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Ammi 16-07-2020 06:05 PM

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...OH..MY...GOODNESS....I guess that Bryan deserved his fate in becoming Lumina’s puppet...Roisin, though...Will she absorb the ice crystal and if she does, what will it do to her...she’s already finding it difficult to control the rage of her fire, how ‘fallen’ could she become in having absorbed both crystals...she could become monstrous..?...Anya’s backstory was a bit heartbreaking..:sad:...really well thought out...another great read, Scarlett...I love the stories, each one is packed with so much adventure and so many twists and turns...thank you...:love:...

Scarlett. 17-07-2020 01:20 AM

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...OH..MY...GOODNESS....I guess that Bryan deserved his fate in becoming Lumina’s puppet...Roisin, though...Will she absorb the ice crystal and if she does, what will it do to her...she’s already finding it difficult to control the rage of her fire, how ‘fallen’ could she become in having absorbed both crystals...she could become monstrous..?...Anya’s backstory was a bit heartbreaking..:sad:...really well thought out...another great read, Scarlett...I love the stories, each one is packed with so much adventure and so many twists and turns...thank you...:love:...

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You got through that book quicker than I thought :D

Indeed, A lot came to a head with this book, though the question is, where was Lumina in that year?

Legacy of Darkness is next (and current :o)
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/538717

Ammi 17-07-2020 04:33 AM

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Originally Posted by Scarlett. (Post 10880966)
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You got through that book quicker than I thought :D

Indeed, A lot came to a head with this book, though the question is, where was Lumina in that year?

Legacy of Darkness is next (and current :o)
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/538717

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...yeah, I didn’t really quite intend to get through it that quickly either but I kept getting that ‘just one more chapter’ itch..:laugh:...I’m really loving the series...:love:...

Scarlett. 17-07-2020 11:59 AM

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Thank you! :D

My only problem with writing Memories of Ice is I sidelined Araneia's stuff a bit lol

Ammi 17-07-2020 06:38 PM

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Originally Posted by Scarlett. (Post 10881097)
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Thank you! :D

My only problem with writing Memories of Ice is I sidelined Araneia's stuff a bit lol


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...I love how you brought Anna’s story into it quite a bit because she has such a terrific back story that she wasn’t aware of herself, obviously... and that’s the thing with ‘sidelining’, it gives you the opportunity to expand on other aspects as well, so that the characters become more and more three dimensional...?...I’ll look forward to the beginning of Legacy of Darkness at the weekend, thank you...:love:..

Scarlett. 17-07-2020 06:56 PM

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...I love how you brought Anna’s story into it quite a bit because she has such a terrific back story that she wasn’t aware of herself, obviously... and that’s the thing with ‘sidelining’, it gives you the opportunity to expand on other aspects as well, so that the characters become more and more three dimensional...?...I’ll look forward to the beginning of Legacy of Darkness at the weekend, thank you...:love:..

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Yeah, Anya and Wes are now part of the core cast of Roisin's crew, so they needed expanding on a bit, Wes still needs fleshing out a bit though :)

Scarlett. 19-07-2020 02:12 AM

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Originally Posted by Scarlett. (Post 10873086)
I finished the maps a while back :)

Eastern Continent:
https://imgur.com/7Qd2Dwj

South Pole:
https://imgur.com/4A86Zms

and one in progress, the Western Continent:
https://imgur.com/JyfMU4Q

Updated Western Continent (still in progress)

Ammi 19-07-2020 08:44 AM

...ughhhh, your maps are absolutely gorgeous, Scarlett...:flutter:....


...I’m hoping to start Legacy of Darkness later if I get any time and looking forward to it...:love:..

Scarlett. 19-07-2020 11:42 AM

Thank you! I love making them :D

Ammi 20-07-2020 04:10 PM

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....eeek, the Iceman...I’m just about to read chapter 6 next and already it all feels a little darker...dun dun duuuuuuuu....

Scarlett. 20-07-2020 05:32 PM

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Yeah, this book has a bit of a different tone at the start :)

Ammi 21-07-2020 08:05 PM

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...I’m glad that you revisited the impact on Anya in how she was feeling in her conversation with Lotte because it feels as though she’s struggling with her identity a little..?...which obviously she would be, it was a lot for her to absorb both about herself and about her father...I thought
You wrote that conversation really sensitively, Scarlett...

Scarlett. 21-07-2020 09:23 PM

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...I’m glad that you revisited the impact on Anya in how she was feeling in her conversation with Lotte because it feels as though she’s struggling with her identity a little..?...which obviously she would be, it was a lot for her to absorb both about herself and about her father...I thought
You wrote that conversation really sensitively, Scarlett...

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Thank you! I thought it'd be bad to assume she'd gotten over it, so its a continuing plot thread :)

Ammi 23-07-2020 03:32 PM

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...I loved the chapter when Roisin and Dex we’re together again ...:lovedup:...and I’m looking forward to seeing if that’s a recurring thing...I’m trying to read at a slower pace to not catch up...:laugh:...the vibe of this part of their journey definitely feels darker to me but I’m loving that also...I’m about to read The Knights of Crystallium next....

Scarlett. 23-07-2020 06:01 PM

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Originally Posted by Ammi (Post 10885046)
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...I loved the chapter when Roisin and Dex we’re together again ...:lovedup:...and I’m looking forward to seeing if that’s a recurring thing...I’m trying to read at a slower pace to not catch up...:laugh:...the vibe of this part of their journey definitely feels darker to me but I’m loving that also...I’m about to read The Knights of Crystallium next....

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They'll definately chat again! Though don't want to do it so often xD

The tone does lighten a touch soon :D

Ammi 25-07-2020 02:47 PM

...I accidentally closed the tab and have been searching for the link doh...:laugh:...I can continue now...

Scarlett. 25-07-2020 06:36 PM

Yay! :D

Ammi 25-07-2020 08:15 PM

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...it really is an uneasy alliance with Selene...:laugh:...

....I like the expanding story with Anya and Wes and also learning more about his past story as well and his mistrust/dislike of Anya in the beginning...

Scarlett. 25-07-2020 09:28 PM

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...it really is an uneasy alliance with Selene...:laugh:...

....I like the expanding story with Anya and Wes and also learning more about his past story as well and his mistrust/dislike of Anya in the beginning...

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It really felt like it was time to expand on Wes' character and back story a bit, I just hope I did it justice :D

Ammi 26-07-2020 04:21 AM

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Originally Posted by Scarlett. (Post 10886398)
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It really felt like it was time to expand on Wes' character and back story a bit, I just hope I did it justice :D

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...you most definitely did do him justice, Scarlett..and it’s especially interesting because of his and now developing feelings for Anya...?...also having just found out about her past as well, so many victims of manipulations of the past and of their own families...also, I’m interested in the past relationship of Wes and Helena and wondering if that will be revisited also...

Scarlett. 26-07-2020 12:43 PM

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...you most definitely did do him justice, Scarlett..and it’s especially interesting because of his and now developing feelings for Anya...?...also having just found out about her past as well, so many victims of manipulations of the past and of their own families...also, I’m interested in the past relationship of Wes and Helena and wondering if that will be revisited also...

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Wes (Weslye) is Helena, but Wesley was Helena's friend when growing up :laugh: Weslye chose the name in memory of him :)

That said, I might do more flash backs between the two :D

Ammi 26-07-2020 12:45 PM

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Originally Posted by Scarlett. (Post 10886721)
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Wes (Weslye) is Helena, but Wesley was Helena's friend when growing up :laugh: Weslye chose the name in memory of him :)

That said, I might do more flash backs between the two :D

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...oh did I completely miss that, we knew that..?...:laugh:..I’m uselessly inattentive...

Scarlett. 26-07-2020 12:47 PM

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Originally Posted by Ammi (Post 10886724)
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...oh did I completely miss that, we knew that..?...:laugh:..I’m uselessly inattentive...

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The similar name thing can be quite confusing :laugh:

Scarlett. 26-07-2020 03:11 PM

I finished writing Legacy of Darkness :D

Ammi 26-07-2020 03:14 PM

...oooo, I’ll get reading...:love:...I’d tried to slow down a bit and show some restraint but I don’t have to now...


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