The Annie Factor - Live Show 1
 

So, after tonight TiBBs very own Annie will be one step closer to finding her man. Who will go tonight?

Find out soon, exlusive to The Annie Factor!

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Whoo, i'm excited:banana::banana:

My poem is amaze.

Tom will post each contestants poem and then the voting lines will be open. U2U Magic with who is your favourite.

This will be open to EVERYONE on TiBB to vote.

Can we vote for ourselves?

aaah exciting stuffs

I dont think the contestants are allowed to vote ?

You are allowed to vote - Yes you can vote for yourselves

Let the action begin!

So, our first contestant battling to win Annies heart is Scampi.

I love Annie she is stunning
Sometimes smart and sometimes cunning
I love Annie she is hot
A great bust, thats what she has got
I love Annie she is cute
And so much sweeter than a bowl of fruit
I love Annie she is funny
And likes dressing up like a bunny
I love Annie yes I do
She is cool and better than you

ah man, that beats mine!

hahaha good one!

booooooooo

* from the audience *

wow goodluck all!

Scampi - good poem

Liked the repetition of "I love Annie" - this is obviously important in marriage.

And I agree with the last line.

Well done and good attempt

Very good scampi, good luck with the voting

Scampi, I have got to say that was really impressive, and I think you may have what it takes to win this judging by that!

Or will you? Next up its Ross

Annie I love you,
Annie I do.
Darling you're my everything,
Rocko was just poo.
I'll never leave you like he did,
I feel so happy, like a kid.

I want to hold you all night,
While we cuddle and laugh.
Hey, if you're horney, we can even take a bath.

I'll wipe away the tears that Rocko made you cry,
But be sure of one thing, I'll love you till I die.

It rhymes which is a bonus, good poem. Not so sure about the last line though :tongue:

lol

hahahahah!

These are actually better than I thought they'd be for the time frame. Thats a good one as well Ross, well done.

You spelt horny wrong.. -10 points :P

Ross - brilliant!

You showed your humour in this by slating my ex. Humour is needed in a relationship to show the light hearted side.

Well done

i like that one

Ross, great, although some bits slightly dull

David_Purdy

If there's one face I want to see,
so beautiful, so true,
one smile that makes a difference,
to everything I do.

If there's one touch I long to feel,
one voice I long to hear,
whenever I am happy,
or just needing someone near.

If there's one joy, one love,
from which I never want to part,
it's you, my very special love,
my world, my life, my heart.

:)

Damn Dude! thats wiked!!

Woop go David!

David_Purdy - mmmm

I didnt see how it was personal to me at all. Sounds like something stolen from a greetings card.

Not that impressed with it but it is cute and loving.

Lol i think mines going to look crap in comparison to these now.

I'm thinking the same thing about mine.

Good effort, but does it really fit the aim?

Thanks

same here

I really can see how you tried here David, and I thinks its one of the best reading poems so far. However, is it for Annie?


nowsthebturn

I am obsessed with Annie,
I would climb a mountain just to get a touch,
She is clearly the one for me,
How can that be,
I havent talk to her much,
I hope its not just lust,
But I do love her bust.

One think I know for sure,
once come the moment of truth,

I hope I get to see oh Annie,
Youre clearly no ******!

LMFAO

worried now because i didnt put your name in it anywhere annie.

Nowstheburn - Oh lord

You certainly captured a lot of different things in your 10 lines.
You have made me think you are only after one thing though.. Sex, Boobs and no trannies.

Although it did make me laugh a little. I am very unsure about my feelings towards this.

Good attempt though

"I am obsessed with Annie,". Not a good opening line, but the last one is good :tongue:

Up next its Chemicle

The sun shines in the morning
And all i can think of is you
Your face your smile
and all the things you do

The one i love, for you i write
who i long to hold me tight
marriage is a commitment, for what we must share
to kiss to love, to care

Chemicle and Annie the two fit together
me and you forever and ever.

Chemicle - Love it

This one I actually got a total beamer with! It was soft, romantic and sweet.

Defo my favourite so far