My song (MR.K!) - 'Get out'

[MR.K!]

A wee song i wrote and i felt like posting.
It is ment for a woman to sing. Its called 'get out'
(*'s indicate the chorus)


Just dont know what to do
I cant escape from you
my heart is buised right now
just dont know what to say
dont really want to play
these games with you now

But i dont know what to feel in this empty shell
my heart is no longer beating
but this feels like hell
and i feel like fleeing
from your grip right now!

*So get outta my life, get outta my face
cant stand this anymore
so beggin the chase that will last for hours,
and rage on untill the day
but my path is clear, so get outta my way
alas be free okay!*


all i have so far

[Twilight]

I love it:lovedup:

[Harry!]

Good lyrics, What style is it?

[MR.K!]

Thank you two. It was supposed to be soul/pop but i guess it could be anything, even rock. Dunno what do you think? Im too indecisive.

[Harry!]

Are you going to sing it and post it for us?

[MR.K!]

Originally posted by Harry.
Are you going to sing it and post it for us?

Haha. Good one :D
I wouldnt do that to you.

[Fom]

Originally posted by MR.K!
Originally posted by Harry.
Are you going to sing it and post it for us?

Haha. Good one :D
I wouldnt do that to you.

I want to hear even more now haha.

[Harry!]

Are you cool chior or cats chior

[MR.K!]

Originally posted by Fom
Originally posted by MR.K!
Originally posted by Harry.
Are you going to sing it and post it for us?

Haha. Good one :D
I wouldnt do that to you.

I want to hear even more now haha.

Haha. Keep hoping!
Aint gonna happen :tongue:

[MR.K!]

Originally posted by Harry.
Are you cool chior or cats chior

Cement mixer choir ;)

[Harry!]

Originally posted by MR.K!
Originally posted by Harry.
Are you cool chior or cats chior

Cement mixer choir ;)

Super chior more like.

[MrGaryy]

i really like it.

[Christina]

Ooh i like it, i can imagine what it would sound like lol.

[MR.K!]

Thanks all :D
Now that ive though about it i think R&B best sescribes hat i had in mind, with a black female singer, with a slow start and a more upbeat chorus.

[M X]

Love it! :lovedup:

[MR.K!]

thanks. Still havent finnished it yet, dont think i will. lol

[Fom]

Been trying to work out melodies for the lyrics, they words have a good rhythm.

[Stu]

Rhymes nice but content wise it just sounds like another generic typical angry emo rant, sorry.

[MR.K!]

Originally posted by Stu
Rhymes nice but content wise it just sounds like another generic typical angry emo rant, sorry.

haha Emo !? Methinks not !!
I am not, emo, goth, punk or anything else along those lines trust me.

Thanks for the comment Fom :)

[Stu]

Originally posted by MR.K!
Originally posted by Stu
Rhymes nice but content wise it just sounds like another generic typical angry emo rant, sorry.

haha Emo !? Methinks not !!
I am not, emo, goth, punk or anything else along those lines trust me.

Thanks for the comment Fom :)
Sure, not emo along the lines of the whole full monty of what the stereotype entails, but lyric wise it certainly sounds like an emo song. Or perhaps a pop song. It's like you just started writting about what everyone writes about - love and losing love - and just foccused more on getting it to rhytme than what you were actualy saying.

When I read it, the first thing that came to my mind was that 'Shut Up' song Kelly Osbourne had.