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Dom:D 24-03-2009 05:12 PM

Can't wait untill tonights episode!!

Zac 24-03-2009 05:13 PM

Oh, thanks Lews. Can't wait for the next episode. :banana:

Lewis. 24-03-2009 05:13 PM

It should be good Dom :D A Long one it is.. but good! :tongue:

Harry! 24-03-2009 05:16 PM

Am I going to be in it yet?

Lewis. 24-03-2009 05:17 PM

Like i said with Zak.. You are on the request list.. I will add you in next time i need a boy and you are next on this ist.. not long now though :) x

30stone 24-03-2009 05:39 PM

Am i still menna be in hospital?

Lewis. 24-03-2009 05:40 PM

Here is tonights episode! Enjoy it! It is a long one.. But i hope most episodes will be like this now! Another one tomorrow night! x And PLEASE leave feedback, it is nice to know what you all think!

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*Starting from todays episode, Robin-van-perfect, Or 30stone, will be called Ben*

Firwires Flat
Christina and Firewire are sat on the sofa together. It is the next morning and She is flicking through a wedding magazine and He is going through music on the laptop, for their first dance song
Firewire: How about this?
He Clicks and "I will always love you" Starts playing
Christina: Naa, Everyone has that! We need something unique? Something nobody else will have?
Firewire: What about this one then?
He Clicks and "Amazed" starts playing. Firwire starts singing along
Firewire: #Every little thing that you do, Baby i'm amazed by you# Aww, Isn't that nice?
Christina: Lovely! But i want a nice slow song, something new?
Firewire: WEll, This one?
He Clicks, and "Single Ladies" Starts playing
Christina: Yeah, lets have that!
Firewire: Honestly?
Christina: Sarcasm babe. God, How old are you?
Firewire: This one is nice..
He Clicks and "I Will Be" Starts playing
Christina: Aww, this is nice! Who sings this?
Firewire: Leona Lewis, It is a lovely song isn't it?
Christina: I Like it.. I LOVE it. Let's have it!
Firewire stands up and takes Christinas hand. He pulls her up, and they start dancing slowly. Firewires Phone goes off
Firewire: One minute
He Takes his phone out of his pocket and runs out into the Kitchen. Christina Sits down on the sofa and picks the laptop up. She minimizes the music player, to find a website labeled.. "Uk bigamy Laws"

The B&B
nicky Comes down the stairs in a dressing gown. Markspears is lying on the sofa, snoring. She Looks at him and bends down, so her face is right next to his. She shouts
nickyy: OI!
Markspears jumps up in shock
Nickyy: C'mon! You might not want to come to bed with me anymore, but that does not mean you can lie around on the sofa all day long! Now, UP! It is 11 o clock!
Markspears wipes his eyes and sits up. Nickyy walks out into the hallway. She shouts to Markspears
Nickyy: I don't know why you are down here anyway, we have 3 empty rooms up there! THREE! Well, it can't be helped with you giving away freebies to everyone!
Markspears: It was Sia! She just lost her house! Where else could she go!
nickyy: Well, She should have gone to the community center! They would have given her a nice place to stay! Where do you think she stayed last night?

Bridge street
Sia and her family are walking down Bridge street. They are all carrying bags and look very tired
Andy: Well, where do we go now mum?
Sia: Princess has said we can move in with her for a few days. With Those two going to Venice today and Billy going back up to university, the house will be empty for a couple of weeks, so we can stay!
They walk into the train station to see Ben sitting on the bench
Dezzy: DADDY!
Dezzy runs over to Ben. He jumps on him and hugs him
Ben: Son! Aww, have i Missed you!
Sia: Ben, How are you dear?
Ben: Fine thanks Mum! You alright boy?
He Ruffles Hugo's hair
Hugo: Yes thanks Bro!
Ben: So, where are we going?
Sia: Princess has given us the house for the next few weeks, they are all going away
Ben: Well, Off we go then!
They walk off down the street

Firewires Flat
Firewire Runs back into the living room, with the phone in one hand. Christina is sitting on the sofa, with the laptop on the table
Christina: Bigamy Laws? Why are you looking at Bigamy Laws?
Firewire: Ermm.. Well. You know, just intrested?
christina: Hmm, Nothing you want to tell me?
Firewire: Don't be silly
He walks to the table and clicks X on the screen
Firewire: Right, That was my mum. Her, Dad and Damon are coming down for the wedding!
Christina: Aww, isn't that nice!
Firewire: Babe, they want to move down here!
Christina: What!
Firewire: It was supposed to be a surprise for us.. They have bought the empty house next to the vic!
Christina: Oh.. Okay? When are they coming?
Firewire: They will be here any minute now
Christina: well, we better go and greet them then
Christina Grabs the keys and walks out of the flat door. She looks around the corner at firewire
Christina: C'mon!
He Hesitates, then walks out aswell, closing the door behind him

Princess, Picto and Billy's House
Princess and Picto are sat at the table eating dinner, Billy is sat on the sofa, watching tv
Princess: Well, it all seems quite weird?
Picto: Look, i don't know why she did it? I would tell you if i did!
Princess: Maybe i should go and have a word with her later?
Picto: No, she will only lash out at you aswell! Obviously it was something i said?
Princess: Hmm,
Picto: Wait until we get back from Venice. Anyway.. have you seen my NEw Top? I want to put it in my suitcase before we leave tonight?
Princess: No?
The Doorbell rings
Princess: Billy, will you go and get that love
Billy: Mum, I am busy!
Princess: No you are not! You are 23 and have NO job or Kids! Now go and get the door!
Billy stands up and walks out to get the door
Princess: Can he not see we are stressed?
The Door opens and a high voice shouts from the hallway
Lili: Helloooo Love!
Princess: Oh God!
Picto: Right, I am going out. To get the money from the post office
Picto Stands up and goes out the back door. Lili Walks into the living room, with a huge smile on her face
Lili: Hello SweetHeart!
Princess: Lili. Hey, How are you?
Lili: Fine thanks Dear, Now, Are you going to put the kettle on?
Princess: Hmm, Yes. Now sit down dear
She gives a despairing look to Billy and walks out into the kitchen

Lezzidj's House
Lezzidj is sitting alone, on the phone to Greg. It is about 2pm and she is still in her dressing gown
Jdizzel: Yeah, I will. Yes.. Okay. I understand. I know but... Yes.. I Love Him though.. I don't care... Okay.. See you later.. Bye
She puts the phone down, And puts her head in her hands

The Square
Firewire and christina are standing outside, What will be Lauren, Damon, And Ross's House. They look tired and have been standing there for the last 45 minutes
Christina: I thought you said they would be here any minute now!
Firewire: Well, that is what mum said?
Christina: God.
Firewire: C'mon, lets go back in!
Christina: No.. I want a drink
Firewire: Well, what about your dad, won't he be in there?
Christina: He is not my dad! not anymore!
Christina walks into the door of the vic, Firewire trailing behind her. Everybody stares at her as she walks up to the bar
Christina: Hey Annie, Ermm... A Gin please?
Annie: I am sorry Babe, but not in your condition
Christina: What do you mean?
Annie: You know, with the baby and everything
Christina: What! Who told you that?
She looks around, everyone is still staring. She see's Nicky in the corner, nicky Raises her hand
Christina: NICKY!
Suddenly everyone applauds Christina. She looks doubtful, but happy that everyone is okay with her being Pregnant.
Christina: Aww, Thanks guys!
She walks over to Nicky and whispers to her
christina: YOU TOLD!
nicky: I am sorry love, I couldn't help myself?
Darenn walks up to her
Darenn: Christina Love..
He Puts his hand on her shoulder
Darenn: Well done!
Christina: Aww thankyou Darling!
Darenn Starts to cry with happyness
Christina: Don't Cry!
Darenn: I am just so happy! I have become very fond of you since i moved here!
She Laughs. Suddenly Mark comes out from the toliets in a wheelchar, his leg still in a cast. Everyone goes silent
Mark: Well, What's all this about then?
Bigsister coughs. Annie whistles and Gregalz slurps on his drink
Mark: Go on.. Tell me!
Christina: Dad.. Well.. Mark.. I'm..
Firewire: She's pregnant!
Mark looks at Christina, Shocked.He wheels himself over to her and bursts into tears
Mark: I'm Sorry!
Christina: I'm Sorry Too!
She bends down and hugs Mark. Everyone in the Vic Claps and Cheers. Sam! Walks in with a suitcase, Back from his school trip. Christina Runs over and hugs him. He starts crying
Christina: Sam! What is the matter?
Sam!: Hannah, She.. She left me
Christina holds her arms around her brother

