| Wizard. |
12-04-2017 06:14 PM |
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EmmerEnders Street
The Pub - Main Room
(The pub is one of a traditional vibe, oak beams supporting the grey brick walls that have held the dirty secrets and mysterious disasters that have shook EmmerEnders Street - located in a small, quaint village towards the North of Wales.
The doors, in the left of the pub, suddenly swing open after a faint unlocking sound. An elderly couple potter over to the central bar and put down their cardboard boxes and carrier bags atop the glossy, biscuit-coloured counter.)
Ron: This is it, dear.
(Ron is an older man, yet has a younger look to him. He is very protective over his wife, Margaret, and wants to pump some life back into the village.)
Margaret: Sure is - we better get this place up and running, sweetie!
(Margaret also has a youthful look to her, despite being the same age as Ron. Sometimes she disagrees with how protective Ron can be, but she knows its all in the best interests.)
(A pub regular, LeatherTrumpet, stumbles into the bar groaning and moaning.)
LT: Give us ya best booze, eh! (He shouts the order, pointing to some of the finest beverages on the underside of the counter.)
Ron: We don't actually open until -
LT: (Interrupting, not caring what Ron has to say.) I asked for booze, I want booze! This pub has been closed since the Dawn of Time, so long I've had to BUY my own booze! So give us a bevy!
Ron: Right you are; lager, beer or cider? (Margaret heads into the back room, presumably the kitchen.) Or do you want something else?
LT: Surprise me.
The Pub - The Kitchen
(Margaret is with a younger man, only in his late twenties. He is wearing a chefs outfit, and is polishing the knives.)
Margaret: You must be the chef - Marsh is it?
Marsh: That's right - and you're Margaret? (She nods, and he moves away from the knives.) Right, here's my speciality menu, (he hands her a sheet of laminated paper) will that do you or is there anything else you want?
Margaret: That looks perfect, proper Pub Grub! (She finds her eyes wandering toward the young man. She begins talking to distract herself.) Pie and Mash, Fish and Chips, a sexy young chef ... (She gasps, covering her mouth quickly). I'm so sorry, I'm jus- (Marsh swiftly grabs Margaret by her waist, pulling her in. They kiss, before hearing noises and pulling away).
Ron: (Ron walks into the kitchen, missing the kiss.) Everything alright in 'ere?
Margaret: Absolutely, (She wipes her mouth) I was just trying everything on the menu!
Ron: That's alright then, the queues are getting busier, we better tend to the customers!
The Pub - The Main Room
Margaret: Where did that drunkard go? (Margaret looks around over the counter, looking for LT. The camera spots him crawling into the kitchen, his head pouring with blood.
Ron: I'm not too sure, I'm sure he will turn up again, dear!
The Pub - The Kitchen
(Screams are heard from the kitchen, and Marsh is hovering above LT with a chainsaw, who is strapped onto the counter. Marsh cleanly slices off an arm, blood suddenly splurging to onto his white shirt.)
Marsh: This is what you get for breaking our contract ...
(A teenage boy stumbles into the room and freezes after seeing the spectacle.)
Morgan: I ... I was ju- I was just looking for the toilet? (Morgan runs out and everybody turns to watch him sprints out of the Pub doors.)
The Pub - The Main Room
(Ron notices camera flashes sparkling through the window, so goes over and opens the curtains to investigate.)
Ron: Are you a journalist? Are you!? (Nicky, the villages journalist, nods reluctantly. Ron opens the window.) What are you doing here?
Nicky: (He looks scared, and speaks in an accent resembling The Netherlands.) I heard there was a murder sir!
Ron: A murder?! Not in a pub like this young man ... Now scurry away and DON'T COME BACK! (He slams the window in Nicky's face, Margaret wandering over to see what has happened.) Just journalists dear, nothing to worry about!
The Pub - Exterior
(As Nicky runs away from the Pub, a car at full speed races over and knocks him off his feet, Nicky left unconscious on the floor, bleeding out. The car drives away.)
The Pub - The Main Room
(The doors open once again, a middle aged woman in a business suit walking inside, holding her police badge up.)
Niamh: Who owns this place, eh? (Ron and Margaret step forward.) Not only has local journalist Nicky been run over and murdered just this second, I have reports of a local pub customer being dismembered in the kitchen. Can I look around please?
Ron: (He nods, hesitantly.) We've only just opened though, detective. Nicky was nothing to do with us and I have no idea about where this murder accusation has come from!
(The barmaid, named Cherie, with young and lustful looks, walks out of the toilets and into the main room.)
Cherie: (She gasps as she spots Niamh.) You killed my grandfather!
Marsh: (He appears from the kitchen.) No - I KILLED YOUR GRANDFATHER!
The End.
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Judges Comments & Scores:
Lostie: Really liked the level of description put into it (and some of the descriptions are the funniest parts), and the over the top twists were great. Score: 8/10
LukeB: I really enjoyed this especially Marsh murdering someone in a kitchen with a chainsaw (i cackled) A lot of effort went in this and it feels unique. I'm here for serial killer Marsh. I ship Ron and Margaret best soap couple off all time. Score 9/10
Final Score: 17/20 |
