Desperate TIBBwives ~ "Pilot" Part 1 Now Up!!!

[officialleafan]

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Cast
Gabrielle: Sam
Edie: Lauren
Bree: Bronaaa
Susan: Lewis
Lynette: Ninastar

Description
I've decided to do a Desperate Housewives version. These episodes will be posted every Wednesday until the season finishes.

The characters will be based on past or present Desperate Housewives characters.

The Storyline's:
Here is Gabby/Sam's storyline.

Storyline:
Sam (AKA Gabrielle) was one of the most successful model's in his/her time. He/sje was on the cover of almost every magazine in LA. Since moving to Wisteria Lane, Sam/Gabby has struggled to cope with the "quiet" life. First off, his boyfriend/girlfriend (which ever you prefer :tongue:) left him/her without any money and moved to Mexico. Now alone, Sam/Gabby must find a way to fit in with the rest of the residents on Wisteria Lane. However, Sam/Gabby finds love in the most unusual of places - maybe looks aren't everything?

Characters needed for this story:
Gabrielle - Sam
Carlos - If Sam wants this to be female, then please let me know :wink: This character will be similar to Carlos in the series, but it is the person Sam/Gabrielle falls in love with later on in the show, his/her partner that ran away to Mexico isn't Carlos.

Here are Susan/Lewis:)'s storylines.

Storyline:
Susan/Lewis:) lives alone with his/her daughter Julie. Julie has always stood by Lewis:)/Susan since he/she got divorced. Now, Lewis:)/Susan is dependant on Julie for support when it comes to his/her problems. However, when Julie is sent off to college Susan/Lewis can't stand being alone to fend for himself/herself, so he/she decides to find the perfect partner. He/she belives that he/she has in the form of the local plumber, but the plumber comes with a few secrets of his/her own, and when Lewis/Susan discovers them, will he/she be in more mess than he/she could possibly imagine?

Cast needed:
Susan - Lewis
Julie - Female really, but i don't mind.
Mike - Male or Female, depending on what Lewis wants.
Karl - May show up at sometime.

Here are bronaaaa/Bree's storylines:

Storylines:
Everyone believes that Bree/bronaaaa is the perfect mother and wife. She is the best cook on Wisteria Lane, she performs her chores very satisfactory and her children appear to be little angels. But all that is a facade. Unerneath it all, Bree/bronaaaa's life is all a mess. Her husband is dead, her son, Andrew is exploiting his sexuality in front of her all the time and her daughter is pregnant. All this, and keeping up a lovely act is causing Bree/bronaaaa to move further away from her friends, but when she finds someone who is going through the same things as her, she believes that her prayers have been answered, but what is their real interest in Bree/bronaaaa?

Cast Needed:
Bree - bronaaaa
Andrew - Male
Danielle - Female
Orson - Any type of sex.

Lynette/Ninastar's storyline.

Storyline:
Being a Mother isn't easy. Lynette/Ninastar is has got 6 children to look after. 4 are hers 1 is her husband's and the other is her niece. Lynette must look after all these children whilst her husband heads out to earn money for the family. But tragedy strikes when Lynette/Ninastar's mother dies, this sudden shock causes Lynette/Ninastar to go into depression, will she abandon her kids and try and start a new life? Or will she do something that her mother never did; stand by her kids.

Cast Needed:
Lynette - Ninastar
Tom - Male please :lovedup:
Parker - Doesn't need to be played, these are the younger versions of the kids :)
Porter - ^^^
Preston - ^^^^
Penny - ^^^^
Kayla - ^^^^
June - ^^^^


Edie/Lauren's storyline.

Storyline:
Edie/Lauren is well known around Wisteria Lane for her constant need for the opposite sex. Edie/Lauren begins to bring strange men back her house after several drunken nights out, one of them turns out to be very interesting indeed. The crime is high around Wisteria Lane recently, people are being murdered, and a close friend of the residents has been kidnapped - could Edie/Laure be next?

Cast needed:
Edie - Lauren
Dave - Anyone :)

[Lewis.]

Great idea to do it every Wednesday and not every night! I am getting confused with Tibbendrers and Tibboaks because they are both on every day.. Another daily one would be havoc. :tongue: Great idea x

[officialleafan]

Thank you :wink:

[Lauren]

Like Lewis said, good idea to have it spaced weekly, and also to have a limited number of characters so it doesn't get confusing.

Sounds good.

[officialleafan]

Originally posted by Lauren
Like Lewis said, good idea to have it spaced weekly, and also to have a limited number of characters so it doesn't get confusing.

