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TiBBOaks - Episode 8.
Opening Sequence: "Knights of Cydonia" by Muse briefly plays. We replay the scene in Fom's basement, where Brona has just lunged at Fom and Doug has turned out the lights. A gunshot is heard. The scene changes to outside Iceman's bakery, where Loukas has slowly shut the door behind him. He locks it and pulls up his jacket's hood. He takes out a phone and dials. We then cut to LemonJam's house. LIZZEDJ looks at her phone and sees 4 missed calls from Matt. She deletes them, and quickly puts on a smile as LemonJam brings in a DVD for them to watch. Scene One: Fom's basement. It has been a few seconds since the gunshot, and Mrluvaluva fumbles for the lightswitch. Brona: Aaaah it hurts! I'm bleeding! She has been shot in the shoulder, and Sia has got out her phone to dial for the police. Fom runs for the stairs and out the door, and Doug quickly follows. Mrluvaluva rushes to find a first-aid kit. Sia: It's going to be okay, it's alright... Brona: Oh god, he killed Ben. Sia: I know, I know. He won't get away with it, the police will see to that. The call is put through and she gives her details. Scene Two: Outside Fom's house - he jumps into his car and Doug immediately climbs into the passenger's side, quicker than Fom had anticipated. He is now holding the gun and aims it towards Fom. Doug: Drive. Fom: Where? Doug: Take me to Dad's. Now. Scene Three: Tom's house. He is sipping a glass of whiskey when he hears something outside. He goes to the back door and opens it, and Gemma is stood there. She screams and lunges wildly, holding the shovel Tom had used to dig the ditch. Tom: Oh my- He is unable to finish the sentence as he receives a sharp blow to the head. Scene Four: Loukas is approached by another young male. He greets him. Billy: Did you just hear a gunshot? Loukas: I don't know. You got the gear? Billy: Of course. Let's go get wasted! Scene Five: Gemma has climbed into Tom's car and drives off, as Tom regains consciousness. Scene Six: Fom is driving along a dark country road. He notices an oncoming car with extraordinary bright headlights, and decides to swerve into it. Doug: What the!? They heavily scrape the other vehicle, and the car swerves off course into a hedge. Doug loses control of the gun and as soon as the car comes to a stop, Fom does a runner. Doug fumbles for the gun and, finally finding it, chases after him. The other car skids to a halt and a familiar woman steps out. She, too, is holding a gun. Doug: GEMMA!? Fom stops in his tracks and turns round in shock. She takes a shot and it hits his left leg. He falls to the floor in pain. Doug: No, wait! Gemma: He tried to kill me, and then left me in a ditch with some bloke he stabbed! I don't know what I saw in him! Doug grabs the gun off of her and walks up to Fom. Fom: Look, Doug, I'm sorry, but you've got to help me. Doug: What was it you said earlier in the basement? Fom: Huh? Doug: About family. You said... Fom: You can't trust anyone... Doug: Great last words. He shoots Fom square in the forehead. Scene Seven: LemonJam's house. A knock is heard at the door and LIZZEDJ goes to answer it. Matt is stood there, looking irritated. Matt: I've been trying to call you. LIZZEDJ: Shush! She pushes him outside and shuts the door behind her. Matt: What, are you seeing someone else? LIZZEDJ: I'm married! Scene Eight: Outside Fom's house, Brona is taken off to the hospital in an ambulance. A small crowd of onlookers has gathered, as Mrluvaluva is talking to the police. Nickyy: Oh, Baz, are you okay? Baz: Yeah...I'm fine... Nickyy: What's happened!? Ash: I hear Fom shot his brother! Mark: Oh no! He was cute! Daren: I know! Sam!: Hey! Daren: Sssh, you're cuter. Baz: I'll tell you everything...can we go somewhere a bit quieter? He and Nickyy go back to her house. Scene Nine: Two hours have passed since Billy and Loukas went off to take drugs, and they are now heading home. Billy: How many fingers am I holding up? Loukas: Uhh...seven...teen? Billy giggles hysterically, and playfully slaps Loukas. Loukas overreacts and falls into a dustbin, knocking it over. The noise attracts some attention from the small crowd gathered nearby. Ash: LOUKAS? What are you doing? Loukas: Oh hey mum! Can we get some pizza? I'm starving. Ash: It's 1am! You should be in bed! Billy: Hello, Loukas' mum. You are a sexy headmistress. Loukas: Dude! He punches Billy in the arm and Billy falls into the same dustbin. Ash: Have you been...drinking? Loukas: YES. Ash: Inside, now! Billy, I'm calling your parents. Billy: Whatever helps you sleep at night, bitch. I'm sorry. You're not a bitch. You're pretty. Loukas: Billy, shut up! Scene Ten: Outside LemonJam's house, Matt is talking in loud whispers to Jen. Matt: Married!? Jen: Yes. It was a mistake sleeping with you, I'm sorry! Matt: I'm not some bit on the side you know. Jen: I know, but...it was a mistake! LemonJam: What was? Scene Eleven: Nickyy's house. Baz has stopped talking and she stares at him, aghast. Nickyy: I don't know what to say. Baz: I just feel so...alone. Nickyy gets up and hugs him, and he pulls her close. Nickyy: Baz, you're squeezing me. Baz: Sorry... Nickyy: Look, do you want to stay over tonight? You'd have to sleep on the sofa, but it beats being home alone I guess. Baz: That would be nice. Thanks. Scene Twelve: Doug and Gemma pull up into the now busy street, and get out of the car. Doug takes her over to an ambulance in order to see to the gash on the back of her head. A girl runs up screaming. Sia: GEMMA! Gemma: Sia! Oh god, are you okay? Sia: I thought you were dead! I saw you dead! What the-?! A policeman walks up to Doug and looks stern. Andyman: Are you Mr. Fom? Doug: No, I'm his brother...he's dead. Sia: What? Did you kill him? Gemma: No, I did... Sia: Oh my god! Doug: No, you shot him. I killed him. Gemma: Oh... Andyman places some handcuffs on Doug and leads him to the back of a police car. Andyman: You are under arrest for the murder of Fom Lemon, you do not have to say anything but- Gemma: No! Fom killed someone! Sia: Two people! Andyman: I'm sorry, I'm going to have to ask you to step away from the vehicle. Doug is lowered into the car and the door is shut. He looks back at Sia and Gemma and smiles, as Sia bursts into tears. Closing Sequence: "The Drugs Don't Work" by The Verve plays over, and we see the police car drive off and turn around the corner at the end of the street. The scene cuts to outside the bakery, where a car pulls up and a man looks sternly at Billy. It's Tom, and orders Billy to get in the car. Tom waves to Ash, stood at the door, and drives off. Finally, we cut to outside LemonJam's house, where clothes are being thrown out of the upstairs window. Jen is at the foot of the steps crying and Matt walks off home. |
Good episode, Keep it up!
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"Andyman: You are under arrest for the murder of Fom Lemon, you do not have to say anything but-"
Loved that line^ LoL |
Andyman as police, the world will come to an end.
lol great episode. |
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But i ran into foms saw gemma on the floor and fom closed the door behind him and was holding a knife, and that that last thing that happened. |
Jeez drama!!!!! :shocked:
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Zomg! I'm quite the focus in this episode. I LOVE the bit where I kill Fom :hugesmile:
I don't wannar go to prison and pick up soap :sad: |
Oh my :shocked:
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Boomp.
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WHERE AM I BITCH?!
THATS LIKE THREE EPISODES NOW. |
I have a bad feeling about me and Conor! :hugesmile:
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I was concentrating on the Fom/Doug/Sia storyline, now it's pretty much over I can shed light on more characters - I've begun with Billy, Loukas and Tom now :tongue:
There are more plans, don't worry. :tongue: |
:sad::thumbs:
Great episode. I think me and Lauren have moved away or summit, or we just have loads of sex. |
Ah okays, Shaun. :tongue:
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I think your character is just boring Ross.
