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Lewis. 01-01-2010 01:41 PM

Another episode probably tonight :) Thanks for the comments guys!

Lewis. 01-01-2010 05:23 PM

Ross and Brona's house
Ross and Ninastar are lying in bed kissing. It is nearly midnight and there is a big crowd of people in the square waiting for the countdown
Ross: I suppose you better go now?
Ninastar: Why?
Ross: Well.. Brona could be home anytime soon..
ninastar: I thought she was partying all night?
Ross: Well yeah.. but.. She could be back anytime after midnight.. and we don't want to get caught.
Ninastar: Hmmm
Ross: Cmon, we can do this again soon.. I just really don't want to get caught.
Ninastar: fair enough..
Ninastar gets out of the bed and puts her clothes on

The Vic
[i]Shaun is sitting alone in the Vic[/b]
Lili: Arent you coming outside Shaun, the countdown will start in a minute chick.
Shaun: Naah. New years day is like every other day for me
Lili: Ahh, cmon hun, come outside for the countdown
Shaun: Honestly.. I'm fine here alone.
Lili: Fine.. your loss..
Lili walks outside. Shaun takes a sip of his drink.. sobbing

Lemonjam and Nicky's house
Lemonjam is with his children, Stephanie and Harry. They are watching the TV.. waiting for the countdown. Nicky walks into the room with 4 glasses and a bottle of champagne.
Nicky: Get your drinks ready guys!
Steph: oooh, Alcohol!
Nicky: Don't get too excited.. you are only having a little bit!
Steph: But mum, I'm 15.. an adult!
Nicky: Hardly!
Steph grumbles as she picks up her champagne
Lemonjam: Here's to an amazing new year guys... I love you all and I hope next year is a bit better than this one.
Steph: yeah, well you've only got yourself to blame for that one.
Nicky: Stephanie! Don't be like it!
Steph: Well.. he has.. If he hadn't had cheated on you mum, this year would have been amazing!
Nicky: STEPH!
Steph: Well, I'm only telling the truth.. right Dad?
Lemonjam: Steph.. What I did was a mistake.. And we've all promised we wouldn't talk about it again.. we'd just forget it.
Steph: So Dad.. which young girl have you got your eyes set on this year then?
Nicky: STEPHANIE! Go to your Room NOW! You do not speak to your father like that! Go on... GO!
Stephanie storms out of the room and up the stairs.. grinning

Ross and Brona's house
Ross and Ninastar are in the hallway. Ross kisses Ninastar
Ross: I'll call you another time..
Ninastar: Yepp.. We can do it again
Ninastar winks and opens the door. Princess is dragging a very drunk Brona up the pathway to the house
Princess: DON'T Worry about her-rrrrr-r. She is not dead Rod. I SWEAR!
Princess laughs and lays Brona on the floor. Brona gets up and looks at Ninastar
Brona: HELLOOOOO My LOVER-RRR
Ninastar: Well Ross. Thanks for the advice on my Tv... I better be off now
Ninastar runs off down the pathway
Brona: FINEEEEE. Don't speee-aak then!
Ross: Come here you!
Ross grabs Brona and drags her inside. Princess follows them in

The Square
Lili is standing on the stage and is looking up to the countdown
Lili: READY EVERYONE!
The crowd all get ready for the countdown
Everyone: 10.. 9.. 8.. 7.. 6.. 5.. 4.. 3.. 2.. 1..
Everyone cheers as the new year comes in
Lili: HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE!
Sam: WEEEEY
Zee: YEEEEEY
Jords: Yey! 2010.. HERE WE COME!

Lemonjam and Nicky's house
Steph is upstairs on her laptop talking to Andyman on msn
Steph: I have to get away
Andyman: I'll take you away.. somewhere they will never find you
Steph: I just want to be with you Andyman.. I can't cope with my stupid parents anymore
Andyman: When do you want to go?
Steph: I don't know. As soon as possible.
Andyman: I'm on my way.
Andyman signs off. Steph closes her laptop and roots under her bed. She pulls out a bag... full of clothes. She picks up a pen and paper and writes..
"It's your own fault.. Have a nice life
Steph x"



Another episode on Sunday night guys :)

Stephanie 01-01-2010 05:36 PM

pmslrofl

:L

CaraRawr 01-01-2010 05:54 PM

lmao, this is great :]

Stacey. 01-01-2010 06:08 PM

lewis,its amazing :D

Ninastar 01-01-2010 06:08 PM

Lol! Aww this is so good! x

Jessica. 01-01-2010 06:11 PM

Brilliant! :laugh2:

Lewis. 01-01-2010 06:16 PM

I'm glad you all like it :)

Ninastar 01-01-2010 06:20 PM

I actually am dieing to see sundays!

Harry! 01-01-2010 06:28 PM

Another very good episode Lewis!

Lewis. 01-01-2010 06:29 PM

I'm looking forward to writing it Ninastar ;D I may post one half tomorrow night instead and the other on Sunday night. I don't want to post it as one big chunk because I always find smaller little chunks are easier to read and don't take up much time :)

Jords 01-01-2010 08:40 PM

Hahaha, this is great! Lots of romances!

Patrick 01-01-2010 08:45 PM

*Reads through to see if im in it* Meh.

lol that was a good read, loving this so far.

Lewis. 06-01-2010 05:04 PM

Shall post another episode tonight.. Sorry guys, thought I posted it on Sunday :)

Chels 06-01-2010 05:05 PM

yay :)
only now read these the other day aha. they're really good lewis!

Lewis. 06-01-2010 05:12 PM

Thanks.. you are in this one Chels :) I shall post it as soon as I can find my laptop charger :L

Chels 06-01-2010 05:15 PM

oh woop thanks lewis! :]]

Lewis. 06-01-2010 05:16 PM

Andy's Flat
Andy is lying in his bed. There are a pair of knickers on the floor beside him and an open condom pack. He stretches his arms and looks around

Ross and Brona's house
Brona is lying in bed. She opens her eyes
Brona: Oh no.. My Head.
She rubs her eyes and sits up

Chels and Jords house
Chels and Jords are in the kitchen making breakfast for their two children - Jessica and 30stone - Both 15 years old
30stone: Cmon mum, hurry up.. I'm hungry!
Chels: Oi you.. you'll get it when it's ready!
Chels cracks an egg in the pan
30stone: Eugh.. forget it.. I'll get something from the minutemart.
30stone gets up and walks out of the kitchen
Jords: The minute mart is closed so you wo...
30stone walks out
Chels: Ah well, he'll find out when he gets there.
Jessica: God mum, why is 30stone such a grump all of the time!
Chels: Hormones love..


Gary's house
Shaun is very drunk. He is standing outside Gary's house throwing rocks at the window
Shaun: OPEN UP GARY BABEEEEEEEEE
Gary opens the door
Gary: SHAUN! What do you want!
Shaun: YOU HONEEY
Gary: Come inside.. NOW
Shaun stumbles across the road to Gary's house and goes inside

Shall post the rest later :) xx

Chels 06-01-2010 05:19 PM

LOL! :]
me and jords married pmsl :L

Princess 06-01-2010 05:20 PM

Just reading this,you did me drunk very accurately :laugh:

Jords 06-01-2010 05:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chels (Post 2837567)
LOL! :]
me and jords married pmsl :L

Hi honey :laugh:

Love it Lewis!

Jessica. 06-01-2010 05:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chels (Post 2837567)
LOL! :]
me and jords married pmsl :L

You are my mother :laugh2:

Jessica. 06-01-2010 05:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jessica.. (Post 2837725)
God mum, why is 30stone such a grump all of the time!

:laugh2: :joker: :hugesmile: :blush: :bigsmile:

Chels 06-01-2010 05:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jords (Post 2837649)
Hi honey :laugh:

Love it Lewis!

hai bbz ;)

Stephanie 06-01-2010 05:53 PM

lmfao


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