Sounds good.

Thank you Lauren :thumbs:

[bronaaaa]

Loves it :lovedup:

[LemonJam]

Shaun/Picto just HAS to be one of them. :lovedup:

[Ninastar]

Yeh its an amazing idea. I love it x

[officialleafan]

Bump!

[officialleafan]

So far i've had no castings for Lynette and Susan :sad:

Anyone want to be them two?

[officialleafan]

The casting closes later today. Any last minuite auditions must be made between now and 7pm.

[Zac]

LOL I want to be in it, but not Lynette or Susan. I'll wait till casting for families begin. :banana:

[officialleafan]

Originally posted by Zak
LOL I want to be in it, but not Lynette or Susan. I'll wait till casting for families begin. :banana:

I may have to force people to be Susan or Lynette soon :tongue:

[officialleafan]

Okay just need Lynette now :angel:

Come on...she has a really cheerful life :tongue:

[Ninastar]

I dont mind lol x If you want me too I will be her xx

[bronaaaa]

I wouldn't mind being Lynette =P

[Ninastar]

Originally posted by bronaaaa
I wouldn't mind being Lynette =P

Sorry. I think i am her now?
xx :hug:

[bronaaaa]

Originally posted by Ninastar
Originally posted by bronaaaa
I wouldn't mind being Lynette =P

Sorry. I think i am her now?
xx :hug:

Aww its grand, I'd like to be Bree but offered cos no-one else did :thumbs:

[officialleafan]

The cast will be revealed in about 2 hours. :angel:

[Novo]

I'll be Carlos

[officialleafan]

Originally posted by .Andy.
I'll be Carlos

Once the main cast have been revealed, the family's and minor roles will be as well :thumbs:

[officialleafan]

Official banner made by Nicky :thumbs:

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[officialleafan]

Here we have it. The casting for the main characters is now over.

The person who will be playing the part of the rich ex-model is...

[Lewis.]

Wow i love it! characters yet?

x

[officialleafan]

Sam!

Well done Sam :thumbs:

[officialleafan]

The TIBB member to be taking part of the clumsy mother/father of one is...

[officialleafan]

Lewis:)

Well done Lewis:) :thumbs:

[officialleafan]

The TIBB member who will be taking part as the fussy, yet, perfect TIBBwife is...

[officialleafan]

bronaaaa

Well done bronaaaa :thumbs:

[officialleafan]

The TIBB member taking part as the mother/father of 6 is...

[officialleafan]

Ninastar

Well Done Ninastar :thumbs:

[officialleafan]

The TIBB member who is taking part as the man eating manipulator is...

[officialleafan]

Lauren

Well done Lauren :thumbs:

[officialleafan]

So there you have it!

Of course it's going to be sound silly having male's replacing some of the females, but hey, that's life and it's all about change :tongue:

The casting for the family's will begin shortly. I'll just fill in some details about each character's storyline's etc :wink:

[Sam!]

Shitt yess I'm Gabby :lovedup:

[bronaaaa]

:lovedup: thanks officialleafan

[officialleafan]

Can i also remind people that some mistakes will be made, i may refer to some of the characters as she. I hope you don't mind, because it is a show full of women lol.

Here is Gabby/Sam's storyline.

Storyline:
Sam (AKA Gabrielle) was one of the most successful model's in his/her time. He/sje was on the cover of almost every magazine in LA. Since moving to Wisteria Lane, Sam/Gabby has struggled to cope with the "quiet" life. First off, his boyfriend/girlfriend (which ever you prefer :tongue:) left him/her without any money and moved to Mexico. Now alone, Sam/Gabby must find a way to fit in with the rest of the residents on Wisteria Lane. However, Sam/Gabby finds love in the most unusual of places - maybe looks aren't everything?

Characters needed for this story:
Gabrielle - Sam
Carlos - If Sam wants this to be female, then please let me know :wink: This character will be similar to Carlos in the series, but it is the person Sam/Gabrielle falls in love with later on in the show, his/her partner that ran away to Mexico isn't Carlos.

Until i hear different, Carlos will be a man to start off with, if Sam wants the character to be female, then U2U me saying so. :wink:

[officialleafan]

Here are Susan/Lewis:)'s storylines.

