is robert simmons a tyrant ?

[waterhog]

is robert simmons a tyrant ? yes or no (metro news) 13.10.17

open is the book
has mr simmons been highgate patrolling
these are my ideas you did hook
but still along way from my controlling.
not impressed with the shower
this on your behalf is mistake
no washing facility's for a month is a cower
its a mind mess and a real shake.
down is the timetable
15 mins tasks are to lenient
stand behind with a metal cable
its what gets 100% obedient.
the note book is fantastic
it makes it easy to express dissatisfaction
take all the bounce and the elastic
my future wife suffering is my gratification.
did not like the head stand
this is unnecessary violence
much prefer the cellar cold dark and bland
the last 3 days gave pure silence.
robert simmons has got remorse
this in turn and sentencing was less time
the next wife appeal will include of course
still oblivious to why robert is doing time.

http://metro.co.uk/2017/09/14/husband-set-up-gruelling-timetable-for-wife-to-do-jobs-then-punished-her-if-she-failed-6927330/

[Kizzy]

Yes he is a warped excuse for a person, your poem reads rather strangely, as if you almost admire the guy.

[Niamh.]

Yes he is a warped excuse for a person, your poem reads rather strangely, as if you almost admire the guy.

X 2 :worry:

[smudgie]

If tyrant means cowardly bully then it fits the bill.:fist:
What an absolute bstd he is, I hope his wife and kids can make a better life for themselves now.

[Northern Monkey]

Surprised she didn’t stab him or something.You couldn’t blame her.

[Niamh.]

Surprised she didn’t stab him or something.You couldn’t blame her.

People like him pick their victims well I think, someone who is weak minded and easy to break down and control. Sad.

[Northern Monkey]

People like him pick their victims well I think, someone who is weak minded and easy to break down and control. Sad.

You can’t understand the mindset of a person like that.You’d think a total lack of empathy would be some kind of mental condition.

[Niamh.]

You can’t understand the mindset of a person like that.You’d think a total lack of empathy would be some kind of mental condition.

Well I suppose it is really, it makes you a sociopath doesn't it?

[DemolitionRed]

That poor woman suffered in silence all those years. I'm glad he's safely behind bars for his crimes.

I agree with Kizzy and Niamh, your poem appears to support his actions Waterhog?

[waterhog]

a explanation to my poem for those who did not understand it. and my sincere apology if I offended anyone. I was simply comparing my poems with what this man is ? a tyrant as It can be perceived I am preaching all the time and having my 10 cents on everything.

I would like to make clear to anyone who was offended by my poem and I promise you all it was only done to draw attention to this man and show this is not the way to be.

maybe I should give up poetry and just say what I have just said.

[Kizzy]

Sorry for misinterpreting your meaning then :) no don't give up poetry :laugh:

[waterhog]

I deliberately was controversial to show the controlling side expressed in poetry but it was to get the point across of a tyrant.

I say things in a confusing way. to keep you all guessing :laugh:

[Niamh.]

the forum wouldn't be the same without your lovely poetry hog :love:

[waterhog]

Niamh - I feel a love of my life poem brewing !

[Marsh.]

Wow, all those years she'll never get back. Heartbreaking.