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Scarlett. 01-08-2020 02:37 PM

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying them so much =D

Scarlett. 03-08-2020 12:09 PM

Forgot to post here, but more chapters have been added :D

Ammi 04-08-2020 05:36 AM

Spoiler:

...with the Time Crystal, we can feel the power of the crystals building..but people are often not what they seem, so...:laugh:...

Scarlett. 04-08-2020 11:49 AM

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Originally Posted by Ammi (Post 10891061)
Spoiler:

...with the Time Crystal, we can feel the power of the crystals building..but people are often not what they seem, so...:laugh:...

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Indeed, Araneia and Hiran don't know enough about this Kingdom yet

Scarlett. 05-08-2020 01:52 AM

Done a new chapter :)
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EenfMKlX...png&name=small

Ammi 05-08-2020 05:20 AM

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Originally Posted by Scarlett. (Post 10891373)

...Roisin’s heart...:lovedup:...


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...it’s a little worrying that Roisin seems to be struggling to harness/control her crystal powers in their balancing of each other...it feels as though she may cause something that she didn’t intend to...

Scarlett. 05-08-2020 11:10 AM

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Originally Posted by Ammi (Post 10891387)
...Roisin’s heart...:lovedup:...


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...it’s a little worrying that Roisin seems to be struggling to harness/control her crystal powers in their balancing of each other...it feels as though she may cause something that she didn’t intend to...

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Indeed, and because of her mood, it seems to be worsening the balance

Scarlett. 06-08-2020 12:32 AM

New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EesoUReX...png&name=small

Ammi 06-08-2020 08:06 PM

Spoiler:

...OMG, Keegan Luna...?..so this is Roisin’s brother...?...and with the blink of an eye, he killed the woman who had been mother/carer to him all of his life...he brutally killed her so easily...WHAT is Keegan, what is he capable of...

Scarlett. 06-08-2020 09:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Ammi (Post 10892294)
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...OMG, Keegan Luna...?..so this is Roisin’s brother...?...and with the blink of an eye, he killed the woman who had been mother/carer to him all of his life...he brutally killed her so easily...WHAT is Keegan, what is he capable of...

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Many books ago, his existance was subtly hinted at, but now he is here at last :o and Treleva has gotten to him first D:

Niamh. 06-08-2020 11:53 PM

I read the first few chapters Scarlett, its really good :love:

Scarlett. 07-08-2020 01:28 AM

Thank you! :D This series came off me not writing for over a decade, so the earlier books are little rough around the edges, compared to where I am now :D

I've done another chapter :)
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Eex9ta8X...jpg&name=small

Niamh. 07-08-2020 02:06 AM

How many have you written?

Ammi 07-08-2020 05:17 AM

....oooooo, a reading buddy...:love:..

Scarlett. 07-08-2020 10:44 AM

On the sixth 'book', the first and third are shorter than the rest, but the others arent too long

Ammi 07-08-2020 11:44 AM

Spoiler:

....wow, this is really getting quite dark with the back stories...so from Roisin and Keegan’s birth, Rychard Pyre was implicated...and if only the nurse was killed, how was Keegan’s disappearance covered up/explained...?...‘the descendants of the moon‘...so what powers will Keegan have as a descendant and how will those powers be used...totally separated in personality also..?..

Scarlett. 07-08-2020 12:12 PM

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Originally Posted by Ammi (Post 10892611)
Spoiler:

....wow, this is really getting quite dark with the back stories...so from Roisin and Keegan’s birth, Rychard Pyre was implicated...and if only the nurse was killed, how was Keegan’s disappearance covered up/explained...?...‘the descendants of the moon‘...so what powers will Keegan have as a descendant and how will those powers be used...totally separated in personality also..?..

Spoiler:

The thug that took Keegan from the nurse was also killed too, in the petrol station explosion, the kidnapping is yet another dark deed of Rychard, he's not the shining beacon he made out to be

Scarlett. 07-08-2020 11:53 PM

New chapter added!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Ee2ygm1X...jpg&name=small

Ammi 08-08-2020 02:44 PM

Spoiler:

...Treleva is the definition of evil/of darkness...poor Keegan but now he is darkness as well, I think...he is lost to Roisin forever as she will have to destroy her own brother..:sad:..

Scarlett. 08-08-2020 04:09 PM

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Originally Posted by Ammi (Post 10893029)
Spoiler:

...Treleva is the definition of evil/of darkness...poor Keegan but now he is darkness as well, I think...he is lost to Roisin forever as she will have to destroy her own brother..:sad:..

Spoiler:

It may one day come to thank :(

Scarlett. 09-08-2020 01:06 AM

New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Ee8FScEW...jpg&name=small

Ammi 09-08-2020 10:40 AM

Spoiler:

...Syl is a Luna also, I’d forgotten about that...so him also being a descendant of the moon will relevant with his powers ..and how all of the descendants will defeat the darkness together, maybe....

Scarlett. 09-08-2020 11:32 AM

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Originally Posted by Ammi (Post 10893328)
Spoiler:

...Syl is a Luna also, I’d forgotten about that...so him also being a descendant of the moon will relevant with his powers ..and how all of the descendants will defeat the darkness together, maybe....

Spoiler:

Indeed! He was once thought to be the one to bring a great evil :o

Scarlett. 10-08-2020 02:30 PM

New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EfEOWskX...jpg&name=small

Ammi 10-08-2020 03:29 PM

Spoiler:

...not an alliance between Rychard and Arranthian...that feels quite uneasy, Rychard can’t be trusted at all...


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