TiBBenders//Episode 2 posted//NEW EPISODE 1/1/10
 

Yey hope it is as good as it was last time. Hope I am in it this time!

Yeah :) It should be. I've learnt a lot of new techniques about writing, in English and Drama, over the past year so it should be better. The characters will be mostly the main members on TiBB that have contributed a lot to the forum over the past few months and years, and also a few new members who have proven to be good members :)

Oh and, Thanks to Nicky for the Logo :)

Rickayyy!

Aha. ;D

Sounds good! :)

lmao sounds good

It should be :) Last time I did it in February, it was greatly recieved :)

it sounds cool :thumbs:
not really suree what happens atm thouugghhh :/
Still a bitt confusedd :/

cool, I missed the first series though :(

Basically it is a story that has TiBB members as Characters, based in Albert square :)
It's written in script form :)

Oooh :)

Sounds cool, I wasnt here in Febuary so im looking forward to this.

Do we get a parts in it by auditioning?
Or do you just include members in your writing?

I hope im included in a few scenes.. maybe arguments in the vic :)

Oooh :)

Sounds cool, I wasnt here in Febuary so im looking forward to this.

Do we get a parts in it by auditioning?
Or do you just include members in your writing?

I hope im included in a few scenes.. maybe arguments in the vic :)

Sounds cool im going to read through the past one :)

Sounds great Lewis! :)

every time I read this I see 'benders'.

I'm so Freudian.

lmao
Same

:lovedup:

Very cool Lewis :thumbs:

I may post a few little pilot episodes before the first episode.. just to us started ;)

seems cool :thumbs:

Yes please :hugesmile:

Episode 1-

The Allotments
It is 6pm in Albert Square and Shaun is all alone in the allotments. He sits down on the bench and puts his head in his palm.. before sobbing

Brona and Ross's house
Brona is looking into the mirror applying make-up. She is wearing a very attractive dress and her hair has been straightened down. Ross walks into the room in a dressing gown.
Brona: You better not get up to anything naughty tonight!
Ross: I could say the same to you actually!
Brona Laughs
Brona: Ah, don't worry about me. I'll be with Princess.. She'll make sure I don't get up to anything
Brona Laughs again and Ross puts his arms around her
Ross: I Love you Brona
Brona: I Love you too
Brona Turns around and kisses him
Brona: Right, I better go now.. Princess is expecting me at half 6 in the Vic
Ross: Okay hun. Please don't get too drunk
Brona: Naah, Only a little bit drunk
Ross Laughs
Ross: As If.. I'll see you later hun
Brona: Okay.. Are you sure you will be okay on your own?
Ross: Yeah, don't worry about me! Have a good time!
Brona: Okay.. I Love you
Ross: I Love you too... now go!
[i]Brona Kisses Ross before leaving the house and walking over to the Vic

The Allotments
Shaun is still sat on the bench crying. Markwaldorf walks into the allotments and looks over at Shaun
MarkW: I can't help my feelings for her
Shaun: Just go away Mark
MarkW: I can't help it Shaun. I can't stand it anymore.. but I can't help it
Shaun: Mark, I said go away
Mark: Shaun. You need to understand.. I just don't love you anymore.. I Love her

Princess and Enids house
Princess: I'm off now mum. What time is Zee coming around?
Enid: erm.. about 7
Princess: Okay. I'll see you later then Mum.
Enid: Okay love. Ring me at midnight..
Princess: Yeah.. If I'm not too drunk
Princess winks at Enid
Enid: Oi you. You're only 18 remember.. both you and Brona are still young.. make sure you are not taken advantage of..
Princess: yeah.. Whatever mum. I'll see you later!
Enid: bye love!
Princess runs out of the house in her high heels on her way to the vic.



The second part of the episode will be posted later on tonight.. nearer midnight :) A usual episode will be about 3 times the length of the above.. but I can't be bothered to write loads tonight as I just want to enjoy myself as the new year starts.. Come back later for more!

