Who you writing to??

Say on it..

You light up my day
More than the sun
You are as sweet as honey
and worth more than money!

Happy Valentines Day.

Patrick x

Simple and short - teen girls do the poems and stuff on cards to teen boys I seem to remember from my past.

"You are so cute, signed P"

That was my suggestion above, then ask her quietly on Monday if liked her card.

She knows im giving her one though, she doesnt seem like the type of girl who would really want to have a poem tbh sadly, that would of been the easy thing to write but now im stuck.

It shouldnt matter what it says really, do you know if she'll get any more for valentines?

if not, she ll just love that youve gave her one


go on paddy son

" you are so cute, signed P. Can I please ask you to come to the movies with me one night?" and if extra brave..........."My phone number/emial is.......can we chat?"

True, She doesnt have many people that like her so to answer that question, No I dont think she will get anything else so like you said hopefully this card will make her pleased that she got somthing.

I was planning on doing that part lol
She got my Phone Number, we were texting for ages last night.

I suppose I could ask her to the cinema like you said.
I was going to write somthing like 'I could write a poem but you probley already know how much I like you'

But idk, I never write valentines cards thats why its hard.

Sounds like you've made progress since opening this thread Patrick - get her on IM service on Sunday by inviting her to join and talk online..........then you can chat outside of school where you said you male pals were making things embarrassing/awkward.

I've seen your posts - you'll have your lass romanced by Monday

GOOD LUCK

Just write something nice like Happy Valentines day etc...then say ''If your up for going out then that would be cool'' something that doesnt rush her into a decision or force a decision etc

Yeah :) You've all been very helpful, thanks for the help Claymores.

I might just write,
'To Cara, Your the nicest girl I've ever seen, Happy Valentines day from Patrick'

Do you think thats fine?

You're better at this than me - sounds great! I have the problem saying the love word back to my lass (different situation as you'll understand) as males just not good at this stuff! You're a winner - no cheesy peotry route would still be my suggestion!

Roses are green
tulips are blue
I'm colorblind
Are you too?

or

roses are red, violets are blue, most poems rhyme, but this one
doesnt!!!

just to break the ice

LOL - hennessay is still looking for love Patrick :joker:

lol Hennessay :p

I wrote it there now, going to post it in abit.
Bit stupid that theres no post on Sunday and its valentines day :(

Hope you went for it - maybe some of female FMs could have suggested more but it was not something you invented yourself. So it was honest and you.

Awww that's perfect Patrick!

If she doesn't fall for you after that, then she must have a heart of stone :laugh:

Good luck!