ThisisBigBrother.com - UK TV Forums

ThisisBigBrother.com - UK TV Forums (https://www.thisisbigbrother.com/forums/index.php)
-   Creative Writing and Books (https://www.thisisbigbrother.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=12)
-   -   Tibbenders//finished (https://www.thisisbigbrother.com/forums/showthread.php?t=80695)

Lewis. 23-03-2009 06:57 PM

Tonights episode Guys! A Bit Longer than usual but introduces a couple of New Characters. Next Episode will be tomorrow! Enjoy x

_______________________

Jdizzels house
Greg and Jdizzel are sitting on the sofa. She is crying and he has his arm around her
Greg: Look, I cannot solve anything unless you tell me what you are crying for
Jdizzel: I Love Him!
Greg: Who?
Jdizzel: PICTO! Who do you think!
Greg: What?
Jdizzel: Picto! I Love Him!
Greg: HE is with Prince..
Jdizzel: I know that! I know! But.. we
Greg: You werent!
Jdizzel: We were having an affair!

The Queen Vic
Annie is wiping Blood from Picto's face. He Looks tired and is clearly worried about his relationship with Lizzedj Getting out. Princess and Billy are sitting next to Picto, wondering why LizzelJ Attacked him? The Vic is slowly filling up, and everybody is gossiping about what happened!
Bigsister: Oi Annie, Why did she do it?
Annie: I don't know mum, and it is not my place to know! If Picto wants to tell, he can. God Mother, you are so nosey!
Bigsister: Well, I have to keep up to date with things around here, you see!
Fom and ninastar walk into the vic, Everybody goes silent and stares at them
Ninastar: What? WHAT?
Princess: ninastar, Come sit here love
ninastar: c'mon Fom
Fom: Stare all you want guys, We don't really Care!
Lili Walks in. She is about 60 and has Light Grey hair. She is very stuck up and posh. Annie finishes wiping Picto's face and Gets up to greet Lili. TheMichaelO walks in behind her. He is wearing a suit and walks straight over to Fom. Everybody stares at him as Fom stands up. They come face to face
TheMichaelO: Fom.. Look, I.. I am Sorry
Fom: Mate, don't say Sorry. You did nothing, I was the one who had the affair. Not you
TheMichaelO: Can i have a word Fom? Annie, can we go upstairs? It is important?
Fom: Okay
Annie: Sure thing Guys. Don't go in the bedroom, Mark is in a mood, just go into the Front room
Fom: Thanks
They walk off upstairs. The whole Vic is silent
Lili: How Dare He show his face in here! Cheating Scum!
Annie: Lili, Mind your mouth!
Lili: Well, Cheating on the poor girl and now acting like nothing happened! Hunny..
She walks over to Ninastar, Cluthing her walking stick, and puts her arm around her
Lili: Men Like those, don't need encouraging! Dump Him! He is scum! And until you dump him, so are you, for putting up with it!
Darenn: Ouch, Bitchy?
Ninastar: Fom is not Scum!
She Stand up
Ninastar: He was there for me when i was in pain! When i was holding on to my life! And where were you! Gossiping about it in here?
Lili: I have not been in here for months dear, Not with this flu going round!
Ninastar: Yeah, so you been on the phone have you? Gossiping with your Mates from Bingo? Your old Birds?
Darenn: Well, This is more exciting than that tv program! Paris hiltons British best friend! I knew i should have entered!
Bigsister: Darenn, Shut up, i cannot hear!
Darenn: Sorry Dear
He sits back in a huff
Lili: How dare you speak to me like that! You Selfish, Soft, COW!
Ninastar picks up her drink and throws it on Lili. She squeals and Ninastar runs upstairs to go and get Fom
Lili: I AM PRESSING CHARGES FOR THAT!
Princess Sits there, shocked. She picks up Her Bag and Stands up
Princess: I think i better go and get an ice pack, That bruise is swelling!
She runs off in a hurry, leaving a silent vic, all staring at Lili

