But I'm obviously the superior sibling.

K and pigs fly too don't they?

It's a soap, probably.

Anyway you turned to drugs so shows how good a brother you are. :hmph:

omgz i said id do one yesterday, im soz :bawling:

i promise Episode 5 will be up at some time today!

We are eagerly awaiting the next episode 'Conor. Well done so far though.

nawwh Joey you always make me blush :D

(in the village, Caitlin runs up to Claudia)

Caitlin: Hey Clauds, i have great news!
Claudia: MOLLIES DEAD!!!!
Caitlin: No.. Shauns awake!
Claudia: Awh thats great news! When will he be let out?
Caitlin: Hmm Boothy didn't say
Claudia: Hopefully now Shaun will get some professional help.

(Kerrys flat)

Kerrry: Um Lee arn't you supposed to be at work?
Lee: Kerry dont be silly its only 6am !
Kerry: No.. its 9am your clock is upside down..
(Lee jumps out of her bed)
Lee: I'm late!! Oh no, my first day and all, i cant be late!!
Kerry: Then you better get your skates on!
(Lee dresses quickly and rushes out the door and passes Vicky)
Vicky: Why is she in such a hurry?
Kerry: Its her 1st day in Relish
Vicky: Well, that should be interesting!
Kerry: Any news from Shaun?
Vicky: Yeah hes awake so i've heard
Kerry: Awh thats great.


(halls of residence)

Zippy: Is Chlamydia a species of Chicken?
Smithy: No..
(Enter Karl)
Karl: Hey guys!
Smithy: Karl, rescue me.
Karl: hehe wheres Joe?
Zippy: He went out? he said he was going to meet you?
Karl: Did he now?

(Novo is waiting in a alley at the back of The Loft, Joe enters)

Novo: Have you got my money?
Joe: Here (Joe hands Novo a bag of cash)
Novo: Nawwh good boy (pats Joe on the cheek)
Joe: Thats it im done Novo, im not selling drugs for you anymore
Novo: It will only be for a little while longer, i promise, HE only wants a bit more.
Joe: Whos he?
Novo: My supplier you twat!
Joe: Whos your supplier!
(Novo hits Joe)
Novo: Now Joey boy you no i get angry when you ask too much questions!
(Joe then walks off, Novo stands there smiling, while Locke stares at him from a distance)

(Novo enters The Loft with the bag of money to put it in the safe, Locke appears)

Locke: Whats that?
Novo: Oh nothing..
(Locke grabs bag off Novo)
Locke: Ah money is it? and where did you get this from?
Novo: Give it back Locke
Locke: Is this drug money!!
Novo: So what if it is?
Locke: NOVO! You ******, do you know what could happen 2 you and my club knowing there is drug money in it
Novo: And since when is it your club? I own 50%!
Locke: If that money isn't gone by the end of the week there will be trouble

(the school yard)
(Niall is walking to class, when Harry, a bully, bashes into Niall on purpose)

Niall: Hey watch it!
Harry: Ooh what are you going to do about it!
Niall: I'll tell!!
Harry: Oh no im so scared
A(enter new teacher Kate)
Kate: Well you should be Harold.
(Harry runs away)
Kate: Are you ok ?
Niall: Yeah he just annoys me!
Kate: You know, if you have any problems come talk 2 me
Niall: Thanks Miss

(Lee enters Price Slice)

Kerry: Lee how was your 1st day!!
Lee: Great.. (Lee looks around shop)
Kerry: Hmm your not supposed to be back for another 2 hours?
Lee: Oh yeah i got confused i'm supposed to be out now..
Kerry: Lee.. is there something your not telling me?
Lee: I got fired okay!!
Kerry: Oh my sweet christ! Are you actually you serious, you stupid stupid girl what on earth did you do!
Lee: I dont wan to talk about it.

(The Dog, Niall returns home from school)

Niamh: Hiya love how was your day :)
Niall:.. Fine (Niall goes up to the flat)
Ben: Is he alright?
Niamh: erm yup i think so
Ben: Anyways Shauns awake..
Niamh: Oh thats good i guess..
Ben: hmm..

(the hopsital)

Doctor: Well Shaun it looks like you can go home, but take it easy!
Shaun: Thank you doctor
Boothy: Thats great news!
Shaun: But.. im not coming home.
Boothy: WHAT! you have to come home!
Shaun: I will eventually.. but ive decided to go stay somewhere where i can get professional help!
Boothy: I'm going to miss you, but i think thats a great idea!

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Who is the supplier? I bet it's the same person who is making my wife a prostitute. :suspect:

time will tell ;)

Really good 'Conor, don't blush either, you are entertaining us and it's good too, you deserve the support and praise.
It's clear people on here are really looking forward to the episodes.

i have big storylines planned :D

:colour:

I'm a bully:hmph:.

These are still great though, well done Conor!

-Waits for Big Entrance ;)- Aha Joke xD Anyway Great Again :)

i might do Ep 6 tonight..

Caitlin: Hey Clauds, i have great news!
Claudia: MOLLIES DEAD!!!!

:laugh3: :love:

Watching Hollyoaks tonight,I found myself thinking of this thread,episode 6 must be about due 'Conor,(we are really enjoying this series of yours),hope it comes soon.

add me in xoxo

omgz ill totally do ep 6 soon, i keep forgetting :bawling:

You are a proficient writer,good writers take time to make sure the episodes are right and entertaining.

