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Originally posted by Lewis:)
Thanks Ben :) Thursday and Friday will be action packed!

Im always out on friday.

So ill not read til saturday but im sure it will all the good stuff usually happens on a friday.

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Originally posted by Lewis:)
Hey guys! Here is tonights episode! Next episode is on Thursday!

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Episode 14

The Kestle house
David is waving the gun around and still has Sia by her hair
David: You know where he is! All of you do! Now tel me, or she gets it!
Sia is Crying hysterically
Sia: No, Please no!
Redmoon: David. We don't know. Please just let her go!
David: Tell me now!
30stone: Just tell him mum!
Sia: I can't!
David: Tell me!
Sia: Please stop this! I really can't!
Andy: Mum! Tell him!
Sia: I DONT KNOW!
David shoots his gun at the wall and smiles
David: Now tell me where Magic is

The Vic
Shaun: I have got one thing to advise you mate
Shaun is VeryDrunk
Fom: What's that?
Shaun: Never.. NEVER.. Have kids! They stab you in the back when you aint looking and ruin all of your plans
Fom: Well, Thanks to this shooting, i am not going to have kids anytime soon
Fom has a tear rolling down his eyes
Fom: Anyway! Don't you think you should get home now mate?
Shaun: Don't be silly! Another drink please Annie
Annie: I think you should go home now Darling?
Shaun: No! It is only 9pm! I am staying for another drink!
Annie: Then i refuse to serve you! You are going to do something you don't want to if you drink anymore! So go on, Go home and get a good nights sleep
Shaun: Aghh. bl***y bunch of Party poopers! Right, i am going! See you bores tomorrow!
Shaun gets off of his seat and falls onto the floor just as Princess walks in
Princess: Shaun Darling!
Shaun: Gah! You can get lost aswell! I am fine! Now leave me alone!
Princess: C'mon you! We are going home!
Princess grabs him by the arm and drags him out of the door

Firwires house
Christina and Firewire are both sat on the sofa
Firewire: Another drink?
Christina: No. I better go to bed really. Go and sort things out with Mark tomorrow. Can i stay here tonight?
Firewire: Of course babe, Because, i think i need to get to bed too, and i don't want to get lonely. So yeah!
Christina: Lets go to bed, although i am not tired?
Firewire: And neither am i!
They Kiss and run off into the bedroom giggling

Bigsisters house
Bigsister and Darenn are sitting at the table having tea together
Darenn: God, look at me! I am sittting having tea with a woman who is old enough to be my mother!
Bigsister: Excuse me! I am only 10 years older than you!
Darenn: Yeah, and with the state of Britain these days that is an average for someone to have a baby i would expect
They both Laugh
Darenn: Man, I am going to miss you when i go back!
Bigsister: Then dont go! Stay, here with me!
Darenn: Don't be silly. The men around here are all jerks. I could never have fun with a bloke around walford, even though they are quite tasty! I like a bit of passion!
Bigsister: You've always got me?
Darenn: But i'm gay dear. So unless you have a secret son somewhere..
Bigsister: I don't care. I Love you..
Darenn: Where would i stay?
Bigsister: Here! You could stay and look after me. Annie is always working at the vic these days and i hate being alone! I could open up the loft and you could have a room up there!
Darenn: You really are serious about this aint you!
Bigsister: Very. I don't care whether you are gay, we don't have to sleep with eachover or find eachover attractive to be together. I really mean it, I love you
Darenn starts crying and gives bigsister a hug
Darenn: Look at what you've done now
Bigsister: So what do you say?
Darenn: Oh go on then!

The Kestle house
David is still holding the family in the kitchen. Amby walks into the house with Dezzy. She walks into the corridor towards the kitchen. David runs out of the Kitchen door. Amby screams. David Grabs Dezzy by his waist and runs out to his car. Amby runs after him Screaming
Amby: No! NO!
Dezzy: Mummyyyy!
Amby: Dezzy!!!
David gets into the car with Dezzy. Amby runs out in front of the car
Amby: Your not going! give him back!
The rest of the family run out of the house. David shouts out of the window
David: You should have told me!
Amby: No! Dezzy!!
Andy runs and puts his hand through the back window of the car. David puts his foot down and Drives off, straight into Amby
Amby: No! Agghh!
Andy: No!
David drives off in his car
Sia: Come back!
Redmoon: DAVID!
30stone: Dezzy!
Everyone in the family is crying hysterically apart from Amby, who is lying on the road, unable to move
Amby: whispering, lying on the road.... He.. help