:) self-obsessed ****wits only talking about their characters. bellends. |
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TiBBOaks Episode 9
Opening Sequence: With Johnny Cash's "Folsom Prison Blues" playing we initially see Doug in a police cell, where he has spent the night. It is now Monday morning and it's a bright day. Doug squints and blinks as the light shines through the barred windows. He sits up and walks to the door, and we see his eyes through the shutter on the other side. We then cut to Loukas' room, where he is recovering from a drugs binge the night before. Ash has assumed it's just a hangover and told him to stay home from school. Finally we cut to Nickyy's house, where Baz wakes up on the sofa and is happy to be in his surroundings. We hear footsteps running down the stairs. Scene One: Nickyy: I'm putting some toast on, you want any? Baz: No thanks, tea would be lovely though. Ninastar hops down the stairs, wearing her school uniform. Ninastar: Did Mr. Luva stay over last night, mummy? Nickyy: Yes, dear, he's slept on the sofa. Ninastar: Awww! We could have had a sleepover and told lots of scary stories! She is handed a piece of toast by Nickyy. Nickyy: Listen, I'm running late already - I'll be back soon. Just make yourself at home. Ninastar: Bye! Nickyy picks up her daughter's school bag and heads out the door in a rush. Scene Two: LemonJam's house. There is evidence of a violent row, and a baby is crying in the background. LemonJam climbs out of bed and sees to him, before we hear a knock at the door and someone shouting through it. Jen: Look, this is silly! I live here! You can't chuck me out! James: It's my house, and I'll do what I want you cheating cow! Jen: YOU'RE one to talk! I took you back when you cheated on me! James has no reply for this and rocks the baby before placing him back in his cradle. James goes to the door and opens it. Jen: I have a one-night stand and I'm thrown out of the house, but YOU! You get another woman pregnant, get her to have the baby, take it away from her with the court's help, and expect ME to look after it! James: Oh so because I did it first it's OK for you to cheat now, is it? What's the next step? Free stabs? Jen: Oh grow up - I'm saying that if I found it to forgive you, surely you can find it in you to forgive me. I know what I did was stupid, and I regret it so much. James thinks for a moment. Scene Three: At school, in Firewire's class, the students file in for the morning registration. MarkSpears is talking to DamonJ, and Conzors walks in. Conzors: Hey... DamonJ: Alright? We were just discussing which was best, Blackout or Circus? Conzors: Uhh...okay. He takes a seat, and Ruth*Star walks in and sits next to Firewire. Madonna is sat the other side of him, doodling in a notebook Firewire: Hey! Ruth*Star: Hey, I heard about what happened...why did you do it? Firewire: Oh...I don't wanna talk about it. Ruth*Star: Oh okay. Firewire: Listen, umm... Madonna prods him in the back as if to carry on. Firewire: DO YOU WANT TO BE MY PROM DATE? The class laughs and DamonJ starts mimicking him in a falsetto voice. Satisfaction walks in. Satisfaction: Shut it, skanks. Scene Four: At the police station, Sia is waiting in the reception area. A policewoman comes to her and takes her into an interrogation room. They sit down, and the woman puts on a recording tape, before giving the obligitory introduction. DC Kaz: Now, I need you to explain, very carefully, what you saw yesterday afternoon at the residence of Mr. Lemon. Sia: Well, I was stood outside building up the courage to talk to him - I'd just turned down a marriage proposal from him the day before, you see. Anyway, I looked through the window to see if he was in, and I saw my sister... She pauses and wipes her eyes. DC Kaz: It's okay. Please try to carry on. Sia: She was on the floor, curled up, and there was a small bloodstain on the carpet. Then I saw some guy, who turned out to be Brona's husband, Ben I think, run in. He saw her on the floor and turned round, and Fom was stood there. And he...he... She sniffs and blows into a tissue Sia: He stabbed Ben. I think it was 5 times. I