(Caitlins flat)

Caitlin: So wheres Shaun now?
Boothy: Hes gone to get some professional help, so he will be gone for a while
Caitlin: Well at least its a start, ok well i'm off to work cya later hun (kisses)

(in Price Slice)

Zippy: Come on Lewis your my friend!
Lewis: I'm sorry but there are no more jobs available here!
Zippy: Ugh what am i gonna do!
Lewis: Cinergy?
Zippy: None
Lewis: Loft?
Zippy: None
Lewis: Relish?
Zippy: Eww..
Lewis: The Dog?
Zippys: Omg! i'll be right back!
(exit Zippy enter Mollie)
Mollie: Hello Liam!!!
Lewis: Its Lewis..
Mollie: Yeah, have you seen Novo today? he seems to have done a runner from me
Lewis: I wonder why..
Mollie: Sorry what was that?
Lewis: Nothing, no i haven't seen Novo today.
Mollie: Useless.

(Novo is meeting his supplier, his drug dealer in a lane)

Drug Dealer: Have you got my money?
Novo: I'm sorry i don't have it yet, the guy who sells the drugs is ehm sick but he will sell them as soon as he can!
(Drug Dealer grabs novo by his neck)
Drug Dealer: If you don't bring me my money, your a dead man.
Novo: Yes i no, i no i promise i'll get it.

(in school Niall goes into the boys bathroom and sees Harry smoking)

Harry: Well well well, look who it is
Niall: You do no your going to get in loads of trouble for smoking in here!
Harry: Nobodys gonna no? Will they!
Niall: ..
Harry: WILL THEY!
Niall: No, no they wont!
Harry:.. Here have a puff
Niall: No thank you
Harry: Go on!
Niall: No i don't want to!
Harry: Awh lil chicken
Niall: I'm not a chicken!
Harry: Then smoke it!
(Niall quickly takes a smoke and instantly starts coughing!)
Harry: Bahahaha what a loser!

(Reggie enters Cinergy)

Reggie: Hello all!
Claudia: Hey Reggie
Scott: Omg Reggie! you you look h-hhealthy!
Reggie: Why thank you..
Scott: Anything we well me can do for you?
Reggie: I wouldn't mind a massage off the beautiful Claudia ;)
Claudia: Omg me beautiful!!!
Scott: Yes, HER beautiful? wut.
Claudia: Step right this way ! :)
(Reggie & Claudia go into a massage room)
Scott: Pfft beautiful, as if.

(Niall returns home from school and enters the Pub)

Vicky: Hello Niall good day?
(Niall walks past and ignores Vicky)
Vicky: hmph
Doogle: Whats that smell? it smells like smoke?
Niall: Its nothing!
Doogle: Alright Jeez..
(Niall goes up stairs and Zippy enters the pub)
Vicky: Zippsters how are ya :D
Zippy: Hi gurl, is there any jobs running do you no?
Vicky: hmm sorry dude i dont no im not the one to ask, you will have to ask Ben cause Niamhs out.
Zippy: Ben?
Vicky: Yep.
Zippy: But ben scuurs me :(
Vicky: Oh man up!
(Zippy walks over to Ben cleaning a table)
Zippy: Hi Ben!
Ben: Zippy..
(Ben continues to clean the tables)
Zippy: Your looking rather smashing today (giggles)
Ben: Excuse me?
Zippy: *Coughs* ehm yeah is there any jobs going by any chance?
Ben: For you, no.
Zippy: Awh Benji please i really need the money!
Ben: Ugh fine.. you start tomorrow!
Zippy: OMG YAY!!! (Zippy goes to give Ben a hug)
Ben: Don't.

(Halls of residence)

(doorbell rings its Novo)
Smithy: Novo.. what a pleasant suprise
Novo: Hey is Joe here? its really important!
Smithy: JOOOOOOE!! door
(exit Smithy, enter Joe)
Joe: Oh, its you
Novo: Joe i really need your help!
Joe: Novo i told you im not selling drugs for you anymore!
Novo: please man or we will both be in trouble!
Joe: NO! do it yourself (Joe closes door in Novos face and Novo punches the door in anger)

(Cinergy)

Reggie: Wow Clauds, what a great massage!
Claudia: Why thank you :D
Reggie: Your great with your hands!
Scott: Pfft im better.
(Reggie and Claudia both glare at Scott)
Claudia: Your very welcome Reggie, ill see you soon
Reggie: Yes you will, very soon indeed, how about you see me tomorrow in Relish lets say half 7?
Claudia: omg ! of course yeah!
(Reggie winks at Claudia and exits)
Claudia: (jumping up and down) OMG SCOTT!! did you hear that!!! Reggie just ask-
Scott: Yes i heard!!
Claudia..

(night time, Novo is walking through the village when his phone rings)

Novo: Hello?
Drug Dealer: Do you have my money.
Novo: No..
Drug Dealer: You no what im not gonna kill you.
Novo: Really!!
Drug Dealer: I'm going to make you suffer.
Novo: Whats that supposed to mean?
Drug Dealer: You will find out soon enough.

(Mollie is alone in her and Novos flat, she is flicking through the the tv channels when she hears a noise)
Mollie: Novo? is that you
(no reply, Mollie stands up and looks around, then suddenly the lights go out)
Mollie: Novo stop it this isn't funny!!
(no reply)
Mollie: You no im afraid of the dark!!
(suddenly a hooded figure approaches Mollie from behind and grabs her neck and starts to strangle her, Mollie struggles and tries to scream and fight back but its no use, he squeezes harder and Mollie suddenly stops, he drops her motionless body on the floor and dashes out the backdoor)

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Another great episode Conor :) Love your cliffhanger. Mollie :(

why thank you :)

Really good.

-would totally do that-


-doesn't think mollie is dead either :suspect:-