The Community Centre
Sia walks in to the Community centre with Andy. The Rest of the Kids are in the park playing. Josh is behind the counter, writing. He is about 25 and is very good looking. He has a great fashion sense and is a real ladies man. He is single and loves a good night out!
josh: Ooh, Hello there Sia! I am ever so sorry to hear about the Fire? do they know what caused it?
Andy: The Police have arrested someone. We think it is David, the man that kidnapped Dezzy. But we are not sure? They are looking for another man
Sia: Josh, is there anywhere where we can stay for tonight? I have found a house outside the train station for us to live in, but it wont be ready until tomorrow! If i cannot find anywhere, the kids will be taken away from me. And WE have already made an enemy of Nickyy!
Josh: Ahh, Let me have a look, Hmm, Yes! We have a hostel outside Walford? About 3 miles away? It takes in people for up to 3 nights a month, after that, they have to pay. Is that okay? You get free food for the first night, so it should all be free!
Sia: Ahh, thankyou so much! i will give them a ring? What is the number?
Hugo runs in, in a hurry
Hugo: Mum! Mum! Dezzy has fell over! 30stone has gone to get ice creams? What should i do?
Sia: Well, Is it bad?
Hugo: I don't kow? But he is crying!
Sia: Andy, go out and see to Dezzy will you?
Andy: What! Mum!
Sia: Andy, You are 19! Act your age and help your 6 year old brother!
Andy: Oh God!
Andy And Hugo walk out, Andy, clearly annoyed
Sia: Yeah, so.. That number?

The Vic
Scene goes to Upstairs in the Vic. Ninastar is standing outside the door listening to Fom and Themichael0 talking. There are tears down her face, but she is being silent
TheMichaelO: I am sorry, because.. Because..
Fom: Just tell me MAte!
TheMichaelO: I was Cheating on Supernoodles.
Fom: You What!
TheMichaelO: I was cheating on Her! Okay! I was Cheating!
Fom: With who? Who Mate!
TheMichaelO: I do not quite know? when she broke it with me she told me "Milly" Was not her name, She was a criminal. She took my money and spent it. She Took Me, and made me think she was the one! She made me sleep with her! She made me nearly run off with her! That is where i was Fom. Not On a bussiness trip, With her! And now, i have threatedned you for cheating.. And Look at me! I was Planning on running away!
He Bursts into Tears, and Fom Gives him a huge Man Hug
Fom: We All make Mistakes Mate, All of us
ninastar walks away from the door and downstairs, She walks through the vic, Picks up her Bag and goes
Billy: Well, I hope she is okay? I will go and check?
Fom walks into the vic from the bar
Fom: Well, Glad that is sorted, Now, Where is ninastar?

The Market
Christina and Direwire are walking through the market, talking about the wedding
Firwire: that would look nice on your Dress?
He Points to a Flower in one of the stalls
Christina: Naaa, Too tacky. I want the wedding to be Stunning
Firwier: And Stunning it will be, Especially if you are there!
Christina Laughs and Firewire Kisses her

Lizzledj's House
Greg: How Long for?
Lizzledj: About, 2 months. We were going to run away to venice together and everything was going to be perfect! Now.. My Life is over!
Greg: What! Because one man dumped you? Don't be silly? Mate, He is twice your age!
LizzLedj: But.. I Loved him!

Police Interview Room
David is sat in the room with two police officers.
Police1: David, Did you Kidnap Dezzy?
David:.......... Yes.
Police1: And Did you Set fire to the house, murdering an innocent man?
David:.......... Yes.
Police2: David, Was there anybody else involved in your crimes? Anybody we could potentially arrest, Helped you in any way?
David:.......... No

JOSHUAH! 23-03-2009 07:12 PM

Good episode Lewis!
I made my own little appearance too, yay. :flowers:

Jen 23-03-2009 07:13 PM

Just read it...

I'm thinking I will most likely ***** around with Greg.

LOL

Christina 23-03-2009 07:13 PM

Ooh good episode :D

Lewis. 23-03-2009 07:13 PM

Josh, You will be in a lot more tomorrow :) And thanks!

Must go now.. Coursework to do :( Please Leave Feedback for Epsidoes.. It is nice reading it x

Lewis. 23-03-2009 07:14 PM

***** around with Greg.. Haha. :cheer:

And thanks christina x

30stone 23-03-2009 07:15 PM

LOL Davids going to jail.