can still picture it in my head, each thrust into his chest. She breaks down DC Kaz: Interview suspended at 10:03am. The officer pauses the tape DC Kaz: You can go outside and have a quick break, make any phone calls, get a drink or something to eat and then I'll talk to you some more about what happened later that day, okay? Sia nods. Scene Five: At Lauren/Annie's dormitory, the girls (and Mark) are getting dressed and watching TV. Mark has cooked pancakes. Lauren: Agh, I hope this interview goes well. Mark: It's only for a barmaid job at Andy's! Lauren: I know, but I could really do with the money. Annie: Why not ***** yourself out? Oh wait, you do that for free. An awkward silence. Princess: I'm going to the hospital later to check on Gemma and Brona, anyone want to come with? Annie: Yeah, I'll probably go after biology. Anyway, I'm off, gonna catch up with Christina. She leaves. Lauren: This is getting so bad. Mark: Well, what do you expect? Ross was a jerk to her! Lauren: Well, now she's being a jerk to me! It's not my fault. Mark: Give it time love. Princess: Yeah, she'll get over it. Got to go, I've got a hot date! Mark: Oooh, who's the lucky fella? Princess: Never you mind! She winks as she closes the door. Scene Six: At the station, a door opens and Doug is beckoned out of the room. Andyman: A Mr. Tom Lemon has paid for your bail, and you are for now, free to go. We will be in touch very soon to talk about what happened yesterday some more. He hands Doug a bag of his possessions, and leaves the cell door open for him to leave. Scene Seven: It's now mid-day and the sun is still shining brightly. In a school corridor, Firewire and Madonna are stood by some vending machines, drinking Ribena. Ruth*Star turns round the corner towards them, and Madonna nudges his friend. Firewire: Ruth! Ruth*Star: Oh, hey... Firewire: I'm really sorry about earlier, with the whole shouting it out thing. You must think I'm a total idiot. Ruth*Star: Actually I wanted to say I thought it was sweet, and I'd love to go with you! Firewire: Really!? He beams and hugs her, before pulling back awkwardly. She walks off after waving goodbye, and Madonna turns to him. Madonna: Like a virgin, touched for the very first time... Firewire: Shut up! Scene Eight: In the school canteen, Conzors is sat alone at a table. Two boys come and take a seat opposite him. Picto: Why the long face, queer boy? Conzors: I ain't gay! Billy: Woah, someone's on the defensive. Picto: What's that mean? Billy: Like...he's touchy about it Picto: Oh right. Conzors: Yeah well I'm not. Billy: Yeah whatever. Picto: Anyway, this is our table, so move it. Conzors: You haven't even got any food. Picto: Are you arguing with us, queerie? Conzors: Stop calling me that! Billy stands up threateningly and Conzors immediately grabs his tray to walk away. Billy: Yeah, I thought so. Scene Nine: Satisfaction is in his office, on the phone to his mother. Daren: Look, this is really short notice. His mum: I know dear, but he's got nowhere else to stay whilst I'm off in Corfu. Daren: Why can't he go with you? Mum: Because his passport's not been renewed since we went to Sicily 10 years ago, he was an ickle baba then. Daren: Fine, how long'll he be here for? Mum: Just 3 weeks, dear, I'll give you some money to look after him, with food and school things. Daren: Okay. Look, I've got to go, lunch is about to end. I'll see you later, love you! Scene Ten: At the hospital, Princess is sat at Gemma's bedside. Sia walks in, with Annie soon behind. Sia: How you doing, Gemz? Gemma: I've been better. Princess: How's Brona? Annie: The doctor said they'll keep her in one more night for the wound to settle, and she'll be discharged in the morning. She says she's fine, but obviously she's upset with the whole... She goes quiet and the group are sombre for a moment. Sia: Anyway, I brought you these. She places a bouquet of bright yellow and orange flowers on the bedside table and Gemma smiles, as Princess puts them into a vase on the desk beside her. Gemma: Aaah, that's something to brighten up these dull wards. Nurse Sunny interrupts them Nurse Sunny: I'm going to have to ask two of