I wrote this song what do you think
 

Verse 1
I have been looking right in front of my eyes
And the words I am seeing are playing a disguise
And I can’t know I can’t stop thinking
About this guy
Who I met shouldn’t have
And the words I say
Are telling goodbye
And they tell me to walk on
Like everything is fine
But I really don’t know what I should do
I am just a girl with a crush on you

Chorus
I am knocking right into my face baby
I am screaming and shouting cause its driving me crazy
And now that I shouldn’t have falled for a guy like you
And I know I shouldn’t have to
I don’t want to say that hurts inside
But every time I think I have to cry
I can’t stop thinking about the things that you do
I shouldn’t have fallen for you

Verse 2
Yes I might sound crazy but I am out of disguise
I shouldn’t need to act like everything’s fine
Because you screw my head up
One go at a time
And I really hope you drive on by
When you see there do you feel what I feel
Or am I am just girl without any heels
Do I need to know what life’s all about
To get into your heart
I’m just hanging out

Chorus
I am knocking right into my face baby
I am screaming and shouting cause its driving me crazy
And now that I shouldn’t have falled for a guy like you
And I know I shouldn’t have to
I don’t want to say that hurts inside
But every time I think I have to cry
I can’t stop thinking about the things that you do
I shouldn’t have fallen for you

Last Verse
But I am not gonna say no
I don’t want be home
On Friday and Saturday night
I just wanna hold you tight
But I know if it’s alright

Chorus
I am knocking right into my face baby
I am screaming and shouting cause its driving me crazy
And now that I shouldn’t have falled for a guy like you
And I know I shouldn’t have to
I don’t want to say that hurts inside
But every time I think I have to cry
I can’t stop thinking about the things that you do
I shouldn’t have fallen for you

Chorus
I am knocking right into my face baby
I am screaming and shouting cause its driving me crazy
And now that I shouldn’t have falled for a guy like you
And I know I shouldn’t have to
I don’t want to say that hurts inside
But every time I think I have to cry
I can’t stop thinking about the things that you do
I shouldn’t have fallen for you

(Song - Pretend to be nice TUNE)

0/10

Far to cheesy, you need to take up some lyric lessons from Mr Novo

Thanks alot

:laugh3:
I think it's really good.. Better than some I've heard. My friend once wrote a whole song about being on the Titanic.. it sucked

Tear the lyrics up and throw them in the bin and start from scratch, come back with something better tomorrow

Lol.. that's harsh!! :nono:

Dont listen to Andy it is a good song.

Thanks wrote it from my heart and i am really proud of it x

All i ever do on this bloody forum is give the best advice and this is how you repay me :nono:

Because you ''advice'' isnt always good that's why.

I wonder who this is about. LOL.

Foxy, can you put it to music?

My advice is always honest and very right.. you would do well to follow in my footsteps

Oh for god sakes... anything but that

Haha ;) i have good news but yah i have got music to it the tune for the song is below x

This song is good though a few tweeks here and there and it will be a perfect song. So that is a example of giving good advice not your ''advice''.

It could be a catchy number!

you haven't heard the song yet, you have just read the lyrics and they are cheesy and terrible and it would make a very average song..

that is the an example of great advice

=[ thanks that is from my heart

You need a heart transplant

You know what grow up

:nono:

Next time i won't give my advice

Are you a girl or a boy

A girl

He is a boy.