Haha my first and only experience of motherhood. :P

Haha. Aww. Not planning on having children then Enid?

Hell no! I want to enjoy life. :P

Nice work Lewis :hello:

Good work Lewis!

Very good start Lewis,
keep up the good work :D

Is it too late for me to ask to be in this??

Also the story is good so far. Looking forward to more!

that was surprisingly entertaining

Going to write another little bit now guys :) May do 3 parts tonight :)

Oh and Ninastar you are in the next scene :)

Thanks guys!

Aww yay! thank you lewis!! xx

Haha Lolz.

The Queen Vic
The Queen Vic is full of customers.. all getting ready for a long evening. Lili is behind the bar, talking to Brona
Lili: I expect tonight will be a long night.
Brona: Yepp. Well, I plan for it to be.
Lili: Isn't Ross with you?
Brona: Naah. He's going to have the night to himself with a few beers.
Lili: Typical bloke
Brona: Yeah. Where's Remy?
Lili: He's upstairs putting Courtney to bed. I expect he will be down a bit later when we get busier.
Brona: Aww. how old is she now?
Lili: Courtney is 9 and Jonathan is 15. It's crazy how time flies being a parent.
Brona: I don't think I could cope with having children yet.. I'm only 18. I want to enjoy life first.
Lili: I wish I did the same. I'm 30 years old and have a 15 year old child.. You can tell I haven't really lived life to the full.
Brona Laughs and Princess walk into the pub
Princess: Hiya love.
Brona: Heya, do you want a drink?
Princess: ohh yeah.. a Vodka and coke please Lili
Lili: Sure thing Princess love, tell you what, have it on the house.. Remy wont ever know!
Lili smirks as she goes off to make Princess's drink.

The Allotments
Shaun: but I thought you were gay..
MarkW: Yeah, well things change. I'm 22.. My mind is al over the place.. But I can't stop thinking about her Shaun.. And I don't think I can cope any longer.. seeing her walking around the square all alone.
Shaun: Have you not got any consideration for my feelings?
MarkW: Shaun.. we had a one night stand.. It's not as if we are married?
Shaun: But I love you
MarkW: Well.. I don't love you Shaun.
Shaun steps up and slaps Mark. He bursts into tears and runs off, leaving Mark standing alone. Mark sighs whilst rubbing his cheek

The Vic
It is now 9pm. Brona and Princess are in the Vic, both very drunk. Andy walks up to Brona
Andy: Hiya babe, do you want a drink?
Brona: Oooh. Ello Love... You're a sexy fellaa
Princess laughs loudly
Princess: Ooh. Bronaaaaaaaaaaa. Cut it out you silly billy. What about Rod!!
Brona: Who the Bloody hell is Rod my dear?
Princess: Rod.. What am I on about......
Princess laughs loudly
Princess: I mean Rosssssssss
Brona laughs.
Brona: He's my boyfriend isn't he?
Andy: You have a boyfriend? What a lucky fellaa!
Andy looks Brona up and down
Brona: I love you.. whatever your name is!!
Andy: Err.. It's Andy sweetheart... What is yours?
Brona: Andy?
she laughs
Brona: ANDY PANDY
Brona and Princess blast out in a fit of laughter
Brona: Come with me Andy Pandyyyyyyy.
Brona grabs Andy's T-Shirt and leads him into the toilets. They get into a cubicle and Brona laughs before snogging Andy.
Andy: Let's go back to mine babe. I've got some booze and a bed
Brona: Lets do it Andy Pandyyy
Andy smiles

Ross's house
Ross is lying on the Sofa in his dressing gown. He pours a glass of red wine and then pours another. A woman walks into the living room in her underwear
Ninastar: Shall we go upstairs?
Ross grins



Part 2 of tonight.. There will be another part a bit later :)

Ninastar, the dirty bitch!

It's terrible isn't it. :P

Oh my gawd 2 affairs already! :shocked: I love it!
I hope I get a part in a future scene :hugesmile: