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waterhog
07-01-2018, 11:04 AM
a selfless episode -narcissis 07.01.18

 
you all no my style
even if reading is not fantastic
not here to be mr vile
the sympathy drop is drastic.
not at all self obsessed
one has got variety
keep looking you will be impressed
even if it will lead to slip in sobriety.
the poetry trail is secrecy
even if it does infuriate
dropping it has led to my obesity
blame the hill that leads to highgate.
so glad i have changed
would not say similar
last nights selflessness episode deranged
sorry but to much is india.

( from now on i am have been adviced to sign all my work so i am going to follow this advice. narcissis )

poppsywoppsy
07-01-2018, 11:40 AM
Mr Narcissis, thanks for your ode
What it's about, I just don't know'd
I tried to fathom but it bypassed me
So, I'm orf for a cup of tea
Perhaps a hobnob or something sweet
I am rather partial to this treat
Hope you like my little rhyme
So Mr Narcissis, until next time xx

waterhog
07-01-2018, 12:32 PM
poppyswooppsy it was my pleasure
your verse was treasure.
if anyone can make sense
then to explain would clarify past tense.
its not on ones self
the love of my life is the wealth.
a country is what is the leader
the poem is about the emotions in india.

poppsywoppsy
07-01-2018, 01:00 PM
Thank you for your kind reply Mr Waterhog
So quick, so erudite, so true
My one comment is you do me a wrong
By referring I might need the loo
Of course it might be a typo
For which I withdraw my point
But Mr Waterhog, No need for the bog or a snog from old India too.

Gusto Brunt
07-01-2018, 01:31 PM
India as a country have always appealed to me.

Nicky91
07-01-2018, 01:54 PM
India :fan:

Gusto Brunt
07-01-2018, 02:26 PM
India :fan:

Lovely country India is. Not sure about the udder India. :p:joker: