you should all post potential storylines i could do,

after maybe 7 or 8 episodes

someone is gonna be murdered

and its going to be whodunnit

Very good Conor :)

Harry dw gurl, your goin have speaking lines soon

Wait, are you making me like Doug :suspect:

maybe.. but your cool :D

Conor I'm loving these. :lovedup:

*Is jealous of niamh*

niall wants to have an incestuous relationship with ben, his own father :yuk:

I said that in jest on TC and for the record you said you would shag Ben if he was your Dad, too. :hmph:

I loved it Conor :D

you had lines :hugesmile:

Brilliant Conor :D

(halls of residence)

Zippy: I need a job..
Smithy: More importantly you need a life.
Zippy: Pfft says you, WAAAH MY FRIEND SHAUN ATTACKED ME now i'm going to moan about it to helpless shopkeepers
Smithy: Hey... Lewis didn't mind..
Joe: Will you 2 just shut up!!! IM NOT IN THE MOOD
Zippy: Woooaaah, calm down there Sally
(exit Joe)
Smithy: Whats his problem?
Karl: Hmm somethings up guys, something fishy went down in The Loft last night with Joe & Novo.
Smithy: Ooh Spill!
Karl: Nah i'll talk to Joe first about it.
Zippy: Pfft, was hoping for goss hmph!
Smithy: GET A LIFE.

(Kerrys Flat)

Kerry: Lee hurry up in the shower!! I'm going to be late for my shift at Price Slice.
(Lee rushes out of bathroom in towel)
Lee: Don't worry im out!
Kerry: Ugh im seriously considering getting rid of you!
Lee: And what would you do without your favourite sister?
Kerry: Live life in peace.
Kerry: More like my lazy unemployed sister!
Lee: Pfft, im too good for jobs.
Kerry: You got fired from McDonalds.
Lee: OI! not funny
Kerry: Yeah well i cant be the only one making the money around here, you need to find yourself a job!
Lee: Ugh fine, i'll go round to Cinergy, see if theres hopping about.

(tibboaks village)

(Boothy & Caitlin are walking into the village after being in town)

Caitlin: Thank you for taking me out for breakfast babe :)
Boothy: Something to celebrate our 6 month anniversary!
Caitlin: Are you all right babe, you seem a bit off?
Boothy: I'm just worried about Shaun.. he didn't come home last night.
Caitlin: Do you think something bad might have happened to him?
Boothy: I bloody well hope not, he was pretty much fighting with everyone and stormed out of town, hopefully hes gone to stay at his mums.
Caitlin: Yeah.. lets hope so.
(Mollie walks over)
Mollie: Hello love burds :)
Caitlin: Hey Mol, been up 2 much?
Mollie: Not really, just going to get a massage, it really is a pain being this beautiful (laughs loudly) Anyways, i shall talk 2 u later?
Boothy: Bye..

(Mollie enters Cinergy)

Mollie: Scott love how you been!
Scott: Me, well i woke up this morning, with a blamin headache, next ting you no the dog is licking my ear, AND THEN!!
Mollie: Scott.. the answer i was looking for was fine.
Scott: Oh..
Mollie: Massage please :)
Scott: Sure just hol- (Scott grins) you no what, i dont do massages actually, just hold on a sec.
(scott goes into the back of the spa to find Claudia)
Scott: Claudia, me stomachs been at me all day i have to go home
Claudia: Awh of course luv, i hope you feel better
Scott: k thanks bye, your massage client is waiting :D
(scott rushes out of Cinery grinning)
Claudia: Okay, who do we have he-
Mollie: Claudia.
Claudia: Mollie, what a pleasant suprise -_-

(Jords is shopping in Price Slice)

Kerry: Jords how nice to see you :)
Jords: Kerry :) h ow are you
Kerry: Not good, been under so much pressure money wise, im trying to get my illegitamite sister to get a job, theres no jobs going at The Loft is there?
Jords: Nah sorry love
(Lee rushes in all happy)
Lee: OMG KERRY!! I have some great news!!
Kerry: Your leaving!
Lee: No. I GOT A JOB!
Kerry: OMG REALLY!! AS WHAT!
Lee: a waitress in Relish!!
Jords: Well done Lee im proud of you girl :)
Kerry: Are you sure your going to be able for it?
Lee: Sister please, how hard can it be to take someones order?
Kerry: Its not just th-
Lee: ANYWAYS im gonna go luv ya:)
(exit Lee)
Jords: Thats great isn't it?
Kerry: Hmm.. give it a week and she will be unemployed again :)

(halls of residence)

Joe (on phone): Alright mum, enjoy your skiing in Austria see you soon :)
Karl: ooh was that your mum?
Joe: Yeah shes having a great time on holidays?
Karl: Hmm really i thought Novo said she was really sick? after all that was what you 2 were talking about in the office wasnt it?
Joe: Yeah, yeah she was sick, she- shes better now
Karl: Hmm how convienient.
Karl: Joe mate, if anything ANYTHING in the world was bothering you, you would tell me right?
Joe: Yeah of course mate..
Karl: Alright..

(Cinergy)
(Claudia is giving Mollie a back massage)

Mollie: Well this is awkward..
Claudia: Shut up and be quiet.
Mollie: Awh my backs in bits, Novo is wild in bed, sure you wouldnt no what im talking about, wait actually LOL you would!
Claudia: Right thats it, he was mine first before you! little slag! had to take him away from me!!
Mollie: Awh babe, thats what you think? that i took Novo away from you? honey please, as if he was going to stay with you for much longer, i mean look at you.
Claudia: And what thats supposed to mean.
Mollie: Lets just say, a few less trips to the sweet section in Price Slice might do you some good.
(Claudia slaps Mollie across the face)
Mollie: Bitch! your going to pray you didnt do that
(Mollie grabs Claudia by the hair and punches her in the stomach, Claudia then trips Mollie up and kicks her in the back, meanwhile Reggie is walking home after college and hears screams coming from Cinergy)
(running in)
Reggie: OI OI!! STOP IT THE PAIR OF YA!!!
(Reggie pulls the 2 girls apart)
Claudia: That slag started it!!
Reggie: I don't care who started it, its not right!
(Scott comes rushing in to Cinergy)
Scott: DAMN I MISSED THE FIGHT
(everyone glares at Scott)
Scott: I mean oh stomach cramps ow ow..

(Boothy & Caitlin are walking back from the cinema to Caitlins flat at night)

Boothy: I had an amazing night tonight babe :)
Caitlin: Awh me too hun, was real go- (suddenly Caitlin screams)
Boothy: WHAT! WHAT IS IT!
Caitlin: Theres a body, a body in the ditch over there!
Boothy: What :O (Boothy goes to check)
Caitlin: Booth be carefull!!
(Boothy takes one look at the body in the ditch and steps back.. looking horrified)
Caitlin: wHAT, what is it!!
Boothy: Its... its shaun!

ROLL CREDITS

oh noes! -sobs over shaun-

never said he was dead..

Really good 'Conor.

:worship:

Claudia: Shut up and be quiet. :laugh2: claudia :nono:

and ia, zippy you need a life :idc:

It's good conor :D

:love:

Pfft. Not even featured in that one :hmph:

:shocked:

i cant feature everyone in 1 episode

:bawling:

Where's mah lines Conor?

Other then that I like it alot!

i think i'll introduce the school characters tomorrow :)

Have I killed Shaun? :suspect:

my hero :lovedup: