Ain't Firewire a ladies man? First Christina now Nickyy lol.

Episode Two :blush2:

Am Waiting for it aswell


wheres the omnibus to?

Tibbenders will be back on Rota from tonight.. With episodes on

Monday
Tuesday
Thursday
Friday

Sorry for all of the delay :)

Yay!

Yeah what time tonight?

Episode 13! New episode tomorrow night :)

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The Kestle house
All of the family are arguing in the Kitchen about Amby walking out with Dezzy
30stone: Oh Shut up mother! Why do you think it is all my fualt!
Sia: Because if you hadn't have been so rude and arrogant then she wouldn't have walked out!
30stone: What? You really think i want to hear about a stupid sandcastle!
Redmoon: That is not the point Son! He just wants some love off of you!
Andy: Yeah, you are a bad father 30stone! Go to your room!
30stone: Oh Shut up Andy!
There is a knock at the door
Redmoon: Will you get it honey?
Sia: God! Do i always have to do everything around here!
Sia Walks out of the kitchen and into the entrance. She opens the door
Sia: Oh my god!

Jdizzels house
It is now nearing 7pm and Shaun is round Jdizzels house, both sitting at the table
Shaun: We are going to have to call it off hun
Jdizzel: What!
Shaun: I ust cannot risk mine and Princesses marraige going down the drain!
Jdizzel: I cannot believe you! You were going to take me to Venice though! You had tickets and everything!
Shaun: I have given them to Princess. We are going tomorrow
Jdizzel: But, You Can't!
shaun: I'm sorry
Shaun stands up and walks out leaving Jdizzel on her own. She stands up and looks out of the window. She see's Shaun and Shouts
Jdizzel: SHAUN!

The Square
Shaun walks up to Billy who is walking home with some chips, billy hears Jdizzel shout and sees his father storming towards him
Shaun: Happy now son! We loved eachover! I thought you were going to stand by me! Obviously not!
Shaun Storms away toards the vic

The Kestle house
David grabs Sia by the arm and holds a gun up to her head
Sia: Please Go
David: Now you will shut up or i will shoot!
Sia: Please, No
David: Upstairs now!
Sia: No!
David: Do you want this bullet to be lodged in your brain!
Sia: No
She starts crying
David: Then tell me where he is!
Sia: Who!
David: You know who!
Sia: I don't know! Please! i don't know!
David: Tell me! Where is Magic!

The Queen vic
Nickyy: Well, I better be off now, Been in here since half 3 drowning my sorrows!
TheMichael0: What Sorrows, You think you have it bad, then look at me! My girlfriend was killed and it was all Foms fault!
nickyy: I wouldn't say that Darling!
Themichael0: When he comes back from the hospital he is going to pay for what he did!
nickyy: Don't talk stupid! You are drunk, you just need to get home and go to bed
Fom walks into the Vic
Annie: Fom Love, What is happening!
Fom: Ninastar is going to be fine! She will be out in a couple of weeks!
Annie: Oh thanks god!
Everybody in the Vic starts to clap
Darenn: Well, What a relief!
Nickyy: Well done Fom!
Gregalz: Well done mate!
The Michael0 stands up
Michael0: And what about Supernoodles! What about her! You killed her! You Killed her!
Bigsister: Don't be silly mate!
Michael0: Don't be silly, Don't be Silly.. I'm NOT!
The Michael0 walks past Fom
TheMichael0: You are going to pay for what you did
He walks out of the vic and onto the square

The Kestle house
David has grabbed Sia by the hair and is leading her into the Kitchen with a gun in his hand. He walks into the kitchen
Redmoon: Huh!
David: Everyone Get on the floor now!
He waves the gun around and the family fall to the floor in terror
David: Where is he! WHERE IS Magic!

After a few Character mix ups Btw..

In the last episode i accidentally said Kate a few times, This was supposed to be Sia :)

omg did my character get killed off coz i aint been in it since week 1

You were in it tonight :)

You said I would be in it 2 weeks back :puzzled::puzzled:

You will be in tomorrow.

lol im not an idiot you edited it lol

I didn't? you were in there because i remember writing your name and thinking "He needs a storyline soon"

Great eppy, ooh i wonder what Magic has done :P

Thanks Christina :) You will find out tonight :tongue:

Remember to stay tuned for the Episode tonight at about 7pm :)

will Darenn ever find boy love? :O

Hey guys! Here is tonights episode! Next episode is on Thursday!