Unknown block of flats
A Man, in his late 20's is sitting on the sofa in a dark room. There are no wallpapers or electricity. His phone starts ringing, He looks down at it, it is a call from "David". He sits up and answers it
David: Hello.. Hello! I have done it! Now get out of there! We need to run! Our plan worked! I have got the boy! C'mon! i am coming!
Magic: Excellent, i will be right there!
Magic spreads and evil Grin

just posting it from last page :)

Bumping thread :) This needs to be made Sticky in Creative writing or Chat and games me thinks . :blush2:

Not tonight :* Like i said, Tibbenders will be on the same nights as Eastenders. :tongue: You will have to wait :devil:

Will be posted in a min! Mum will be back in a min with my fixed lappy :)

Oh my god! Tonights episode is emmence! I love it! even though i wrote it! Enjoy... The starting of.. Fire night :cheer2::devil:

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Episode 15- Fire night

The Square
Amby is still lying in the road. Sia and Hugo are sat next to her. She is awake now. Redmon, andy and 30stone have gone in the car chasing after David
Amby: It hurts!
Sia: It is okay love, the ambulance will be here soon!
Amby: Has he got Dezzy!
Sia: Yes dear. But the boys are going to get him back, trust me!
Amby: Oh nooo! Please.. Please get him back! Please!!!

Redmoons car
Andy, 30stone and Redmoon are in the car driving very fast in search for David
30stone: It is no use! We will have to let the police find him! I am going top kill him when i get my hands on him!
Redmoon: Look, we cannot give up! We know David at least has the decency and he will never hurt Dezzy, we all know he is not like that!
30stone: And where is Magic anyway! It is all because of Magic running away!
Andy: What's that!
Andy points at a big block of flats, they are empty and boarded up. Outside of the flats is a shoe, belonging to Dezzy. They all jump out of the car
30stone: Oh my god! It is Dezzy's!
Redmoon: I think they are in there!
30stone: I am going to kill him!
30stone runs into the flats shouting. He looks everywhere, but there is no sign of anyone
30stone: Dezzy... Where are you! WHERE IS HE!

The square
The ambulance still has not come, but 2 police cars are parked up. Amby is still lying on the floor. She closes her eyes, and lets out a long deep breath
Sia: Amby! AMby!
Hugo: Oh no! Amby! WAKE UP!
Sia: AMBY!!! AMBY!!
They are both stood around Amby shaking her. The Ambulance comes round the corner
Sia: AMBY.. PLEASE!
Hugo: She's dead mum! She's DEAD!
Sia: No, Not my darling Amby! Please no!
The rain starts pouring and Sia bursts into fits of tears. People have now started gathering round the ambulance to see what is happening
Annie: Sia, What's happening!
Sia: No! please! NO!
Gregalz: Sia.. What is going on!
Darenn: eww, is she dead!
Sia: Please.. Please god. Please

A small house on the outskirts of London
Magic: We should be safe here!
Dezzy: I want mummy!
David: SHUT UP STUPID CHILD!
Dezzy starts crying. David picks him up and throws him into the airing cupboard, locking the door behind him
Magic: Now, Step two... we kill the rest of them
David: What!
Magic: WE need them gone! we need to kill them all!
David: All of them!
Magic: Yes, ready to go?
David: NOW?
Magic: YES, NOW!

The Kestle house
The whole family are in the kitchen crying. The police are out searching and it is just the kestle family in the house
Sia: I cannot believe it!
30stone: I am going to kill him! I AM!
30stone stands up in frustration
Redmoon: SIT DOWN!
30stone: I hate him! I hate him!
The phone rings
Sia: It might be the police!
Redmoon: I will get it!
Redmoon walks out of the kitchen door into the living room

The Square
David and Magic are at the back of the Kestle house

The Kestle house
Redmoon walks back into the Kitchen

The Kestles back garden
David: We wait until they go upstairs

The Kestle house
Redmoon: THey've found him! They have found Dezzy!

The Kestles back garden
Magic: What we just wait?

The Kestle house
Sia: Oh thank God!

The Kestles back garden
David: Yes! I am here now! no backing out! We just have to wait! The police are gone. There is no risks!

