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Firewire 06-03-2009 07:42 PM

What is the chances that I am gonna be TiBBEnders version of Tom Banks.

Lewis. 06-03-2009 07:43 PM

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Originally posted by Lewis:)
Episode 16:

The Queen vic
Gregalz: Oh my god!
Billy: What was that!
Raindropz: Whoa!
Everyone in the vic runs outside to see what is happening

Firewires house
Christina and Firewire are lying in bed. She jumps up
Christina: What was that!
Firewire: What was what!
Christina: That bang?
She looks out of the window
Christina: Oh my god!

The Kestle house- Sia's Bedroom
The whole of the kitchen and hallway is on fire. Sia is lying on the floor screaming. All of the windows have shatered and there are distant cries for help from another bedroom. Redmoon is lying on the floor, With blood coming out of his head
Sia: Help.. Please!
Sia is unable to get up. Her arms are covered in blood and she is crying hysterically

The Kestle house- Andy and Hugo's bedroom
Andy is stood behind the door. He pushes it closed. HUGO is sat on the bed crying. The room is full of smoke and the windows are jammed shut
Hugo: What has happened!
Andy: I dont know! But we are going to have to get mum and dad!
Hugo: We can't! We don't know where the fire is!
Andy: We cannot stay in here! We need to get out! Come on!
Andy Opens the bedroom door and is choked back by a cloud of smoke
Andy: There must be another way we can get out!

The square
Most of the residents are outside of the house watching the fire. It has now spread throughout the whole of the first floor of the house
Gregalz: Someone needs to save them!
Firewire: Christina babe, i am going to go in!
Christina: No! You can't! please dont!
Firewire: I have to!
Firewire walks over to the house, followed by Gregalz and Billy
Princess: Bily come back!
Billy: No mum! I have to do this!
As the three men run up to the house, There is another explosion. Everyone in the square runs back in fear as there is a bang and the roof of the house falls in

Sia's bedroom
The foor falls in to the bedroom. Sia screams as it falls onto her. Part of the roof has trapped her legs and she cannot move
Sia: Help! PLEASE HELP ME!

Hugo and Andy's room
Hugo: Whoa! We need to get out! Please! I dono't want to die!
Andy: Grab a blanket! Quickly, Come on!
They both grab a blanket from the floor and put it over their mouths
Andy: Ready?
He opens the door. The whole house is filled with smoke and the stairs ave broken and are on fire. There is no way down
Andy: Quickly! Get back in!
They both run back into the bedroom, Shutting the door behind them. Andy is now crying as he sits on the bed, Thinking of what to do
Andy: The window is too small for us to jump out of and the stairs are on fire! We need to get over to mums room!

The living room
The Living room is engulfed in flames. 30stone is lying on the floor, crushed by the roof. He opens his eyes and lets out a groan
30stone: Help

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[b]Enjoy! Extra episode tomorrow! It will see one member die, but who will it be? Find out tomorrow in the end of.. "Fire night"!
New page, new post :).

officialleafan 06-03-2009 08:44 PM

Ahhh, i'm literally like "Sia get out! Sia Get out!" LMAO!

Lewis. 06-03-2009 08:45 PM

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Originally posted by officialleafan
Ahhh, i'm literally like "Sia get out! Sia Get out!" LMAO!
Haha.. But she is trapped! Will she manage to get out. Or will she be the unlucky one who dies!

Christina 06-03-2009 09:41 PM

Ahh loved it!!

Dom:D 06-03-2009 09:42 PM

Omg amazing episode.

Lewis. 07-03-2009 09:16 AM

Thanks! Tonights episode will be a real gobsmacker!

Jake! 07-03-2009 10:35 AM

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Originally posted by Lewis:)
Thanks! Tonights episode will be a real gobsmacker!
I swear your only doing them Mon-Fri with the exception of Wednesday's.

Lewis. 07-03-2009 01:13 PM

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Originally posted by Jake!
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Originally posted by Lewis:)
Thanks! Tonights episode will be a real gobsmacker!
I swear your only doing them Mon-Fri with the exception of Wednesday's.
One off special tonight, as it is fire night :lovedup:

Jake! 07-03-2009 01:15 PM

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Originally posted by Lewis:)
Quote:

Originally posted by Jake!
Quote:

Originally posted by Lewis:)
Thanks! Tonights episode will be a real gobsmacker!
I swear your only doing them Mon-Fri with the exception of Wednesday's.
One off special tonight, as it is fire night :lovedup:

Yay. Any chance of me getting in this soon?

Lewis. 07-03-2009 01:16 PM

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Originally posted by Jake!
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Originally posted by Lewis:)
Quote:

Originally posted by Jake!
Quote:

Originally posted by Lewis:)
Thanks! Tonights episode will be a real gobsmacker!
I swear your only doing them Mon-Fri with the exception of Wednesday's.
One off special tonight, as it is fire night :lovedup:

Yay. Any chance of me getting in this soon?
Soon :) I have noted a request from a while ago and i am just working my way through the request list, when i need a new character

30stone 07-03-2009 03:09 PM

LOL aw andys crying.

And ive been deemed useless and likely to die i think )=
lol

Another great episode lewis.

Lewis. 07-03-2009 04:12 PM

Thanks ben :)

Ninastar 07-03-2009 04:17 PM

OMG i loved it!


And did i die??

Lewis. 07-03-2009 04:18 PM

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Originally posted by Ninabitch
OMG i loved it!


And did i die??
Nope. But your baby did. Fom mentioned you coming home in a few days in a previous episode. You will be home in the next week :)

Lewis. 07-03-2009 04:55 PM

Well, i have written tonights episode! Cannot wait to post it, but you will have to wait!

arista 07-03-2009 05:02 PM

Addittional (optional) Ad Ons
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O8Marsh runs and panics as UKTurtle gets near him

Ang7 flys in from Down Under
takes Arista for a Drink and Debate.

30Stone wins another Car
and runs around Naked.

Lewis. 07-03-2009 05:38 PM

Well, The episode we have all been waiting for!

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The Square
The Firemen are still not at the house. The whole square are watching the fire erupt through the house
Firewire: I cannot watch this anymore! I have to go in!
Billy: I'm coming too!
Greg: Me too, Anyone else!
Darenn: Oh, no thanks. i hate all of that blood and gore!
Shaun: Me!
Princess: No you are not! You are still drunk!
Michael0: I will then!
Fom: Fine, i am coming with. We need as many people as we can to get them out.
Michael0: Or we could just let Fom go on his own and die!
nickyy: Michael0!
Fom: I don't know about you! but i would rather save the lives of 5 innocent people! Now come on!
The 5 men run up to the house. Firewire kicks the door in. The hallway is full of fire and smoke
Greg: We are going to burn to death!
Firewire: I don't care!
Firewire runs into the house. Christina Screams. Greg and Michael0 step back
Greg: i cannot go in there! It is suicidal!
Billy: Fine, go back! ready Fom?
fom: Ready.

Sia's bedroom
Sia is still stuck under the roof. She is unconcious. Redmon wakes up
Redmoon: Sia! Sia!
He gets up and tries to lift the block on top of her. He cannot lift it. He opens the bedroom door and runs out into the smoke

The square
Billy and Fom run out of the house into the square
Princess: Billy! Thank god!
Christina: Where is Firewire!
Fom: There is no way upstairs! The stairs have collapsed!
Christina: Where is firewire!
Billy: I think they are all up there. But.. I could not see, The smoke is too thick! And the fire is everywhere! There is no where to go!
Christina: WHERE IS FIREWIRE!
Fom:.. We.. We don't know

Andy and Hugo's bedroom
Andy and Hugo are still sat on the bed. There is no fire in their room, but the smoke is coming through under the door. There is a bang as the door opens and Redmoon runs in. He cloes the door behind him
Hugo: DAD!
Hugo runs up to Redmoon and hugs him
Redmoon: We need to get into my room! Your mum is stuck and i need a hand lifting the roof!
Andy: How! The house is full of smoke! Can we not wait until the fire is gone!
Redmoon: That is the thing! The fire is not going to go! It is spreading! We have to move fast! It could be in the Gas tank any minute now! And when it gets there! We are gone!
Andy: Spreading! What!
Redmoon: look! We have to go and help your mum! Come on! Before it spreads upstairs!
All 3 of them run out of the door. The Hallway upstairs is full of black smoke, and the banisters are on fire. They all run into Sia and Remoons room

The square
christina: I have to get him!
She runs up to the house, but Nickyy catches her and pulls her back
Christina: No. I have to save him!
She is crying
nickyy: Christina, You cannot go in there love!
Christina: NO!