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Episode 14

The Kestle house
David is waving the gun around and still has Sia by her hair
David: You know where he is! All of you do! Now tel me, or she gets it!
Sia is Crying hysterically
Sia: No, Please no!
Redmoon: David. We don't know. Please just let her go!
David: Tell me now!
30stone: Just tell him mum!
Sia: I can't!
David: Tell me!
Sia: Please stop this! I really can't!
Andy: Mum! Tell him!
Sia: I DONT KNOW!
David shoots his gun at the wall and smiles
David: Now tell me where Magic is

The Vic
Shaun: I have got one thing to advise you mate
Shaun is VeryDrunk
Fom: What's that?
Shaun: Never.. NEVER.. Have kids! They stab you in the back when you aint looking and ruin all of your plans
Fom: Well, Thanks to this shooting, i am not going to have kids anytime soon
Fom has a tear rolling down his eyes
Fom: Anyway! Don't you think you should get home now mate?
Shaun: Don't be silly! Another drink please Annie
Annie: I think you should go home now Darling?
Shaun: No! It is only 9pm! I am staying for another drink!
Annie: Then i refuse to serve you! You are going to do something you don't want to if you drink anymore! So go on, Go home and get a good nights sleep
Shaun: Aghh. Bloody bunch of Party poopers! Right, i am going! See you bores tomorrow!
Shaun gets off of his seat and falls onto the floor just as Princess walks in
Princess: Shaun Darling!
Shaun: Gah! You can get lost aswell! I am fine! Now leave me alone!
Princess: C'mon you! We are going home!
Princess grabs him by the arm and drags him out of the door

Firwires house
Christina and Firewire are both sat on the sofa
Firewire: Another drink?
Christina: No. I better go to bed really. Go and sort things out with Mark tomorrow. Can i stay here tonight?
Firewire: Of course babe, Because, i think i need to get to bed too, and i don't want to get lonely. So yeah!
Christina: Lets go to bed, although i am not tired?
Firewire: And neither am i!
They Kiss and run off into the bedroom giggling

Bigsisters house
Bigsister and Darenn are sitting at the table having tea together
Darenn: God, look at me! I am sittting having tea with a woman who is old enough to be my mother!
Bigsister: Excuse me! I am only 10 years older than you!
Darenn: Yeah, and with the state of Britain these days that is an average for someone to have a baby i would expect
They both Laugh
Darenn: Man, I am going to miss you when i go back!
Bigsister: Then dont go! Stay, here with me!
Darenn: Don't be silly. The men around here are all jerks. I could never have fun with a bloke around walford, even though they are quite tasty! I like a bit of passion!
Bigsister: You've always got me?
Darenn: But i'm gay dear. So unless you have a secret son somewhere..
Bigsister: I don't care. I Love you..
Darenn: Where would i stay?
Bigsister: Here! You could stay and look after me. Annie is always working at the vic these days and i hate being alone! I could open up the loft and you could have a room up there!
Darenn: You really are serious about this aint you!
Bigsister: Very. I don't care whether you are gay, we don't have to sleep with eachover or find eachover attractive to be together. I really mean it, I love you
Darenn starts crying and gives bigsister a hug
Darenn: Look at what you've done now
Bigsister: So what do you say?
Darenn: Oh go on then!

The Kestle house
David is still holding the family in the kitchen. Amby walks into the house with Dezzy. She walks into the corridor towards the kitchen. David runs out of the Kitchen door. Amby screams. David Grabs Dezzy by his waist and runs out to his car. Amby runs after him Screaming
Amby: No! NO!
Dezzy: Mummyyyy!
Amby: Dezzy!!!
David gets into the car with Dezzy. Amby runs out in front of the car
Amby: Your not going! give him back!
The rest of the family run out of the house. David shouts out of the window
David: You should have told me!
Amby: No! Dezzy!!
Andy runs and puts his hand through the back window of the car. David puts his foot down and Drives off, straight into Amby
Amby: No! Agghh!
Andy: No!
David drives off in his car
Sia: Come back!
Redmoon: DAVID!
30stone: Dezzy!
Everyone in the family is crying hysterically apart from Amby, who is lying on the road, unable to move
Amby: whispering, lying on the road.... He.. help

Unknown block of flats
A Man, in his late 20's is sitting on the sofa in a dark room. There are no wallpapers or electricity. His phone starts ringing, He looks down at it, it is a call from "David". He sits up and answers it
David: Hello.. Hello! I have done it! Now get out of there! We need to run! Our plan worked! I have got the boy! C'mon! i am coming!
Magic: Excellent, i will be right there!
Magic spreads and evil Grin

YES.
I am evil haha. I am going to bring down the TiBB empire... I'll soon be owner of the Vic and Cafe.

Watch Out!

Haha. :joker:

Great episode tonight lewis!!

didnt see yesterdays so read that too was very good.

Thanks Ben :) Thursday and Friday will be action packed!

Brilliant.

I love Magic's character.

I need more romance.

LOL