Princess, Picto and Billy's house
Lili is sat on the sofa, Feet on the table and drinking her cup of tea. Princess walks in with her cup of tea and sits on the small chair in the corner
Princess: So then Love, how can i help you?
Lili: Well, I have come to ask why Lezzidj did that to Poor Picto?
Princess: Well, I don't know, and if i did, i am not going to go telling everyone
Lili: You wouldn't be telling everyone dear.. Only me!
Princess: Exactly.. Everyone!
Lili rolls her eyes and takes another slurp of her tea

Police Station
David is sitting alone in his Cell. A Police officer opens the door of the cell and walks in
Police: David, We have some news on the investigation. We have just had a call from a man, claiming to have been involved with the crime? he says he is your son, would you like to explain?
David: What is his name?
Police: Magic, Magic was his name
David:... Hmmm...I don't know who you are on about.. Just leave him go

Firewire 24-03-2009 05:53 PM

Great episode Lewis.

30stone 24-03-2009 05:53 PM

Lol that was long, Great episode, tension is building..

Zac 24-03-2009 05:54 PM

Wow! Amazing episode, as always. :tongue:
I like how long you made it. I don't know how you do it. The idea's and storylines are amazing. Great work.

Lewis. 24-03-2009 05:56 PM

Thanks Guys! It is hard.. But i enjoy it! I am going to try and make every episode like that! It makes it worth reading and really gets you into it, before you have to stop reading. :bigsmile:

Ninastar 24-03-2009 05:58 PM

Omg its well good x x x x

Ninastar 24-03-2009 06:15 PM

I have a feelng that firewire is having an affair x

Lewis. 24-03-2009 06:18 PM

Thanks Ninastar.. And.. Al l will be revealed on the wedding :thumbs:

Lewis. 24-03-2009 07:07 PM

COMFIRMED!

Sundays episode will be a double episode.. One at 6pm and one at 7pm

Lewis. 24-03-2009 08:55 PM

just realised.. I have written an episode for tomorrow, when there is not supposed to be an episode tomorrow? Oh well, an extra episode tomorrow as well :angel:

BigSister 24-03-2009 08:59 PM

ooh yay thats good ^_^

Lewis. 24-03-2009 09:00 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect
Am i still menna be in hospital?
You cam out tonight if you haven't noticed :thumbs2:

And Bigsister *Hi Five* You will love Tomorrows episode. You and Lili have a good old gossip :joker:

lily. 24-03-2009 09:02 PM

haha.. i'm back from the dead and starring in TiBBenders.. damn Shaun killed me off in TiBBoaks... it was tragic I tell you lol

JOSHUAH! 24-03-2009 09:07 PM

LOVED IT.
You're so good at this Lewis!

BigSister 24-03-2009 09:42 PM

erm yay.... ^_^

Lewis. 25-03-2009 03:09 PM

Thatnks Josh! Maybe another episode tonight? Depends whether i will get on the computer in the evening, at dads atm?

Firewire 25-03-2009 04:10 PM

It is gonna be funny.

Me anc Christina aren't even gonna be at our own wedding!

Lewis. 25-03-2009 06:34 PM

[b]No Tibbenders tonight, not managed to get laptop back. :( Will DEFFO be tomorrow though! Usually none on a wednesday anyway, so not going off rota ;)

Lewis. 25-03-2009 07:50 PM

Tonights episode! I got my lappy back! Please enjoy and Leave feedback x Another episode tomorrow maybe :)

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Princess, Picto and Billy's house
Lili is about to walk out of the door, she has been at the house for about an hour. Se has all of her bags and princess is leading her out
Lili: Alright love, i will see you soon okay! Keep your ears open and if you have any news or gossip, you know where i live!
Princess: Yes, yes, I will! Have a nice evening!
Lili Walks out. Princess locks the door and sighs. Billy comes running down the stairs
billy: Thanks God she is gone!
Princess: Thankyou Billy! Thanks for leaving me!
Pito opens the front door and walks in
Princess: And you!
She looks sternly at Picto
Picto: What! I was out geting these!
Picto holds up an envolope full of euro's
Princess: Yeah, and then sitting on the bench having a fag for the last half an hour!
Picto looks at Princess with sorry eyes
Princess: And Don't look at me like that!
She points at Picto and walks out into the kitchen