The kestle house
Redmoon: They want us to go to the station to get him
Sia: Oh god! C'mon boys! Go and get your coats and shoes on! We have to be quick!
The whole family run upstairs to get their coats in the airing cupboard

The Kestles back garden
David: look! They have all gone up! Now is our chance! Go.. Do it!
Magic: I can't!
David: Do it! It was your idea!
Magic: I can't!
David grabs the petrol. He opens the back door and pours it all over the kitchen. He runs back out
David: Now do it! Before they come back down! We want them to be scared!
Magic: I can't!
DAvid: DO IT!!!!

The kestle house
Sia and Redmoon are in their bedroom putting their shoes on
Sia: What was that? I heard someone sho...
There is a bang and a few screams, as the house blows up

ahahhahaha.
Im so evill.

I hope I dont get caught though, and I can be a more regular character.

Not yet Mambo :) But soon :)

Yeah great episode lewis.

Remind me saturday please as ill miss tomorrows.

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Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect
Yeah great episode lewis.

Remind me saturday please as ill miss tomorrows.

Thanks! I cannot wait to post tomorrows episode! It is a real Jaw dropper!

I will u2u it to you tomorrow night :)

Thanks lewis :thumbs:

Episode 16:

The Queen vic
Gregalz: Oh my god!
Billy: What was that!
Raindropz: Whoa!
Everyone in the vic runs outside to see what is happening

Firewires house
Christina and Firewire are lying in bed. She jumps up
Christina: What was that!
Firewire: What was what!
Christina: That bang?
She looks out of the window
Christina: Oh my god!

The Kestle house- Sia's Bedroom
The whole of the kitchen and hallway is on fire. Sia is lying on the floor screaming. All of the windows have shatered and there are distant cries for help from another bedroom. Redmoon is lying on the floor, With blood coming out of his head
Sia: Help.. Please!
Sia is unable to get up. Her arms are covered in blood and she is crying hysterically

The Kestle house- Andy and Hugo's bedroom
Andy is stood behind the door. He pushes it closed. HUGO is sat on the bed crying. The room is full of smoke and the windows are jammed shut
Hugo: What has happened!
Andy: I dont know! But we are going to have to get mum and dad!
Hugo: We can't! We don't know where the fire is!
Andy: We cannot stay in here! We need to get out! Come on!
Andy Opens the bedroom door and is choked back by a cloud of smoke
Andy: There must be another way we can get out!

The square
Most of the residents are outside of the house watching the fire. It has now spread throughout the whole of the first floor of the house
Gregalz: Someone needs to save them!
Firewire: Christina babe, i am going to go in!
Christina: No! You can't! please dont!
Firewire: I have to!
Firewire walks over to the house, followed by Gregalz and Billy
Princess: Bily come back!
Billy: No mum! I have to do this!
As the three men run up to the house, There is another explosion. Everyone in the square runs back in fear as there is a bang and the roof of the house falls in

Sia's bedroom
The foor falls in to the bedroom. Sia screams as it falls onto her. Part of the roof has trapped her legs and she cannot move
Sia: Help! PLEASE HELP ME!

Hugo and Andy's room
Hugo: Whoa! We need to get out! Please! I dono't want to die!
Andy: Grab a blanket! Quickly, Come on!
They both grab a blanket from the floor and put it over their mouths
Andy: Ready?
He opens the door. The whole house is filled with smoke and the stairs ave broken and are on fire. There is no way down
Andy: Quickly! Get back in!
They both run back into the bedroom, Shutting the door behind them. Andy is now crying as he sits on the bed, Thinking of what to do
Andy: The window is too small for us to jump out of and the stairs are on fire! We need to get over to mums room!

The living room
The Living room is engulfed in flames. 30stone is lying on the floor, crushed by the roof. He opens his eyes and lets out a groan
30stone: Help

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[b]Enjoy! Extra episode tomorrow! It will see one member die, but who will it be? Find out tomorrow in the end of.. "Fire night"!

Remember: Tibbenders will be on tomorrow night!

WOOOO.
Loved that episode. More me needed :whistle::whistle: lol

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Originally posted by Firewire
Lewis can me and Christina get married?

lewis?

Great bunch of episodes, I loved darenn's reaction to Amby's death lol.

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Originally posted by Dezzy
Great bunch of episodes, I loved darenn's reaction to Amby's death lol.

Thanks :) I Laughed when i wrote that line :joker::joker: