I just read this. Very funny. I am not happy about having Fom as my boss though. :tongue:

Haha, you were right too Annie. :bigsmile:

Laura, I'm 'MarkSpears'. Mark with Lauren is the admin Mark.

OHHHHHHHHHH

See that's too confusing :P Well Mark Mark treats me like you do :P

This is fantastic bahaha. :thumbs:

TiBBOaks - Episode 2
It's the same night from the last episode, where we saw Firewire attempting suicide and Nickyy hearing a secret about Fom.
Opening sequence - Hometown Glory by Adele is playing. We see Madonna walking round to Firewire's with a copy of Confessions on a Dancefloor under his arms, and knocks on the door with no reply. Cut to LIZZEDJ rocking her baby, yet unable to settle him. She places him back in the cradle and walks out of the house, with LemonJam shouting after her. Cut to Princess picking up her phone and dialling.

Scene One - music fade - Princess' bedroom. After 3 rings, Sam! answers.
Sam!: Hello?
Princess: Where've you been?
Sam!: Uh, what? I saw you last night...
Princess: Yeah, but you cut off short and said you went to work. Annie told me you were fired. So where've you been?
Sam!: I got a new job...LemonJam needed someone to look after the accounts. I finished that and he asked me to take a stock check for a small bonus.
Princess: Oh Okay...do you want to come around?
Sam!: Umm...I'd love to babe, but I've still got like, 5 crates to count yet. I'll see you tomorrow yeah? We can go for lunch down Andy's.
Princess: Yeah that'd be great! I'll see-
Sam! hangs up. He tosses the phone aside and we see him turn to someone else.
Sam!: This is getting too complicated.
Satisfaction: So what? I love a bit of drama.
Satisfaction pulls Sam! closer and they kiss.

Scene Two - LemonJam/LIZZEDJ's house. The baby is still crying and LemonJam hears the door slam. He abandons the stove and goes to settle the baby, cussing LIZZEDJ's name.
LemonJam: Bloody woman wouldn't be fit to look after a tamagotchi, let alone a child.
He half-heartedly sings Lullaby to the child, which seems to have some effect.
LemonJam: There there, go back to sleep.
A knock on the door is heard, yet luckily it does not disturb the now snoozing child. LemonJam goes to answer it.
Nickyy: Hey! I heard your baby crying and I was wondering-
LemonJam: Look, everything's fine now, I've just got him off to sleep.
Nickyy: Okay, okay, I was just making sure everything was alright.
LemonJam: Well it is.
LemonJam shuts the door in Nickyy's face.

Scene Three - Muse's house. He hears the knock on the door and assumes it's Firewire's friend, coming round for a sleepover. He answers and lets him in.
Muse: He's upstairs in the shower I think. Do you want a drink?
Madonna: Yes please, Mr. Wire.
Muse: I've only got lemonade though.
Madonna: That's okay.
He takes the poured drink and heads upstairs to Firewire's room. Inside he finds posters of bands such as My Chemical Romance, Evanescence, My Bloody Valentine and Billy Talent. He didn't like this kind of music much so he goes over to the CD-player and puts in the Madonna single, and starts mimicking Madonna in the video as "Hung Up" starts playing.

Scene Four - downstairs in Muse's house. Muse is in his lounge with his wife, BigSister and their other son, HUGO. They are watching a soap on television.
Hugo: This is BORING! Can't we watch a horror film?
BigSister: Oh no, dear, I don't want to have nightmares.
Muse: Besides, you've got school tomorrow. By the way, how did it go today?
Hugo: Fine. Exciting as always.
Muse: No need for the attitude, Hugo. I meant did your dress rehearsal go well? I know you've been looking forward to it.
Hugo: Yes! I mean it's not like DamonJ has stolen the only decent part and I've been left with some stupid role.
BigSister: Oh honey, I'm sure you'll outshine DamonJ anyday.
Hugo: Well, duh. But try telling that to Mr. Satisfaction - it's like talking to a brick wall.
Muse: Firewire's been in the shower for a long time...
Hugo: Probably decided to kill himself.
BigSister: HUGO!
Hugo: What? He's always so miserable. He doesn't have any friends other than that loser Madonna-obsessive freak upstairs...
Muse: Don't say that! I'm going to check everything's OK.

Scene Five - Annie's dormitory. Mark, Lauren, Princess and Annie are sat on the sofas watching a horror film, eating chips and dips. There's a scary moment and Mark squeals and covers Princess in salsa sauce.
Princess: Oh watch it, you bloody queen!
Mark: What does THAT mean?
Lauren: It was only a joke, hon.
Mark: Sister, leave it.
Princess: I didn't mean it like that, just...you can be a bit camp.
Mark: I don't believe this. Do you agree?
Annie: Uhh...no, of course not. You're just a bit...eccentric babe.
Mark: And you?
Lauren: What she said.
Mark: Right, I see!
A knock on the door is head. Mark squeals again and rushes to answer it. Ross walks in with a giant canvas displaying a picture of a Japanese blossom tree.
Ross: Hi. I came round to give Annie her picture back.
Annie: Oh, that's big of you.
Ross: Don't start. Where shall I put it?
Annie: Wherever. It's not like it meant anything to you.
Ross: Well no, it's a blossom tree, not a nude picture of your sister.
Annie: You're such a jerk sometimes.
Lauren: [mutters] A hot one...
Only Princess hears this.

Scene Six - Nickyy's house. She picks up the spoon and puts it in the sink.
Nickyy: What on Earth!?
Mrluvaluva: I know...
Nickyy: But...
Mrluvaluva: I know!
Nickyy: Oh my god, you don't think he's going to use it do you?
Mrluvaluva: I hadn't thought about that! I don't think he has any enemies...
Nickyy: Well you never know with these rich sorts do you?
Mrluvaluva: What do you mean?
Nickyy: It's like on TV, the rich guys always have dark secrets.
Mrluvaluva: Haha, if you say so.
Ninastar comes downstairs and interrupts them.
Ninastar: A gun! Can I play?
Nickyy: Err..what do you mean, dear?
Ninastar: You said Mr. Fom had a gun! I love playing James Bond!
Mrluvaluva: Your mum was joking, dear.
Ninastar: Oh hey Mr. Lover! Are you in love with mummy?
Nickyy: Ninastar!
Mrluvaluva blushes.
Ninastar: Sorry...
Mrluvaluva: Anyway, now that I've told you, I have to go.
Nickyy: Oh okay, thanks for the gossip dear! I don't know what I'd do without you!
Mrluvaluva walks out and sighs.

Scene Seven - Muse's house. Muse is knocking on the locked bathroom door.
Muse: Firewire! Are you okay in there?
He hears no response.
Madonna: Firewire mate! I've got a brand new dance for Sorry!
Hugo; Dork.
BigSister: Hugo, stop it!
Muse: Firewire, listen, is something wrong? Did I say something out of line?
He hears no response.
BigSister: Oh babe, I don't like this. Not one bit.
Muse steps back from the door and kicks it down, knocking it off its hinges. They look inside and BigSister screams.

Scene Eight - LIZZEDJ returns home with a bottle of wine.
LemonJam: Where've you been?
Lizzedj: HAVING FUN!
She hiccups and stumbles over a magazine stand.
LemonJam: You're a mess. You know that?
Lizzedj: I don't care! I used to enjoy life before I met you!
LemonJam: The feeling's mutual.
The baby starts crying again.
Lizzedj: Oh for goodness' sake!
She walks upstairs and stumbles over the last few steps.
LemonJam: Yeah, leave me to sort it out again.
Lizzedj throws down a towel at him.
LemonJam: Oh grow up!
Lizzedj: Get lost!

Scene Nine - The ambulance has arrived outside Muse's house. Firewire is carried into the vehicle on a stretcher, with an oxygen mask on his face. Madonna and BigSister climb into the ambulance with him.
Hugo: Why's freakboy get to go?
Muse: Enough, Hugo, now's not the time. And we can't leave him here on his own to walk home anyway.
BigSister is sobbing.
Muse: Listen, babe, I'll drive Hugo to the hospital right behind you, yeah?
BigSister: Y...yes, but don't be l-long!
Muse kisses her on the forehead and gets into his car with Hugo. They and the ambulance drive off.

Scene Ten - Satisfaction's place. He gives Sam! a cup of tea, whilst only wearing a dressing gown.
Sam!: Thanks.
Satisfaction: So, when you going to break it off with this Princess girl?
Sam!: I don't know...
Satisfaction: You know I won't put up with being a bit on the side, don't you?
Sam!: You won't tell anyone?
Satisfaction: I'll try not to.
Sam!: You better try bloody hard! Because if you blab, it's over. You know that?
Satisfaction: Okay, okay...
A knock on the door is heard. Sam! rushes off to hide in the bedroom. Satisfaction answers.
DamonJ: Oh...is this a bad time, Sir?
Satisfaction looks down and readjusts his dressing gown.
Satisfaction: No, what is it?
DamonJ: Uhh...I brought the props for the play over.
Satisfaction: Oh! Thanks! Tell your mum I'm really grateful for this.
DamonJ: I will do...
He leaves, and Satisfaction shuts the door. Sam! reemerges from the bedroom.
Sam!: That was too close.

Closing sequence. "Hometown Glory" continues from where it left off. We see Mrluvaluva walk into his house and putting down his glasses. He turns on the TV and sighs. Cut to LemonJam's house, where he rocks the baby again. Cut to inside the hospital, where the stretcher is unloaded from the ambulance and pushes inside, with BigSister and Madonna following nervously. Cut to outside Annie's dormitory, where Lauren taps Ross on the shoulder as he goes to leave, and hands him a note. Ross takes it and walks off, reading it.
Credits run.
Final scene - Sam! leaves Satisfaction's flat and is spotted by Nickyy.

I hope I have a storyline soon :wink:

Christina and Darenn!!! Seriously!!!!! Jeez give me a break :P

LOVE it though.

Lol at me!

Sam's a right manslag in this! :laugh2:

Darenn's downright promiscuous!

Great episode shaun it was brilliant.

I love it :lovedup:

http://i42.tinypic.com/24gvwja.jpg :tongue:

Lmao. Lauren, you have a real man now. Mark is a nancy boy.

I love this it's great really enjoyable to read. Can we have episode 3 tonight too? :lovedup:

I love my storyline.

Pmsl @ Darenn and Sam though and I love Muse/BigSister/Madonna/Hugo/Firewire storyline!

No, you can't. You'll have it tomorrow, Rossikins. This takes an annoying amount of time to write, lmao.

HAHAHAHA I love this. So what In this I've shagged Christina, Laura & Darenn. And I'm with Laura & Darenn at the same time. Lool!

I love it.

I'm confused with Nicky/Mrluvaluva storyline though.

Nina is Nicky's baby? Who's mrluva lol.

:lovedup: Lmao.

Though it depends what the note said. I hope I wasn't too desperate.

Agree with you there. Tibbenders takes me ages :bored:

Ooh i love this and Sam gets around a bit! :laugh:

OMG! I am actually loving this! LOL at Ross giving me a tree back! haha

I love how Sam is with Darenn as well! he is a naughty boy!

This is the best written creative writing I have seen on TiBB in a long time. Congrats :dance2:

Can I be with Annie aswell :tongue:

Aww I love this x How old am I meant to be x?

I'll do a quick recount of who's who.

Nickyy is a single parent of Ninastar. She fancies Satisfaction, and is the gossip queen of the town.
Mrluvaluva secretly love Nickyy, and works for Fom. I've yet to introduce his family.
Fom is the manager of the lemon emporium, and employs a number of the town's residents. He has an ongoing relationship with Sia which he keeps quiet, along with a number of other secrets.
Sia is the local librarian, and has been seeing Fom for a few months now. We've yet to meet her family/friends.
Annie, Princess, Mark and Lauren all share a dormitory and attend the local University, as does Ross, Sam! and a few other as yet unknown characters. Annie used to date Ross until he cheated on her. With whom, we don't know. Princess is 'dating' Sam! and is unaware of his three-timing. Lauren has a crush on Ross. Mark's lovelife/family is unknown.
Firewire is bullied by a number of students at the local high school, including Picto, Billy, MarkSpears and DamonJ. His only friends are Ruth*Star and Madonna.
Firewire's twin brother, Hugo, is equally mean to him. Hugo's friends with MarkSpears and DamonJ, but does not share classes with them. Firewire's parents are Muse and BigSister.
Christina is another University student, and works part time at the local bar. She had a one-night stand with Sam!
LemonJam is finally opening a juice bar with his wife, LIZZEDJ, and they have a child.

Other characters we've heard of, but don't know of:
.Andy. - Reportedly owns a nearby restaurant, first mentioned in the second episode.
The photo-man - Fom has a photograph of this familiar face on his office desk. But who is he?
Matt - he's in the credits, but has yet to appear.

Future storyline hints:
We get to know a bit more about the following: Billy, Conzors, Ross/Lauren and Fom.
There'll be a death before Episode 6 :)

This is quality to.
Even if im not in it lol.

Thanks Shaun haha. :lovedup:

Haha, Christina - Had a one night stand with Sam

Haha.. slut?