And LOL Jen!!! "***** around"

Harry! 23-03-2009 07:18 PM

Am I in it? I love the show I really do but I would love to see what it would be like in 'Tibbenders'

BigSister 23-03-2009 07:39 PM

lol im so nosy hehe
And haha paris hiltons british best friend

Lewis. 23-03-2009 07:54 PM

Lool. Madonaa, you will be in soon :) And Bigsister, Beaky Neaky Trunky Trunnky ;0 That is what my nan said to me when i was nosey. :laugh3:

Glad you enjoyed it guys x

Firewire 23-03-2009 07:55 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Lewis:)

Christina and Direwire are walking through the market, talking about the wedding
Firwire: that would look nice on your Dress?
He Points to a Flower in one of the stalls
Christina: Naaa, Too tacky. I want the wedding to be Stunning
Firwier: And Stunning it will be, Especially if you are there!
Christina Laughs and Firewire Kisses her
You get my name right ONCE! Well done.

lol

30stone 23-03-2009 07:56 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by BigSister
lol im so nosy hehe
And haha paris hiltons british best friend
Blanche! LOL

Lewis. 23-03-2009 07:56 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Firewire
Quote:

Originally posted by Lewis:)

Christina and Direwire are walking through the market, talking about the wedding
Firwire: that would look nice on your Dress?
He Points to a Flower in one of the stalls
Christina: Naaa, Too tacky. I want the wedding to be Stunning
Firwier: And Stunning it will be, Especially if you are there!
Christina Laughs and Firewire Kisses her
You get my name right ONCE! Well done.

lol
Oh god! Did not notice that. Loool. :joker: Sorry! Did you enjoy the episode?

Ninastar 23-03-2009 08:03 PM

Omg I loved it!.

I am sorry lili for being a bitch. I couldnt help myself x

Tom4784 23-03-2009 08:16 PM

Loool! Lil's a great character.

Lewis. 23-03-2009 08:30 PM

Lili's Character is going to be great! A Female ian Beale crossed with the horrible side of Pauline Peggy and Pat, Put together!

:wink:

BigSister 23-03-2009 09:16 PM

Yay im like Blanche but im trying to think of some1 from eastenders as well

lily. 23-03-2009 10:22 PM

Christ, I'm like a peggy mitchell sort by the looks of it .. or worse.. haha..

Lewis. 24-03-2009 08:52 AM

Thanks you Guys :) More tonight x

Lewis. 24-03-2009 03:00 PM

Tonights episode, will be the best, in terms of writing, yet!

Some Spoilers-

[spoil]Firewire: It was supposed to be a surprise for us.. They have bought the empty house next to the vic![/spoil]
[spoil]Lili: Helloooo Love!
Princess: Oh God!
Picto: Right, I am going out. To get the money from the post office
Picto Stands up and goes out the back door. Lili Walks into the living room, with a huge smile on her face
Lili: Hello SweetHeart!
Princess: Lili. Hey, How are you?
Lili: Fine thanks Dear, Now, Are you going to put the kettle on?[/spoil]
[spoil]Mark: Go on.. Tell me!
Christina: Dad.. Well.. Mark.. I'm..
Firewire: She's pregnant![/spoil]
[spoil]David: What is his name?
Police: Magic, Magic was his name[/spoil]

New Characters tonight!

DamonJ 24-03-2009 03:11 PM

I hope I'm a bitch :devil:

Ninastar 24-03-2009 03:14 PM

Me too damon lol x

Lewis. 24-03-2009 03:22 PM

You Are ;):spin2:

Zac 24-03-2009 05:09 PM

When am I going to be in? Could I please have an dramatic entrance when I first arrive. Thanks. :hugesmile:

Lewis. 24-03-2009 05:12 PM

Soon Zak! You are still on the very long list of people that want to be in! i am going through it as fast as i can ,without it getting too confusing with too many characters. x Next episode in a bit ;) x


All times are GMT. The time now is 05:44 AM.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.11
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, vBulletin Solutions Inc.
User Alert System provided by Advanced User Tagging (Pro) - vBulletin Mods & Addons Copyright © 2025 DragonByte Technologies Ltd.