Sia's room
The room is filling up with smoke. The 3 boys are lifting the blocks off of Sia. She wakes up
Sia: oh my god!
Redmoon: Sia, Darling! It is going to be okay!
Hugo: Mum!
Andy: Mum! Mum! We are going to get you out mum!
Andy pushes the last peice of roof off of Sia. She lets out a Gasp and gets up
Hugo: Mum!
He hugs her
Redmoon: We have to get out! We have to go now! Before it is too late!

The Square
Christina is still crying. The firemen have still not arrived and everyone is now starting to get worried about firewire, aswell as the Kestle family. Suddenly, Firewire comes out of the front door, coughing and gasping for air. He is carrying 30stone, who is unconcious
Christina: Firewire! Baby!
Firewire walks down the steps and puts 30stone on the floor
firewire: He is not dead! Not yet! We need to get him an ambulance!
Nickyy: They are all coming! But are being held up!
Annie: And the others?
Firewire: I could not find them! i think they are all upstairs!

Sia's room
Redmoon: ready!
Sia: Wait! Where is 30stone!
Redmoon: Darling, we have not got time! The Gas tank is right below us! We need to get out.. and quick!
Sia: I need my boy!
Redmoon: ready!
Sia: I need him!
Redmoon: Go!
Redmoon opens the door. They all run out the upstairs hallway and look at the stairs. They have collapsed
Andy: We are going to need to jump!
Sia: jump!
redmoon: Yes! Jump! One at a time! Then run out of the door! Come on! Go!
Andy Jumps into the downstairs hallway. The fire is all around him, He runs though it and out of the door

The square
Andy runs out of the door. His face is covered in ash and his hand is bleeding
Annie: It is Andy!
Greg: Huh!
Fom and Greg run over to him and walk him away from the house
Andy: They are coming! They will be here! Any minute now!
Hugo suddenly emerges from the door. He is limping. Greg runs up to him and carries him over to Andy
Andy: Bro! It is going to be okay! I promise!
Hugo: Where is 30stone!
Firewire: He is there, he is alive! You are going to be okay! I promise!

The landing
Redmoon and Sia are stil on the landing
Redmoon: You go first!
Sia: No you!
Redmoon: Just go! Quickly!
Sia jumps! As she does, The landing falls down taking Redmoon with it. As Sia lands she gets up and looks around. Redmoon has fallen through and is lying on the floor. There is a huge wall of fire between them!
Sia: REdmoon! No!
redmoon: just Go!
Sia: no!
Redmoon: Go, Quickly!
Sia: No!
Sia Feels a pair of arms around her. It is Firewire, He carries her out into the square, She is screaming and crying

The Square
Hugo: Mum!
Sia: Redmoon! Someone save him! Please!

The House
Redmoon is lying on the floor still, unable to get up. the fire spreads onto the gas tank in the airing cupboard, right next to where Redmoon is lying
Redmoon: Whispers*** Help
Suddenly the gas tanks Explodes, with a deathening Bang

The square
Everyone has fallen onto the floor, as the house explodes. The Firetruck swings around the corner followed by the ambulance and police
Sia: Redmoon! Redmoon! NOOOOO!

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Rip Redmoon. :(

Tibbenders is Back on Monday :)

Zac 07-03-2009 05:48 PM

Wow! Just read that episode. It's so amazing, and sad.

Lewis. 07-03-2009 05:49 PM

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Originally posted by Zak
Wow! Just read that episode. It's so amazing, and sad.
Have you read them all from the start?

Zac 07-03-2009 05:50 PM

Yea. Just been browsing through them all.

Lewis. 07-03-2009 05:51 PM

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Originally posted by Zak
Yea. Just been browsing through them all.
Good :) If you want an easier read, on the Opening post, there are links to all of the episdodes. Will post week 4 episodes tomorrow morning

Zac 07-03-2009 05:51 PM

Okay. Thanks. :)

Lewis. 07-03-2009 05:55 PM

That is okay :)

And thanks for the positive feedback!

Firewire 07-03-2009 05:56 PM

I thought it was me who was gonna die. lol


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