:shocked:

a few inspirations maybe.

:O LOL.

Why you lot being mean to me LOLS.

ahh

no...were not being mean to you!

its just..um... funny ^.^

Its better than anything I, and most people here could ever write!

LOL.
I dont know whetehr to laigh or be insulted tbh. LOl.

Why? Youve got good writing skills! maybe not the best singing, but.....

Okay.
Kinda gettign insulted now.

I think Aint Mad Atcha is tryna be nice Conz :)

What cause I laughed at a video? We are showing our opinions on it. Its stupid for people to lie and say it was great.

Well you did post the video on a forum. What did you expect?

I know it aint great LOL.
Im saying youve already said it was bad why need to emphasise on it? LOL.

And Okay Christina lol.

Im dead embarassed.

please just dont take it tooo seriuly!

were just having a laugh

conor, when you cant sing, then dont put videos of you singing on here, if you dont want people to say you can't sing.

I am going to be honest and not mean.
It was rather painfull.

A - A blatant 'I believe I can fly' rip off.
B - Are you sat on a breaking chair, 'cuz their is a creaking.
C - It sounds abit like you have ran a marathon.
D - Are you being stabbed at some points, its just your shouting really painfully.
E - Are you related to Gary Glitter, cuz at one bits its rather pedo :P (50ish from the end)
F - A 1.30ish from end, its pretty painfull with the 'Through and Through'

Good Points
A - Nice Ending
B - Ok, slighty tacky wording.

Overall, good try, however, there is a little room for improvement. :)

I didn't, I said things to help you improve. Obviously you complety blanked that.

I didnt put it up to be good.

I oput it up to show you lot how the tune goes.

Obv i aint guna sing it myself, b ecause im not good. But you lot said you wanted to hear the tune.. so i showed you it.

lol
x

*awaits Conor to take down the video, followed by some backlash*

Yeh, and we commented on the tune and told you how to improve.

I wanna see your Blog thing.
I missed that.

This is almost as bad as when Conor started YouTube blogging. :hugesmile:

you dont
believe me

LOL, sorry but I didn't like it.

What was it like?

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And Conor, my advise isnt meant nasty, more to help.

Magic.. why did you say that, you know its just an axcuse for them to start taking the piss out o that too.

Omg. lol