Haha. Aww. Not planning on having children then Enid?

Hell no! I want to enjoy life. :P

Nice work Lewis :hello:

Good work Lewis!

Very good start Lewis,
keep up the good work :D

Is it too late for me to ask to be in this??

Also the story is good so far. Looking forward to more!

that was surprisingly entertaining

Going to write another little bit now guys :) May do 3 parts tonight :)

Oh and Ninastar you are in the next scene :)

Thanks guys!

Aww yay! thank you lewis!! xx

Haha Lolz.

The Queen Vic
The Queen Vic is full of customers.. all getting ready for a long evening. Lili is behind the bar, talking to Brona
Lili: I expect tonight will be a long night.
Brona: Yepp. Well, I plan for it to be.
Lili: Isn't Ross with you?
Brona: Naah. He's going to have the night to himself with a few beers.
Lili: Typical bloke
Brona: Yeah. Where's Remy?
Lili: He's upstairs putting Courtney to bed. I expect he will be down a bit later when we get busier.
Brona: Aww. how old is she now?
Lili: Courtney is 9 and Jonathan is 15. It's crazy how time flies being a parent.
Brona: I don't think I could cope with having children yet.. I'm only 18. I want to enjoy life first.
Lili: I wish I did the same. I'm 30 years old and have a 15 year old child.. You can tell I haven't really lived life to the full.
Brona Laughs and Princess walk into the pub
Princess: Hiya love.
Brona: Heya, do you want a drink?
Princess: ohh yeah.. a Vodka and coke please Lili
Lili: Sure thing Princess love, tell you what, have it on the house.. Remy wont ever know!
Lili smirks as she goes off to make Princess's drink.

The Allotments
Shaun: but I thought you were gay..
MarkW: Yeah, well things change. I'm 22.. My mind is al over the place.. But I can't stop thinking about her Shaun.. And I don't think I can cope any longer.. seeing her walking around the square all alone.
Shaun: Have you not got any consideration for my feelings?
MarkW: Shaun.. we had a one night stand.. It's not as if we are married?
Shaun: But I love you
MarkW: Well.. I don't love you Shaun.
Shaun steps up and slaps Mark. He bursts into tears and runs off, leaving Mark standing alone. Mark sighs whilst rubbing his cheek

The Vic
It is now 9pm. Brona and Princess are in the Vic, both very drunk. Andy walks up to Brona
Andy: Hiya babe, do you want a drink?
Brona: Oooh. Ello Love... You're a sexy fellaa
Princess laughs loudly
Princess: Ooh. Bronaaaaaaaaaaa. Cut it out you silly billy. What about Rod!!
Brona: Who the Bloody hell is Rod my dear?
Princess: Rod.. What am I on about......
Princess laughs loudly
Princess: I mean Rosssssssss
Brona laughs.
Brona: He's my boyfriend isn't he?
Andy: You have a boyfriend? What a lucky fellaa!
Andy looks Brona up and down
Brona: I love you.. whatever your name is!!
Andy: Err.. It's Andy sweetheart... What is yours?
Brona: Andy?
she laughs
Brona: ANDY PANDY
Brona and Princess blast out in a fit of laughter
Brona: Come with me Andy Pandyyyyyyy.
Brona grabs Andy's T-Shirt and leads him into the toilets. They get into a cubicle and Brona laughs before snogging Andy.
Andy: Let's go back to mine babe. I've got some booze and a bed
Brona: Lets do it Andy Pandyyy
Andy smiles

Ross's house
Ross is lying on the Sofa in his dressing gown. He pours a glass of red wine and then pours another. A woman walks into the living room in her underwear
Ninastar: Shall we go upstairs?
Ross grins



Part 2 of tonight.. There will be another part a bit later :)

Ninastar, the dirty bitch!

It's terrible isn't it. :P

Oh my gawd 2 affairs already! :shocked: I love it!
I hope I get a part in a future scene :hugesmile:

Its very good Lewis I liked this one more then the first one, Good stuff!

pmsl!

aww it's fab!
would be really cool if i could be in it (:
anyways, well done Lewis <3

Thanks Sammy :)

Omg! I disgust myself!

:yuk:

i hate you mark sad/

LemonJam likes this.

I'm the luckiest girl on tibb. Poor poor brona. DONT DO IT BRONA!

ah, its well good lewis :)
i like the part im involved in :p