Storyline:
Susan/Lewis:) lives alone with his/her daughter Julie. Julie has always stood by Lewis:)/Susan since he/she got divorced. Now, Lewis:)/Susan is dependant on Julie for support when it comes to his/her problems. However, when Julie is sent off to college Susan/Lewis can't stand being alone to fend for himself/herself, so he/she decides to find the perfect partner. He/she belives that he/she has in the form of the local plumber, but the plumber comes with a few secrets of his/her own, and when Lewis/Susan discovers them, will he/she be in more mess than he/she could possibly imagine?

Cast needed:
Susan - Lewis
Julie - Female really, but i don't mind.
Mike - Male or Female, depending on what Lewis wants.
Karl - May show up at sometime.

[Zac]

Could I be Mike please, if Lewis dosen't mind. If he does, never mind.

[Lewis.]

Hehe.. This sounds so great! I u2ued you back btw x

[Lewis.]

Yes, I do mind Zak






Naaa, Only joking! Why would i mind? It is up to OfficialLeafan who she wants to cast ;)

x

[Zac]

Okay, thanks Lewis, and OfficialLeaFan, forget that U2U I sent you a while ago, eh?

[officialleafan]

Here are bronaaaa/Bree's storylines:

Storylines:
Everyone believes that Bree/bronaaaa is the perfect mother and wife. She is the best cook on Wisteria Lane, she performs her chores very satisfactory and her children appear to be little angels. But all that is a facade. Unerneath it all, Bree/bronaaaa's life is all a mess. Her husband is dead, her son, Andrew is exploiting his sexuality in front of her all the time and her daughter is pregnant. All this, and keeping up a lovely act is causing Bree/bronaaaa to move further away from her friends, but when she finds someone who is going through the same things as her, she believes that her prayers have been answered, but what is their real interest in Bree/bronaaaa?

Cast Needed:
Bree - bronaaaa
Andrew - Male
Danielle - Female
Orson - Any type of sex.

[officialleafan]

Originally posted by Zak
Okay, thanks Lewis, and OfficialLeaFan, forget that U2U I sent you a while ago, eh?

Okay :thumbs:

[officialleafan]

Lynette/Ninastar's storyline.

Storyline:
Being a Mother isn't easy. Lynette/Ninastar is has got 6 children to look after. 4 are hers 1 is her husband's and the other is her niece. Lynette must look after all these children whilst her husband heads out to earn money for the family. But tragedy strikes when Lynette/Ninastar's mother dies, this sudden shock causes Lynette/Ninastar to go into depression, will she abandon her kids and try and start a new life? Or will she do something that her mother never did; stand by her kids.

Cast Needed:
Lynette - Ninastar
Tom - Male please :lovedup:
Parker - Doesn't need to be played, these are the younger versions of the kids :)
Porter - ^^^
Preston - ^^^^
Penny - ^^^^
Kayla - ^^^^
June - ^^^^

[officialleafan]

Edie/Lauren's storyline.

Storyline:
Edie/Lauren is well known around Wisteria Lane for her constant need for the opposite sex. Edie/Lauren begins to bring strange men back her house after several drunken nights out, one of them turns out to be very interesting indeed. The crime is high around Wisteria Lane recently, people are being murdered, and a close friend of the residents has been kidnapped - could Edie/Laure be next?

Cast needed:
Edie - Lauren
Dave - Anyone :)

[officialleafan]

If you'd like to be any of the characters connected with the 5 main characters then please U2U me with the character you'd like to be :thumbs:

The casting will close on Sunday, and the Pilot episode will be posted on Wednesday :cheer2:

[officialstephaniefan]

did i miss this???? :(

[officialleafan]

Originally posted by officialstephaniefan
did i miss this???? :(

You did for the main characters. But you can be one of the family members???

[Ninastar]

Will people get to be my sexy hot twins??

I MEAN.. Good natured young sons?

[officialleafan]

The Auditions close in an hour :wink:

If any characters aren't cast they will just be known as the character's name :wink:

[officialleafan]

Episode 1 - Pilot - 1st April:
The residents of Wisteria Lane are shocked to learn that one of their friends has been kidnapped. This leaves the residents worried about the safety of the neighbourhood, it's even more worrying when a mysterious man takes a shine to one of the women of Wisteria Lane

[officialleafan]

Because the Pilot is shockingly long, i've decided to post part 1 tomorrow and part 2 on Wednesday. So the first half of the pilot will start tomorrow. Here is a sneak preview of tomorrow's episode:

