Damn Dude! thats wiked!!

Woop go David!

David_Purdy - mmmm

I didnt see how it was personal to me at all. Sounds like something stolen from a greetings card.

Not that impressed with it but it is cute and loving.

Lol i think mines going to look crap in comparison to these now.

I'm thinking the same thing about mine.

Good effort, but does it really fit the aim?

Thanks

same here

I really can see how you tried here David, and I thinks its one of the best reading poems so far. However, is it for Annie?


nowsthebturn

I am obsessed with Annie,
I would climb a mountain just to get a touch,
She is clearly the one for me,
How can that be,
I havent talk to her much,
I hope its not just lust,
But I do love her bust.

One think I know for sure,
once come the moment of truth,

I hope I get to see oh Annie,
Youre clearly no ******!

LMFAO

worried now because i didnt put your name in it anywhere annie.

Nowstheburn - Oh lord

You certainly captured a lot of different things in your 10 lines.
You have made me think you are only after one thing though.. Sex, Boobs and no trannies.

Although it did make me laugh a little. I am very unsure about my feelings towards this.

Good attempt though

"I am obsessed with Annie,". Not a good opening line, but the last one is good :tongue:

Up next its Chemicle

The sun shines in the morning
And all i can think of is you
Your face your smile
and all the things you do

The one i love, for you i write
who i long to hold me tight
marriage is a commitment, for what we must share
to kiss to love, to care

Chemicle and Annie the two fit together
me and you forever and ever.

Chemicle - Love it

This one I actually got a total beamer with! It was soft, romantic and sweet.

Defo my favourite so far

Good one

Woooo, thanks :lovedup::lovedup:

Chemicle wants it ... :tongue:

marctierman

Annie will always hold a place in my heart,
they way she looks like a work of art
Da Vinci, Monet, never could draw
a woman as beautiful, I stare in awe
I don't know what I'd do without her
Every night I dream about her
Her eyes are deep, her heart is pure
I love her, of that I'm sure
Annie, please, be mine
Annie, you are divine

chemical to win!

i didnt expect these to be so good..
how embarrassing

marctiermans is really good!

Marctierman - Another cracker

OMG! This one is beautiful as well. Loved the description of art.

I have to say I never admitted any of these to be good and they are all amazing.

Well done

bigbrocks

Annie, youre so zanny,
Your eyes are like a sea,
When I look at you its all I can see,
Dont choose any of those losers,
I am going to be at your mercy.
How can I tell thee,
You gotta break free,
and be with me
I am your destiny,
Believe it, its only you and me

Thanks, A :hug:

i really like the end of that one


btw, cheers david

bigbrocks - Good

I liked it but it didnt flow as well as the others. It was very bouncy and la de da la daa. The words were lovely apart from when you called the other contestants losers.

Good attempt