Fanmade Titles (using me eye design)

[MagicPaddy]

I've also posted this in the Fanmade bit, but hope you enjoy as it took me a few hours to make!
https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/50062732331_bb4a0778e8_o_d.png
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[MagicPaddy]

So everyone, what do you think:wavey:

[SelectTV]

That eye is phernominal awesome

[Morgan.]

I think it’s a great start but, and not to be mean, it’s needs a fair amount of work? At the moment you can tell that you’ve just found/made a pattern you like and stuck it on a template, which is fine, but it’s just basic.

The BB eyes we see are 3D, they have carefully added elements and details that make them pop. Again, not trying to be mean, just wanted to mention some pointers that’ll hopefully help you get better! We see a lot of this type of thing here (sticking a nice pattern over a template) which is something that anyone could do! If you look at work by members such as Jarrod and Elliebrew, or even just examples of BB eyes around the world, you’ll see the kind of thing I mean about ‘3D’ designs.

One last thing, and this might just be a sizing issue, but the outline of the eye is really pixelated, if you could get those lines cleaner it would be immediately better!

[Rob!]

For what they are and the restrictions anybody who doesn't work for a graphics company has in trying out BB titles, this isn't bad.
The eye is nice and I like the idea of seeing the house and words through the bars of the eye implying imprisonment.

[MagicPaddy]

I think it’s a great start but, and not to be mean, it’s needs a fair amount of work? At the moment you can tell that you’ve just found/made a pattern you like and stuck it on a template, which is fine, but it’s just basic.

The BB eyes we see are 3D, they have carefully added elements and details that make them pop. Again, not trying to be mean, just wanted to mention some pointers that’ll hopefully help you get better! We see a lot of this type of thing here (sticking a nice pattern over a template) which is something that anyone could do! If you look at work by members such as Jarrod and Elliebrew, or even just examples of BB eyes around the world, you’ll see the kind of thing I mean about ‘3D’ designs.

One last thing, and this might just be a sizing issue, but the outline of the eye is really pixelated, if you could get those lines cleaner it would be immediately better!

Thats part of the titles, some of the tasks wont be clear for the housemates to comprehend and yes, I made the pattern

[Morgan.]

Thats part of the titles, some of the tasks wont be clear for the housemates to comprehend and yes, I made the pattern

I wasn’t trying to be rude, as I said I think it’s a great start and looks good, I just think those pointers would make it look a lot cleaner.

As I say with the pixelation, having the jagged edges just make it look less clean. I know most of the templates on google are quite pixelated as I’ve used them myself so it can’t be helped, I just wanted to mention it to help you improve!

Keep at it though, these things take practice.

[MagicPaddy]

Thats what I mean mate, the pixelation and jagged edges are supposed to be there