Sam: Erm, it appears that my ex hasn’t transferred enough money into my account...can i write you an “i owe you”?
Maid: I need that money now!
Sam: Oh please, what do you need to pay, you live with your Mother, you don’t need money, some people work for a living!
Maid: Like you?
Sam: Some of us get away with it. Anyway, we’re not talking about me, we’re talking about you!
Maid: I quit! And if i’m not paid by Friday then i’ll take it further!
The maid leaves the house
Sam: Well...that could’ve gone better.
Sam is disturbed by the sound of the TV in the kitchen

[Zac]

Oooh, interesting. Can't wait to read more, it's great so far. :thumbs2:

[officialleafan]

Originally posted by Zak
Oooh, interesting. Can't wait to read more, it's great so far. :thumbs2:

Thank you :thumbs:

[officialleafan]

Don't forget, the first half of Episode 1 will be posted tonight :wink:

[officialleafan]

Episode 1 - Pilot Part 1

Officialleafan: It happened on a Tuesday. The most tragic of events was about to take place on that Tuesday morning. It started off quite well. The sun was shining; the members of Wisteria Lane did their normal Tuesday activities. The day closed with an unexpected turn of events.

The Fan (:P) Household:
Officialleafan: (entering the living room) You may think that you’re going to destroy the family over this, well you’d better think again, because I will not allow anything to come between me and my family.
Voice: Isn’t it about time you went to check on your sister?
Officialleafan: When I get back, I want you gone!
Voice: Oh I will be, and so will you.
Officialleafan: (leaves the house)

The street just outside of Wisteria Lane:
As Officialleafan walks down one of the street a van pulls up in front of him. Two men wearing all black jump out of the back of the van.
Officialleafan: Can I help you?
The two men grab Officialleafan and throw him into the back of the van and drive away.
Officialleafan: Yes, Tuesday was about to become a day of Tragedy. But for those who planned such a tragic event; well, it was just another job...
Officialleafan: The news of my kidnapping was announced early the following Wednesday morning. Although the residents of Wisteria Lane seemed to be the last to know about it...
The Solis Household:
Sam: (on the phone) Yes i think the clothes should be sold internationally. (pause). Well because i want people all over the world to buy my clothes, not just people in America!
Maid: Ahem...Mr Solis, can i speak to you...
Sam: (on phone) Hold on a second. (places phone on shoulder) What is it?
Maid: Well you gave me a cheque last week as my pay, i went to cash it in and it wouldn’t be accepted.
Sam: What?!
Maid: There isn’t enough money in your account...
Sam: Not enough...wait right here...

Sam heads upstairs and into his bedroom
Sam: (on phone again) Can i call you back? (puts phone down and dials a number) Hey, why has all the money gone for my account?! (pause) No! You said that you’d keep me here until i got a job! (pause) C’mon, two years isn’t long enough. (pause) Fine, then screw you! (throws phone across room)
Sam returns downstairs

Sam: Erm, it appears that my ex hasn’t transferred enough money into my account...can i write you an “i own you”?
Maid: I need that money now!
Sam: Oh please, what do you need to pay, you live with your Mother, you don’t need money, some people work for a living!
Maid: Like you?
Sam: Some of us get away with it. Anyway, we’re not talking about me, we’re talking about you!
Maid: I quit! And if i’m not paid by Friday then i’ll take it further!
The maid leaves the house
Sam: Well...that could’ve gone better.
Sam is disturbed by the sound of the TV in the kitchen
TV reporter: The crime in Wisteria Lane reached critical levels last night as a resident was kidnapped from their home. 22 year old Officialleafan was seen being thrown into the back of a truck and driven away from Wisteria Lane in the early hours of this morning. An onlooker said that there was signs of struggle, and that she was surprised that she was the only one who saw it...
Sam: Oh my god...
Westernburg College
Woman at reception: Hello and welcome to Westernburg College. You must be Julie Mayer...
Julie: Hey! Pleased to meet you!
Lewis: I’m Julie’s father, Lewis Mayer.
Woman at reception: Oh, isn’t this delightful. Anyway, Julie you and your Mom can go and pick your own room now.
Julie: Okay, let’s go.
Julie: This one is nice.
Lewis: Nah, it’s too small. Where will you fit your books?
Julie: Erm, on that shelf?
Lewis: I’m not having my daughter putting her books on a shelf...
Julie: Well where else are they supposed to go?
Lewis: A book holding shelf. Not just a wooden one!
Julie: No, this is fine!
Lewis: Well as long as you’re sure.

Julie places her bags on the bed and hugs her dad
Lewis: I guess this is goodbye for now.
Julie: Yeah, i guess.
Lewis: Okay, bye then.
Lewis leaves the room...then comes walking back in...
Lewis: Come home!
Julie: I’ve only just got here.
Lewis: I know but you know what i’m like on my own. I’m a fire hazard waiting to go off. I need you with me!
Julie: You can cope, trust me!
Lewis: What if there is a power cut again? I don’t know anything about getting the electric back on!
Julie: Call a technician!
Lewis: What if i can’t see the phone?! What if i have no money on my cell phone, and what if i fall and bang my head?!
Julie: Dad...
Lewis: Me and you are like chalk and cheese, we go together.
Julie: They don’t go together...
Lewis: Don’t change the subject. The point is we are always together!
Julie: Remember what you said to me last year, do what you want to do. And i am. I’m going to do my best in college. And you’re going to be fine at home.
Lewis: It’s just, since i split up from your mother you’ve always been there for me, and now you won’t. It’s going to be tough.
Julie: I know, but you’re stronger than you give yourself credit for.
Lewis: You really think so?
Julie: Yeah, you can manage i promise.
Lewis: (sighs) Okay then, but you’d better ring me every day to tell me how things are going!
Julie: I will, i promise!
Lewis: Okay, i’ll leave you to it!
Julie: Bye!

As Lewis walks through the college corridor’s, she sees the TV in the lounge

TV reporter: The crime in Wisteria Lane reached critical levels last night as a resident was kidnapped from their home. 22 year old Officialleafan was seen being thrown into the back of a truck and driven away from Wisteria Lane in the early hours of this morning. An onlooker said that there was signs of struggle, and that she was surprised that she was the only one who saw it...
Lewis: Oh my god...
The Van De Kamp Hodge household

bronaaaa: (pulls out a perfectly made pie from the oven) Just right!
(Andrew Enters)

bronaaaa: Andrew, i hope you’ll be joining me and your sister for dinner tonight?
Andrew: I can’t. (reaches into the fridge) I promised I’d go to the movies with this guy...
bronaaaa: You’re going to run off to the pictures after watching me bake this lovely pie?
Andrew: Well if he could come around here...
bronaaaa: Well i hardly know him. What’s his name?
Andrew: Paul.
bronaaaa: How old is he?
Andrew: Oh..he’s only 41.
bronaaaa: (gasps) Are you serious?! Andrew you’re 19!
Andrew: Look, he’s fine with it, i’m fine with it. Can we leave it at that?
bronaaaa: Well you’ll certainly not be seeing him in the future.
Andrew: I’m 19, i can do what i want, and i am not coming to this meal if you can’t accept who i date!
bronaaaa: Andrew he’s nearly as old as me!
Andrew: Who cares? Sooner or later you’re going to push people away you know, you wonder why Danielle’s never home!
(Andrew storms out of the kitchen)

(bronaaaa is disturbed by the news reporter on TV)
TV reporter: The crime in Wisteria Lane reached critical levels last night as a resident was kidnapped from their home. 22 year old Officialleafan was seen being thrown into the back of a truck and driven away from Wisteria Lane in the early hours of this morning. An onlooker said that there was signs of struggle, and that she was surprised that she was the only one who saw it...

The Scavo home[/ki]
Ninastar: (on phone) Well that’s great Mom! I’m happy for you. (pause). No there’s no need to come here, i’m coping just fine.
[i](The three young boys enter clanging their toys and screaming loudly)
Ninastar: Boys will you knock it off! (back on phone) Yeah Mom everything is just fine!
(The twins run past Ninastar knocking her over)
Ninastar: (on floor) Hey watch were you’re going! (picks up phone) Mom? (pause) No, honestly...Mom? Mom? Mom? (puts phone down)

(Ninastar gets to her feet and sits down on the sofa were she is joined by Tom)

Tom: How’s it going?
Ninastar: Not too good, my Mother is on her way here because your boys can’t control themselves.
Tom: What did they do?
Ninastar: They knocked me over whilst i was convincing my mother that we were coping fine with the kids.
Tom: Is now the time to go on holiday?
Ninastar: No, she’s on her way over right now. By the time we’ve packed our bags she’ll be here.
Tom: Well i’ve had a great day...
(Something catches Ninastar’s eye on the TV)
Ninastar: Hold on a second...
(Ninastar grabs the remote and turns the TV up)

TV reporter: The crime in Wisteria Lane reached critical levels last night as a resident was kidnapped from their home. 22 year old Officialleafan was seen being thrown into the back of a truck and driven away from Wisteria Lane in the early hours of this morning. An onlooker said that there was signs of struggle, and that she was surprised that she was the only one who saw it...

