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Jords 28-12-2009 06:25 PM

:joker: :joker:

Sam: [From distance] Ooer loool x
I was pmsl at that :tongue:

MrGaryy 28-12-2009 06:30 PM

LOL at all the tenting pitching.

Damaris 28-12-2009 06:39 PM

EPIC

I ****ing love this LOL

'[Brona looks over at James, who is playing his guitar by the fire looking blankly at the floor while Damaris, Karl, Nate and MargeryFan laugh at Harry trying a bong for the first time.]' LOLOLOLOLOLOL



i wish i was in it more *hint

Harry! 28-12-2009 06:44 PM

Very good work LJ!

LemonJam 28-12-2009 06:50 PM

Thanks guys.

I'm putting names down, no worries Damaris ;)

CaraRawr 28-12-2009 06:53 PM

lmao i love it.

but oi, where's me D: i joke, it's great<3

Shaun 28-12-2009 06:54 PM

umg. qt story developing between you/jen/brona. BUT I'D NEVER MAKE OUT WITH LINDA ah\

Jack_ 28-12-2009 06:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CaraRawr (Post 2804335)
needs moar jack/stephanie

:xyxwave:

LemonJam 28-12-2009 07:09 PM

WHAT DO YOU WANT A ****ING TIBB ORGY?!?! tyra/

I'll do what I can for y'all.

Jack_ 28-12-2009 07:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LemonJam (Post 2804676)
WHAT DO YOU WANT A ****ING TIBB ORGY?!?! tyra/

Sounds like a fierce storyline to me <3

Oh, and I think you should include some cameo appearences from alc09, ILoveDC and Sticks, if you can that is. :thumbs:

Jords 28-12-2009 08:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jack_ (Post 2804646)
:xyxwave: more Jords more like

I agree Jack :hugesmile:

Nah your doing a great job LJ :thumbs:

Stephanie 28-12-2009 08:55 PM

pmsl epic

Stephanie 28-12-2009 08:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CaraRawr (Post 2804335)
needs moar jack/stephanie

:xyxwave:

LemonJam 28-12-2009 09:15 PM

Episode 4 "Mark" Sneak peek. ;)


Mark: This Sunday, you're gonna love me
_________________________________________________

Hugo: Oh please Gary, as if you're number 1 on his priorities anymore.
_________________________________________________

Gary: Are you serious? This is Twilight ****ing Twitty, rules don't apply to her.
_________________________________________________

Twilight: MARK NOOOOO#
_________________________________________________

Episode will be finished and up tomorrow. :)

Stephanie 28-12-2009 09:17 PM

oOoOo

Tom4784 28-12-2009 09:18 PM

Rofl, funny episode.

Jords 28-12-2009 09:21 PM

Twilight Twitty ftw ;)

Harry! 28-12-2009 09:54 PM

*Looks forward to the next one*

lily. 28-12-2009 10:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jen (Post 2800051)
Hot.

yAy... Jen came back to comment.. :)


Quote:

Originally Posted by Shaun (Post 2804637)
umg. qt story developing between you/jen/brona. BUT I'D NEVER MAKE OUT WITH LINDA ah\

hahaha.. gotta watch them mind-altering drugs Shaun.. they make you do stuff you regret later.. ;)

Rory 29-12-2009 05:25 AM

umg I was funny in this one. thanks james. i want moar.

CaraRawr 29-12-2009 07:50 AM

ooooh sounds hot.

bronaaaa 29-12-2009 11:48 AM

I love this :D

Chels 29-12-2009 01:27 PM

that was hilarious :D
and thanks for my lines :')

LemonJam 29-12-2009 01:38 PM

Episode 4 - Scene 1

[Smashing Pumpkins - Ava Adore begins to play. Mark is sat in his room, completing a drawing of a boy. He finishes the final bit of shading, rips it out of his sketchbook and adds it to his wall.]

Mark: I love you Joel.

[Marks wall is shown, covered in pictures of a boy from talent show 'Sheppy's Got Talent' Mark smiles creepily to himself and begins to laugh. His phone rings.]

Mark: Hello?
Twilight: Hey Mark, it's Twitty here. Do you think you could come to the hospital, I'm so ****ing bored here.
Mark: Sure thing, I was meant to be with Gary, but he's sf irrelevant.
Twilight: To say she's the main character, she hasn't done much.
Mark: Ikr. Maybe ditching her will give her some airtime this episode.
Twilight: Qt, I better be all cleared for the Sheppys Got Talent final on Sunday.
Mark: Oh yeah, do you mind if I tagged along to that as a +1
Twilight: Duh? Who else am I gonna go with?
Mark: THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU umm, I'll come now yeah.
Twilight: Um, yah?

[Mark puts his phone in his purse. He looks at his poster wall and smiles]

Mark: This Sunday, you're gonna love me Joel McLean.

[He struts out his room]



Scene 2 - Outside a Café

[Gary is wearing sunglasses and a Vivienne Westwood original. She looks in her mirror then her watch. 1:20.]

Gary: Christ, I know I just arrived but that bitch was meant to be here for 1.

[She gets a message on her Iphone]

Hi mark here something srs has happend im rly sorry i cant go 2day soz xoxo

[Gary drops her mocha in shock.]

Hugo: Hi Gary, are you lost?

[Hugo walks over with Jen on her arm]

Gary: Oh, it's you.
Hugo: With a +1, where's yours? (qt~)
Gary: He's coming.

[Hugo snatches Garys iphone off him and reads the message]

Gary: Hey, dyke, give it back.
Hugo: Okay, number 1, it's Mark, number 2, he's blatentley ditched you for that Twitty slag, number 3, I'm not gay, James just can't have a storyline that makes sense sad/
Gary: Something bad's happened to Mark I'll have you know.
Hugo: Oh please Gary, as if you're number 1 on his priorities anymore.

[She walks off with Jen being dragged away]

Scene 3 - The Hospital

[Mark is walking through the waiting room towards Twilights room and he hears a smash]

Twilight: I ASKED FOR ****ING XANAX, NOT IBUPROFEN YOU ****ING MESS

[Dr.Gonzo runs out and sees Mark in shock]

Dr.Gonzo: Miss Twitty's just through here Mark.

[Mark smiles sarcastically and walks past]

Twilight: Honestly Mark, this ****ing hospital is so incompetent.
Mark: They've let you go out every night though even when you're in no state.
Twilight: Mark honey, I'm always in a good state. /glare
Mark: Of course, you'll be fine for Sunday

[Marks phone rings]

Mark: Sorry gurl. Hello?

[Gary is in a bus shelter, it's begun to rain]

Gary: WURR THE **** ARE YOU?!?!?! ah/
Mark: I'm with Twilight
Gary: Twilight?! TWILIGHT!?!? You ditched coffee and shopping for Twilight?!
Mark: sad/

[Gary hangs up]

Twilight: Who was that?
Mark: Just Gary. Hey, do you have a dress ready for sunday?
Twilight: Duh? You prepared?

[Mark smiles stalkerishly]

Mark: Very prepared.



[Scene 4 - Outside the studio]

[It's Sunday Night. A group of Twilight Twitty fans are sat outside the studio waiting to get a picture and autograph from her.]

Jack: Ugh, she's late again.
Harry: She's always late Jack, it's part of her controversy.
Jords: She might have even been given the all clear from the hospital.

[Damaris runs towards them]

Damaris: Have I missed her?
Stephanie: YOU'RE a Twilight Twitty fan?
Damaris: She's a guilty temptation, along with CaraRawr. Has she gone in yet?
Jords: Yeah, you missed her, she arrived on time.
Harry: You see, that's why CaraRawr isn't as good, not enough controversey.
Stephanie: For the love of God Harry, stop talking about controversey, ugh, it's rant time.

[Stephanie gets out her laptop and posts a thread on TiBB about it.]

Jack: Steph, you have way too much time on your hands since we lost the baby.
Stephanie: I know Jack, but not having you in my arms makes me a more free woman.
Jack: You're so lieing.
Stephanie: I SO am.

[They begin making out. Meanwhile, in the Twittymobile, Twilight and Mark are sat with glasses of champagne. Gemmer, the head of ER Industries and her apprentice Billy are sat in the limo. Billy is staring at Twilight in awe]

Twilight: Why do you need to sign anyone else when CaraRawr and I are dominating the pop charts anyway?
Gemmer: Reality TV stars bring in the dosh big time. We need to sign anything Simon Cowell doesn't get to.

[Billy takes notes while still smiling imanely at Twilight]

[The limozine arrives outside, Gary and Shaun are behind a wall.

Gary: I need to get in somehow and teach that little bitch Mark a lesson he'll never forget.
Shaun: Too right, little bitch, nobody abandons you like that
Gary: You mean like L abandoned you at the campsite? 2baha
Shaun: sad/

[The limo door opens and Twilight and co strut past ignoring all fans bombarding her.]

Gary: Here's our chance, lets get lost in the crowd and pretend to be her +1s. [He begins to run]
Shaun: Erm, aren't they only allowed one plus one?

[Gary turns around]

Gary: Are you serious? This is Twilight ****ing Twitty, rules don't apply to her.

[They run into the bombarding fans. Gary manages to squeeze through and stand behind Billy. Shaun however is pushed aside by 30stone]

30stone: TWILIGHT, I LOVE YOU (HOTMESS)
Shaun: GARY, NOOOOO#

[Gary looks behind him to see Shaun on the floor but continues.]

President: Ah, Miss Twitty, I guess these are your plus ones.
Twilight: Ya, my bff Mark and these official people.
President: All three of them?

[They look behind at Gary who leaves abruptly.]

President: Alright, bar is on the left.

[Their coats are taken by Patrick, who throws them on the floor]

Patrick: I hate everything. [/patricks part in this]

[Gary walks over to Shaun]

Gary: I can't believe I didn't get in and that ****ing nobody did, what am I becoming, I wanted to make a mark on this town, I really did.
Shaun: GARY GET A ****ING GRIP!

[She slaps her across the face]

Shaun: Just let it go.

[They s0b together to 'When you're Gone']


[Inside, Twilight, Mark, Gemmer and Billy go in.]

Gemmer: Billy and I are going to see some of the talent and make a good impression. Only have 1 drink, I'm not paying for your rehab again.
Twilight: sad/


[CaraRawr walks over in a cute short dress]

CaraRawr: Twilight! I'm so glad you could make it!
Twilight: Likewise (qt~) Mark, this is Cara.
CaraRawr: A pleasure to meet you!
Mark: Likewise, sorry to be rude, but do you know if Joel McLean is here?
CaraRawr: ...yeah, he's talking with Lewis over there.
Mark: //AHH

[He runs over]

Twilight: Outperformed again?
CaraRawr: What do you mean?
Twilight: Face it Cara, everyones after my goodies (wurkit), you're just the back-up if I do an Elvis on y'all.

[She walks away, Cara is visibly upset. Meanwhile, Mark has found Joel, the dancer from Sheppys got Talent]

Mark: OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD I'M YOUR BIGGEST FAN //AHH I LOVE YOU HOLD ME

[Joel is visibly shocked]

Joel: Security, get this gay away from me.

[Mark and James (admin) take Mark away from him.]

Mark: NO JOEL, I LOVE YOU HOLD ME! NOOOOO#
President: Mr McLean, you're onstage in 20 minutes
Joel: Ah, thank you Sir.

[Mark is pushed outside by security Twilight rushes outside]

Twilight: Mark, what're you doing out here?!?!
Mark: JOEL REJECTED ME! sad/
Twilight: Come on, your going to miss the results!

[She drags him back in. Inside the studio, Mark and Twilight take their seats, Mark wearing sunglasses to show no signs of crying.]

WOMBAI: Ladies and Gentlemen, the results are in and Sheppy's Got Talent is about to reveal it's winner of £1,000,000 and a chance to perform in the Sheppy council fair.
Mark: GO JOEL!
Twilight: Mark, sit the **** down!
WOMBAI: And the top three are... Lewis Treleaven!

[A young boy is visibly shocked and walks forward]

WOMBAI: The second act in the top three is... Graeme Stickings!

[A middle aged drag queen is also visibly shocked. The crowd goes wild and wolfwhistles.]

WOMBAI: And the final person through is... Joel McLean!

[Mark jumps out of his seat and screams loudly. Twilight grabs him and pummels him into his seat. As CaraRawr looks over to see the commotion, Twilight covers her face.

WOMBAI: And in third place is... Graeme Stickings.
Sticks: sad/
WOMBAI: And that means the winner of Sheppys Got Talent is...

[Silence runs throughout the studio]

WOMBAI: Lewis Treleaven!!!! Congratulations!!!

[The whole audience applaud and CaraRawr begins a standing auvation. Mark is visibly shocked and looks around distortedly at the crowds. He gets up from his seat and pushes CaraRawr over]

Twilight: MARK NOOOOO#

[Mark continues to get up onto the stage and steal the microphone from Lewis

Mark: Lewis, I'm really happy for you, I'm gonna let you finish, BUT JOEL MCLEAN HAD ONE OF THE BEST PERFORMANCES OF ALL TIME sad/

[Suddenly, Mark and James (admin) tackle him and take Mark off the stage. Twilight gets up covering her face. Later on, Twilight and Mark are seen leaving for a limo. Twilight is dragging Mark along who looks like a HOTMESS. Paparazzi bombard them and they barely get past. They eventually managed to get in the limo]

Twilight: MARK, WHAT THE **** WERE YOU DOING, YOU'VE JUST RUINED MY DIGNITY
Mark: I'm sorry Twilight
Twilight: get out GET OUT RIGHT NOW

[Billy picks Mark up and throws him out of the limo whilst moving. Mark begins crying.]
[Lady Gagas paparazzi begins to play. Montage time.]
[Greg is working underneath a car. He gets out and up and sees an article of Twilight on the board. He shakes his head and walks away]
[Hugo and Jen are laying in bed. Jen is asleep. Hugo takes a shot of whiskey and 2 pills. She gets a phonecall and picks it up.]
[Gary is on the phone to Hugo. She's looking at Mark being a hot mess on the floor laughing with him]
[Linda is sat in some random alley]

Linda: Seriously, even Dean's had more lines than me, the next episodes mine.

[Mark gets up and begins to stumble home as the traffic wizzes past him]

Skins

lily. 29-12-2009 01:50 PM

Lmao... Mark the stalker is superb!!!! I was pmsl!!!! Best part was the kanye/taylor parody!!!

Great work Jam! :thumbs:


Also, I love how I'm just a drugged up mess! Quality! :laugh:


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