
Drifting along together

[Ammi]

..That's lovely Roy...