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Lauraaa when are you going to post the essay hun?:hugesmile:

*smirk* Any room for people like me? xP

People like ALL of you, we're a right bunch of *******. :wink:

And I mean that in the nicest possible way!

Ooooh I was gonna write it up now but I'm quite upset at the moment so I'll so it tomorrow.

Hope you feel better Laura. :hug:

Thanks hun!Nothing major just a tv show lol.

I'm going to type this up now :bigsmile:

yay ^_^ look forward to seeing it Laura

This is Part 1,its taking longer than I thought so I might get it all up tonight but I'll try!

The Broken City Girl

A girl called Stacey climbed out of a taxi onto a pavement. She pushed her sunglasses up onto her blonde highlighted head, pushed a strand of hair behind her pearl-studded ear and walked in the direction of the Hilton hotel.
Stacey was a tall girl,tanned with long blonde hair. She had a smilm build which she had gained from daily gym visits. She had huge brown eyes,pouting lips and a button nose. She was wearing a green casual sundress,dimante flip-flops with a heart locket and a toe ring on her left second biggest toe.
Stacey's phone began to ring and she opened her black large leather Balenciga handbag to answer it. Inside the in-season bag there was a pink iPod, a BlackBerry, a Louis Vuitton purse which contained many credit cards, a make up bag with every product under the sun, a glasses case, a hairbrush, a gossip magazine, a set of photographs and a preciuos piece of jewerely.
Answering her phone, Stacey was anxiuos as she flipped open the pink phone. She heard a male voice say:
'They're eating in the restaurant right now,staying in room 116'.
Stacey nodded said 'OK' and walked through the Hilton hotel front door being held open by a friendly doorman and headed towards reception.
'Hello,I booked Romm 117 under the name Hayter'.
The receptionist typed onto the computer and handed Stacey her keycard. On her way to the lift,Stacey anxiuosly peeked into the plush hotel restaurant, scanning it for a well-known guy but couldn't see him. Her heart beating even faster she pushed the button of the lift and made her way to room 117.Stacey lay down on the four-poster bed,kicked off her flip-flops and took out the photographs from her bag,scanning them for what felt like the thousandent time.

hehe thats great laura ^_^

Thanks Bex :hugesmile: More on the way!

yay ^_^

Second and final part!(2 and a half pages is way small typed!)

The photos were taken by a P.I Stacey had hired. Stacey was fabously rich-she owned the major celebrity gossip magazine 'Glossy' which had thousands of readers all across Britain and Ireland. Due to her wealth,Stacey felt it was not extreme to spend money that otherwise would have been spend on more un-needed Jimmy Choo's and Manolo Blaniks.
The P.I was investigating the life of Stacey's soon to be ex-fiancè who she knew from the photos was cheating on her with her soon to be ex-best friend Sophie. The photos were of Chris and Sophie scandily clad kissing outside Sophies Soho apartment. That was the weekend that Chris was 'away working' and Sophie was 'visiting her family'.
Inside her heart Stacey was a broken woman,but her heart as well as her head wanted revenge. Stacey had already torn up all of Chris' designer clothes in her anger and smashed everything else. She had done the same to Sophie. To some Sophie would seem a little crazy but she felt that after all the pain she had gone through she could have least ruin a few possesions. Stacey and Chris lived together in Notting Hill in a very large falt bought with Staceys well-earned money while Chris depended on her as he was a 'struggling musician'.when he really made no effort at all,as he knew he could always rely on Stacey to lend a hand.
Chris and Stacey had been a couple for 4 years,living together for 2 and engaged for 6 months. A lot of the weeding was planned for a year later in mid-July but Stacey was going to cancel it all once she told Chris what she knew. What hurt more was that Stacey had known Sophie since they were both 4 years old and fought over the same telephone at Reception-diva even then,they had been inseperable ever since. For the last 22 years they told each other everything but yet she had betrayed her just because she had felt lust towards Chris. Stacey hated that Sophie could throw away their life-long friendship for a meaningless fling with who she thought for the last 4 years had been 'The One'.
Stacey after a hour of lying,reflecting on the hotel bed heard noise in the corridor and voices she recognized all too well. Stacey waited 10 minutes picked up her bag,shoved her shoes on and slowly opened her hotel door.
A keycard as well as a Chloe shoe and Dior suit trousers were on the floor outside room 116.Stacey had suspetced this,she knew how desperate they both were for anything. Stacey breathing deeply picked the keycard up and opened the door of 116. Although Stacey had known now for nearly 3 weeks she was still not prepared for the sight that meet her eyes.
Sophie and Chris as in the photographs scandily clad kissing passionatley on the bed. They looked up and looked like the had seen a ghost. Stacey flung the 24 carat Tiffany engagement ring at Chris' head screamed ' I hate you both!' and stormed down the corridor with tears stremaing down her face.


Omg I just realised people were on a bed wearing next to nothing kissing passtionaley(why oh why did I use that word!) in my English essay which was read out to the whole class!!!Ahhh. Ah well. :spin2:

thats well good laura you deserve more than a c+
but come on you know i dont have blonde hair :nono::tongue:

Thanks hunny! Lol I know that :tongue: But she wasn't you just your name!

That's great Laura! You soo deserved more than a C+
I love the scandal and the love triangle!

Chris and Sophie are dirty *****s.. taking their clothes off before getting into the room!:bored:

lol thats great laura lol you didnt rea;lise that scene till it was too late

Ha fantastic Laura!

:bigsmile: