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Scarlett. 29-02-2020 10:06 AM
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Originally Posted by Ammi (Post 10788907)
....I love the cover, Scarlett (...and the Wynd Academy title ...)...and it sounds as though you’ve really enjoyed writing it/..getting back into the groove of your writing...?...that’s lovely to see...so it can be read directly on the inkett site..?...I’ve just had a little look and that seems to be how it is...I’m just finishing a book atm, so I’ll try to start reading it next week and really look forward to it...and well done you and thank you for the gift you’re giving...:love:..
Yeah, the Inkitt site seems to be a lot more friendly to readers it seems :cheer2: I'm loving being back into writing :D

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Originally Posted by Wizard. (Post 10788944)
It’s all offline at the moment but I’ll read yours when I can!
Thank you! :hee:

michael21 29-02-2020 10:08 AM
Scarlett is a nice name

Scarlett. 29-02-2020 10:14 AM
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Originally Posted by michael21 (Post 10788986)
Scarlett is a nice name
Thank you, lol :laugh:

Ammi 02-03-2020 06:53 AM
...I started this last night, although I didn’t get to read that much because I was tired...I think I’m up to Chapter 4, if I recall...the characters I’ve met so far are very interesting, Scarlett...and it’s feeling like an enjoyable and smooth read...
Spoiler:

...Roisin and Ashe are the two characters I’ve met...

Scarlett. 02-03-2020 10:31 AM
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Originally Posted by Ammi (Post 10790037)
...I started this last night, although I didn’t get to read that much because I was tired...I think I’m up to Chapter 4, if I recall...the characters I’ve met so far are very interesting, Scarlett...and it’s feeling like an enjoyable and smooth read...
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...Roisin and Ashe are the two characters I’ve met...
Thank you! The first few chapters have quite a bit to set up, the characters get more room to develop in the later chapters :D

Tom4784 02-03-2020 11:19 AM
Oooh, that cover is lovely. I'll have to give it a read later.

Scarlett. 02-03-2020 11:57 AM
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Originally Posted by Dezzy (Post 10790087)
Oooh, that cover is lovely. I'll have to give it a read later.
Thank you!

Kazanne 02-03-2020 04:03 PM
Beautiful cover and has got me interested in the actual book,very talented and good luck with it all.

Cherie 02-03-2020 04:06 PM
super, cover is great, it's not really my genre but good luck with your writing

Scarlett. 02-03-2020 04:26 PM
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Originally Posted by Kazanne (Post 10790194)
Beautiful cover and has got me interested in the actual book,very talented and good luck with it all.
Thank you! :D

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Originally Posted by Cherie (Post 10790196)
super, cover is great, it's not really my genre but good luck with your writing
Fair enough :) thank you :D

Ammi 02-03-2020 06:49 PM
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Originally Posted by Scarlett. (Post 10790077)
Thank you! The first few chapters have quite a bit to set up, the characters get more room to develop in the later chapters :D
...I love how you’re developing the characters and I love the story so far, it’s an excellent read, Scarlett...

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...the end of Transference chapter was particularly gripping and brutal and I liked how sudden it all felt because it really gave the feel for the coldness of Rory’s character...I love the friendships and I love the villains and I love the dark and light storyline..:love:..the only thing that I didn’t like so much...?..is that I’ll have to wait for You to write the next chapter...thank you for an engaging read in a fascinating world...:love:..

Scarlett. 02-03-2020 10:29 PM
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Originally Posted by Ammi (Post 10790285)
...I love how you’re developing the characters and I love the story so far, it’s an excellent read, Scarlett...

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...the end of Transference chapter was particularly gripping and brutal and I liked how sudden it all felt because it really gave the feel for the coldness of Rory’s character...I love the friendships and I love the villains and I love the dark and light storyline..:love:..the only thing that I didn’t like so much...?..is that I’ll have to wait for You to write the next chapter...thank you for an engaging read in a fascinating world...:love:..
Good news! I just released a new chapter!

Ch. 9 spoilers
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Yeah, with Rory, I felt there was a need for an actual violent villian, all the others so far are schemers, whereas Rory isn't afraid to cut anyone down to get what he wants. He's gonna be very interesting as time goes by!

I'm going to slowly add more allies at time goes on, with Logan being a second year, he's sometimes going to be seperate from the main group, so he will come across more of his own year as time passes by

Mystic Mock 03-03-2020 12:01 AM
Good luck Scarlett.:)

Scarlett. 03-03-2020 12:12 AM
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Originally Posted by Mystic Mock (Post 10790396)
Good luck Scarlett.:)
Thank you!

Ammi 03-03-2020 04:32 AM
...ooohhhhhh, I’ll really look forward to reading the new chapters later, Scarlett...:love:...

Ammi 03-03-2020 04:37 AM
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Originally Posted by Scarlett. (Post 10790368)
Good news! I just released a new chapter!

Ch. 9 spoilers
Spoiler:

Yeah, with Rory, I felt there was a need for an actual violent villian, all the others so far are schemers, whereas Rory isn't afraid to cut anyone down to get what he wants. He's gonna be very interesting as time goes by!

I'm going to slowly add more allies at time goes on, with Logan being a second year, he's sometimes going to be seperate from the main group, so he will come across more of his own year as time passes by
...chapter 9 spoiler...
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...I agree with Rory, I think it was important to set up his coldness as well ...and I liked how we weren’t led into that...it was swift and it was brutal...?..that would be a great movie scene, I can imagine...and I love the contrast of friendship bonds growing as well, your balance is excellent...

Scarlett. 03-03-2020 06:22 AM
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Originally Posted by Ammi (Post 10790409)
...chapter 9 spoiler...
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...I agree with Rory, I think it was important to set up his coldness as well ...and I liked how we weren’t led into that...it was swift and it was brutal...?..that would be a great movie scene, I can imagine...and I love the contrast of friendship bonds growing as well, your balance is excellent...
Ch. 9 spoiler
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Indeed, he loves violence for the sake of violence. The new chapters strengthen the bonds even further too :)

Ammi 03-03-2020 03:14 PM
...chapter 13 spoiler...

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...oh gods, what has Wynd done...:laugh:...(...it’s a gripping read, Scarlett...)...

Scarlett. 03-03-2020 03:18 PM
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Originally Posted by Ammi (Post 10790624)
...chapter 13 spoiler...

Spoiler:

...oh gods, what has Wynd done...:laugh:...(...it’s a gripping read, Scarlett...)...
Chapter 13 spoiler
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The Empire have tightened their grip in the missing months! Things have gotten real following the previous three chapters :o

Ammi 03-03-2020 03:24 PM
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Originally Posted by Scarlett. (Post 10790633)
Chapter 13 spoiler
Spoiler:

The Empire have tightened their grip in the missing months! Things have gotten real following the previous three chapters :o
...chapter 12 spoiler...

Spoiler:

...I loved the fall of Rivenlake also and the knight defeating the dragon, those were all quite a touching moment...we can see now how much of a road they all have ahead of them, it’s all set out beautifully for the battles ahead of them...

Scarlett. 03-03-2020 03:35 PM
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Originally Posted by Ammi (Post 10790638)
...chapter 12 spoiler...

Spoiler:

...I loved the fall of Rivenlake also and the knight defeating the dragon, those were all quite a touching moment...we can see now how much of a road they all have ahead of them, it’s all set out beautifully for the battles ahead of them...
Chapter 12 spoiler
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Indeed! They all lost something that day, be it physically or mentally, that battle signalled the start of a darker (or lighter?) era for Crystalla as a whole

Ammi 04-03-2020 04:05 AM
...chapter 14 spoiler....


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... this is the question that we’ve had to wait until chapter 14 to ask...so...should horseradish have been turned to ashes with Rivenlake or should it live on..?....

Scarlett. 04-03-2020 06:33 PM
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Originally Posted by Ammi (Post 10790913)
...chapter 14 spoiler....


Spoiler:

... this is the question that we’ve had to wait until chapter 14 to ask...so...should horseradish have been turned to ashes with Rivenlake or should it live on..?....
Ch 14 spoiler
Spoiler:

It should definately like on

Unlike a certain imposter :laugh:

Scarlett. 05-03-2020 05:22 AM
With the 18th Chapter out, Wynd Academy has come to an end, but I've post the prologue for the next story in the series: The Luna Legacy!

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/ESUyzcuX...jpg&name=small


With this book, I plan to take a little more time with the characters, since they're no longer facing a
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apocalyptic threat
. I also plan to dive into Roisin and her brother's history a little more this time too. (and no, her brother is not forgotten :p)

Ammi 05-03-2020 04:10 PM
...ending spoilers and The Luna Legacy prologue...


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...okay so that was a perfect ending for the continuation, Scarlett...the battles were quite intense...both of the Rivenlake Skies and between Ariel and Rory...Lumina is very sinister and obviously Rory will be looking for his revenge...so I fear the group won’t all survive these two enemies...:sad:...I loved it, your writing is excellent, Scarlett...and the story had me enthralled from the beginning and didn’t lose its grip..thank you for a thrilling read and for the introduction to some wonderful dark and light characters...:love:...

...I’ve read the prologue for The Luna Legacy...and the cover again is totally gorgeous...:flutter:..


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