The Britt Household
Lauren: Yeah, that washing machine has been so bad lately.
Repairman: I’ll soon get it fixed Ma’am.
Lauren: Oh please; call me Lauren.
Repairman: That’s a great name!
Lauren: (fake laughs) Well aren’t you just a charmer?
Repairman: (raises eyebrows and begins fixing the washing machine)
Lauren: I’ll be right back.
(Lauren returns wearing only her bra and knickers)
Repairman: I’ve fixed the...(he see’s Lauren)
Lauren: Yes...you’ve fixed those pipes...but there’s more that need seeing to.
Repairman: Listen lady...i’m here to a job and i have a family at home...
Lauren: Well i won’t tell if you won’t...
Repairman: Please...just give me the money for the job!
Lauren: How much?
Repairman: $20
Lauren: (reaches for purse and gets $20 out and hands it to the repairman)
Repairman: Thanks (turns to head to the door)
Lauren: Before you go; does my body look good?
Repairman: You’re a little old ma’am. G’day! (the repairman leaves)

(Lauren sits down and turns on the TV)
TV reporter: The crime in Wisteria Lane reached critical levels last night as a resident was kidnapped from their home. 22 year old Officialleafan was seen being thrown into the back of a truck and driven away from Wisteria Lane in the early hours of this morning. An onlooker said that there were signs of struggle, and that she was surprised that she was the only one who saw it...

Officialleafan: The news of my disappearance had spread through Wisteria Lane, and my dear old neighbours gathered around for a good old gossip.
The Scavo’s front lawn
Ninastar: I just can’t believe it...
Sam: I know, i mean i knew the crime was bad but i didn’t know it was this bad.
bronaaaa: Come on, there must be something more to this, we’re a safe neighbourhood, something must have been going on with Officialleafan.
Lewis: Well, what can we do? I’ve not seen anyone dropping flowers or anything.
Lauren: Why would they? No one’s died!
Ninastar: I don’t know guys, maybe we should leave something special outside the house, something that can...pay our respects.
Sam: Don’t look at me, i’m as broke as a joke!
Lewis: We’re not talking money here, what about if we just took something that reminds us of Officialleafan or something?
bronaaaa: What like a painting?
Lauren: Why?! No one’s died yet! If we go around laying gifts down it’s like we’re saying that Officialleafan is gone and never coming back.
Ninastar: Yeah, she’s right. It’ll look like we’re saying that there is no hope. Let’s not lay anything yet.
Sam: Suits me!
Lauren: For all we know Officialleafan may end up being fine and in a few years time we’ll be laughing about this moment...

Officialleafan: I wouldn’t be so sure about that Lauren; you see what my friends have failed to realise is that everyone on Wisteria Lane has secrets...even me...

[i]An unknown location outside Wisteria Lane:
Voice: Did it go...satisfactory?
Man 1: It went fine. Officialleafan is history.
Voice: Good, i hope i can rely on you boys to keep this a secret for now?
Man 1: Sure...
Voice: Because i have my eye on the next victim...and they’re going to regret ever moving to Wisteria Lane.
Man 1: Any clues who it is?
Voice: Oh no...That would be telling.

End of Part 1

[Lewis.]

I actually Love it! Well done Hun x

[officialleafan]

Originally posted by Lewis:)
I actually Love it! Well done Hun x

Thank you :thumbs:

[Zac]

Wow, it's amazing. A really good start, can't wait to read part 2, when will it be up BTW? Great work! :thumbs:

[officialleafan]

Originally posted by Zak
Wow, it's amazing. A really good start, can't wait to read part 2, when will it be up BTW? Great work! :thumbs:

Thank you :thumbs:
Part 2 will be up tomorrow :bigsmile:

[Zac]

Oooh, great, can't wait now!

[officialleafan]

Originally posted by Zak
Oooh, great, can't wait now!

The next episode will see two of the five characters in danger of being arrested lol :bigsmile:

[Zac]

Oooh, interesting.

[Tom4784]

Good start Lea! It's great!

[officialleafan]

Originally posted by Dezzy
Good start Lea! It's great!

Thank you :thumbs:

[Zac]

No part 2?

[Ninastar]

OMG!! I love it!! x

[Zac]

LOL what happened to this?

[Harry!]

This is good. Can I be Dave please.

[Lauren]

Hahah, I love it. :hugesmile: