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Lewis. 29-04-2010 10:35 PM

Oops! He is aswell! Shall edit tomorrow when I am not on mi iPod doing this :P

Callum 29-04-2010 10:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lewis. (Post 3199743)
Oops! He is aswell! Shall edit tomorrow when I am not on mi iPod doing this :P

Cool, I enjoyed reading it Lewis. :spin:

Loukas 29-04-2010 10:38 PM

Lewis can you tell us about the storylines you got coming up? The new characters too, can you tell us anything about them? I'm curious.. :P

Lewis. 29-04-2010 10:38 PM

Good :) thanks for spotting that :) not even john himself did :tongue:

Lewis. 29-04-2010 10:41 PM

Shall tomorrow Loukas :) I-pod grammar is terrible :L You are in the next episode and will make an enemy of someone... Shall give some more spoilers tomorrow when I'm on the laptop :)

BGT-FAN! 29-04-2010 11:36 PM

lol this is so cringey, it actually gave me goosebumps at how cringey it was

Ninastar 29-04-2010 11:38 PM

Lmao I love it! <3 more more more :D

Vicky. 30-04-2010 12:10 AM

:laugh2:

Jessica. 30-04-2010 12:20 AM

Very good as usual Lewis, well done :)
Poor firewire s0b

GypsyGoth 30-04-2010 12:23 AM

Well written :thumbs:

:nono: Naughty Laura :laugh:

Christina 30-04-2010 01:53 AM

LOL, i'm always up to stuff with Firewire in your stories aren't i? haha!

Lewis. 30-04-2010 05:49 PM

:tongue:

It's a running joke Christina :tongue:

;)

Lewis. 30-04-2010 10:07 PM

Ep #2. Part1

Nova, Stacey and Christina's house
It's early in the morning on the square. Christina is lying in bed. The door flings open and Nova(38) pops his head around the door
Nova: Christina honey..
Christina grunts and turns over on her bed
Nova: Come on.. School time.
Christina moans even louder

The Club
Darenn is in the club alone. He is sat behind the bar sobbing. He picks up a glass and pours himself another vodka and coke. He downs it in one and carries on sobbing

Darenn and Shauns house
Shaun is sat in the bedroom with a box on the floor. Shaun slowly puts his clothes into the box.

Nova, Stacey and Christina's house
Stacey(11) is running around the front room. She is dressed in her uniform and is playing with a toy aeroplane. Christina walks in wearing a dressing gown. She yawns
Nova: Come on Christina.. It's nearly time to go..
Christina: Naah.. I'm not going today.
Nova: Ehh.. says who?
Christina: Me..
Nova: And why exactly?
Christina: Dad.. come on.
Nova: Tell me!
Christina: Period pains! Okay?
Stacey sniggers quietly. Christina gives her a dirty look
Christina: Anyway.. Firewire isn't going today either. He's ill. So I was going to go and see how he is.
Nova gives Christina a dis-approving look
Christina: What?
Nova: You know what I said about Firewire, Christina.. You're not to see him again.
Christina: But WHY Dad?
Nova shouts
Nova: You know perfectly well why Christina.. now do you want to make me shout it out in front of your little sister!
Christina gets up and walks out in tears

30stone and Vicky's house
30stone walks downstaris into the hallway. He looks at the phone. It has a message. He presses the button
Lili: 30stone.. I've changed my mind. I need that money as soon as possible.. today. Meet me in my flat...
30stone sighs

Princess's flat
Princess is in the toilet. She is holding a pregnancy test and waiting for a result. It comes up negative. She sighs..

Bigsister, Loukas and CaraRawr'h house
Bigsister(35) is on the sofa watching TV. Cara(17) is at College and Loukas(21) is in the kitchen. Bigsister pulls out a magazine from under the cushion.. "Gaytimes". She looks at the front cover and rolls her eyes.. stuffing the magazine back under the sofa again. Loukas walks back into the living room with cup of tea.
Loukas: Here you go sis..
He hands the tea to BigSister
Bigsister: You out again tonight?
Loukas: Er.. maybe? Gotta find the right club.. with the right girls.. you know what I mean?
BigSister: Yeah.... Totally.
Loukas laughs in a very camp way.
Loukas: Anyway.. better be off to work now.
Bigsister: See you later maybe?
Loukas: Yeah.. okay.
Loukas gets up and an eyeliner pencil falls out from his sleeve. They both look down at it.. Loukas looking shocked
Loukas: Ohh.. errr.... I was meaning to give that to you... Er... I found it.. in the.. er.. kitchen!
Bigsister: Oh right.. Thanks.
Loukas looks embarrased as Bigsister takes the eyeliner
Loukas: Er... Better be off then..
Loukas speeds out of the house. BigSister looks at the eyeliner.. She rolls her eyes

The club
Darenn is still sat at the bar crying. There are 2 empty Vodka bottles beside him.

Christina 01-05-2010 01:59 AM

Lol :p

Jessica. 01-05-2010 02:55 AM

haha very good again :)

CaraRawr 01-05-2010 06:34 AM

yay, i have a part - thank you :')
loving this!

Harry! 01-05-2010 08:29 AM

No me again...

Another good episode!

Ninastar 01-05-2010 11:11 AM

LOL i love it. I better be in it next time.

joke x

Stacey. 01-05-2010 11:13 AM

lol! :)

Loukas 01-05-2010 03:08 PM

LOL! I like it :P

Braden 01-05-2010 03:09 PM

This is good,but are you speaking about Novo?

xDramatick 01-05-2010 03:13 PM

I'm an alcoholic living with Shaun, rofl.

I can't wait to find out why I'm so upset.

Shaun 01-05-2010 03:19 PM

We've probably had a lovers' tiff, Daren. :\

Firewire 01-05-2010 06:08 PM

Love the Jonstina storyline lol.

Lewis. 01-05-2010 09:13 PM

Another episode tomorrow for those who would like to know. Not working tomorrow so It will be a longer one as I have all day to myself.. house and all ;)


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