Bigsister, Annie and Darenns house
Bigsister and Darenn are sitting in the living room watching Television. The Door opens and Annie walks in
Bigsister: Hello Love!
Annie: Hey!
She walks into the living room
Annie: Cannot stay long, am covering a shift at the vic at 6pm, so going to have something to eat and go again!
Darenn: Better be quick then dear! It is half 5 Now!
Annie: Eugh! I hate work!
Annie walks out into the kitchen
Bigsister: Well, it is the only way to get forward in life hun!
Annie: Yeah, Well. I am thinking about finding another job? Greg.! really wants a job at the vic.. He can take my place. I was looking into going to university, you know, Getting a degree?
Darenn: Don't be silly love! Uni is a waste of time these days! I went and studied Beauty for 3 years, and now look at me! unemployed and Loving it!
Annie: Yeah and living with two girls who cater for your every need
Darenn: Yeah, i suppose. What more could i want? Apart from a nice man?
Bigsister: Well, we could all do with one of those!
Darenn: That Billy is nice?
Annie walks into the living roomm
Annie: He is twenty Darenn? You are nearly 40!
Darenn: Well, i like a younger lad!
Annie: Anyway, he isn't gay!
Bigsister: Well, you seem quite protective! Sure you two don't have something going on?
Annie: MUM!
Bigsister: What?
Annie: We split up two years ago! And anyway, we are just friends!
Darenn: You went out with Billy?
Bigsister: Yeah! They were gonna get married and everything!
Darenn: Oooh You lucky girl!

The Queen Vic
Christina and Firewire are sat at a table with Mark, Greg.!, Leezidj, Fom, TheMichaelO, Ninastar and ALL of the kestle family, who are waiting for Princess and Shaun to give the keys over. Everybody is celebrating the news that Christina is pregnant
Firewire: Speech! Can i make a speech?
Fom: Of course!
Andy: Go on mate!
Sia: GO ON SON!
Christina: Please don't embarass me
Everyone Laughs
Firewire: Right well..
Firewire stands up and taps a spoon on a glass. Everyone in the vic looks at him
Firewire: Right..
Princess, Picto and Billy walk in, all with suitcases. Princcess leans over to Sia and hands her the house keys
Sia: Thankyou so much love
Princess: Right we are off
Everybody wishes them goodbye and they leave
Firewire: Right, as i was saying! Christina, well.. She means the world to me. I Love her, and well, Love her really! That is all i can do! She is my best friend, my soulmate, and, will soon be my wife! She is carrying my baby, and i couldn't think of a better perso..
Lauren Rushes into the vic. She is Firewires mum and is quite a busty lady. She is about 60 years old and is a very fierce woman
Lauren: Oi! Firewire!
she walks up to Firewire and grabs his arm
Lauren: c'mon Boy! Get Over and Help your mother unpack! Me and the boys have been here for hours!
She pulls Firewire across the Vic
Firewire: Mum, Er, Hey! Nice to see you too! And anyway, you have not been waiting for hours! I went and checked 5 minutes ago!
Lauren: Where are your manners boy! You know not to answer me back!
She drags him out of the vic. Everyone Bursts out laughing
Fom: Hey Christina! I think that is the mother in Law!
Everyone Laughs again.. Christina laughs with them
christina: God! I better sort this out!
Christina walks out of the vic

The Square
Christina walks up to Firewire, he is carrying boxes into the new house
Christina: Errm, Firewire.. A Word please?
Firewire: okay!
He puts the boxes down, Ross, His dad (in his 60's, also on the large side of life. He is quite a nice man) Walks up to Christina
Ross: And you are?
Christina: I am christina, Firewires Fiance!
She holds out her hand. But Ross pushes it back down and gives her a huge hug
Ross: Ahh, Welcome to the family!
Christina: Thanks!
He lets go. Lauren shouts from the doorway
Lauren: Oi! Ross! Cmon! I don't want no hanging around! Who the hell is she!
Firewires Brother is Damon, He is about 29 and is Bi-sexual. He loves to party and is quite a bitch. He hugs his brother and walks into the house. Ross and Christina walk up to the house, to meet Lauren
Lauren: Who the hell are you?
Christina: Oh, hey! I am Christina, Firewires Fiance
She puts out her hand
Lauren: Well, then.. You better start helping! I don't want no slacking! C'mon! Get a move ono
Lauren walks back into the house in a hurry
Christina: Oh god!


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