you to leave soon, but you can have another five minutes. Annie: Alright, love, calm down. Sunny pulls a strained smile whilst walking away. Gemma: Doctors say I have a little amnesia from the blow to the head, but I can't remember that [she smirks] The girls all laugh. Sia: When can you be discharged? Gemma: Well, I've got to have a scan tomorrow afternoon to check if there's any major damage, so it depends on what they find I guess. Princess: Well good luck, the town could do with some good news lately. I've got to get back to class, I've already missed this morning's lecture. Annie: Yeah, same. I'll see you soon! They leave. Scene Eleven: In their home above the bakery, Iceman is putting some clothes in the wash. He feels through the pockets to make sure no money or paper gets ruined, and he pulls a bag of pills from Loukas' jeans. He pockets them, and walks downstairs to open for the afternoon shift. Scene Twelve: On the way home from school, MarkSpears and Hugo are talking with DamonJ. Hugo has invited the other two over to watch a few chick flicks, such as Mean Girls and She's The Man. Hugo: I can't believe my brother's got a date for the Prom before I do! DamonJ: It's okay bub, I'll go with you. Hugo: Uh, no thanks, I'd rather go with Madonna. They burst out laughing. Hugo: What about you Mark, you got anyone lined up? MarkSpears: I was thinking of asking your mum. DamonJ: Ooh, burn! Hugo: That's my fall-back! They laugh again, approaching the house Conzors is stood there. DamonJ: Lock up your sons! Conzors: Shut up. Hugo, why didn't you invite me over? Damon and Mark exchange looks. Hugo: Uh...because I'm only allowed two people over... Conzors: Oh. Why not me? MarkSpears: You're being a bit selfish. Conzors: I wasn't talking to you. MarkSpears: Makes a change from feeling me up. DamonJ blinks and stares at Mark, whilst Hugo laughs in shock. Conzors: You prick. He runs off Scene Thirteen: Back at his flat, there's a knock on the door of Daren's apartment. Daren: Come in! A teenage boy of about 15 enters, wearing a tracksuit and beanie-hat. He is incredibly tall for his age, and walks with a swagger. Rory: Mum sent me over with this. He hands Daren an envelope containing £200. Sam! gets up from his seat and introduces himself. Sam!: I'm Sam, I'm Daren's... Daren: Boyfriend. Rory: Oh. You two aren't gonna be like...at it when I'm around are you? Daren: Yeah obviously, we were thinking of getting you involved. Rory: That's ****in' sick. Sam laughs and Rory walks into the spare room with a small bag of luggage, and begins unpacking. Scene Fourteen: At Fom's house, Doug has arrived home. He walks through the house and is shell-shocked at what has happened. He comes across a photograph of him and his brother and picks it up and throws it at a wall, smashing it. Tom: We're going to have to clean that up. Closing Sequence: "Breakeven" by the Script plays, and Loukas walks downstairs to go out. Iceman is stood there and stands in his way. As Loukas goes to push past, Iceman shows him the bag of pills and Loukas squirms. We cut to MarkSpears, Hugo and DamonJ laughing at a picture of Conzors on a social networking site. They spill a drink and DamonJ starts overreacting as they keep laughing. We finally cut to LemonJam's house where he is cuddled up with Jen on the sofa. The baby is sleeping peacefully in the cradle, and they finally appear content. |
I just realised in an old episode I mentioned something which I haven't worked in yet D: about James [admin, not LJ].
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Good episode Shaun!
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Lol! My best line so far....
Madonna: Like a virgin, touched for the very first time... Firewire: Shut up! |
LOL I love how Rory's in it now.
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Brilliant episode. :love:
LemonJen :lovedup: |
Oooh whose my hot date????
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At this rate Ill almost definitely be up for a Soap Award.
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Lol at Conzors being bullied.
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